| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 659 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 659 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.27% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 47 | | totalWords | 654 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "flashed" | | 1 | "threshold" | | 2 | "“You are never wrong, child.”" | | 3 | "“I called you when you stepped through. The stones remember.”" | | 4 | "“To the door that should not open.”" | | 5 | "ripped" | | 6 | "“No. It is the door to Dymas.”" | | 7 | "“You already have.”" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "“You step through. And you bring them with you.”" | | 10 | "“Rory—”" | | 11 | "shifted" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.26% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 545 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Aurora | 10 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.583 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to move when she stared too long" |
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| 47.09% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.529 | | wordCount | 654 | | matches | | 0 | "not like a tear, but like a seam unravelling" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 19.82 | | std | 17.36 | | cv | 0.876 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 |
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| 99.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.099 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—like honeyed wine left too long in the sun." | | 1 | "She was too busy taking it all in—the towering oaks, their bark etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, their leaves shimmering with an unnatural sheen." | | 2 | "The pendant flared, and the stone’s carvings shifted, rearranging themselves into a face—her face." | | 3 | "The pendant burned against her chest, and for a second, she saw—*flashed*—something behind her eyes." | | 4 | "The carvings flared, and the air between them *ripped*—not like a tear, but like a seam unravelling." | | 5 | "Not beneath their feet—beneath the trees." | | 6 | "The pendant flared again, brighter this time, and the door *pulsed*—once, twice—like a heartbeat." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 550 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.03272727272727273 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0036363636363636364 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 9.21 | | std | 5.9 | | cv | 0.64 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 48.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.323943661971831 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw it." | | 1 | "Then it was gone." | | 2 | "Then the ground gave way." | | 3 | "Then Nyx’s voice, sharp and" |
| | ratio | 0.074 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She was too busy taking" | | 1 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 2 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 3 | "She clutched the Fae-forged blade" | | 4 | "Her eyes were pale lavender," | | 5 | "She stepped closer, her bare" | | 6 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 7 | "She didn’t look back." | | 8 | "She took the step." |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 34.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, her" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 4 | "Aurora didn’t answer." | | 5 | "She was too busy taking" | | 6 | "The sky above them wasn’t" | | 7 | "The air hummed, a low," | | 8 | "A standing stone, older than" | | 9 | "The pendant flared, and the" | | 10 | "Nyx’s shadow stretched toward the" | | 11 | "The carving rippled again, and" | | 12 | "Nyx said, their voice tight" | | 13 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 14 | "The moment her skin touched" | | 15 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 16 | "A vision, sharp and vivid:" | | 17 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 18 | "Nyx was already moving, their" | | 19 | "Aurora’s pulse spiked." |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 85.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the moss that cushioned the ground." | | 1 | "A vision, sharp and vivid: a feast, endless and glowing, a prince with too many teeth, a door that shouldn’t exist." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their voice tight" | | 1 | "She stepped, her bare feet leaving no mark on the earth" | | 2 | "She reached out, her fingers brushing the nearest standing stone" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.15 | | leniency | 0.3 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |