| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 817 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 817 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 799 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Wind, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 786 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.51 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Childhood | 1 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Gaelic | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Shapes | 2 | | Aurora | 4 | | Rory | 3 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Shapes" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 799 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 42.05 | | std | 26.8 | | cv | 0.637 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 80 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 74 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "Brendan always warned her about Richmond Park after dark—poachers, drunks, worse." | | 1 | "Except the air hung still, heavy with that flower perfume masking something sharper—wet stone, decay." | | 2 | "A murmur bubbled up, words in a tongue that twisted her gut—Gaelic?" | | 3 | "Crimson light splashed the oaks, revealing faces in the bark—eyes hollow, mouths stretched in silent screams." | | 4 | "The flower scent soured, curdling to rot—teeth under soil, meat gone soft." | | 5 | "Footprints scarred the moss—her boots, size seven, and smaller prints, clawed, circling wide." | | 6 | "Voices exploded—gibberish chorus, pulling at her name." | | 7 | "How—" | | 8 | "Stink hit—milk gone rancid." | | 9 | "A hand—long, bark-veined—shot out, fingers splaying for her throat." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 802 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.029925187032418952 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0012468827930174563 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 6.34 | | std | 4.38 | | cv | 0.69 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 96.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.6 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 75 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 97.89% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled into the clearing," | | 1 | "She knelt, fingers brushing a" | | 2 | "They sprang back, vibrant, untouched." | | 3 | "Her pulse thrummed in her" | | 4 | "She patted her pocket for" | | 5 | "She'd left at 10:30." | | 6 | "She gripped the pendant, chain" | | 7 | "Its crimson glow pulsed once," | | 8 | "She paced the boundary, fingers" | | 9 | "She pressed her ear to" | | 10 | "She whipped around." | | 11 | "Her voice cracked the silence" | | 12 | "She crouched low, heart hammering," | | 13 | "She touched it." | | 14 | "It seeped through, burrowing into" | | 15 | "She rocked forward, forehead to" | | 16 | "She traced the scar now," | | 17 | "She rose, legs steady." | | 18 | "She yanked it free, held" | | 19 | "Her laugh barked out, brittle." |
| | ratio | 0.305 | |
| 44.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora squeezed between two ancient" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant burned hot" | | 2 | "She stumbled into the clearing," | | 3 | "Wildflowers nodded under her weight," | | 4 | "Petals crushed beneath her heels," | | 5 | "She knelt, fingers brushing a" | | 6 | "They sprang back, vibrant, untouched." | | 7 | "Her pulse thrummed in her" | | 8 | "Brendan always warned her about" | | 9 | "Oaks ringed the space, trunks" | | 10 | "She patted her pocket for" | | 11 | "Clock read 11:47." | | 12 | "She'd left at 10:30." | | 13 | "Minutes lost, or her watch" | | 14 | "A twig snapped behind the" | | 15 | "Aurora spun, breath catching." | | 16 | "Leaves shivered, settling." | | 17 | "She gripped the pendant, chain" | | 18 | "Its crimson glow pulsed once," | | 19 | "Eva's cryptic text two days" |
| | ratio | 0.832 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers nodded under her weight, releasing a cloying sweetness that coated her throat." | | 1 | "Oaks ringed the space, trunks twisted into impossible knots, branches knitting a canopy that blocked stars." | | 2 | "A murmur bubbled up, words in a tongue that twisted her gut—Gaelic?" | | 3 | "Rory jerked back, scar on her wrist itching, white crescent flaring hot as fresh ink." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |