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Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8A8P7KN1CDG3EM5RC0PB8
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Model:
ByteDance Seed 1.6 Flash
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
28.1s
Cost:
$0.001086
Provider:
Seed
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
62.46%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
99.34%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
59.61%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
54.56%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
95.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
57.66%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
82.07%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
80.3567%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The winter solstice twilight seeped
through the gap between the standing stones.
Aurora, her left wrist scar
tight beneath her sleeve, pressed a hand to the Heartstone pendant.
It pulsed like a faint
heartbeat, warm against her palm. Her breath fogged.
Not from the cold—Richmond Park in December bit, but not enough to steal air so sharp
. “Almost there,”
Nyx said, their voice a
whisper
that stirred her hair. They materialized at her side, a shadow with the faint glow of violet eyes. Aurora turned.
Nyx’s form was half-solid, edges
bleeding into the stone, like a painting smudged. “The Veil’s thin. Felt it when we crossed the perimeter.”
Isolde stepped into view behind
them.
Her silver hair, caught in
the wind, moved as if underwater. No footprints marred the moss. “Thinner than the last,”
she said, her voice a
chime.
She held no lantern, but
the clearing around them lit up—wildflowers in impossible hues, petals shifting from indigo to gold. “Time inside bends. Ten steps out, an hour in.”
Aurora’s boots sank into moss
that smelled of ripe peaches and rain.
She glanced at the stones—ancient
oaks, gnarled, their rings
etched
with runes she didn’t recognize. “Why here?” she asked.
Evan had never brought her
to Richmond Park, but he’d mentioned it once, in a fit of rage, called it “a dump.” She’d never cared. Now, the air hummed. *
Alive
*. “Because the Glutton is
hungry
,” Isolde said, and Nyx shifted, their shadow thickening.
Aurora noticed a flicker at
the edge of her vision—a figure, half-seen, stepping into the shadow of a tree. When she blinked, it
was gone
. “Show us,” she said.
The rift appeared as the
pendant’s glow flared.
A rippling of light, not
dim, but *
bright
*, like a cracked mirror. Beyond it, the sky was amber, as if the sun had set and then risen again at a different angle.
The air smelled of honeyed
wine and roasted chestnuts, rich enough to cloy. Aurora stepped forward. Nyx hovered at her shoulder. Isolde trailed, her silver hair brushing the rift’s edge. They fell. Not a fall—more like floating, gravity thinning. Aurora grabbed Nyx’s arm. Nyx’s form shifted, solid, and she felt their fingers close around hers, cool as the Fae blade strapped to Aurora’s waist. Below, a landscape stretched: rolling hills, but not green. The grass was emerald, but the vines climbing the oaks bore fruit—yes, fruit, but not apples. These were ovoid, purple, with veins of gold. A river curved through the valley, its water clear, but when she leaned closer, she saw *
souls
* in it—faint, wispy, struggling against the current. “Hel,” Nyx said. Their voice was lower, harsher. “The Glutton’s realm. Dymas. They take
souls
here, feed on their
hungers
.” Aurora’s pendant burned.
She fumbled it free, staring
at the deep crimson gem.
It glowed, the warmth spreading
up her arm. “Why did Isolde bring us here?” Isolde tilted her head. “Why does the seer seek? To see. To know.” “See what?” The air shifted. The sky dimmed, but not with night—with something heavier, thicker. A sound reached them: clinking, laughter, a cook’s voice calling out. Aurora squinted. Below, a grand palace
loomed
, its spires gilded. Around it, vineyards stretched, their vines dripping with fruit that glowed like embers. Servants moved through the gardens, carrying platters heaped with pastries, roasted meats, bowls of stew that bubbled with a thousand spices. And everywhere, the
souls
in the vineyards—they writhed, their forms stretching as they reached for the fruit. “They’re *
craving
*,”
she said, and realized it
was her own voice. The fruit looked sweet. *
Tasted
* sweet, just looking at it.
She felt a pang in
her
stomach
, sudden, intense—like she hadn’t eaten in days. Nyx’s hand tightened on hers. “Don’t look at the fruit. Don’t smell the wine.”
Their shadowed form seemed to
shrink, as if the air itself pushed against them. “Shades rot in Hel. The Glutton feeds on *
longing
*.” Aurora tore her gaze away. A cook, her white apron stained with sauce, looked up and caught her eye. She smiled, wide, and pointed. In her other hand, she held a platter of pastries—flaky, golden, with a filling that glowed like liquid amber. Aurora’s throat went dry. “Come,” Isolde said, and started walking.
Her feet didn’t touch the
ground; she glided, like a leaf on a stream. “The first feast is ready. But beware—indulgence is a chain.” Aurora followed. Nyx was right behind, their shadow now a solid presence beside her.
They stepped onto a path
made of stone squares, each carved with a different symbol—a heart, a knife, a hourglass. The air grew warmer.
Not hot, but *alive*, like the stone held a memory
.
She noticed a vine缠绕ing the
base of a stone, its leaves shimmering silver. When she brushed it, it coiled away, hissing—a sound like a thousand tongues. “Magic,” she said. “Not Fae,” Nyx said. “Hel. They twist the natural. Make things *
hungry
*.”
They nodded at the vine
. “See the fruit? It doesn’t die. It *
hungers
*. Sucks the life from whatever it touches.” Aurora stepped back. The cook at the palace gate now waved a platter of pastries. “Come, little ones,” the voice said, but it wasn’t the cook’s. It was a thousand voices, all at once, in her head. *Hungry. Tired. Come eat.* Isolde stopped. “Look.” Aurora followed her gaze. A group of Helbound
souls
sat at a table near the garden. They
were not writhing
now. They were *
still
*, faces slack, eyes hollow. Their plates were empty—all the food gone. But their bodies were... stretching. Skin thinning. Limbs growing longer, more flexible. One soul’s arm elongated, snaking toward the table, seeking more. “They’re merging with the land,”
Nyx said, their voice hollow
. “Becoming part of the Glutton’s feast.” Aurora pressed a hand to her pendant. It burned, but not with pain—with warning. She thought of Dymas’s ruler, Prince Belphegor. Evan had told her once, in a drunk argument, that Belphegor liked to play with
souls
, make them *
beg
* for more. She’d laughed it off. Now, she didn’t. A trumpet blared. The palace doors opened. A man stood in the doorway, tall, with horns that curled back from his forehead. His skin was dark, his eyes like molten gold. He wore a tunic of
silk
, red as blood. “Guests!”
he called, his voice booming
. “The feast has begun! Come, be fed! Be *
full
*!” The
souls
at the table jolted,
as if waking
. They stood, their faces forming expressions of hunger. One looked up at Aurora, its eyes empty, and smiled. “You’re here,”
it said, and the voice was Evan’s
. Aurora staggered. Nyx’s hand shot to her shoulder. “Evan’s not here,” they said. “It’s the Glutton. It knows what you hunger for.” “I’m
not hungry,” she said, but her stomach rumbled
. She thought of her ex, of the way he’d yelled, the way he’d hit her. *
Empty
*. The fruit looked so
full
. The pastries, so sweet. *
Full
*. “Liar,” the soul said, and Evan’s voice hissed in her ear. “You’re empty. Come
fill
yourself.” Isolde stepped in front of her. Her pale lavender eyes glowed, faint, but
bright
. “It feeds on
desire
,” she said. “Not hunger. Want. Take what you *
need
*, not what you *
crave
*.” She closed her eyes, then opened them. “The Heartstone warns. The Fae blade cuts through chains.” Aurora’s hand fumbled for the Fae blade. It was cold, as always, its moonsilver surface reflecting the amber sky. She gripped it, and the image of Evan’s face vanished. The soul at the table stumbled, its form faltering, and the cook in the gatehouse yelped, dropping her platter. “Beautiful,” the prince said, raising a hand. “The Glutton rewards those who resist. Come, then. Taste the wine. Bite the meat. Allow the feast to *
fill
* you.” Aurora looked at Nyx. Nyx nodded, their shadow shifting, solid, ready. She looked at Isolde. Isolde smiled, a small, sad smile. “The Veil is thin. We can leave when we choose.” “Let’s go deeper,” she said. Nyx’s eyes flared. “Dealer’s choice.” They walked toward the palace, the Fae blade in Aurora’s hand, the Heartstone burning against her chest. The air hummed with the sound of feasting, of laughter, of
souls
whispering promises. But Aurora didn’t look away from the path. She kept her eyes on the stone squares, on the symbols, on the way the light played over the gardens. This was a place of wonder. A place of horror. But it was *
alive
*. And somewhere, deep inside, Aurora thought, *
I belong here
*. Not to the hunger, but to the *
seeing
*. To the exploring.
To the edge of the
Veil, where anything was possible. She stepped onto the palace steps. The trumpets blared again. And the prince smiled.
created_at
"2026-02-20T19:27:05.937Z"
2/20/2026, 7:27:05 PM
model
"bytedance-seed/seed-1.6-flash-20250625"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
614
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
27837
tokens_prompt
1816
tokens_completion
3319
native_tokens_prompt
1936
native_tokens_completion
3136
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
927
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.001086
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"e01a1227-001b-44d4-a376-90850668fa84"
id
"0217716156263478792bd17575462d883d5a21b523815c5d27437"
is_byok
false
latency
421
model_permaslug
"bytedance-seed/seed-1.6-flash-20250625"
provider_name
"Seed"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771615626-Qlfdu2yDCt7qHw9URvyA"
upstream_id
"0217716156263478792bd17575462d883d5a21b523815c5d27437"
total_cost
0.001086
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Seed"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
24
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
42
tagDensity
0.571
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1465
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
62.46%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1465
totalAiIsms
11
found
0
word
"pulsed"
count
1
1
word
"whisper"
count
1
2
word
"etched"
count
1
3
word
"flicker"
count
1
4
word
"warmth"
count
1
5
word
"loomed"
count
1
6
word
"pang"
count
1
7
word
"stomach"
count
2
8
word
"silk"
count
1
9
word
"desire"
count
1
highlights
0
"pulsed"
1
"whisper"
2
"etched"
3
"flicker"
4
"warmth"
5
"loomed"
6
"pang"
7
"stomach"
8
"silk"
9
"desire"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
150
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
150
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
99.34%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
168
gibberishSentences
1
adjustedGibberishSentences
1
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
25
ratio
0.006
matches
0
"She noticed a vine缠绕ing the base of a stone, its leaves shimmering silver."
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
21
markdownWords
26
totalWords
1448
ratio
0.018
matches
0
"Alive"
1
"bright"
2
"souls"
3
"craving"
4
"Tasted"
5
"longing"
6
"alive"
7
"hungry"
8
"hungers"
9
"Hungry. Tired. Come eat."
10
"still"
11
"beg"
12
"full"
13
"Empty"
14
"Full"
15
"need"
16
"crave"
17
"fill"
18
"alive"
19
"I belong here"
20
"seeing"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
25
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
59.61%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
67
wordCount
1217
uniqueNames
14
maxNameDensity
1.81
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Heartstone
2
Richmond
2
Park
2
December
1
Evan
5
Nyx
15
Aurora
22
Fae
3
Isolde
9
Helbound
1
Dymas
1
Prince
1
Belphegor
2
Veil
1
persons
0
"Evan"
1
"Nyx"
2
"Aurora"
3
"Isolde"
4
"Dymas"
5
"Prince"
6
"Belphegor"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
2
"December"
globalScore
0.596
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
89
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"as if waking"
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
5
per1kWords
3.453
wordCount
1448
matches
0
"Not from the cold—Richmond Park in December bit, but not enough to steal air so sharp"
1
"not dim, but *bright*, like a cracked mirror"
2
"Not hot, but *alive*, like the stone held a memory"
3
"not hungry,” she said, but her stomach rumbled"
4
"Not to the hunger, but to the *seeing*"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
168
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
42
mean
34.48
std
23.91
cv
0.694
sampleLengths
0
57
1
51
2
61
3
61
4
38
5
4
6
70
7
2
8
89
9
20
10
27
11
13
12
2
13
85
14
35
15
37
16
47
17
30
18
74
19
3
20
32
21
41
22
3
23
57
24
16
25
49
26
55
27
36
28
22
29
35
30
16
31
47
32
48
33
27
34
31
35
5
36
5
37
59
38
44
39
6
40
4
41
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
150
matches
0
"was gone"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
245
matches
0
"were not writhing"
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
15
semicolonCount
1
flaggedSentences
16
totalSentences
168
ratio
0.095
matches
0
"Not from the cold—Richmond Park in December bit, but not enough to steal air so sharp."
1
"She held no lantern, but the clearing around them lit up—wildflowers in impossible hues, petals shifting from indigo to gold."
2
"She glanced at the stones—ancient oaks, gnarled, their rings etched with runes she didn’t recognize."
3
"Aurora noticed a flicker at the edge of her vision—a figure, half-seen, stepping into the shadow of a tree."
