Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY89QV61AX8W891QWZP6E43

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.008089
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The sesame oil stain on Rory’s Golden Empress delivery apron had crusted into a faint amber patch by the time she and Nyx ducked off Richmond Park’s potholed path into the undergrowth. She’d torn off her bike helmet mid-pedal when the Heartstone Pendant around her neck had throbbed so hard it had dug into her sternum—its deep crimson gem, no bigger than her thumbnail, glowing faintly through the thin fabric of her uniform blouse. Her left hand drifted to the crescent scar on her wrist, a childhood accident’s memento she still rubbed when her cool-headed facade threatened to crack, and she glowered at the dead screen of her delivery phone. Nyx’s incorporeal form coiled around her ankle like smoke, their faintly glowing violet eyes cutting through the London dusk to fix on a cluster of gnarled oak trunks she’d mistaken for storm-felled deadfall. “The boundary stones,” Nyx’s voice whispered through her hair, a breeze that didn’t stir a single leaf. They shifted into solid form for a heartbeat—6’2” of living shadow, their silhouette sharp enough to slice the smog-hazed light—before dissolving again, their whisper fading into the rustle of unseen foliage. “You cannot perceive them yet; the Veil blurs mortal sight here. But cross their threshold, and the world will unspool.” Rory squinted, her bright blue eyes straining until her temples ached. Then something shifted: she blinked, and the oaks weren’t just trunks anymore. They were ancient standing stones, their bark carved with faint, swirling runes she couldn’t parse, their canopies weaving a canopy so thick it blocked the distant wail of a London bus. Moss oozed between their cracks, and wildflowers burst from the earth at their bases—tulips with scarlet petals, poppies leaking ink-black sap, snowdrops glistening with frost—all blooming at once, a chaos of seasons that made her breath catch. That’s the Grove, she thought, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone’s silver chain. The Fae-touched pocket Isolde’s prophecies had led them to. She stepped over the stones’ invisible threshold first, her scuffed delivery boots sinking into moss that hadn’t been there a second ago. The air hit her like a wave of honey and petrichor, and her watch’s hands stutter to a halt, the ticking dying in her ear. Nyx’s solid form flickered when they followed, their shadowy edges fraying as the pocket realm’s unstable magic tugged at the rift between their shade self and the mortal plane. “The time here is a liar,” Nyx’s whisper curled around her, their voice thinner than before. “An hour inside can be minutes. Or days.” Rory’s throat went dry. She’d fled Cardiff to escape Evan’s manipulations, to trade Pre-Law textbooks for dumpling delivery routes and a flat above Silas’ bar, but this—this pocket between Earth and the Fae realm—was a kind of escape she’d never imagined. She scanned the clearing: wildflowers carpeted every inch of the ground, their scents mixing into something that made her stomach growl (a faint echo of Dymas’ gluttony realm, she thought, remembering the Heartstone’s Dymasian origin) and oak trees whose leaves hummed when the wind touched them. She knelt to pluck a snowdrop, its frost melting on her fingertips, and noticed something odd: the ground had no footprints. Not hers, not Nyx’s solid form’s, not even the faint indentations a rabbit might leave. “The Seer leaves no mark,” Nyx’s whisper answered her unspoken question. They’d shifted back to incorporeality, their violet eyes glowing brighter as they drifted toward the clearing’s center. “She glides like smoke through her grove.” The Heartstone pulsed warmer, so hot it burned through her blouse. Rory fumbled with the silver chain to yank it out, and its deep crimson glow flared, casting faint red streaks across the wildflower carpet. She remembered its codex behavior—pulses near Hel portals—and her cool-headedness kicked in, her quick out-of-the-box thinking kicking into gear. “It’s reacting,” she said, her voice tight. “Is there a Hel rift here? Belphegor’s servants from Dymas?” Nyx’s shadow coiled higher around her arm. “The Grove’s pocket bleeds into the Veil. Dymas’ Heartstone senses the fracture—Belphegor’s master chefs, who contract helbound souls from Earth for their feasts, may be trying to carve a portal through the Fae-touched space. They crave the Grove’s time distortion; an hour of their gluttonous feasts could stretch into years for their mortal victims.” A rustle from the oak canopy made them both freeze. Rory’s hand flew to her wrist scar, and Nyx’s form solidified again, their shadowy fists clenched. Then a figure stepped out from behind a gnarled trunk: silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes that glowed like distant stars, ethereal features that looked both 300 years old and ageless. Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts, and when Rory glanced at her feet, she saw it—no footprints, not even a faint dent in the moss. “The crimson stone of excess’s lap burns where the Veil frays,” Isolde said, her voice like wind through chimes, riddles wrapping her words as the codex promised. She couldn’t lie, but Rory could already tell she’d mislead if it suited her. “The shadow that was Aldric walks between worlds, but the mortal who fled her chains holds the key to plugging the feast-maker’s hole.” Rory’s jaw tightened. She’d fled Evan’s abuse, yes, but she’d never thought her flight would tie her to Fae seers and shade beings and Hel’s gluttony realm. “You’re Isolde,” she said, her voice steady despite the Heartstone’s throbbing. “We need to know how to stop Belphegor’s servants from opening that portal.” Isolde’s lips curved into a faint, otherworldly smile. She glided toward them, her silver hair brushing the wildflowers without bending a single petal, and held out a slender, leaf-shaped dagger. Its moonsilver blade was always cold to the touch, Rory could tell even before she took it, and it glowed faintly with a light that wasn’t from the Grove’s canopy. The Fae-Forged Blade, she realized, the artifact Isolde’s prophecies had hinted at—one that could cut through magical wards, that was particularly effective against demons. “Cut the shadow’s thread that ties the feast-maker’s servants to the Veil,” Isolde said, her riddles sharpening. “But beware: the time you spend here will unspool outside. The mortal’s delivery shift may be over before she steps back through the stones, or it may have never begun.” Rory’s fingers wrapped around the dagger’s hilt, the cold seeping into her bones, and she glanced at her watch again—still frozen at 4:17 p.m., the time she’d stepped into the undergrowth. Nyx’s shadow form flickered, their violet eyes fixing on the Heartstone’s glowing crimson gem, and Rory felt the weight of the artifact in her hand, the weight of the rift between Dymas’ gluttonous vineyards and the Grove’s wildflower chaos. She rubbed her wrist scar once more, her cool-headedness settling over her like a blanket, and stepped toward the clearing’s edge, where the Heartstone’s pulse was now so strong it made her chest ache. Nyx’s whisper curled around her: “The Veil frays farther there. Belphegor’s chefs are already carving their portal.” Rory’s eyes darted to the distant standing stones, to the faint shimmer of the Veil she could now see (thanks to the Grove’s magic), and she tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade. Outside, London’s buses wailed, but inside the Grove, the only sounds were the oak leaves’ hum and the Heartstone’s throb. She didn’t know how long she’d be here—minutes, days, hours—but she knew one thing: she’d fled Cardiff to take control of her life, and she wouldn’t let Belphegor’s gluttonous servants yank that control away again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory’s fingers wrapped around [around]"
1"Nyx’s whisper curled around [around]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"facade"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count4
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"cascading"
count1
11
word"otherworldly"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"throb"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"facade"
2"whisper"
3"glistening"
4"flickered"
5"scanned"
6"stomach"
7"echo"
8"unspoken"
9"pulsed"
10"cascading"
11"otherworldly"
12"weight"
13"pulse"
14"throb"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"fists clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences26
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences26
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences27
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1258
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount826
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Golden1
Empress1
Nyx8
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone5
Pendant1
London3
Veil2
Grove5
Fae-touched1
Isolde6
Cardiff1
Evan2
Pre-Law1
Hel2
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Fae6
Courts1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Belphegor2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Heartstone"
3"Veil"
4"Isolde"
5"Evan"
6"Belphegor"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
5"Hel"
6"Fae"
globalScore0.774
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences22
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1258
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences27
matches(empty)
74.82% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean78.63
std32.38
cv0.412
sampleLengths
0143
168
2113
3100
4123
535
671
761
889
964
1051
1184
1247
13104
1417
1588
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences27
ratio0.296
matches
0"She’d torn off her bike helmet mid-pedal when the Heartstone Pendant around her neck had throbbed so hard it had dug into her sternum—its deep crimson gem, no bigger than her thumbnail, glowing faintly through the thin fabric of her uniform blouse."
1"They shifted into solid form for a heartbeat—6’2” of living shadow, their silhouette sharp enough to slice the smog-hazed light—before dissolving again, their whisper fading into the rustle of unseen foliage. “You cannot perceive them yet; the Veil blurs mortal sight here."
