Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8A8R2K8EDR6D1752DS59B

Run Details

Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.001254
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter parked her battered scooter at the edge of Richmond Park, the engine's sputter dying into silence under a sky thick with clouds. No moon pierced through. She killed the headlight, swung her leg over, and hefted the backpack strap higher on her shoulder. The Heartstone Pendant nestled against her chest, tucked beneath her jacket—a thumbnail-sized crimson gem on a silver chain, warm as fresh blood even now. It had throbbed all evening, insistent, pulling her from the flat above Silas's bar straight into this midnight trek. Some anonymous note slipped under her door that afternoon: "The Grove calls the stone. Answers wait where oaks stand eternal." She scanned the treeline. Deer paths twisted into bramble-choked shadows. No joggers this late, no dog walkers with their leashed mutts. Just wind hissing through oaks, carrying a salt tang that didn't belong inland. Rory flexed her fingers, traced the crescent scar on her left wrist out of habit. Cool-headed, she reminded herself. Answers about the pendant meant leverage—against Evan, maybe, or whatever mess Eva dragged her into last week with whispers of portals and fae nonsense. Footsteps crunched gravel as she slipped past the park gate, torch beam slicing narrow ahead. Oaks loomed taller here, bark furrowed like clenched fists. The air cooled sharper with each stride, breath fogging despite the mild London night. She checked her phone: 11:47 PM. Signal bars flickered, then vanished. Fine. She shoved it deep in her pocket. The standing stones emerged first as silhouettes—ancient oaks twisted into vertical slabs, bark petrified into rune-etched monoliths. Eight of them ringed a clearing no bigger than her flat's living room. Wildflowers carpeted the grass inside, petals ghostly white even in darkness, blooming defiant against autumn chill. Rory halted at the boundary. The pendant burned hot now, a pulse syncing with her heartbeat. She crossed the threshold. Grass silenced under her boots. No birds called. No insects buzzed. The wind dropped dead. She stood alone in the Fae Grove—or so the note promised. Pocket realm, Eva had called it once, giggling over cheap wine. Time slips here. Minutes stretch to days. Rory swept the torch around. Petals quivered, though nothing stirred the air. She knelt, fingers brushing a bloom. Petals clung damp, cool as cellar stone. "Okay, stone," she muttered, voice flat in the hush. "What answers?" The pendant glowed faint crimson through her shirt. She pulled it free, held it aloft. Light bloomed inward, casting ruby shadows on the oaks. No doors yawned open. No voices whispered secrets. Just flowers nodding in place. She paced the circle, boots pressing silent prints into turf. Minutes ticked—five, ten—phone stayed dark when she checked. Thirst clawed her throat. Backpack unzipped yielded water bottle, twist cap echoing loud. Gulp after gulp chilled her teeth. Wiping her mouth, she froze. A rustle. Beyond the stones, branches parted. Not wind. Too deliberate. Rory snapped off the torch, crouched low. Eyes strained into black. Nothing. Just oaks swaying in rhythm, leaves whispering secrets she couldn't parse. "Get a grip," she breathed. Echoes layered her words, stretching them thin. Pendant throbbed again, heat spreading to her ribs. She rose, circled slower. Flowers crushed underheel released no scent—wrong, all wrong. Blooms should perfume heavy. These lay scentless, waxen. Middle of the clearing held a dip, grass swirled in spirals like fingerprints pressed from below. She probed with her boot. Soil yielded soft, sucked at the sole. Another sound. Click-clack, like nails on wood. From the nearest oak slab. Rory whipped around. Torch flicked on—empty bark, runes stark black. Click-clack again, fainter, circling left. She tracked it, beam jittering. Petals trembled along the stone's base. Something scuttled behind, gone when light hit. Heart hammered. Sweat beaded despite the cold. She backed to the center, pendant clutched fist-tight. "Show yourself," she called. Voice cracked on the edges. Silence swallowed it. Time blurred. She checked her phone: still 11:47. Impossible. Minutes had passed—twenty? More? Backpack slumped to grass. She sat cross-legged, pendant dangling from fingers. Glow pulsed steady, illuminating spirals beneath. Traced one with her nail. Ground hummed faint, vibration climbing her spine. Rustle-shuffle from the treeline. Closer now. Peripheral vision caught a dart—elongated shadow stretching wrong across petals. Rory jerked head. Empty. Just a branch drooping lower, claw-like twigs curling inward. Breathe. Think. Out-of-box: the pendant reacted to Hel portals, not fae. Wrong place? Note lied? She stood, tested the boundary. Stepped toward an oak slab. Air thickened, pressed chest like wading treacle. Pushed through—grass outside crunched normal. Wind returned, chill normal. Phone blared 11:52. Five minutes lost inside. She re-entered. Air glued again. Petals brighter, unnaturally vivid whites glowing faint. Clock reset: 11:47. Pendant scorched. Click-clack multiplied. Four points now, encircling. Rory spun, torch beam whipping shadows long. Glimpses: twig-fingers scraping bark? Pale flickers retreating into oak crevices? No. Eyes played tricks. Hunger gnawed sudden, stomach twisting empty though she'd eaten before leaving Golden Empress. "Enough games," she snarled, voice booming back warped. She yanked the chain, held pendant high like a lantern. Crimson light flooded the grove, etching every petal, every rune sharp. Oaks leaned inward, tops knitting overhead into a dome. Flowers reared stems tall, blossoms unfurling mouths—petal lips peeling back silent. No. Imagination. She blinked hard. Stems normal. Oaks straight. But the sounds grew. Skitter-patter across grass now, petals parting. Torch swept low—indentations webbed the turf, tiny prints overlapping, leading nowhere. Something brushed her calf. Fabric? Fur? She kicked air, stumbled. Backpack toppled, contents spilling: water bottle rolling, torch batteries clattering. She snatched them up, jammed fresh ones in. Beam steadied. Shadows writhed thicker. A shape huddled at the far oak—hunched, elongated, limbs folding inward. Rory froze it in light. Shape dissolved to knothole, wind-carved. Phone buzzed sudden—signal? She lunged for it. Screen lit: 11:47 still. Text from unknown: "Deeper. Stone knows." "Fuck this." Words echoed legion, overlapping her own. She bolted for boundary. Air resisted, oaks groaning roots shifting. Petals tangled ankles, stems whipping. Click-clack swarmed behind, nails gouging turf pursuit. Pendant swung wild, glow strobing chaos. Boundary neared—slab loomed. Brush at neck. Cold fingers trailed spine. Rory screamed, twisted free. Slammed shoulder into oak. Air split. She tumbled out. Grass crunched normal. Wind howled real. Phone flared: 2:13 AM. Three hours gone. She gasped, scrambled up. Grove entrance yawned innocent—oaks still, flowers dim. Pendant cooled, glow dimmed to ember. No prints marred the boundary grass. No sounds chased. But inside, petals pulsed faint white. Watching. Rory backed away, torch shaking. Scooter waited distant. She ran, boots pounding gravel. Every shadow stretched long, every rustle promised pursuit. Flat above Silas's called—lock doors, salt thresholds, call Eva. Phone died mid-dial. Battery full minutes ago. She didn't look back. Grove watched anyway. Dawn crept gray when she burst through Silas's back door, bar empty, stools ghosted in dust motes. Silas wiped counter, paused. "Rory? Christ, you look mauled." "Time," she panted, slamming pendant on wood. "Lost hours in Richmond. Grove pulled me." He eyed the gem, face paling. "Isolde's spot? Should've warned you. Fae don't play fair." Pendant warmed anew under his stare. Pulse quickened. Click-clack echoed faint from the stairs. She whirled. Empty. "Not alone," Silas whispered. "Never are." Rory gripped counter. Prints webbed the floorboards—tiny, overlapping. Leading up. She followed. Stairs creaked underfoot. Flat door ajar. Inside, wildflowers bloomed from cracks, petals peeling mouths. Torch beam caught eyes—dozens, petal-fringed, blinking slow. Pendant blazed crimson. Heat seared skin. Shape unfolded from corner. Elongated. Hungry. Rory backed into wall. No escape. Sounds filled room. Skitter-patter. Nails on wood. Closer.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:27:05.997Z" 2/20/2026, 7:27:05 PM
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native_tokens_reasoning560
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count2
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"chill"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"quivered"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"chilled"
count1
14
word"echoes"
count1
15
word"flicked"
count1
16
word"stark"
count1
17
word"trembled"
count1
18
word"pulsed"
count2
19
word"stomach"
count1
20
word"etching"
count1
21
word"echoed"
count2
22
word"pounding"
count1
23
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"throbbed"
2"scanned"
3"traced"
4"footsteps"
5"loomed"
6"furrowed"
7"flickered"
8"etched"
9"chill"
10"pulse"
11"quivered"
12"echoing"
13"chilled"
14"echoes"
15"flicked"
16"stark"
17"trembled"
18"pulsed"
19"stomach"
20"etching"
21"echoed"
22"pounding"
23"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences215
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences215
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences220
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1253
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount1200
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant7
Silas5
Evan1
Eva3
London1
Fae1
Grove3
Echoes1
Voice1
Hel1
Golden1
Empress1
Words1
Rory12
Oaks3
Minutes3
Petals5
Backpack3
Click-clack5
Torch3
Air4
Phone4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Eva"
5"Echoes"
6"Voice"
7"Words"
8"Rory"
9"Oaks"
10"Minutes"
11"Petals"
12"Backpack"
13"Click-clack"
14"Torch"
15"Air"
16"Phone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1253
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences220
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean26.1
std22.92
cv0.878
sampleLengths
0108
177
257
366
469
511
637
742
834
912
1056
1145
1224
133
1442
1529
1648
1717
1840
1949
209
2141
2234
2317
248
2531
2620
2713
2826
297
3030
317
327
3326
3414
3515
368
376
383
396
4010
412
4221
436
446
456
467
471
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences215
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs291
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences220
ratio0.086
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant nestled against her chest, tucked beneath her jacket—a thumbnail-sized crimson gem on a silver chain, warm as fresh blood even now."