4
"Not a fall—more like floating, gravity thinning."
5
"The grass was emerald, but the vines climbing the oaks bore fruit—yes, fruit, but not apples."
6
"A river curved through the valley, its water clear, but when she leaned closer, she saw *souls* in it—faint, wispy, struggling against the current."
7
"The sky dimmed, but not with night—with something heavier, thicker."
8
"And everywhere, the souls in the vineyards—they writhed, their forms stretching as they reached for the fruit."
9
"She felt a pang in her stomach, sudden, intense—like she hadn’t eaten in days."
10
"In her other hand, she held a platter of pastries—flaky, golden, with a filling that glowed like liquid amber."
11
"Her feet didn’t touch the ground; she glided, like a leaf on a stream."
12
"They stepped onto a path made of stone squares, each carved with a different symbol—a heart, a knife, a hourglass."
13
"When she brushed it, it coiled away, hissing—a sound like a thousand tongues."
14
"Their plates were empty—all the food gone."
15
"It burned, but not with pain—with warning."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1233
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.024330900243309004
lyAdverbCount
0
lyAdverbRatio
0
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
168
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
168
mean
8.62
std
5.47
cv
0.635
sampleLengths
0
12
1
16
2
10
3
3
4
16
5
12
6
14
7
2
8
13
9
10
10
6
11
11
12
5
13
10
14
20
15
9
16
12
17
15
18
4
19
25
20
4
21
1
22
13
23
19
24
6
25
4
26
8
27
12
28
20
29
13
30
3
31
5
32
9
33
2
34
7
35
4
36
21
37
9
38
16
39
8
40
24
41
3
42
5
43
12
44
3
45
10
46
8
47
6
48
4
49
9
54.56%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.34523809523809523
totalSentences
168
uniqueOpeners
58
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
128
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
95.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
40
totalSentences
128
matches
0
"It pulsed like a faint"
1
"Her breath fogged."
2
"They materialized at her side,"
3
"Her silver hair, caught in"
4
"she said, her voice a"
5
"She held no lantern, but"
6
"She glanced at the stones—ancient"
7
"Their voice was lower, harsher."
8
"She fumbled it free, staring"
9
"It glowed, the warmth spreading"
10
"she said, and realized it"
11
"She felt a pang in"
12
"Their shadowed form seemed to"
13
"She smiled, wide, and pointed."
14
"Her feet didn’t touch the"
15
"They stepped onto a path"
16
"She noticed a vine缠绕ing the"
17
"They nodded at the vine"
18
"It was a thousand voices,"
19
"They were not writhing now."
ratio
0.313
57.66%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
103
totalSentences
128
matches
0
"The winter solstice twilight seeped"
1
"Aurora, her left wrist scar"
2
"It pulsed like a faint"
3
"Her breath fogged."
4
"Nyx said, their voice a"
5
"They materialized at her side,"
6
"Nyx’s form was half-solid, edges"
7
"Isolde stepped into view behind"
8
"Her silver hair, caught in"
9
"she said, her voice a"
10
"She held no lantern, but"
11
"Aurora’s boots sank into moss"
12
"She glanced at the stones—ancient"
13
"Evan had never brought her"
14
"Isolde said, and Nyx shifted,"
15
"Aurora noticed a flicker at"
16
"The rift appeared as the"
17
"A rippling of light, not"
18
"The air smelled of honeyed"
19
"Aurora stepped forward."
ratio
0.805
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
4
totalSentences
128
matches
0
"Now, the air hummed."
1
"Now, she didn’t."
2
"To the exploring."
3
"To the edge of the"
ratio
0.031
82.07%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
47
technicalSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"A sound reached them: clinking, laughter, a cook’s voice calling out."
1
"Around it, vineyards stretched, their vines dripping with fruit that glowed like embers."
2
"She noticed a vine缠绕ing the base of a stone, its leaves shimmering silver."
3
"The soul at the table stumbled, its form faltering, and the cook in the gatehouse yelped, dropping her platter."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
24
uselessAdditionCount
7
matches
0
"Nyx said, their voice a whisper that stirred her hair"
1
"she said, her voice a chime"
2
"shadowed form seemed, as if the air itself pushed against them"
3
"Nyx said, their voice hollow"
4
"he called, his voice booming"
5
"it said, and the voice was Evan’s"
6
"she said, but her stomach rumbled"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
20
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
42
tagDensity
0.476
leniency
0.952
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
80.3567%