Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY87NWJ54FGVR61E3R5T9J4

Run Details

Duration:
6.5s
Cost:
$0.000412
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—like honeyed wine left too long in the sun. Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the moss that cushioned the ground. The pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, warm against her skin. Beside her, Nyx drifted just out of reach, their shadowy form flickering like a candle flame in a draft. “This isn’t right,” Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper that slithered through the air like smoke. Aurora didn’t answer. She was too busy taking it all in—the towering oaks, their bark etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, their leaves shimmering with an unnatural sheen. The sky above them wasn’t amber like Dymas, but a deep, bruised violet, streaked with veins of gold. The air hummed, a low, constant vibration that thrummed in her bones. Then she saw it. A standing stone, older than the trees, its surface carved with spirals that seemed to move when she stared too long. The pendant flared, and the stone’s carvings shifted, rearranging themselves into a face—her face. Or something like it. “What the hell?” she breathed. Nyx’s shadow stretched toward the stone, fingers of darkness brushing the surface. The carving rippled again, and this time, the face split into a grin. “It knows us,” Nyx said, their voice tight. Aurora swallowed. “Or it’s just really good at mimicry.” She reached out, her fingers hovering over the stone. The moment her skin touched the cold surface, a jolt shot up her arm. The pendant burned against her chest, and for a second, she saw—*flashed*—something behind her eyes. A vision, sharp and vivid: a feast, endless and glowing, a prince with too many teeth, a door that shouldn’t exist. Then it was gone. She pulled her hand back. “Did you see that?” Nyx was already moving, their shadow stretching toward the next standing stone. “It’s not just a grove. It’s a *threshold*.” Aurora’s pulse spiked. She clutched the Fae-forged blade at her belt, the cold metal a familiar weight. “Then we’re in the wrong place.” Isolde’s voice cut through the air, soft as a sigh. *“You are never wrong, child.”* Aurora whirled. The Half-Fae seer stood between two trees, her silver hair catching the violet light like spun moonlight. Her eyes were pale lavender, unreadable. “You called me.” Isolde tilted her head. *“I called you when you stepped through. The stones remember.”* She stepped closer, her bare feet leaving no mark on the earth. “You carry the pendant. You carry the blade. You are the key.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “Key to what?” Isolde’s smile was sad. *“To the door that should not open.”* She reached out, her fingers brushing the nearest standing stone. The carvings flared, and the air between them *ripped*—not like a tear, but like a seam unravelling. A sound like a thousand voices whispering at once filled the space. Then the ground gave way. Not beneath their feet—beneath the trees. The earth split open, revealing a chasm, its edges lined with roots that pulsed like veins. At the bottom, something glowed: a door, warped and golden, its surface etched with the same spirals as the stones. Aurora’s stomach twisted. “That’s not part of the grove.” Isolde’s voice was a murmur. *“No. It is the door to Dymas.”* Nyx’s shadow coiled around them, protective. “We’re not going through that.” Isolde’s gaze flicked to the pendant at Aurora’s throat. *“You already have.”* The pendant flared again, brighter this time, and the door *pulsed*—once, twice—like a heartbeat. Aurora’s hands trembled. “What do we do?” Isolde’s lips curved. *“You step through. And you bring them with you.”* The first step was the hardest. Aurora’s foot left the ground, hovering over the edge of the chasm. The pendant burned against her skin. The door called to her, warm and heavy with promise. Then Nyx’s voice, sharp and urgent: *“Rory—”* She didn’t look back. She took the step. The world *shifted*.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount659
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount659
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"whisper"
2"etched"
3"pulse"
4"familiar"
5"weight"
6"unreadable"
7"stomach"
8"flicked"
9"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences57
matches
0"was sad"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
56.27% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans12
markdownWords47
totalWords654
ratio0.072
matches
0"flashed"
1"threshold"
2"“You are never wrong, child.”"
3"“I called you when you stepped through. The stones remember.”"
4"“To the door that should not open.”"
5"ripped"
6"“No. It is the door to Dymas.”"
7"“You already have.”"
8"pulsed"
9"“You step through. And you bring them with you.”"
10"“Rory—”"
11"shifted"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
58.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount545
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Nyx7
Aurora10
Dymas1
Fae-forged1
Half-Fae1
Isolde6
persons
0"Carter"
1"Nyx"
2"Aurora"
3"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.583
windowScore0.667
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"spirals that seemed to move when she stared too long"
47.09% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.529
wordCount654
matches
0"not like a tear, but like a seam unravelling"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean19.82
std17.36
cv0.876
sampleLengths
062
116
258
34
439
55
625
78
89
959
104
119
1220
1323
1415
1528
1638
176
1850
195
2042
219
2212
2311
2412
2514
267
2712
286
2928
307
318
323
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs82
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences71
ratio0.099
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—like honeyed wine left too long in the sun."
1"She was too busy taking it all in—the towering oaks, their bark etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, their leaves shimmering with an unnatural sheen."
2"The pendant flared, and the stone’s carvings shifted, rearranging themselves into a face—her face."
3"The pendant burned against her chest, and for a second, she saw—*flashed*—something behind her eyes."
4"The carvings flared, and the air between them *ripped*—not like a tear, but like a seam unravelling."
5"Not beneath their feet—beneath the trees."
6"The pendant flared again, brighter this time, and the door *pulsed*—once, twice—like a heartbeat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount550
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03272727272727273
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0036363636363636364
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean9.21
std5.9
cv0.64
sampleLengths
017
115
211
319
416
53
625
718
812
94
1021
1114
124
135
1412
1513
168
172
187
199
2014
2115
2221
234
245
254
2612
278
283
2914
306
3110
325
332
3417
356
363
374
3822
3912
403
413
424
4317
4417
4512
465
476
4816
4920
48.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.323943661971831
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners23
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences54
matches
0"Then she saw it."
1"Then it was gone."
2"Then the ground gave way."
3"Then Nyx’s voice, sharp and"
ratio0.074
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences54
matches
0"She was too busy taking"
1"She reached out, her fingers"
2"She pulled her hand back."
3"She clutched the Fae-forged blade"
4"Her eyes were pale lavender,"
5"She stepped closer, her bare"
6"She reached out, her fingers"
7"She didn’t look back."
8"She took the step."
ratio0.167
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences54
matches
0"The air smelled of damp"
1"Aurora Carter stepped forward, her"
2"The pendant at her throat"
3"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
4"Aurora didn’t answer."
5"She was too busy taking"
6"The sky above them wasn’t"
7"The air hummed, a low,"
8"A standing stone, older than"
9"The pendant flared, and the"
10"Nyx’s shadow stretched toward the"
11"The carving rippled again, and"
12"Nyx said, their voice tight"
13"She reached out, her fingers"
14"The moment her skin touched"
15"The pendant burned against her"
16"A vision, sharp and vivid:"
17"She pulled her hand back."
18"Nyx was already moving, their"
19"Aurora’s pulse spiked."
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the moss that cushioned the ground."
1"A vision, sharp and vivid: a feast, endless and glowing, a prince with too many teeth, a door that shouldn’t exist."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Nyx said, their voice tight"
1"She stepped, her bare feet leaving no mark on the earth"
2"She reached out, her fingers brushing the nearest standing stone"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.2
74.8540%