Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY87EE6X0W8SVXQ6ZZ810Y4

Run Details

Duration:
46.5s
Cost:
$0.000232
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air hung thick and damp, tasting of mildew and something vaguely metallic. Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her trench coat, the chill burrowing into her despite the layers. The abandoned Tube station pulsed with a low, rhythmic hum she couldn’t quite place—a mechanical thrum overlaid with something older, something deeper. The Veil Market. Officially, it was just another abandoned transport hub, sealed off decades ago after structural instability. Unofficially, it was a headache she’d been circling for years. The body lay slumped against a crumbling pillar, the remnants of what looked like a hurried meal scattered nearby: a half-eaten pastry dusted with something shimmering, a cracked vial labeled with indecipherable glyphs. Male, early thirties, neatly dressed in a charcoal suit that now bore a crimson stain blooming across the chest. No visible wounds, just… stillness. Too still. “Textbook poisoning,” Sergeant Davies said, already on his radio. His voice echoed in the cavernous space. “No sign of forced entry. Probably knew the victim.” Harlow knelt, circling the body slowly. Davies was good, solid. Reliable. But he saw the world in clean lines, in solvable equations. This scene… this wasn’t clean. The station itself was wrong. The Veil Market shifted, migrated with the lunar cycle. It was supposed to be deeper, tucked away beneath Bloomsbury this month, a labyrinth of interconnected tunnels. This was… Camden. Close to the surface. And it didn’t feel right. The usual chaotic energy of the Market – the frantic bartering, the whispers of forbidden secrets – was absent, replaced by this unsettling quiet. She ran a gloved hand along the rough concrete. No scuff marks, no signs of a struggle. The victim hadn’t fought. He'd simply… collapsed. “Anything on ID?” she asked, her voice echoing strangely. “Driver’s license, Quinn. Arthur Finch. Accountant. Nothing remarkable.” Davies pointed to a small, worn leather satchel lying near the body. “Wallet’s still here, phone too. Doesn’t look like robbery was the motive.” Harlow ignored him, her attention fixed on Finch's hand. He clutched a small object, its brass casing cold under her fingers. A compass. But not just any compass. The verdigris patina, the intricate protective sigils etched around the face… this was a Veil Compass. A rare and expensive trinket she’d only encountered in whispers within the underbelly of London's supernatural dealings. “Where did you say this was found?” she asked, deliberately keeping her tone neutral. “Right here, love. By the pillar. Pretty straightforward, wouldn’t you say?” Davies frowned, clearly exasperated by her prolonged scrutiny. Harlow ignored him again. The needle of the compass spun wildly, erratically. It shouldn't be doing that. A Veil Compass pointed towards the nearest rift, the nearest tear in the veil between worlds. It was a tool for navigators, for those who dealt in the unseen. But it was usually steady, purposeful. This was just… frantic. She glanced around the station. The tunnels, while crumbling, were structurally sound. There was no immediate indication of a rift. Unless… She rose, her gaze sweeping the far end of the station, where a section of the wall was partially obscured by debris. A faint shimmer distorted the air, barely perceptible. Heat rose from it, a subtle disturbance in the already oppressive humidity. “There’s a leak,” she stated, her voice low. “A minor one, but a leak nonetheless.” Davies squinted at the area she indicated. "A leak? What are you talking about, Quinn?" "Supernatural energy. A rift. Small, unstable, but present." She knelt again, examining the ground around the body. This time, she noticed something she'd missed before. Tiny, shimmering particles clinging to Finch’s suit, almost invisible unless viewed at a certain angle. "This isn't poisoning," she said, slowly. "It's… overload." Davies snorted. “Overload? With what? Fairy dust?” "He was tracking a rift. This compass confirms it. He got too close. Something… pushed back.” She pointed to the crumbs of the pastry. "The shimmering dust on the pastry… it was a stabilizing agent. Used to bolster the human body against exposure to raw supernatural energy. He was trying to protect himself, but it wasn’t enough." Davies shook his head. "I still don’t see it. The symptoms don't match. No convulsions, no hallucinations..." Harlow’s eyes narrowed. She remembered a case three years ago, DS Morris. The official verdict had been a heart attack, but she'd seen the flicker of something unnatural in his eyes just before he collapsed. Something she hadn’t been able to understand then. She focused again on Finch’s hand, still clutching the compass. The needle continued to spin, now slowing, seeming to converge on a single point. Not the shimmer in the wall. Something else. Something… closer. Then she noticed it. A tiny fracture, almost invisible to the naked eye, spiderwebbing across the lens of the compass. A hairline crack, radiating outwards from the center. "He wasn't tracking *away* from a rift, Davies," she murmured, mostly to herself. "He was tracking *into* one. And it wasn't in the wall. It was… inside him.” Suddenly, the hum intensified, vibrating in her bones. Harlow felt a prickling sensation on the back of her neck, a familiar warning sign she’d learned to recognize after years spent skirting the edges of the unseen. “Seal this area,” she ordered Davies. “No one in or out. I want every inch of this station scanned. We're looking for residual energy signatures. And Davies…” He looked at her, his expression skeptical yet wary. “Forget the poisoning theory. This isn't a simple case. This is… something else entirely.” Her gaze drifted to the fracture in the compass’s lens. It pulsed faintly now, mirroring the subtle shimmer in the air, growing. Something was shifting. Becoming clearer. Something that wasn’t meant to be seen. A voice. A whisper, seemingly from everywhere and nowhere. It brushed against her mind, cool and insidious. *He sought knowledge... and knowledge demands a price.* Harlow felt a cold dread grip her heart. She knew that voice. Or rather, she sensed its echo, a faint resonance of the same presence she’d encountered three years ago, the same presence that had stolen DS Morris from her. "There's a connection," she muttered, her voice barely audible above the increasing hum. "A pattern. I need to find Evie." She reached for her worn leather watch, its ticking a sharp counterpoint to the growing dissonance in the air. It was time to call in a specialist. Time to bring in someone who understood the language of shadows. Because whatever had killed Arthur Finch, it was far older, far more dangerous, than anything she'd faced before.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Davies frowned clearly [clearly]"
1"She knelt again [again]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.542
leniency1
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.154
81.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"mechanical"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"remarkable"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"scanned"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"echo"
count1
16
word"resonance"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"rhythmic"
3"mechanical"
4"echoed"
5"chaotic"
6"echoing"
7"remarkable"
8"intricate"
9"etched"
10"oppressive"
11"flicker"
12"familiar"
13"scanned"
14"whisper"
15"echo"
16"resonance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords10
totalWords1089
ratio0.009
matches
0"away"
1"into"
2"He sought knowledge... and knowledge demands a price."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount868
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Davies"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Davies"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Tube1
Veil4
Market3
Davies8
Bloomsbury1
Camden1
Harlow7
Finch4
Compass2
London1
Morris2
Suddenly1
Arthur1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
2"Davies"
3"Harlow"
4"Finch"
5"Compass"
6"Morris"
7"Arthur"
places
0"Veil"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite place—a mechanical thrum overlaid with something older, something deeper"
1"looked like a hurried meal scattered near"
2"A whisper, seemingly from everywhere and"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1089
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean32.03
std20
cv0.625
sampleLengths
080
159
225
327
467
524
69
732
861
914
1019
1156
1221
1342
1415
1515
1640
178
187
1957
2017
2143
2234
2328
2428
2536
2627
279
2814
2934
3017
318
3240
3376
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was shifting"
92.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences114
ratio0.018
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station pulsed with a low, rhythmic hum she couldn’t quite place—a mechanical thrum overlaid with something older, something deeper."
1"The usual chaotic energy of the Market – the frantic bartering, the whispers of forbidden secrets – was absent, replaced by this unsettling quiet."
78.22% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount868
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.0576036866359447
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.027649769585253458
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean9.55
std7.23
cv0.757
sampleLengths
013
117
222
33
415
510
633
719
84
91
102
119
127
139
146
154
161
1711
182
193
205
219
2217
232
241
254
265
2724
289
298
304
312
321
339
3420
3512
369
3712
382
395
4011
415
4217
4314
4419
454
468
475
4816
4913
62.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.41228070175438597
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences86
matches
0"Officially, it was just another"
1"Unofficially, it was a headache"
2"Then she noticed it."
3"Suddenly, the hum intensified, vibrating"
ratio0.047
94.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences86
matches
0"His voice echoed in the"
1"It was supposed to be"
2"She ran a gloved hand"
3"she asked, her voice echoing"
4"He clutched a small object,"
5"she asked, deliberately keeping her"
6"It shouldn't be doing that."
7"It was a tool for"
8"She glanced around the station."
9"She rose, her gaze sweeping"
10"she stated, her voice low"
11"She knelt again, examining the"
12"she said, slowly"
13"She pointed to the crumbs"
14"She remembered a case three"
15"She focused again on Finch’s"
16"she murmured, mostly to herself"
17"she ordered Davies"
18"He looked at her, his"
19"Her gaze drifted to the"
ratio0.314
70.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences86
matches
0"The air hung thick and"
1"Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar"
2"The abandoned Tube station pulsed"
3"The Veil Market."
4"The body lay slumped against"
5"Sergeant Davies said, already on"
6"His voice echoed in the"
7"Harlow knelt, circling the body"
8"Davies was good, solid."
9"this wasn’t clean."
10"The station itself was wrong."
11"The Veil Market shifted, migrated"
12"It was supposed to be"
13"The usual chaotic energy of"
14"She ran a gloved hand"
15"The victim hadn’t fought."
16"she asked, her voice echoing"
17"Davies pointed to a small,"
18"Harlow ignored him, her attention"
19"He clutched a small object,"
ratio0.779
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Because whatever had killed Arthur"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Or rather, she sensed its echo, a faint resonance of the same presence she’d encountered three years ago, the same presence that had stolen DS Morris from her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she asked, her voice echoing strangely"
1"she stated, her voice low"
2"she said, slowly"
3"she murmured, mostly to herself"
4"she muttered, her voice barely audible above the increasing hum"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she stated (state)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she ordered (order)"
3"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
80.9581%