Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8CNZB9C9H8M41FFFE1T27

Run Details

Duration:
3m 1s
Cost:
$0.015069
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory slipped through the gap between two gnarled oak standing stones, her scuffed delivery boots crunching over a carpet of clover and poppies that shouldn’t bloom in London’s mid-January frost. She’d fled her flat above Silas’ bar an hour prior, the Heartstone Pendant’s faint crimson glow burning through the thin cotton of her Golden Empress delivery uniform shirt, its silver chain digging into her collarbone with every hurried step. The note tucked in her jacket pocket—scrawled in ink that shifted from black to green when she blinked—had led her here: Richmond Park’s hidden Fae Grove, the only place her unknown benefactor had named as a reference for the pendant’s erratic pulses. She’d grabbed the note after her last delivery, when an old woman in a frayed wool shawl had stared at the pendant peeking out of her shirt and mumbled, “The Grove calls for the stone-bearer,” before slamming her door without taking her order of sweet and sour pork. She’d wiped the oozing sauce from the doorstep with a napkin, her face burning with the same embarrassment she’d felt when Evan had yelled at her for misplacing his keys, and driven off, the note crinkling in her pocket. She fidgeted with the small crescent scar on her left wrist, the old childhood accident’s memento catching the faint moonlight that filtered through the Grove’s canopy, and scanned the clearing. No distant wail of police sirens. No hoot of an owl. No faint rumble of traffic from the park’s perimeter. The Grove swallowed sound whole. She pressed a hand to the pendant under her shirt, its warmth flaring until she flinched. "Whoever left the note—show yourself." Her gaze darted to the nearest standing stone, its bark grooved with faint, unrecognizable runes she hadn’t spotted on her first glance. She’d studied the Grove’s lore during her Pre-Law lulls in Cardiff, had laughed off Eva’s warnings about Fae-touched pockets of Earth as childhood fantasy—until the pendant had started pulsing so fiercely during that last delivery that she’d dropped the styrofoam container. She’d read that an hour inside the Grove could stretch to a day outside; she’d already missed her next shift, Yu-Fei would be furious, but that was the least of her worries. A wet rustle snaked through the wildflower beds to her left. She spun, her jacket flapping around her hips, but saw only a cluster of daisies bending as if pushed by a wind that didn’t stir her hair. "The pendant’s been screaming since dawn. I didn’t come here to play games with Fae tricks." She unzipped her jacket, yanking the pendant from under her shirt. Its crimson gem—roughly the size of her thumbnail—glowed brighter now, its pulse matching the thud of her heart, and the warmth seeped into her palm until she had to curl her fingers to keep from dropping it. The scar on her wrist tingled again, and she brushed her thumb over it, the rough skin a reminder of the day she’d fallen from her father’s bicycle in Cardiff’s city center, of her mother’s frantic shouts as she’d wrapped the wound in a linen handkerchief stained with her father’s barrister ink. Another sound cut through the silence: a high, thin whine, like a child’s wind-up toy stretched too tight. It wove through the Grove’s canopy, fading before she could pinpoint its source. She stepped toward the daisy cluster, her boots sinking into the soft earth more than they should have, and knelt. The daisies’ petals were sticky, coated in a clear substance that glistened like sap but smelled of iron—same as the blood she’d spilled when Evan had grabbed her wrist too hard during a fight. She pulled her hand back, her stomach twisting. "I don’t have time for this. Silas will notice I’m gone soon—he’s got a habit of checking the flat’s fire escape when I’m out late, muttering about how I’ll get mugged by park vagrants." A flash of movement caught her peripheral vision: a shadow stretching from the farthest standing stone, its length doubling in a heartbeat before vanishing. She stood, her knees cracking, and scanned the clearing again, the pendant’s glow illuminating more wildflowers—tulips, sunflowers, lilacs—all blooming in chaotic profusion, their scents mixing into a cloying cloud that made her throat tight. She’d never been prone to panic, had stared down Evan’s raised fist without flinching, but now a cold thread of unease coiled in her