1"Answers about the pendant meant leverage—against Evan, maybe, or whatever mess Eva dragged her into last week with whispers of portals and fae nonsense."
2"The standing stones emerged first as silhouettes—ancient oaks twisted into vertical slabs, bark petrified into rune-etched monoliths."
3"She stood alone in the Fae Grove—or so the note promised."
4"Minutes ticked—five, ten—phone stayed dark when she checked."
5"Flowers crushed underheel released no scent—wrong, all wrong."
6"Torch flicked on—empty bark, runes stark black."
7"Minutes had passed—twenty?"
8"Peripheral vision caught a dart—elongated shadow stretching wrong across petals."
9"Pushed through—grass outside crunched normal."
10"Flowers reared stems tall, blossoms unfurling mouths—petal lips peeling back silent."
11"Torch swept low—indentations webbed the turf, tiny prints overlapping, leading nowhere."
12"A shape huddled at the far oak—hunched, elongated, limbs folding inward."
13"Phone buzzed sudden—signal?"
14"Boundary neared—slab loomed."
15"Grove entrance yawned innocent—oaks still, flowers dim."
16"Flat above Silas's called—lock doors, salt thresholds, call Eva."
17"Prints webbed the floorboards—tiny, overlapping."
18"Torch beam caught eyes—dozens, petal-fringed, blinking slow."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1240
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.01935483870967742
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016129032258064516
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences220
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences220
mean5.7
std4.24
cv0.744
sampleLengths
024
14
217
324
419
520
64
76
811
913
1015
114
1224
1315
149
1514
166
175
181
197
2017
2113
2216
235
2411
254
265
273
283
294
3011
3111
323
334
345
357
366
377
389
392
408
417
429
434
444
455
4610
478
484
499
88.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5409090909090909
totalSentences220
uniqueOpeners119
96.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences173
matches
0"Just wind hissing through oaks,"
1"Just flowers nodding in place."
2"Just oaks swaying in rhythm,"
3"Just a branch drooping lower,"
4"Flat above Silas's called—lock doors,"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences173
matches
0"She killed the headlight, swung"
1"It had throbbed all evening,"
2"She scanned the treeline."
3"She checked her phone: 11:47"
4"She shoved it deep in"
5"She crossed the threshold."
6"She stood alone in the"
7"She knelt, fingers brushing a"
8"she muttered, voice flat in"
9"She pulled it free, held"
10"She paced the circle, boots"
11"She rose, circled slower."
12"She probed with her boot."
13"She tracked it, beam jittering."
14"She backed to the center,"
15"She checked her phone: still"
16"She sat cross-legged, pendant dangling"
17"She stood, tested the boundary."
18"she snarled, voice booming back"
19"She yanked the chain, held"
ratio0.179
84.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount130
totalSentences173
matches
0"Aurora Carter parked her battered"
1"She killed the headlight, swung"
2"The Heartstone Pendant nestled against"
3"It had throbbed all evening,"
4"Some anonymous note slipped under"
5"She scanned the treeline."
6"Deer paths twisted into bramble-choked"
7"Rory flexed her fingers, traced"
8"Answers about the pendant meant"
9"Footsteps crunched gravel as she"
10"Oaks loomed taller here, bark"
11"The air cooled sharper with"
12"She checked her phone: 11:47"
13"She shoved it deep in"
14"The standing stones emerged first"
15"Wildflowers carpeted the grass inside,"
16"Rory halted at the boundary."
17"The pendant burned hot now,"
18"She crossed the threshold."
19"Grass silenced under her boots."
ratio0.751
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences173
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she muttered, voice flat in the hush"
1"she snarled, voice booming back warped"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she snarled (snarl)"
3"she panted (pant)"
4"Silas whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.714
82.3135%