Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8D6VXZWNFZDMKDFYFKH5W

Run Details

Duration:
7.5s
Cost:
$0.000397
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Grove smelled wrong. Rory stepped through the oak standing stones, her boots sinking into damp earth that gave off the faint metallic tang of old blood. The air thickened around her, pressing against her skin like a held breath. Richmond Park stretched beyond the clearing, but here—here, the world had folded in on itself. The trees loomed taller, their branches knitting together overhead into a canopy so dense it blotted out the moon. No stars pierced through. Just darkness, thick and watching. She adjusted the silver chain beneath her jacket, fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant. It lay cool against her palm, its crimson glow muted in the gloom. The pendant had brought her here, or so she’d been told. A message scrawled in ink that smudged like tears: *Find the grove. Before the veil thins.* No signature. No explanation. Just the address of a place that didn’t exist on any map. Rory exhaled, slow and steady. She wasn’t here by choice—not really. But the alternative had been worse. Evan’s threats still clung to her like a second skin, his voice a rasp in her ear: *You think you can hide? The Fae don’t forget.* She’d laughed then, but the laugh had died in her throat when she’d found the pendant waiting on her pillow, warm as a living thing. Now, standing in the Grove, she wondered if she’d traded one nightmare for another. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound hadn’t come from the direction of the path she’d taken. It had come from *inside* the trees. From the space between the trunks, where no human should fit. She turned, scanning the shadows. Nothing moved. No rustle of leaves, no shift in the undergrowth. Just the oppressive stillness, like the world was holding its breath. “Hello?” Her voice cracked. She cleared her throat, tried again. “Is someone there?” Silence. Then—a whisper, so faint she almost missed it. A syllable, dragged out like a dying breath: *Laila.* Her stomach lurched. No one called her that. Not anymore. Rory’s fingers tightened around the pendant. The crimson glow flickered, just for a second, like a heartbeat. Then it steadied. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her pulse hammering in her throat. The trees didn’t answer. But the air did. It thickened further, pressing in around her, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something older—something *rotten*. The wildflowers that should have been in bloom here withered at her feet, their petals blackening like scorched paper. A sound then. Not a snap this time. A *shift*. Something large moving through the undergrowth, just beyond the edge of her vision. Rory spun, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The Grove stretched out around her, endless and wrong. The standing stones at the boundary loomed like silent sentinels, their carvings worn smooth by time—or by something else. She backed up, her heel catching on a root. The pendant grew warmer against her skin, its glow intensifying. A warning? A promise? “Show yourself,” she snapped, her voice steadier now. “If you want something, just say it.” The trees exhaled. A figure stepped into the clearing. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made Rory’s eyes ache. Its face—if it had one—was hidden beneath a tangle of ivy and thorn, the branches twisting like fingers over its features. It didn’t walk. It *slid*, its movements fluid and unnatural, like liquid poured into human shape. Rory’s breath hitched. The pendant burned against her skin now, its glow searing through the silver chain. She fumbled for it, yanking it free. The moment it left her neck, the air around her *shifted*. The Grove seemed to recoil, the trees groaning as if in pain. The thing in the clearing tilted its head—or where its head should have been. The ivy parted just enough for Rory to see two slits of darkness where eyes should have been. They fixed on her, unblinking. “You’re not supposed to be here,” it said. Its voice wasn’t a voice. It was the sound of leaves scraping against stone, of roots twisting through soil. “The grove doesn’t like visitors.” Rory swallowed hard. “I didn’t come here by choice.” The thing took a step forward. The ground trembled beneath its weight. “Everything has a choice.” She didn’t wait to hear more. Rory turned and ran, her boots pounding against the earth. The pendant pulsed in her hand, its warmth guiding her—not toward the standing stones, but deeper into the Grove. Deeper into the dark. Behind her, the trees whispered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount768
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount768
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"lurched"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"sentinels"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"gloom"
2"scanning"
3"oppressive"
4"silence"
5"whisper"
6"stomach"
7"lurched"
8"flickered"
9"pulse"
10"sentinels"
11"searing"
12"trembled"
13"weight"
14"pounding"
15"pulsed"
16"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords22
totalWords759
ratio0.029
matches
0"Find the grove. Before the veil thins."