stomach, tight enough to make her breath catch. She pulled out her phone, its screen flickering before dying completely. She’d charged it fully before leaving the flat; the Grove’s time distortion must have stripped its battery in seconds. "Time’s not just different here—it’s hungry." She turned back to the standing stones, her hand hovering over the runes on the nearest one. The bark was warm, almost hot, and the runes shifted again, this time forming a single word: Hel. She’d read about Hel portals in the benefactor’s scattered notes, knew the pendant’s pulses signaled their proximity, but she’d never expected to find one hidden in a London park, tucked between oak stones and winter-blooming wildflowers. The wet rustle returned, closer this time, and she spun, her jacket catching on a wildflower stem that snapped with a sharp crack. Nothing stood behind her, but the earth at her feet was dotted with small, circular indentations—like the prints of a bare foot with too many toes, each pad coated in that same iron-scented sap. "I can see your tracks. You’re not Fae—Fae leave no marks in their own groves. They’re too busy preening over their tricks to care about leaving evidence." She stepped over the indentations, her boots crunching on a patch of sunflower heads that had wilted and turned to dust in the time it took her to blink. The pendant’s warmth flared again, and she pressed it to her scar, the heat seeping into the old wound until she gasped. The high whine returned, louder now, and it was joined by a rhythmic tapping—soft, wet, like a finger drumming on a waterlogged log. She realized the tapping matched the thud of her heart, speeding up when she breathed faster, slowing when she forced her breaths to even out. She’d learned that trick with Evan—controlling her breathing to keep him from seeing her fear. "You’re feeding off my pulse. That’s why the pendant’s glowing—you’re drawing energy from the same source, leeching off whatever’s making it pulse." She clutched the pendant tighter, her knuckles white, and stepped toward the center of the clearing. A cluster of poppies bent without wind, their petals opening to reveal tiny, black eyes that blinked once before closing. She flinched, her left wrist slamming into a standing stone, the scar splitting open a tiny crack, a drop of blood falling to the earth. The tapping stopped. The rustle stopped. The whine stopped. She stared at the drop of blood, which soaked into the earth and vanished, leaving a small, glowing crimson patch that matched the pendant’s color. The patch pulsed once, in time with the pendant’s now-faint thud. "My scar’s blood—you wanted that. You’ve been baiting me to break the old wound open, to feed whatever’s hiding under this earth." She knelt again, her fingers brushing the glowing patch. The earth beneath her fingers shifted, and a faint, guttural murmur rose from the ground—too low to make out words, but thick with malice, like the sound Evan had made when he’d realized she was leaving him. She pulled her hand back, her skin crawling, and stood, the pendant’s glow dimming for the first time since she’d entered the Grove. Another flash of movement caught her peripheral vision: a figure with too-long limbs, its body covered in wildflower petals, stepping behind a standing stone. She didn’t see its face, but she saw the glint of a silver chain around its neck—identical to the pendant’s chain, the same thin links that had dug into her collarbone during her hurried drive to the park. "You have one too. You’re the benefactor—you sent the note to draw me here, to feed off my scar’s blood and my pulse, to wake whatever’s in that Hel portal." She stepped toward the standing stone, her boots crunching over the dusted sunflower heads. The Grove’s silence returned, heavy and oppressive, and she realized she couldn’t hear her own heartbeat anymore. The pendant’s warmth was gone, its crimson glow fading to a faint spark. She’d relied on that glow to guide her, to warn her—now she was blind to whatever was hiding in the Grove’s shadows. She reached the standing stone, her hand hovering over its bark. The runes shifted again, this time forming a question: Stay? She hesitated, her gaze darting to the spot where the figure had vanished. The wildflowers around her began to wilt, one by one, their scents fading until the Grove smelled of nothing but damp earth and iron. She thought of Silas’ bar, of Yu-Fei’s sweet and sour pork, of Eva’s late-night calls checking in on her—all the small, safe things she’d built for herself after fleeing Evan. She thought of the scar on her wrist, of the pendant’s faint spark, of the figure with the matching chain. "Answer my questions first. Why did you send the note? What is the pendant for? What do you want with a Hel portal in a London park?" Her voice echoed through the clearing, bouncing off the standing stones until it faded into the silence. She waited, her hand still hovering over the runes, the scar on her wrist throbbing with a cold pain that had nothing to do with the old wound. The wildflowers at her feet turned to dust, their stems crumbling into the earth, and the glowing crimson patch vanished, leaving no trace of its existence. A faint, wet rustle started up again, this time right at her heel.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:28:25.077Z" 2/20/2026, 7:28:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1673
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1673
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"scanned"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"pulse"
count4
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"stomach"
count2
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"oppressive"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"reminder"
4"silence"
5"stomach"
6"chaotic"
7"charged"
8"rhythmic"
9"pulsed"
10"glint"
11"oppressive"
12"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1641
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1352
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
London2
Richmond1
Park1
Fae2
Grove11
Evan4
Pre-Law1
Cardiff2
Eva1
Fae-touched1
Earth1
Yu-Fei1
Hel2
Stay1
persons
0"Evan"
1"Eva"
2"Yu-Fei"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Cardiff"
6"Earth"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1641
matches(empty)
77.78% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"read that an"
1"learned that trick"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean56.59
std44.09
cv0.779
sampleLengths
0228
125
221
395
411
543
6100
731
896
990
1036
1171
1257
1327
1451
1585
1661
173
183
193
2058
2169
2262
2330
2466
2521
2687
2727
2884
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"was dotted"
1"was joined"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was leaving"
1"was hiding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences75
ratio0.16
matches
0"The note tucked in her jacket pocket—scrawled in ink that shifted from black to green when she blinked—had led her here: Richmond Park’s hidden Fae Grove, the only place her unknown benefactor had named as a reference for the pendant’s erratic pulses."
1"She’d studied the Grove’s lore during her Pre-Law lulls in Cardiff, had laughed off Eva’s warnings about Fae-touched pockets of Earth as childhood fantasy—until the pendant had started pulsing so fiercely during that last delivery that she’d dropped the styrofoam container."
2"She’d read that an hour inside the Grove could stretch to a day outside; she’d already missed her next shift, Yu-Fei would be furious, but that was the least of her worries."
3"Its crimson gem—roughly the size of her thumbnail—glowed brighter now, its pulse matching the thud of her heart, and the warmth seeped into her palm until she had to curl her fingers to keep from dropping it."
4"She stood, her knees cracking, and scanned the clearing again, the pendant’s glow illuminating more wildflowers—tulips, sunflowers, lilacs—all blooming in chaotic profusion, their scents mixing into a cloying cloud that made her throat tight."
5"She’d charged it fully before leaving the flat; the Grove’s time distortion must have stripped its battery in seconds."
6"Nothing stood behind her, but the earth at her feet was dotted with small, circular indentations—like the prints of a bare foot with too many toes, each pad coated in that same iron-scented sap."
7"The high whine returned, louder now, and it was joined by a rhythmic tapping—soft, wet, like a finger drumming on a waterlogged log."
8"She’d learned that trick with Evan—controlling her breathing to keep him from seeing her fear."
9"The earth beneath her fingers shifted, and a faint, guttural murmur rose from the ground—too low to make out words, but thick with malice, like the sound Evan had made when he’d realized she was leaving him."
10"She didn’t see its face, but she saw the glint of a silver chain around its neck—identical to the pendant’s chain, the same thin links that had dug into her collarbone during her hurried drive to the park."
