| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.077 | | leniency | 0.154 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1240 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1240 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "raced" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "quivered" | | 6 | "sentinels" | | 7 | "wavered" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "echoes" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "velvet" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "echoing" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "flickered" | | 19 | "glistening" | | 20 | "echoed" | | 21 | "maw" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1229 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1109 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 7 | | Hel | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Dymas | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.914 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if gazing through realms" |
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| 37.27% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.627 | | wordCount | 1229 | | matches | | 0 | "not from cold but from the sudden hush" | | 1 | "not trapping but caressing, releasing a scent of spiced wine" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 31.51 | | std | 23.34 | | cv | 0.741 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 72 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 87 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 64 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers unfurled in riots of colour—petals in shades of sapphire and crimson that no earthly garden grew—nodding without wind." | | 1 | "They pressed deeper, the path—if it was a path—winding between oaks that stood like sentinels, their branches interlacing overhead into a dome of living green." | | 2 | "The name from Isolde's earlier mutterings tugged at Aurora's memory—the gluttonous realm in Hel, where excess lured souls to feasts that never ended." | | 3 | "Flowers carpeted the ground, blooming in defiance of seasons—roses heavy with dew beside lilies spiked with thorns like daggers." | | 4 | "Beneath the flutes, a deeper rhythm pulsed—drums?" | | 5 | "Visions flickered at the edges of her sight—glimpses of feasts in amber skies, tables groaning under platters of glistening meats and fruits that writhed like living things." | | 6 | "Aurora's heart pounded, the grove's wonder twisting into nightmare as a rift tore open above the altar—a maw of amber light, spilling scents of spiced excess and the first hungry shadows of Dymas." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1120 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.014285714285714285 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005357142857142857 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 13.36 | | std | 6.53 | | cv | 0.489 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 64.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.391304347826087 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 92.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She ducked beneath the lowest" | | 1 | "She stumbled, catching herself on" | | 2 | "Their whisper cut through the" | | 3 | "She knelt, fingers hovering over" | | 4 | "It quivered, releasing a puff" | | 5 | "Her wrist scar tingled, the" | | 6 | "She spoke in her riddled" | | 7 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 8 | "They pressed deeper, the path—if" | | 9 | "She reached out, trailing fingers" | | 10 | "It coiled gently around her" | | 11 | "They reappeared moments later, urgency" | | 12 | "She crouched at the edge," | | 13 | "Her pendant warmed against her" | | 14 | "She pressed it flat, unease" | | 15 | "They forded the stream, water" | | 16 | "she murmured, turning to Nyx" | | 17 | "Their form solidified, tall and" | | 18 | "They tilted their head, voice" | | 19 | "She stepped closer to one," |
| | ratio | 0.32 | |
| 13.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's fingers tightened around the" | | 1 | "She ducked beneath the lowest" | | 2 | "A shiver raced up her" | | 3 | "Nyx melted into the shadows" | | 4 | "Isolde glided ahead without a" | | 5 | "The boundary hit Aurora like" | | 6 | "She stumbled, catching herself on" | | 7 | "Nyx reformed beside her, solid" | | 8 | "Their whisper cut through the" | | 9 | "Aurora nodded, her bright blue" | | 10 | "Wildflowers unfurled in riots of" | | 11 | "She knelt, fingers hovering over" | | 12 | "It quivered, releasing a puff" | | 13 | "Her wrist scar tingled, the" | | 14 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender" | | 15 | "She spoke in her riddled" | | 16 | "Aurora rose, brushing pollen from" | | 17 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 18 | "They pressed deeper, the path—if" | | 19 | "Aurora's boots sank into moss" |
| | ratio | 0.893 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "A shiver raced up her spine, not from cold but from the sudden hush that swallowed the distant hum of Richmond Park's traffic." | | 1 | "Nyx melted into the shadows beside her, their form flickering like smoke caught in a breeze, violet eyes gleaming faintly in the dim." | | 2 | "Isolde glided ahead without a sound, her silver hair catching glints of light that shouldn't exist here, under the canopy." | | 3 | "She stumbled, catching herself on a trunk that felt alive, warm and yielding under her palm." | | 4 | "It quivered, releasing a puff of pollen that danced like fireflies, warm motes settling on her skin." | | 5 | "She glanced at Nyx, who shrugged, their silhouette rippling unease." | | 6 | "They pressed deeper, the path—if it was a path—winding between oaks that stood like sentinels, their branches interlacing overhead into a dome of living green." | | 7 | "It coiled gently around her touch, not trapping but caressing, releasing a scent of spiced wine that made her mouth water." | | 8 | "Bubbles rose against the flow, popping with tiny sparks that lit the undersides of leaves." | | 9 | "Isolde knelt beside her, unperturbed, cupping a handful that slipped through her fingers without wetting them." | | 10 | "The grove opened into a wider glade, ringed by standing stones of ancient oak, their surfaces etched with runes that shimmered lavender, matching Isolde's eyes." | | 11 | "Juice stained red, smelling of blood and berries, stirring a wonder that made her breath catch." | | 12 | "It thrummed, warm against her cheek, echoing her own pulse but faster, as if the grove quickened with her presence." | | 13 | "The air grew heavier, scented now with overripe fruit, vines nearby sagging under clusters of orbs that gleamed amber, skins taut and veined." | | 14 | "Dymas beckoned, its excess mirroring the grove's bounty, blurring lines between wonder and trap." | | 15 | "Nyx lunged, incorporeal form wrapping her arm, pulling her back." | | 16 | "The dagger bit through vine, severing tendrils that writhed on the ground, oozing amber sap that sizzled." | | 17 | "Aurora's heart pounded, the grove's wonder twisting into nightmare as a rift tore open above the altar—a maw of amber light, spilling scents of spiced excess an…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.077 | | leniency | 0.154 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |