Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY89W41BBBDMZ652DH2S3SC

Run Details

Duration:
22.3s
Cost:
$0.000958
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The key turned in the lock with a stick. Rory paused, hand hovering over the door, and listened. Below, Silas’ bar hummed—clinking glass, a laugh, a man calling for more ale. She’d just clocked out from the Golden Empress, linen uniform still crisp under her jacket, delivery bag slung over one arm. The smell of jasmine rice clung to her sleeves. She pushed the door open. The hallway light flickered. A shadow stepped from the dark. Rory froze. The bag slipped. She caught it, fingers white, as the other person moved into the glow. Platinum hair, slicked back like it’d been lacquered. A charcoal suit, tailored to the bone, despite the grimy brick walls. The ivory cane, tip tapping the floor. And those eyes—amber and black, slicing through her like a scalpel. “Christ,” she said. Her voice cracked. She cleared her throat. “What are you doing here.” Lucien Moreau. The Frenchman. The fixer who knew too much, who’d once looked at her like he might break her—then fixed her, even when she didn’t want fixing. Evan had hated him. Evan had been *good* at hating people. He didn’t answer. Just stood there, hands in the pockets of his suit, like he might reach for her. Like he always had. “You can’t be here,” she said, taking a step back. The doorframe bit into her shoulders. “This flat’s got deadbolts. Three. You think I haven’t learned?” “Eva let me in,” he said. His voice was low, like fire through stone. “Said you’d want to know.” Rory’s chest tightened. Eva. She’d called Rory three days ago, voice wild: *“Lucien’s in town. He says it’s about Evan. About… about the scars.”* Evan’s scars. The ones he’d left on her—on her wrist, on her cheek, on the inside of her thighs. The ones she still dreamt about, sometimes, when the whiskey was too strong. “Where is he?” she asked. It came out sharper than she meant. “Gone,” Lucien said. “I tracked him to a warehouse in Bow. He’s got a new crew—people who don’t ask questions. They think he’s a enforcer, but he’s not shit. He owed money. To the wrong people.” Rory stared. The delivery bag slipped again, this time from her loose grip. She kicked at it with her boot. “Why are you telling me—” “Because you found out the hard way what happens when you don’t run,” he said. His cane tapped a staccato. “I saw you last. The night you left. Evan had the lamp. You stood in the doorway, bleeding, and he laughed. Said you’d never get far. And you didn’t—until I helped you.” She staggered back, hitting the door. The paint was chipped, one corner peeling like a scab. “You think this is—” Her throat closed. She swallowed. “You think this is gratitude?” “It’s not,” he said. “It’s owed.” Her left wrist burned. She pressed it to her stomach, hiding the crescent scar. Evan had done that with a beer bottle. *“To teach you to run back,”* he’d said. *“To prove you need me.”* “You should go,” she said. “Before I call Silas. He’ll—” “Silas knows you need protection,” Lucien cut in. “He saw you at the bar last week, shaking. He asked me why I wasn’t there. Said you ‘used to glow’ when you laughed with him.” “Glow,” she repeated. Her lip trembled. *Don’t cry.* Don’t let him see the cracks. “You left. You had your world, your demons, your customers with wings. You didn’t stay. Why start now?” He took a step forward. The cane tip scraped the floor. “Because you were the first person who ever looked at me like I wasn’t a weapon. Like I was… *human*.” Silence. The bar below roared with another laugh. A truck rumbled past outside. Rory closed her eyes. When she opened them, he was closer—so close she could smell his cologne, sandalwood and something sharp, like ozone. “You’re half-demon, Lucien,” she said. “You think *human* is an option?” He stopped. His eyes softened—just a little. “You’re the first person who ever asked *why* I’m half-demon. The first who didn’t flinch when I told you about Avaros, about the fire that eats souls. You listened. You *cared*.” “I cared about a *liar*,” she said. But her voice was weak. She hated how weak it was. Hated that he could still unravel her with a single look. “You weren’t a liar,” he said. “You just… didn’t let me in. Not really. The night you left, I stood in the rain for an hour, because I couldn’t bear to watch you drive away. You didn’t even look back.” She opened her mouth to snap, but the words died. She *had* looked back. She’d seen him standing there, rain soaking his suit, his amber eye glistening like a broken star. And she’d gunned the engine. Because if she didn’t, she’d climb out, take his hand, and never leave. “I’m sorry,” she whispered. He reached out. His fingers brushed her cheek—warm, calloused, not like Evan’s. She didn’t flinch. “You don’t have to be. I’m here now. For as long as you want me.” The cane fell to the floor with a thud. His hand cupped her neck, his thumb brushing the scar on her wrist—the one she’d forgotten, until he traced it. *The accident*, she thought. *How small that seems now.* “You have a flat,” he said. “A cramped one, with books and scrolls. And a cat that hisses at me every time I come over.” Rory laughed. It was a wet, shaky sound, but a laugh all the same. “Ptolemy’s a coward. He hides under the sofa.” “He stared me down,” Lucien said. “For ten minutes. Said, ‘Humans, always with the lies.’” She smiled. Just a little. “He’s right, you know. You’re a liar. You said you’d never get involved.” “I changed my mind,” he said. His voice dropped. “I always change my mind when it comes to you.” She tilted her head. “Why now? What do you want?” He stopped. His eyes flickered—black, amber, black—before settling on hers. “I want to know you. All of you. The Rory who argues with me over tea, who fixes my cane when it’s broken, who still flinches when I raise my voice. The one who ran from Evan, who ran from me… but maybe, deep down, you wanted to stay.” Rory’s chest ached. She stepped into him, pressing her forehead to his. The scent of his cologne wrapped around her, softening the edges. “Maybe,” she said. “Maybe I still do.” He kissed her then—slow, careful, like he was afraid she’d break. His hands slid down her back, holding her close, and she clung to his suit, to his shirt, to the fabric that smelled like rain and secrets and home. Somewhere, a car alarm wailed. Somewhere, Eva laughed, loud and long, as if she’d known this would happen all along. But for now, it was just them—two people, scarred, broken, and finally, *found*. The cane lay on the floor. The door stood open. And for the first time in years, Rory didn’t care about the future. She just cared about the man in front of her. And the way he looked at her, like she was the only thing that mattered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.435
leniency0.87
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"unravel"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"stomach"
2"trembled"
3"silence"
4"unravel"
5"glistening"
6"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences110
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans14
markdownWords40
totalWords1207
ratio0.033
matches
0"good"
1"“Lucien’s in town. He says it’s about Evan. About… about the scars.”"
2"“To teach you to run back,”"
3"“To prove you need me.”"
4"Don’t cry."
5"human"
6"human"
7"why"
8"cared"
9"liar"
10"had"
11"The accident"
12"How small that seems now."
13"found"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount734
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Rory9
Evan5
Lucien4
Don2
Eva2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.887
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like rain and secrets and home"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1207
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean26.24
std14.66
cv0.559
sampleLengths
061
15
210
318
438
515
639
723
826
919
1056
1112
1236
1325
1452
1530
166
1735
1810
1934
2032
2131
2236
2311
2438
2529
2640
2749
284
2930
3038
3125
3222
3315
3418
3519
3610
3759
3830
3940
4020
4113
4210
4313
4410
4515
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"been lacquered"
1"was chipped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences135
ratio0.074
matches
0"And those eyes—amber and black, slicing through her like a scalpel."
1"The fixer who knew too much, who’d once looked at her like he might break her—then fixed her, even when she didn’t want fixing."
2"The ones he’d left on her—on her wrist, on her cheek, on the inside of her thighs."
3"When she opened them, he was closer—so close she could smell his cologne, sandalwood and something sharp, like ozone."
4"His eyes softened—just a little."
5"His fingers brushed her cheek—warm, calloused, not like Evan’s."
6"His hand cupped her neck, his thumb brushing the scar on her wrist—the one she’d forgotten, until he traced it."
7"His eyes flickered—black, amber, black—before settling on hers."
8"He kissed her then—slow, careful, like he was afraid she’d break."
9"But for now, it was just them—two people, scarred, broken, and finally, *found*."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount555
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.025225225225225224
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0036036036036036037
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean8.94
std7.66
cv0.857
sampleLengths
09
19
213
321
49
55
64
76
82
93
1013
118
1212
137
1411
153
163
174
185
192
202
2124
224
237
243
2516
264
2710
286
2910
306
318
325
333
341
3522
3617
3713
385
397
403
4133
422
4311
447
455
4615
475
4832
496
41.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2962962962962963
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences81
matches
0"Just stood there, hands in"
1"Just a little."
2"Somewhere, a car alarm wailed."
3"Somewhere, Eva laughed, loud and"
ratio0.049
47.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences81
matches
0"She’d just clocked out from"
1"She pushed the door open."
2"She caught it, fingers white,"
3"Her voice cracked."
4"She cleared her throat."
5"He didn’t answer."
6"she said, taking a step"
7"His voice was low, like"
8"She’d called Rory three days"
9"It came out sharper than"
10"She kicked at it with"
11"His cane tapped a staccato."
12"She staggered back, hitting the"
13"Her throat closed"
14"Her left wrist burned."
15"She pressed it to her"
16"Her lip trembled."
17"He took a step forward."
18"His eyes softened—just a little."
19"She hated how weak it"
ratio0.432
58.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences81
matches
0"The key turned in the"
1"Rory paused, hand hovering over"
2"She’d just clocked out from"
3"The smell of jasmine rice"
4"She pushed the door open."
5"The hallway light flickered."
6"A shadow stepped from the"
7"The bag slipped."
8"She caught it, fingers white,"
9"Platinum hair, slicked back like"
10"A charcoal suit, tailored to"
11"The ivory cane, tip tapping"
12"Her voice cracked."
13"She cleared her throat."
14"The fixer who knew too"
15"Evan had hated him."
16"Evan had been *good* at"
17"He didn’t answer."
18"she said, taking a step"
19"The doorframe bit into her"
ratio0.802
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Because if she didn’t, she’d"
ratio0.012
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His hands slid down her back, holding her close, and she clung to his suit, to his shirt, to the fabric that smelled like rain and secrets and home."
1"Somewhere, Eva laughed, loud and long, as if she’d known this would happen all along."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She’d, voice wild: *"
84.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She’d (would)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.13
87.8712%