11"She’d relied on that glow to guide her, to warn her—now she was blind to whatever was hiding in the Grove’s shadows."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount219
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.0182648401826484
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean21.88
std11.25
cv0.514
sampleLengths
030
139
242
348
439
530
66
75
89
95
1016
115
1222
1341
1432
1511
1627
1716
1811
1937
2052
2118
2213
2320
2434
258
2634
2724
2834
2932
3011
3119
326
3317
3418
3536
3623
3734
3827
3929
4022
4123
4225
4315
4422
4516
4620
4725
483
493
30.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.21333333333333335
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences65
matches
0"She’d fled her flat above"
1"She’d grabbed the note after"
2"She’d wiped the oozing sauce"
3"She fidgeted with the small"
4"She pressed a hand to"
5"Her gaze darted to the"
6"She’d studied the Grove’s lore"
7"She’d read that an hour"
8"She spun, her jacket flapping"
9"She unzipped her jacket, yanking"
10"Its crimson gem—roughly the size"
11"It wove through the Grove’s"
12"She stepped toward the daisy"
13"She pulled her hand back,"
14"She stood, her knees cracking,"
15"She’d never been prone to"
16"She pulled out her phone,"
17"She’d charged it fully before"
18"She turned back to the"
19"She’d read about Hel portals"
ratio0.569
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences65
matches
0"Rory slipped through the gap"
1"She’d fled her flat above"
2"The note tucked in her"
3"She’d grabbed the note after"
4"She’d wiped the oozing sauce"
5"She fidgeted with the small"
6"The Grove swallowed sound whole."
7"She pressed a hand to"
8"Her gaze darted to the"
9"She’d studied the Grove’s lore"
10"She’d read that an hour"
11"A wet rustle snaked through"
12"She spun, her jacket flapping"
13"She unzipped her jacket, yanking"
14"Its crimson gem—roughly the size"
15"The scar on her wrist"
16"Another sound cut through the"
17"It wove through the Grove’s"
18"She stepped toward the daisy"
19"She pulled her hand back,"
ratio0.954
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount15
matches
0"Rory slipped through the gap between two gnarled oak standing stones, her scuffed delivery boots crunching over a carpet of clover and poppies that shouldn’t bl…"
1"The note tucked in her jacket pocket—scrawled in ink that shifted from black to green when she blinked—had led her here: Richmond Park’s hidden Fae Grove, the o…"
2"She’d wiped the oozing sauce from the doorstep with a napkin, her face burning with the same embarrassment she’d felt when Evan had yelled at her for misplacing…"
3"She fidgeted with the small crescent scar on her left wrist, the old childhood accident’s memento catching the faint moonlight that filtered through the Grove’s…"
4"She spun, her jacket flapping around her hips, but saw only a cluster of daisies bending as if pushed by a wind that didn’t stir her hair."
5"Its crimson gem—roughly the size of her thumbnail—glowed brighter now, its pulse matching the thud of her heart, and the warmth seeped into her palm until she h…"
6"A flash of movement caught her peripheral vision: a shadow stretching from the farthest standing stone, its length doubling in a heartbeat before vanishing."
7"She stood, her knees cracking, and scanned the clearing again, the pendant’s glow illuminating more wildflowers—tulips, sunflowers, lilacs—all blooming in chaot…"
8"She pulled out her phone, its screen flickering before dying completely."
9"The wet rustle returned, closer this time, and she spun, her jacket catching on a wildflower stem that snapped with a sharp crack."
10"She realized the tapping matched the thud of her heart, speeding up when she breathed faster, slowing when she forced her breaths to even out."
11"A cluster of poppies bent without wind, their petals opening to reveal tiny, black eyes that blinked once before closing."
12"She didn’t see its face, but she saw the glint of a silver chain around its neck—identical to the pendant’s chain, the same thin links that had dug into her col…"
13"She waited, her hand still hovering over the runes, the scar on her wrist throbbing with a cold pain that had nothing to do with the old wound."
14"The wildflowers at her feet turned to dust, their stems crumbling into the earth, and the glowing crimson patch vanished, leaving no trace of its existence."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.1788%