| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 768 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 768 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurched" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "sentinels" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 22 | | totalWords | 759 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "Find the grove. Before the veil thins." | | 1 | "You think you can hide? The Fae don’t forget." | | 2 | "inside" | | 3 | "Laila." | | 4 | "rotten" | | 5 | "shift" | | 6 | "slid" | | 7 | "shifted" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.84% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 723 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.38 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 5 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.808 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.25% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.318 | | wordCount | 759 | | matches | | 0 | "not toward the standing stones, but deeper into the Grove" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 28.11 | | std | 22.19 | | cv | 0.789 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 5 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "was hidden" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park stretched beyond the clearing, but here—here, the world had folded in on itself." | | 1 | "She wasn’t here by choice—not really." | | 2 | "Then—a whisper, so faint she almost missed it." | | 3 | "It thickened further, pressing in around her, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something older—something *rotten*." | | 4 | "The standing stones at the boundary loomed like silent sentinels, their carvings worn smooth by time—or by something else." | | 5 | "Its face—if it had one—was hidden beneath a tangle of ivy and thorn, the branches twisting like fingers over its features." | | 6 | "The thing in the clearing tilted its head—or where its head should have been." | | 7 | "The pendant pulsed in her hand, its warmth guiding her—not toward the standing stones, but deeper into the Grove." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 732 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03825136612021858 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001366120218579235 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 8.53 | | std | 5.83 | | cv | 0.684 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 52.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3707865168539326 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Just darkness, thick and watching." | | 1 | "Just the address of a" | | 2 | "Just the oppressive stillness, like" | | 3 | "Then—a whisper, so faint she" | | 4 | "Then it steadied." |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the silver chain" | | 1 | "It lay cool against her" | | 2 | "She wasn’t here by choice—not" | | 3 | "It had come from *inside*" | | 4 | "She turned, scanning the shadows." | | 5 | "Her voice cracked" | | 6 | "She cleared her throat, tried" | | 7 | "Her stomach lurched." | | 8 | "she demanded, her pulse hammering" | | 9 | "It thickened further, pressing in" | | 10 | "She backed up, her heel" | | 11 | "she snapped, her voice steadier" | | 12 | "Its limbs were too long," | | 13 | "Its face—if it had one—was" | | 14 | "It didn’t walk." | | 15 | "It *slid*, its movements fluid" | | 16 | "She fumbled for it, yanking" | | 17 | "They fixed on her, unblinking." | | 18 | "Its voice wasn’t a voice." | | 19 | "It was the sound of" |
| | ratio | 0.288 | |
| 69.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove smelled wrong." | | 1 | "Rory stepped through the oak" | | 2 | "The air thickened around her," | | 3 | "Richmond Park stretched beyond the" | | 4 | "The trees loomed taller, their" | | 5 | "She adjusted the silver chain" | | 6 | "It lay cool against her" | | 7 | "The pendant had brought her" | | 8 | "A message scrawled in ink" | | 9 | "Rory exhaled, slow and steady." | | 10 | "She wasn’t here by choice—not" | | 11 | "Evan’s threats still clung to" | | 12 | "The Fae don’t forget.* She’d" | | 13 | "A twig snapped." | | 14 | "The sound hadn’t come from" | | 15 | "It had come from *inside*" | | 16 | "She turned, scanning the shadows." | | 17 | "Her voice cracked" | | 18 | "She cleared her throat, tried" | | 19 | "A syllable, dragged out like" |
| | ratio | 0.781 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Before the veil thins.* No" | | 1 | "Now, standing in the Grove," |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the oak standing stones, her boots sinking into damp earth that gave off the faint metallic tang of old blood." | | 1 | "The wildflowers that should have been in bloom here withered at her feet, their petals blackening like scorched paper." | | 2 | "Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made Rory’s eyes ache." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her pulse hammering in her throat" | | 1 | "she snapped, her voice steadier now" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "she snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |