Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8AH78MNAJ1BVMNKER3SZS

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20.6s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knob protested with a rusty groan, a sound that seemed to vibrate through Aurora’s entire flat, rattling the precariously stacked piles of research papers threatening to spill from her desk. Dust motes danced in the weak shaft of afternoon light slicing through the gap in the drawn curtains, illuminating the chaotic beauty of Eva’s place – a controlled mess of arcane texts, half-finished sketches, and the lingering scent of Earl Grey and something indefinably metallic. She hadn’t expected a visitor, certainly not Lucien Moreau. Not after… well, after everything. Her fingers tightened around the worn leather of the copy of Baudelaire she’d been painstakingly annotating, the familiar weight a small comfort against the sudden, insistent thrum of unease in her chest. The scent of sandalwood and something sharply, undeniably *him*, filled the narrow hallway as the door swung inward. He stood there, a sculpted silhouette against the grey light of the London street, an island of charcoal tailoring amidst the bohemian chaos. Lucien Moreau. Even after all this time, after the carefully constructed distance she’d maintained, he was an impossible thing to look at – all sharp angles and polished obsidian, the heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, seeming to absorb the light rather than reflect it. His platinum blond hair, slicked back with a meticulousness that bordered on obsessive, shimmered faintly. He carried a single ivory-handled cane, not as a need, but as an extension of his arm, a silent assertion of power and taste. His smile wasn’t a smile, not really. It was a subtle curve of the lips, a flicker of amusement that didn’t quite reach his eyes, and it felt, instantly and disconcertingly, like a judgment. “Aurora Carter,” he stated, his voice a low, resonant baritone threaded with a precise, almost chilling French accent. “I trust I haven’t interrupted something… delicate?” She lowered the Baudelaire, placing it carefully back on the desk. "Lucien. You… you rang?" The words felt thin, inadequate, a pathetic attempt to maintain the carefully constructed neutrality she’d cultivated over the last five years. The flat suddenly felt smaller, the air thick with unspoken history. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, materialized from behind a stack of books, weaving between their legs with a lazy, indifferent sway. He seemed far more perceptive than either of them. He didn’t answer directly. Instead, he took a slow, deliberate step into the flat, his movements fluid and graceful, a stark contrast to the cluttered space around him. "A rather inconvenient interruption, perhaps. But sometimes, the most profitable ventures arise from the most unexpected detours.” He surveyed the room with an appraising gaze, his amber eye lingering on the overflowing bookshelves. "You've certainly embraced a… unique aesthetic." “It’s called organized chaos,” she retorted, a defensive edge creeping into her voice. It wasn’t truly organized, of course. It was a carefully curated reflection of her mind, a desperately constructed fortress against the intrusion of… him. “And you're disturbing it.” “Disturbing you, perhaps. Though, I suspect, your mind is rather more turbulent than your surroundings.” He moved closer, stopping just beyond the reach of a precarious pile of leather-bound journals. "I've been observing you, Aurora. From a distance. For some time.” The air crackled with a low, almost palpable tension. She resisted the urge to turn away, to retreat behind the shield of her desk. There was something unnerving, undeniably captivating, about his unwavering gaze. “Observing? What exactly were you observing?” Her voice was sharper now, a carefully controlled measure of irritation. “Your… resilience,” he said, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips. “Your ability to thrive amidst the shadows. You've built a… modest empire for yourself, haven't you? Delivering golden Empress food to the darkest corners of this city.” He gestured vaguely around the flat. The reference to her job felt pointed, almost dismissive. She bristled. “It’s a living.” It wasn’t a grand empire, not by any stretch of the imagination. It was a means to an end, a way to keep her head above water after… after *Evan*. “And it pays the rent.” “Rent is merely a component of existence. You’re capable of so much more, Aurora. I've theorized, of course. Your father, a renowned barrister, instilled in you an impressive intellect. Your mother, a respected teacher, imparted a keen eye for detail. You possess a deductive mind that is rarely found today.” He tilted his head slightly, his eyes, both amber and black, dark pools of observation. “A pity you seem to dedicate it to lukewarm noodles.” “You’re analyzing me,” she said, the accusation dripping with irony. “That’s your specialty, isn’t it? Dissecting people, finding their weaknesses.” “I specialize in uncovering truths,” he corrected, his voice smooth and deliberate. "The truth about people is rarely comfortable. But it is invariably