Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY86P2CV35V9DJGJSCFM43F

Run Details

Duration:
11.5s
Cost:
$0.000412
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the air like a second skin. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the yellow tape, her boots crunching on shattered glass. The flickering fluorescent lights buzzed overhead, casting long, wavering shadows that stretched like fingers across the graffiti-scarred walls. DS Morris would’ve hated this place. He’d have called it a dump, a dead end. But Morris wasn’t here. He was gone, three years back, and the case had been closed before it ever really began. Quinn exhaled through her nose, the breath sharp in the cold. The body lay sprawled near the old ticket booth, arms splayed as if reaching for something just out of grasp. The coroner’s team moved around it like ants, their voices low, efficient. She didn’t need to hear them to know what they’d say. Another overdose. Another junkie who’d pushed too far. But the evidence didn’t add up. Quinn crouched beside the body, her gloved fingers brushing the victim’s wrist. No track marks. No needle in sight. Just a single, deep puncture mark—too precise, too clean, like a bite. She frowned. The skin around it wasn’t inflamed. No signs of struggle, either. The victim’s pockets were empty, save for a crumpled receipt from a café near the British Museum. She stood, scanning the station. The usual detritus of the homeless—sleeping bags, half-empty bottles—littered the corners. But something else caught her eye. A glint of brass near the far wall, half-buried under a pile of discarded newspapers. She moved toward it, her pulse steady despite the unease coiling in her gut. The Veil Compass. Quinn picked it up, turning it over in her hands. The brass casing was warm, almost alive, etched with sigils that pulsed faintly under the station lights. The needle spun wildly before settling on a point just beyond the ticket booth. “You’re not supposed to have one of those,” a voice said from behind her. Quinn didn’t turn. “Neither are you.” DS Carter stood there, his arms crossed, his expression unreadable. A fresh face, transferred from another precinct six months ago. He’d been the one to call this in. “Found it near the body,” Quinn said, holding up the compass. “You know what this is?” Carter exhaled, rubbing the back of his neck. “Yeah. And you’re not supposed to touch it.” “Funny,” Quinn said. “I was about to say the same to you.” Carter stepped closer, his voice dropping. “Look, Quinn. This isn’t our jurisdiction. The victim was a known user. The compass—it’s a fluke. Some street dealer’s prop. You’re reading too much into it.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “Or maybe the dealer’s not who we think he is.” Carter’s eyes flicked to the body, then back to her. “You think this is supernatural?” “No,” Quinn said. “I think it’s something worse.” She turned the compass again. The needle still pointed toward the booth. Toward the body. Toward the receipt in the victim’s pocket. Quinn reached into her coat and pulled out a clear evidence bag. Inside was a bone token—small, white, carved with a symbol she didn’t recognize. She held it up. Carter’s face paled. “Where the hell did you get that?” “Same place as the compass,” Quinn said. “Buried under the victim’s shoe.” Carter’s voice was tight. “You’re not supposed to have that either.” Quinn ignored him. She walked back to the body, crouching again. The puncture mark. The compass. The token. None of it made sense in the world she knew. “Quinn,” Carter said, his tone sharper now. “You’re stepping into something you don’t understand.” She stood, meeting his gaze. “No. I’m stepping into something you’re trying to cover up.” Carter’s hands clenched. “You don’t know what you’re talking about.” Quinn turned away, her mind racing. The Veil Market. The compass. The token. Morris had been investigating something like this before he died. She’d dismissed it then—supernatural nonsense. But now? She looked back at the body. The victim’s eyes were open, staring at nothing. Or maybe at something. Quinn pocketed the compass. “What are you doing?” Carter demanded. “Following the evidence,” Quinn said. And for the first time in years, she wasn’t sure she’d find answers in the light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount712
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount712
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"efficient"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"almost alive"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"wavering"
2"efficient"
3"scanning"
4"glint"
5"pulse"
6"almost alive"
7"etched"
8"pulsed"
9"unreadable"
10"flicked"
11"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords702
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount560
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.68
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Morris3
British1
Museum1
Veil2
Compass1
Carter9
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Carter"
places
0"British"
globalScore0.161
windowScore0
33.72% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reaching for something just out of grasp"
1"something like this before he died"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount702
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean21.27
std16.2
cv0.762
sampleLengths
052
136
262
36
461
551
63
741
814
96
1028
1116
1216
1312
1432
1513
1615
178
1822
1929
2010
2112
2211
2328
2414
2515
2610
2730
2818
294
306
315
3216
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was gone"
1"been closed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs100
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences90
ratio0.056
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the air like a second skin."
1"Just a single, deep puncture mark—too precise, too clean, like a bite."
2"The usual detritus of the homeless—sleeping bags, half-empty bottles—littered the corners."
3"Inside was a bone token—small, white, carved with a symbol she didn’t recognize."
4"She’d dismissed it then—supernatural nonsense."
99.63% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount569
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.040421792618629174
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005272407732864675
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean7.8
std4.92
cv0.63
sampleLengths
020
114
218
36
49
54
617
711
820
912
1011
112
126
136
1412
153
164
1712
182
196
205
2117
225
2311
246
2515
2614
273
2810
2917
3014
3114
323
333
3410
3510
368
3711
385
398
408
413
429
436
4426
453
4610
4710
485
493
45.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners30
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Just a single, deep puncture"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences64
matches
0"He’d have called it a"
1"He was gone, three years"
2"She didn’t need to hear"
3"She stood, scanning the station."
4"She moved toward it, her"
5"He’d been the one to"
6"She turned the compass again."
7"She held it up."
8"She walked back to the"
9"She stood, meeting his gaze."
10"She’d dismissed it then—supernatural nonsense."
11"She looked back at the"
ratio0.188
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences64
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"The flickering fluorescent lights buzzed"
3"DS Morris would’ve hated this"
4"He’d have called it a"
5"He was gone, three years"
6"Quinn exhaled through her nose,"
7"The body lay sprawled near"
8"The coroner’s team moved around"
9"She didn’t need to hear"
10"Another junkie who’d pushed too"
11"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
12"The skin around it wasn’t"
13"The victim’s pockets were empty,"
14"She stood, scanning the station."
15"The usual detritus of the"
16"A glint of brass near"
17"She moved toward it, her"
18"The Veil Compass."
19"Quinn picked it up, turning"
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the air like a second skin."
1"The flickering fluorescent lights buzzed overhead, casting long, wavering shadows that stretched like fingers across the graffiti-scarred walls."
2"The body lay sprawled near the old ticket booth, arms splayed as if reaching for something just out of grasp."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Carter said, his tone sharper now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Carter demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.091
77.1030%