1"You think you can hide? The Fae don’t forget."
2"inside"
3"Laila."
4"rotten"
5"shift"
6"slid"
7"shifted"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount723
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove5
Park1
Heartstone1
Fae1
Rory10
persons
0"Grove"
1"Fae"
2"Rory"
places
0"Park"
globalScore0.808
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
68.25% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.318
wordCount759
matches
0"not toward the standing stones, but deeper into the Grove"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean28.11
std22.19
cv0.789
sampleLengths
04
179
269
368
414
53
632
727
813
918
1010
1120
1210
1345
1460
1523
1615
173
186
1955
2047
2137
2232
239
2416
2539
265
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"been told"
1"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs125
matches
0"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences89
ratio0.09
matches
0"Richmond Park stretched beyond the clearing, but here—here, the world had folded in on itself."
1"She wasn’t here by choice—not really."
2"Then—a whisper, so faint she almost missed it."
3"It thickened further, pressing in around her, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something older—something *rotten*."
4"The standing stones at the boundary loomed like silent sentinels, their carvings worn smooth by time—or by something else."
5"Its face—if it had one—was hidden beneath a tangle of ivy and thorn, the branches twisting like fingers over its features."
6"The thing in the clearing tilted its head—or where its head should have been."
7"The pendant pulsed in her hand, its warmth guiding her—not toward the standing stones, but deeper into the Grove."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount732
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03825136612021858
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001366120218579235
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean8.53
std5.83
cv0.684
sampleLengths
04
123
213
315
419
54
65
713
813
911
1012
116
122
1312
145
156
166
1722
1829
1914
203
212
2212
237
2411
255
262
279
2811
294
306
313
321
338
349
353
365
372
386
3911
403
4110
424
434
4418
4519
463
475
482
4913
52.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3707865168539326
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences73
matches
0"Just darkness, thick and watching."
1"Just the address of a"
2"Just the oppressive stillness, like"
3"Then—a whisper, so faint she"
4"Then it steadied."
ratio0.068
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences73
matches
0"She adjusted the silver chain"
1"It lay cool against her"
2"She wasn’t here by choice—not"
3"It had come from *inside*"
4"She turned, scanning the shadows."
5"Her voice cracked"
6"She cleared her throat, tried"
7"Her stomach lurched."
8"she demanded, her pulse hammering"
9"It thickened further, pressing in"
10"She backed up, her heel"
11"she snapped, her voice steadier"
12"Its limbs were too long,"
13"Its face—if it had one—was"
14"It didn’t walk."
15"It *slid*, its movements fluid"
16"She fumbled for it, yanking"
17"They fixed on her, unblinking."
18"Its voice wasn’t a voice."
19"It was the sound of"
ratio0.288
69.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences73
matches
0"The Grove smelled wrong."
1"Rory stepped through the oak"
2"The air thickened around her,"
3"Richmond Park stretched beyond the"
4"The trees loomed taller, their"
5"She adjusted the silver chain"
6"It lay cool against her"
7"The pendant had brought her"
8"A message scrawled in ink"
9"Rory exhaled, slow and steady."
10"She wasn’t here by choice—not"
11"Evan’s threats still clung to"
12"The Fae don’t forget.* She’d"
13"A twig snapped."
14"The sound hadn’t come from"
15"It had come from *inside*"
16"She turned, scanning the shadows."
17"Her voice cracked"
18"She cleared her throat, tried"
19"A syllable, dragged out like"
ratio0.781
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Before the veil thins.* No"
1"Now, standing in the Grove,"
ratio0.027
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory stepped through the oak standing stones, her boots sinking into damp earth that gave off the faint metallic tang of old blood."
1"The wildflowers that should have been in bloom here withered at her feet, their petals blackening like scorched paper."
2"Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made Rory’s eyes ache."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she demanded, her pulse hammering in her throat"
1"she snapped, her voice steadier now"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.444
81.2594%