Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY87KJ8Y3BJP6HAF9B9R4MJ

Run Details

Duration:
19.0s
Cost:
$0.000171
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain tasted like metal. It slicked the cobblestones of Richmond Park, reflecting the weak glow of the streetlights in fractured, oily patches. Rory pulled her collar higher, the damp wool doing little to combat the chill that had settled deep in her bones. The air hung thick and silent, save for the persistent drip, drip, drip from the oaks. She’d followed the directions—a scribbled note on aged parchment—to the standing stones. Isolde’s grove. It wasn't a place you stumbled upon. Not really. The map, a charcoal sketch on linen, had warned of disorientation. It hadn't warned of this. The stones themselves were imposing, weathered giants sunk into the mossy ground. They were ancient, undeniably, their surfaces etched with symbols she couldn’t decipher. A prickle crawled across her skin. Not fear, exactly. Something colder. Like recognizing a forgotten name. “Right,” she muttered, checking the pendant around her neck. The Heartstone pulsed, a faint, insistent warmth against her skin. It hadn’t reacted like this before. Just a gentle thrum, usually. Now, it vibrated with a restless energy. She’d been told to find it here. The note – delivered by a courier who seemed to materialize from the fog – had spoken of a “resonance point.” A place where the veil between realities was thin. She’d dismissed it as the ramblings of a paranoid collector, until the pendant had appeared, nestled in a velvet box, unsigned. The accompanying words simply stated: *“The answer lies within.”* Rory had a healthy skepticism, a product of too many late nights spent navigating London’s underbelly. But she wasn't one to ignore a cryptic gift. The rain intensified, drumming a steady rhythm against the stones. She shifted, investigating a darker hollow beneath the largest stone. The scent shifted—earth, yes, but layered beneath it, something else. Something subtly rotten, like decaying fruit. She took a cautious step closer. Silence. Then, a rustle. Not the wind. The branches of the oaks didn’t stir. It was a small movement, beneath the undergrowth, too quick to identify. She held her breath, listening. Nothing. “Just the animals,” she told herself, her voice sounding brittle in the vast, unwelcoming space. She should turn back. The rain was picking up, and the temperature was plummeting. The note hadn't specified a time limit. But the pendant compelled her forward. She continued deeper into the grove, pushing through tangles of brambles and ferns. The wildflowers, though vibrant, seemed unnaturally bright, almost luminescent in the gloom. They hadn’t bloomed in that particular shade of lavender and crimson at this time of year. The silence returned, heavier this time, laced with a subtle, unsettling hum. It wasn’t audible, not exactly, but she felt it in her teeth, a vibration that resonated in her skull. Her reflection in the damp stone revealed a stranger—eyes wide, the dark hair plastered to her face, a grim line etched around her mouth. A branch snapped. Close. She whirled around, her hand instinctively reaching for the small, sturdy knife she carried. Empty. She’d left it at the edge of the park. Annoyance tightened her stomach. The rain shifted again, a localized downpour directly above her. She looked up. The sky was a solid, featureless grey. Then she heard it. A child’s giggle. High-pitched, echoing, utterly devoid of joy. It sliced through the silence, bouncing off the stones, twisting in the air. It felt wrong, like a discordant note in a carefully composed melody. “Hello?” she called out, her voice a shaky whisper. Only the rain answered. She moved towards the sound, cautiously pushing through a curtain of weeping willows. The air grew colder, the scent of decay stronger. The ground beneath her feet became softer, yielding with an unsettling sponginess. She stepped into a small clearing. In the center stood a swing set. Old, rusted, and completely out of place. It looked as though it had been transported from some forgotten corner of a suburban garden. The chains groaned softly in the wind. The swing swayed gently, though there was no breeze. As she watched, a small figure appeared on the swing. A child. A little girl, dressed in a faded yellow dress, her dark hair tangled and wild. She didn’t speak. She didn’t move. She just swung, slowly, rhythmically. Rory took a step closer. “Are you…are you okay?” The girl stopped swinging. She turned her head, her face obscured by shadows. It wasn't a movement of acknowledgment. It was a deliberate, studied stillness. “Lost?” a voice whispered, a voice that sounded like dry leaves skittering across pavement. Rory felt a cold dread grip her heart. The voice didn’t belong to the girl. “Who are you?” she demanded, gripping the small of her back. The girl tilted her head, and a single, crimson petal drifted from her hair. It landed on the ground at Rory’s feet. “I’ve been waiting,” the voice said again, softer this time. “For a long, long time.” Suddenly, the standing stones began to glow. A faint, pulsating light emanated from their surfaces, intensifying, bathing the grove in an ethereal radiance. The Heartstone pulsed violently against her chest, screaming with heat. The girl on the swing began to shimmer, the edges of her form blurring. Her dress seemed to unravel, revealing…nothing. Just a swirling vortex of shadow. “This place…it remembers,” the voice said, closer now, invading her thoughts. “It remembers everything.” Rory backed away, instinctively clutching the pendant. It wasn’t warming her anymore. It was burning. The ground beneath her feet rose, the moss receding to expose bare, black stone. The scent of decay intensified, becoming almost unbearable. She turned to flee, but the trees seemed to shift, to close in around her, forming a living wall. The rain turned to sleet, stinging her skin. “You shouldn’t have come,” the voice hissed, a sound like ice cracking. “You shouldn’t have sought the answer.” A hand, cold and impossibly thin, reached out from the shadow of the swing. It brushed against her cheek. Rory screamed, a raw, desperate sound swallowed by the rain and the oppressive silence of the grove. She didn’t dare look back. She just ran, blindly, desperately, praying to escape the thing that had waited so patiently in the heart of Isolde’s grove. She didn't know where she was going. She didn't care. Only that she had to get away. As she stumbled through the thickening fog, she caught a glimpse of the swing set, bathed in an unnatural green light. The girl was still there, still swinging. And something else—a faint, almost imperceptible smile played across her shadowed face. The pounding in her ears wasn’t the rain. It was the sound of time itself distorting, bending, unraveling. She realized, with chilling certainty, that she hadn’t found an answer. She’d stumbled into a trap. The Heartstone pulsed, now burning with an agonizing heat. As the light faded, her vision blurred, and she collapsed to the ground, the last thing she heard was a child’s giggle, echoing through the timeless, haunted grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the voice said again [again]"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.643
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
61.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"cautiously"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"gently"
count1
7
adverb"slowly"
count1
8
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"utterly"
2"carefully"
3"cautiously"
4"completely"
5"softly"
6"gently"
7"slowly"
8"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"imposing"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count3
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"navigating"
count1
10
word"silence"
count4
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"resonated"
count1
13
word"sturdy"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count2
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"unravel"
count1
18
word"oppressive"
count1
19
word"pounding"
count1
20
word"unraveling"
count1
21
word"chilling"
count1
22
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"chill"
2"imposing"
3"etched"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"vibrated"
7"resonance"
8"velvet"
9"navigating"
10"silence"
11"gloom"
12"resonated"
13"sturdy"
14"stomach"
15"echoing"
16"whisper"
17"unravel"
18"oppressive"
19"pounding"
20"unraveling"
21"chilling"
22"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1163
ratio0.003
matches
0"“The answer lies within.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1120
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Rory7
London1
Suddenly1
Isolde2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed unnaturally bright almost luminescent in the gloom"
1"sounded like dry leaves skittering across"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.86
wordCount1163
matches
0"not exactly, but she felt it in her teeth, a vibration"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean25.84
std15.94
cv0.617
sampleLengths
074
125
240
337
467
525
642
74
827
91
1015
1127
1241
1355
1432
1520
167
1731
189
194
2034
216
227
2339
2410
2528
269
2725
2814
2915
3011
3122
3215
3333
3426
3514
3637
3727
3818
3919
4043
4117
4240
4334
4437
99.65% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"been told"
1"been transported"
34.16% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was picking was plummeting"
1"wasn’t warming"
2"was burning"
3"was going"
32.12% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences129
ratio0.039
matches
0"She’d followed the directions—a scribbled note on aged parchment—to the standing stones."
1"The note – delivered by a courier who seemed to materialize from the fog – had spoken of a “resonance point.” A place where the veil between realities was thin."
2"The scent shifted—earth, yes, but layered beneath it, something else."
3"Her reflection in the damp stone revealed a stranger—eyes wide, the dark hair plastered to her face, a grim line etched around her mouth."
4"And something else—a faint, almost imperceptible smile played across her shadowed face."
92.80% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1124
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.042704626334519574
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.025800711743772242
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean9.02
std5.53
cv0.613
sampleLengths
05
118
221
316
412
52
67
72
811
95
1012
1112
126
133
142
155
169
1710
186
195
207
217
2230
2321
249
2516
269
2710
2810
2910
306
316
321
333
343
357
3612
375
381
3915
404
4110
427
436
4413
4512
4616
4712
4819
4924
37.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.27906976744186046
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences117
matches
0"Just a gentle thrum, usually."
1"Then, a rustle."
2"Then she heard it."
3"Only the rain answered."
4"Suddenly, the standing stones began"
5"Just a swirling vortex of"
6"Only that she had to"
ratio0.06
55.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences117
matches
0"It slicked the cobblestones of"
1"She’d followed the directions—a scribbled"
2"It wasn't a place you"
3"It hadn't warned of this."
4"They were ancient, undeniably, their"
5"she muttered, checking the pendant"
6"It hadn’t reacted like this"
7"She’d been told to find"
8"She’d dismissed it as the"
9"She shifted, investigating a darker"
10"She took a cautious step"
11"It was a small movement,"
12"She held her breath, listening."
13"she told herself, her voice"
14"She should turn back."
15"She continued deeper into the"
16"They hadn’t bloomed in that"
17"It wasn’t audible, not exactly,"
18"Her reflection in the damp"
19"She whirled around, her hand"
ratio0.41
45.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences117
matches
0"The rain tasted like metal."
1"It slicked the cobblestones of"
2"Rory pulled her collar higher,"
3"The air hung thick and"
4"She’d followed the directions—a scribbled"
5"It wasn't a place you"
6"The map, a charcoal sketch"
7"It hadn't warned of this."
8"The stones themselves were imposing,"
9"They were ancient, undeniably, their"
10"A prickle crawled across her"
11"she muttered, checking the pendant"
12"The Heartstone pulsed, a faint,"
13"It hadn’t reacted like this"
14"She’d been told to find"
15"The note – delivered by"
16"She’d dismissed it as the"
17"The accompanying words simply stated:"
18"Rory had a healthy skepticism,"
19"The rain intensified, drumming a"
ratio0.829
42.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Now, it vibrated with a"
ratio0.009
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory pulled her collar higher, the damp wool doing little to combat the chill that had settled deep in her bones."
1"It wasn’t audible, not exactly, but she felt it in her teeth, a vibration that resonated in her skull."
2"A faint, pulsating light emanated from their surfaces, intensifying, bathing the grove in an ethereal radiance."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she told, her voice sounding brittle in the vast, unwelcoming space"
1"she called out, her voice a shaky whisper"
2"a voice whispered, a voice that sounded like dry leaves skittering across pavement"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"a voice whispered (whisper)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"the voice hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.625
75.5023%