2"Rory squinted, her bright blue eyes straining until her temples ached. Then something shifted: she blinked, and the oaks weren’t just trunks anymore. They were ancient standing stones, their bark carved with faint, swirling runes she couldn’t parse, their canopies weaving a canopy so thick it blocked the distant wail of a London bus. Moss oozed between their cracks, and wildflowers burst from the earth at their bases—tulips with scarlet petals, poppies leaking ink-black sap, snowdrops glistening with frost—all blooming at once, a chaos of seasons that made her breath catch. That’s the Grove, she thought, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone’s silver chain. The Fae-touched pocket Isolde’s prophecies had led them to."
3"The Heartstone pulsed warmer, so hot it burned through her blouse. Rory fumbled with the silver chain to yank it out, and its deep crimson glow flared, casting faint red streaks across the wildflower carpet. She remembered its codex behavior—pulses near Hel portals—and her cool-headedness kicked in, her quick out-of-the-box thinking kicking into gear. “It’s reacting,” she said, her voice tight. “Is there a Hel rift here?"
4"They crave the Grove’s time distortion; an hour of their gluttonous feasts could stretch into years for their mortal victims.”"
5"A rustle from the oak canopy made them both freeze. Rory’s hand flew to her wrist scar, and Nyx’s form solidified again, their shadowy fists clenched. Then a figure stepped out from behind a gnarled trunk: silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes that glowed like distant stars, ethereal features that looked both 300 years old and ageless. Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts, and when Rory glanced at her feet, she saw it—no footprints, not even a faint dent in the moss."
6"Isolde’s lips curved into a faint, otherworldly smile. She glided toward them, her silver hair brushing the wildflowers without bending a single petal, and held out a slender, leaf-shaped dagger. Its moonsilver blade was always cold to the touch, Rory could tell even before she took it, and it glowed faintly with a light that wasn’t from the Grove’s canopy. The Fae-Forged Blade, she realized, the artifact Isolde’s prophecies had hinted at—one that could cut through magical wards, that was particularly effective against demons."
7"Rory’s fingers wrapped around the dagger’s hilt, the cold seeping into her bones, and she glanced at her watch again—still frozen at 4:17 p.m., the time she’d stepped into the undergrowth. Nyx’s shadow form flickered, their violet eyes fixing on the Heartstone’s glowing crimson gem, and Rory felt the weight of the artifact in her hand, the weight of the rift between Dymas’ gluttonous vineyards and the Grove’s wildflower chaos. She rubbed her wrist scar once more, her cool-headedness settling over her like a blanket, and stepped toward the clearing’s edge, where the Heartstone’s pulse was now so strong it made her chest ache."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount541
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03512014787430684
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009242144177449169
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences27
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences27
mean46.59
std35.88
cv0.77
sampleLengths
032
142
236
333
417
542
69
7113
898
92
10123
1135
1267
134
1414
1527
1620
1789
1864
1951
2084
2127
2220
23104
2410
257
2688
76.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.48148148148148145
totalSentences27
uniqueOpeners13
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences25
matches
0"She’d torn off her bike"
1"Her left hand drifted to"
2"They shifted into solid form"
3"She stepped over the time"
4"They crave the Grove’s time"
ratio0.2
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount24
totalSentences25
matches
0"The sesame oil stain on"
1"She’d torn off her bike"
2"Her left hand drifted to"
3"Nyx’s incorporeal form coiled around"
4"Nyx’s voice whispered through her"
5"They shifted into solid form"
6"Rory squinted, her bright blue"
7"She stepped over the time"
8"Rory’s throat went dry. She’d"
9"Nyx’s whisper answered her unspoken"
10"The Heartstone pulsed warmer, so"
11"Belphegor’s servants from"
12"Nyx’s shadow coiled higher around"
13"They crave the Grove’s time"
14"A rustle from the oak"
15"Isolde said, her voice like"
16"Rory’s jaw tightened. She’d fled"
17"Isolde’s lips curved into a"
18"Isolde said, her riddles sharpening"
19"The mortal’s delivery shift may"
ratio0.96
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences7
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory squinted, her bright blue eyes straining until her temples ached. Then something shifted: she blinked, and the oaks weren’t just trunks anymore. They were …"
1"A rustle from the oak canopy made them both freeze. Rory’s hand flew to her wrist scar, and Nyx’s form solidified again, their shadowy fists clenched. Then a fi…"
2"Isolde’s lips curved into a faint, otherworldly smile. She glided toward them, her silver hair brushing the wildflowers without bending a single petal, and held…"
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Nyx’s whisper curled around, their voice thinner than before"
1"she said, her voice tight"
2"Isolde said, her riddles sharpening"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx’s voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.125
74.4088%