Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY880ST2727K2CF96JJBTT2

Run Details

Duration:
49.5s
Cost:
$0.000269
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pulsed against Rory’s skin, a relentless thrumming against her ribs. It had been a dull warmth for days, a faint reminder of the looming… something. Now, standing within the Fae Grove, it was a frantic heartbeat matching her own. She glanced at Nyx, who was already a shifting silhouette against the backdrop of improbably vibrant wildflowers. Their violet eyes – the only truly solid part of their being – scanned the perimeter, unreadable. Beside her, Isolde moved with an unnerving grace, her silver hair seeming to absorb the dappled light filtering through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the grove’s boundary. Isolde didn't walk so much as *flow*, the earth beneath her feet undisturbed. Rory noticed it, a subtle thing, that defied observation. “Time,” Isolde murmured, her voice a rustling of leaves, “plays by different rules here.” Rory knew the implication. Hours spent within this pocket dimension could mean minutes, days, or even weeks lost to the outside world. She took a shallow breath, the air thick with the perfume of blossoms she couldn’t name, a sweetness layered with something ancient and unknowable. “So, is this it?” Rory asked, her voice sounding jarringly ordinary in such a place. "The gateway?” Isolde’s pale lavender eyes fixed on her, unblinking. "A path. Not a gateway, precisely. Paths twist. Destinations are… fluid.” Nyx simply tilted their head, a near imperceptible movement within their shadowy form. "You have the Heartstone. It will guide us.” They moved forward, stepping between the standing stones. Rory felt a brief disorientation, a flicker in her vision, and then the landscape shifted. The familiar lushness of Richmond Park was gone. Before them stretched a valley draped in perpetual twilight. Giant, luminous mushrooms pulsed with an internal light, casting an ethereal glow on the strange flora that carpeted the ground. Vines thicker than tree trunks wound their way up colossal, gnarled trees, their leaves shimmering with an otherworldly iridescence. A river of liquid silver snaked through the valley floor, reflecting the unnatural sky above. The air hummed with a low, resonant frequency, vibrating against Rory’s teeth. “Hel,” Nyx breathed, the word a mere whisper carried on the wind. “Or rather, a tendril of it.” Rory felt a prickle of unease crawl up her spine. This wasn’t the bleak, desolate wasteland she’d imagined when she thought of Hel. This was… beautiful. Disturbingly so. “It’s… a lot,” she said, stating the obvious. Isolde didn’t reply, her gaze fixed on a distant peak that pierced the amber sky. “Prince Belphegor has cultivated this region,” she explained eventually, her tone devoid of emotion. "A concession to Gluttony. He appreciates artistry, even if born of sin.” The Heartstone pulsed harder now, a painful throb in her chest. She pointed towards a cluster of colossal vines laden with fruit that glowed with an almost unbearable intensity. “It’s getting stronger that way.” They followed the pull of the Heartstone, the ground springy and yielding beneath their feet. The scent of the strange fruit was intoxicating, a heady mix of honey and decay. Rory saw small, winged creatures flitting amongst the vines, their bodies shimmering like polished jewels. They regarded her with curious, unblinking eyes before darting away, leaving trails of sparkling dust. As they progressed deeper into the valley, the landscape grew more opulent. They passed colossal fountains carved from obsidian, spewing streams of what appeared to be molten gold. Gardens overflowed with exotic plants and flowers, their colors defying description. Rory noticed tables laden with food - mountains of glistening fruit, roast beasts with eyes still glazed, and elaborate pastries dripping with sugary glaze. "Don't," Isolde warned, her voice unusually sharp. "Do not partake.” Rory understood immediately. This was a test, a temptation. Belphegor’s domain was built on excess. “It’s… unsettling how beautiful it is,” Rory admitted. “It’s almost… too much.” Nyx’s form seemed to deepen, their edges blurring as if they were absorbing the shadows. “Beauty without purpose is a siren’s song. It lures you into complacency.” They continued on, navigating a maze of winding paths lined with towering sculptures crafted from polished gemstones. Each sculpture depicted scenes of revelry and indulgence – feasts, dances, and manic laughter echoing in the unnatural stillness. The Heartstone pulsed with increasing urgency, pulling them towards the valley’s heart. Then they saw it. A palace - a sprawling, impossible edifice built from dark, polished stone and adorned with shimmering gold filigree. It rose out of the valley floor like a malevolent dream, its spires reaching towards the amber sky. The air surrounding the palace shimmered with heat, distorting the already bizarre landscape. Fear, cold and sharp, pierced through Rory’s initial awe. “This is Dymas,” Isolde whispered. “The seat of Prince Belphegor.” The Heartstone throbbed violently, nearly knocking Rory off her feet. “It’s close,” she gasped. “Whatever we’re looking for… it’s in there.” Before them, a massive gate crafted from intertwined vines and bronze bars barred their way. Two hulking figures, their bodies grotesquely obese and adorned with jewels, stood guard. They were clearly helbound souls, twisted by centuries of indulgence. One of the figures lumbered forward, his voice a deep, gurgling rumble. “Who dares trespass in the domain of Prince Belphegor?” Nyx stepped forward, their shadowy form rippling with contained power. “We seek an audience.” The guard let out a booming laugh that shook the ground. “An audience? With the Prince? Mere shadows and… mortals? You jest.” He reached for a large, ornate club resting against the gate. “We are on a matter of grave importance,” Isolde said, her voice laced with an otherworldly authority. “A matter that concerns even the Prince.” The guard paused, his eyes narrowed. "Grave importance? What makes you think the Prince would concern himself with mortals?" Rory knew they needed a distraction. She drew the Fae-Forged Blade, the moonsilver shimmering in the twilight. It was always cold to the touch, a stark contrast to the oppressive heat radiating from the palace. “We’re here for the Key,” Rory stated, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. "The Key to unlocking the Veil." The guards exchanged glances. The booming laughter ceased. A flicker of something akin to interest crossed one of their faces. “The Veil, you say?” The guard repeated, his voice lower now. “A dangerous request. But perhaps… worthy of an audience with the Prince.” He gestured towards the gate. "Proceed. But be warned. Gluttony demands a price.” The heavy bronze gate creaked open, revealing a seemingly endless corridor of marble and gold. The air within hummed with palpable power, a heady mix of temptation and dread. Rory took a tentative step forward, the Heartstone pulsing with a manic urgency. They were inside. And whatever awaited them in the heart of Dymas, she knew it wouldn’t be easy.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:25:52.326Z" 2/20/2026, 7:25:52 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she explained eventually [eventually]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.903
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.065
91.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"pulsed"
count4
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"looming"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"implication"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"otherworldly"
count2
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"throb"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"glistening"
count1
14
word"navigating"
count1
15
word"dances"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count1
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"throbbed"
count1
19
word"hulking"
count1
20
word"grave"
count2
21
word"stark"
count1
22
word"oppressive"
count1
23
word"marble"
count1
24
word"palpable"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"reminder"
3"looming"
4"scanned"
5"unreadable"
6"implication"
7"flicker"
8"familiar"
9"otherworldly"
10"whisper"
11"throb"
12"intensity"
13"glistening"
14"navigating"
15"dances"
16"echoing"
17"shimmered"
18"throbbed"
19"hulking"
20"grave"
21"stark"
22"oppressive"
23"marble"
24"palpable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences83
matches
0"felt a prickle"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1128
ratio0.001
matches
0"flow"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.35% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount934
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone6
Rory16
Fae2
Grove1
Nyx5
Isolde8
Richmond1
Park1
Hel1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Dymas1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.643
windowScore0.833
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something akin to interest crossed one of their"
1"n, revealing a seemingly endless corridor of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1128
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean30.49
std19.73
cv0.647
sampleLengths
041
185
214
346
417
519
621
731
875
918
1028
118
1241
1334
1460
1563
1610
1715
1812
1927
2048
214
2258
2310
2410
2511
2638
2721
2814
2933
3024
3119
3235
3322
3420
3536
3660
92.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"being – scanned"
1"was gone"
2"was built"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was intoxicating"
1"were absorbing"
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences100
ratio0.04
matches
0"Their violet eyes – the only truly solid part of their being – scanned the perimeter, unreadable."
1"Rory noticed tables laden with food - mountains of glistening fruit, roast beasts with eyes still glazed, and elaborate pastries dripping with sugary glaze."
2"Each sculpture depicted scenes of revelry and indulgence – feasts, dances, and manic laughter echoing in the unnatural stillness."
3"A palace - a sprawling, impossible edifice built from dark, polished stone and adorned with shimmering gold filigree."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount930
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03225806451612903
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01827956989247312
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean11.28
std5.57
cv0.494
sampleLengths
012
114
21
314
417
517
629
713
89
914
104
1118
1224
1315
142
158
1611
1713
188
198
2015
218
229
2320
2419
2515
2612
2712
286
2910
3013
312
321
332
348
3515
3614
3712
3811
3918
405
4115
4215
4315
4415
4512
4616
4711
4824
497
65.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.43
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners43
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Then they saw it."
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences76
matches
0"It had been a dull"
1"She glanced at Nyx, who"
2"Their violet eyes – the"
3"She took a shallow breath,"
4"They moved forward, stepping between"
5"she said, stating the obvious"
6"she explained eventually, her tone"
7"She pointed towards a cluster"
8"They followed the pull of"
9"They regarded her with curious,"
10"They passed colossal fountains carved"
11"They continued on, navigating a"
12"It rose out of the"
13"They were clearly helbound souls,"
14"He reached for a large,"
15"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade,"
16"It was always cold to"
17"He gestured towards the gate"
18"They were inside."
ratio0.25
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences76
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed against Rory’s"
1"It had been a dull"
2"She glanced at Nyx, who"
3"Their violet eyes – the"
4"Isolde didn't walk so much"
5"Rory noticed it, a subtle"
6"Isolde murmured, her voice a"
7"Rory knew the implication."
8"Hours spent within this pocket"
9"She took a shallow breath,"
10"Rory asked, her voice sounding"
11"Isolde’s pale lavender eyes fixed"
12"Nyx simply tilted their head,"
13"They moved forward, stepping between"
14"Rory felt a brief disorientation,"
15"The familiar lushness of Richmond"
16"Vines thicker than tree trunks"
17"A river of liquid silver"
18"The air hummed with a"
19"Nyx breathed, the word a"
ratio0.842
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"Now, standing within the Fae"
1"Before them stretched a valley"
2"Before them, a massive gate"
ratio0.039
55.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She glanced at Nyx, who was already a shifting silhouette against the backdrop of improbably vibrant wildflowers."
1"Beside her, Isolde moved with an unnerving grace, her silver hair seeming to absorb the dappled light filtering through the ancient oak standing stones that mar…"
2"Giant, luminous mushrooms pulsed with an internal light, casting an ethereal glow on the strange flora that carpeted the ground."
3"She pointed towards a cluster of colossal vines laden with fruit that glowed with an almost unbearable intensity."
4"Rory saw small, winged creatures flitting amongst the vines, their bodies shimmering like polished jewels."
5"Nyx’s form seemed to deepen, their edges blurring as if they were absorbing the shadows."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her voice a rustling of leaves,"
1"Rory asked, her voice sounding jarringly ordinary in such a place"
2"she explained eventually, her tone devoid of emotion"
3"Isolde warned, her voice unusually sharp"
4"Rory stated, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
5"The guard repeated, his voice lower now"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
2"she explained eventually (explain)"
3"Isolde warned (warn)"
4"Rory admitted (admit)"
5"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
6"she gasped (gasp)"
7"Rory stated (state)"
8"The guard repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.387
leniency0.774
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.581
78.5647%