illuminating." He took another step, closing the distance between them. Now she could smell the faintest trace of iron, that signature scent of his heritage. "I couldn’t help but notice you’ve been revisiting old cases. The Moreau estate theft, specifically.” The blood rushed to her face. It had been six years. Six years since he’d vanished after breaking into her flat and leaving nothing but a single obsidian feather. Six years she’d spent trying to erase him from her memory. “That was a long time ago,” she said, her voice strained. “And it was… a mistake.” “Mistakes have a habit of repeating themselves, don’t they?” He straightened, regaining his composure, his gaze unwavering. “Especially when the parties involved aren’t particularly adept at learning from past errors.” She clenched her fists, fighting the urge to lash out. He was deliberately provoking her, pushing her buttons. It was a familiar tactic, one she’d learned to anticipate during their brief, volatile affair – an affair that had ended with shattered trust and a carefully crafted distance. “What do you want, Lucien?” she demanded, the question laced with a brittle edge of fury. “Simple,” he replied, his voice low and measured. “I’m here to offer a proposition. A rather lucrative one, I might add.” He paused, letting the words hang in the air. “Let’s just say, your particular skillset might be… relevant to a certain matter. A matter involving a misplaced artifact, a dangerous client, and a potential retrieval.” He picked up his cane, the ivory handle gleaming in the afternoon light. "And a debt that needs settling.” The air in the flat suddenly felt colder, the scent of sandalwood intensifying, overlaid with something darker, something dangerous. She looked at him – at the unsettlingly perfect symmetry of his features, the conflicting colours in his eyes, the deliberate calculation in his expression – and realized, with a chilling certainty, that she hadn’t escaped him after all. He hadn’t simply vanished. He’d been waiting. And for the first time in six years, she felt a tremor of something dangerously close to fear. A fear that wasn't just for herself, but for the fragile, carefully constructed world she’d built above Silas’ bar. "Define 'lucrative'," she said, her voice barely a whisper, the word brittle, like shattered glass.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.613
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
40.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1174
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count7
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
6
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"carefully"
2"really"
3"suddenly"
4"truly"
5"slightly"
6"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1174
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"amidst"
count2
4
word"constructed"
count4
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"chilling"
count2
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"palpable"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"unwavering"
count2
13
word"comfortable"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count2
15
word"measured"
count1
16
word"potential"
count1
17
word"gleaming"
count1
18
word"perfect"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"amidst"
4"constructed"
5"shimmered"
6"flicker"
7"chilling"
8"unspoken"
9"stark"
10"palpable"
11"tension"
12"unwavering"
13"comfortable"
14"shattered"
15"measured"
16"potential"
17"gleaming"
18"perfect"
19"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
1"a flicker of amusement"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences64
matches
0"felt a tremor"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1176
ratio0.002
matches
0"him"
1"Evan"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount870
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.23
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Eva2
Earl1
Grey1
Lucien2
Moreau2
Baudelaire2
London1
French1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Earl"
2"Grey"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Baudelaire"
places
0"Aurora"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sound that seemed to vibrate through Aurora’s entire flat, rattling the precariously stacked piles of research papers threatening to spill from her desk"
1"quite reach his eyes, and it felt, instantly and disconcertingly, like a judgment"
2"seemed far more perceptive than either of them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.85
wordCount1176
matches
0"not as a need, but as an extension of his arm, a silent assertion of power"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean61.89
std34.45
cv0.557
sampleLengths
0141
1141
225
375
467
541
641
751
855
940
1075
1120
1263
1356
1430
1563
1675
17102
1815
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs130
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences75
ratio0.053
matches
0"Dust motes danced in the weak shaft of afternoon light slicing through the gap in the drawn curtains, illuminating the chaotic beauty of Eva’s place – a controlled mess of arcane texts, half-finished sketches, and the lingering scent of Earl Grey and something indefinably metallic."
1"Even after all this time, after the carefully constructed distance she’d maintained, he was an impossible thing to look at – all sharp angles and polished obsidian, the heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, seeming to absorb the light rather than reflect it."
2"It was a familiar tactic, one she’d learned to anticipate during their brief, volatile affair – an affair that had ended with shattered trust and a carefully crafted distance."
3"She looked at him – at the unsettlingly perfect symmetry of his features, the conflicting colours in his eyes, the deliberate calculation in his expression – and realized, with a chilling certainty, that she hadn’t escaped him after all."
71.35% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount855
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"single ivory-handled cane,"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.05263157894736842
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.03391812865497076
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean15.68
std11.74
cv0.749
sampleLengths
032
145
29
32
43
532
618
723
82
943
1015
1124
127
1327
1418
157
1611
1725
1811
1919
209
214
2224
2333
246
2513
266
2717
281
294
3030
3111
329
3315
3410
3517
3613
3733
389
392
4015
4116
422
435
4465
4510
4610
4710
4812
4921
66.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4533333333333333
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners34
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Instead, he took a slow,"
ratio0.017
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences59
matches
0"She hadn’t expected a visitor,"
1"Her fingers tightened around the"
2"He stood there, a sculpted"
3"His platinum blond hair, slicked"
4"He carried a single ivory-handled"
5"His smile wasn’t a smile,"
6"It was a subtle curve"
7"he stated, his voice a"
8"She lowered the Baudelaire, placing"
9"He seemed far more perceptive"
10"He didn’t answer directly."
11"He surveyed the room with"
12"she retorted, a defensive edge"
13"It wasn’t truly organized, of"
14"It was a carefully curated"
15"He moved closer, stopping just"
16"She resisted the urge to"
17"Her voice was sharper now,"
18"he said, a ghost of"
19"He gestured vaguely around the"
ratio0.678
27.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences59
matches
0"The brass knob protested with"
1"Dust motes danced in the"
2"She hadn’t expected a visitor,"
3"Her fingers tightened around the"
4"The scent of sandalwood and"
5"He stood there, a sculpted"
6"His platinum blond hair, slicked"
7"He carried a single ivory-handled"
8"His smile wasn’t a smile,"
9"It was a subtle curve"
10"he stated, his voice a"
11"She lowered the Baudelaire, placing"
12"The words felt thin, inadequate,"
13"The flat suddenly felt smaller,"
14"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, materialized from"
15"He seemed far more perceptive"
16"He didn’t answer directly."
17"He surveyed the room with"
18"she retorted, a defensive edge"
19"It wasn’t truly organized, of"
ratio0.864
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Even after all this time,"
1"Now she could smell the"
ratio0.034
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The brass knob protested with a rusty groan, a sound that seemed to vibrate through Aurora’s entire flat, rattling the precariously stacked piles of research pa…"
1"His platinum blond hair, slicked back with a meticulousness that bordered on obsessive, shimmered faintly."
2"It was a subtle curve of the lips, a flicker of amusement that didn’t quite reach his eyes, and it felt, instantly and disconcertingly, like a judgment."
3"It was a familiar tactic, one she’d learned to anticipate during their brief, volatile affair – an affair that had ended with shattered trust and a carefully cr…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"He surveyed, his amber eye lingering on the overflowing bookshelves"
1"she retorted, a defensive edge creeping into her voice"
2"he said, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips"
3"He tilted, his eyes, both amber and black, dark pools of observation"
4"she said, the accusation dripping with irony"
5"he corrected, his voice smooth and deliberate"
6"she said, her voice strained"
7"she demanded, the question laced with a brittle edge of fury"
8"he replied, his voice low and measured"
9"He picked up, the ivory handle gleaming in the afternoon light"
20.97% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he stated (state)"
1"she retorted (retort)"
2"he corrected (correct)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.258
69.5645%