"The air hung heavy with the scent of rust and mildew, laced with something sharper—ozone, like the aftermath of a lightning strike."
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"Her sharp jaw tightened as she gripped the bone token in her pocket—a smooth, ivory relic she'd confiscated from a suspect last month."
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"This wasn't just an abandoned platform; it was a marketplace teeming with shadows."
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"Uniformed officers—finally—milled about near a cluster of overturned crates, their flashlights cutting through the gloom."
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"The market's wardens alerted your people—discreetly, I assume."
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"I recognized him from the archives—he's supplied the museum with a few pieces over the years."
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"It's ectoplasm—residue from a spectral encounter.\""
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"Look at the bruising—consistent with a seizure or heart failure."
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"But even as she spoke, doubt gnawed at her. The blood didn't splatter right; it formed a perfect circle, as if contained by an invisible barrier. And the air—why did it feel charged, like static before a storm? Quinn's mind flashed to three years ago, DS Morris crumpling in that warehouse, no wounds, just those same silvery veins spidering across his skin. Unexplained, the coroner had ruled. But Quinn knew better. Something unnatural had taken him, and she'd buried it deep, chasing leads that led nowhere."
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"The Veil Market isn't just a bazaar; it's a nexus point."
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"He must have been using it to track something—a portal, maybe."
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"Or tampered with.\" She pocketed it for now—evidence—and turned back to the body. The silvery veins on Thorne's skin weren't random; they formed patterns, like runes. She knelt again, pulling on gloves, and gently turned his wrist. No watch, but a faint imprint where one had been. Robbery? But his pockets were untouched, wallet intact."
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"Something came through—a shade, perhaps, or a wraith."
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"Poison could mimic those veins—some neurotoxin."
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"Thorne crosses the wrong dealer, they slip him something, make it look occult to throw us off.\" But her words rang hollow. The herbs weren't scattered chaotically; they outlined a sigil on the ground, matching the ones on the compass. And that hum in the air—it grew stronger near the alcove."
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"\"Quiet.\" Quinn's voice was a whipcrack. She spotted footprints in the dust—two sets. One matched Thorne's boots, the other smaller, feminine. And there, wedged in a crack: a single curly red hair. Her gaze snapped to Eva, who tucked another strand behind her ear."
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"Quinn's mind raced. The hair could be coincidental, but the footprints led deeper, toward a faint glow at the tunnel's end. She advanced, the compass vibrating now, its sigils warming under her touch. The glow resolved into a shimmering rift—a tear in the air, like heat haze over pavement, but edged in frost. Whispers emanated from it, unintelligible but insistent."
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"Memories surged: Morris, investigating a string of disappearances, muttering about \"portals\" before that final raid. He'd laughed it off as superstition, but Quinn had seen the fear in his eyes. And now, this. The evidence didn't add up because it wasn't meant to—not in the mundane world. Thorne hadn't fallen; he'd been pulled through something. But by what? Or who?"
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"The museum sent me for a relic—a shadow compass, actually."
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"Quinn's jaw sharpened. \"And now he's dead, and you have it.\" She glanced at the rift, the compass needle pointing straight into it. The silvery veins on Thorne—they matched the sigils here, as if the rift had branded him. Not poison, not a seizure. Something had reached out, drained him, and retreated. But the footprints suggested someone had lured him in."
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"A deduction clicked: the hair wasn't Eva's alone. Another set of prints overlapped, faint but deliberate. Quinn shone her flashlight, revealing a scuff mark—a heel drag, as if Thorne had resisted. And there, half-buried in grime: a bone token, identical to her own, but cracked. Someone else had access."
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"Someone orchestrated this—used the compass to bait him, opened the portal, let whatever's inside do the work.\" She met Eva's eyes, seeing the flicker of unease. Was Eva involved? Or was she a pawn, like Morris had been?"
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"Quinn nodded, but her hand rested on her holster. The market's hum intensified, shadows lengthening. For the first time since Morris's death, she felt the veil thinning—not just here, but in her own understanding. The clique she'd suspected, the whispers of criminal activity laced with the impossible—it all converged. Thorne's death was a thread, and pulling it might unravel everything."
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"As uniforms finally breached the alcove, Quinn pocketed the compass again, its needle steady now, pointing not to the rift, but outward—toward the market's heart. More to uncover. The evidence didn't add up because the world didn't. But she would make it."
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"Vendors hawked wares that defied logic: vials of swirling smoke, stones that whispered secrets, amulets glowing with inner fire."
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"But even as she spoke, doubt gnawed at her. The blood didn't splatter right; it formed a perfect circle, as if contained by an invisible barrier. And the air—wh…"
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"Quinn's mind raced. The hair could be coincidental, but the footprints led deeper, toward a faint glow at the tunnel's end. She advanced, the compass vibrating …"
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"A deduction clicked: the hair wasn't Eva's alone. Another set of prints overlapped, faint but deliberate. Quinn shone her flashlight, revealing a scuff mark—a h…"