Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8D8A0ANSJ02BA4NF9MN6W

Run Details

Duration:
17.6s
Cost:
$0.000639
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, turning the neon glow of Soho’s streets into a smeared, watercolor blur. Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that reflected the sickly green of *The Raven’s Nest* sign above her, its light flickering like a dying pulse. She kept her head down, collar pulled tight against the downpour, but the wind still whipped at her salt-and-pepper hair, plastering it to her sharp jawline. Eighteen years on the force, and she’d never hated the city’s damp more than she did now. The suspect—a wiry man in a long coat, his face half-hidden beneath the brim of a hat—ducked into an alley between two brick buildings. Harlow didn’t hesitate. She pushed off the wall, her leather watch glinting dully under the streetlight as she sprinted after him. The alley reeked of damp concrete and something older, something metallic. Her pulse thrummed in her throat. *Too easy.* He wasn’t running. Not really. Just a leisurely stroll, like he knew exactly where he was going. Like he’d planned this. The alley opened into a narrow passage, the walls slick with moisture. Harlow’s breath fogged in front of her. She slowed, pressing her back against the cold stone. The suspect paused at the end of the passage, turning slightly as if he could sense her presence. Then, with a flick of his wrist, he pressed his palm against the wall. A bookshelf groaned, swinging inward on silent hinges. Harlow’s fingers twitched toward her sidearm. She didn’t draw it. Not yet. The suspect vanished into the darkness beyond, and the bookshelf sealed shut behind him. She exhaled through her nose. *The Raven’s Nest.* Silas’ place. She’d been here before—officially, unofficially, in between. The bar was a front, a smokescreen for something uglier. But this? This was different. This was an invitation. Harlow stepped forward, her boots silent on the wet stone. She reached out, fingers brushing the spines of the books—*The Complete Works of Shakespeare, A History of Alchemy, a dog-eared copy of *Dracula***. She pressed her palm to the wall where the suspect had touched it. Nothing. No mechanism, no hidden latch. Just smooth brick. Then she saw it. A faint line of dust, almost invisible in the dim light, running along the bottom of the shelf. She crouched, tracing it with her fingertip. The books shifted slightly when she pressed the right one—*The Occult in Everyday Life*—and the shelf swung open with a whisper. Beyond it, a narrow staircase descended into blackness. Harlow’s stomach tightened. She didn’t like stairs. Not when she couldn’t see the bottom. Not when the air smelled like ozone and something sweet, like rotting fruit. She took a deep breath, then stepped into the dark. The stairs twisted downward, the walls closing in around her. Her free hand found the cold metal of the railing, her knuckles white. The air grew thicker, heavier, like the city’s breath had followed her underground. At the bottom, a single flickering bulb cast long shadows over a corridor lined with doors—each one marked with a symbol she didn’t recognize. A crescent moon. A coiled serpent. A hand with too many fingers. She moved forward, her steps echoing. The suspect was ahead of her, she could feel it. But the deeper she went, the more the corridor seemed to shift, the doors rearranging themselves like a living thing. Her instincts screamed at her to turn back. This wasn’t police business. This was a rabbit hole, and she was the one chasing the carrot. Then she heard it. A voice. Not the suspect’s. Deeper. Rougher. A man’s voice, speaking in a language she didn’t know, but the tone was unmistakable—commanding. Harlow pressed herself against the wall, her pulse hammering in her ears. She reached for her radio, then remembered. No signal down here. Never had been. A door creaked open ahead of her. She ducked back into the shadows just as a figure emerged—a man in a long coat, his face obscured by a hood. He moved with purpose, his steps sure, like he owned this place. Harlow’s breath hitched. *The Veil Market.* She’d heard the rumors. A black market for things that weren’t supposed to exist. And now she was standing in the middle of it. The man paused, tilting his head as if he could smell her fear. Harlow’s fingers tightened around her baton. She didn’t have time to think. Didn’t have time to second-guess. She lunged. Her baton cracked against his wrist, sending whatever he was holding clattering to the ground. He grunted, stumbling back, and Harlow drove her knee into his gut. He doubled over, but before she could press the advantage, he twisted, grabbing her arm and yanking her off balance. She hit the ground hard, the wind knocked out of her. The man loomed over her, his hood falling back to reveal a face that was all sharp angles and cold eyes. “You’re not supposed to be here, Detective,” he said, his voice smooth, almost amused. Harlow rolled onto her side, her hand going for her cuffs. “Then you shouldn’t have led me down here.” He chuckled, low and dark. “Fair point.” He reached down, grabbing her wrist and hauling her to her feet. “But you’re not leaving. Not yet.” She twisted, driving her elbow into his ribs. He hissed but didn’t let go. Instead, he spun her around, pressing her against the wall. His breath was hot against her ear. “You want to know what’s really going on here? Fine. But you’re going to have to earn it.” Harlow’s mind raced. She could fight. She could run. But something in his tone—something almost *hungry*—made her hesitate. This wasn’t just a suspect. This was a player. And she was way out of her depth. Then she heard footsteps. Not the suspect’s. Not the man’s. Someone else. Someone lighter. Harlow’s eyes flicked to the end of the corridor just as a figure stepped into view—a man in a white coat, a saint’s medallion glinting around his neck. His dark eyes locked onto hers, and for a second, she saw something in them that made her blood run cold. Recognition. “Tomás,” the man holding her growled. “You’re early.” Tomás didn’t take his eyes off Harlow. “She’s not supposed to be here.” “No,” the man said. “But she is.” Harlow’s mind reeled. *Tomás Herrera.* The ex-paramedic. The one who’d been treating the clique’s “special” patients. The one who’d lost his license for it. Tomás stepped forward, his voice low. “Detective Quinn. You need to leave. Now.” She shook her head, trying to dislodge the fog of confusion. “I’m not leaving until I know what’s going on.” The man holding her tightened his grip. “That’s the problem, Detective. You don’t get to know.” Tomás’s jaw clenched. “Let her go.” “Or what?” the man sneered. “You’ll stitch me up? You’re not even licensed anymore, *doctor*.” Tomás’s hand twitched toward the medallion at his throat. “I don’t need a license to know when someone’s in over their head.” Harlow’s pulse pounded in her ears. She could see it now—the way the air seemed to hum, the way the shadows moved like living things. This wasn’t just a case. This was something else. Something *older.* And she was standing in the middle of it. The man holding her smirked. “You’re welcome to try.” Tomás didn’t flinch. “Let. Her. Go.” For a long moment, the only sound was the distant drip of water. Then, with a sharp exhale, the man released Harlow. She stumbled back, rubbing her wrist where his fingers had dug in. Tomás grabbed her arm, pulling her toward the stairs. “We’re getting out of here.” Harlow hesitated, glancing back at the man. He was already turning away, his voice lost in the dark. But not before she saw it—the way his shadow stretched unnaturally long, like it wasn’t his at all. Tomás’s grip tightened. “Now, Detective.” She let him lead her up the stairs, her mind racing. She should’ve turned back at the bookshelf. She should’ve called for backup. But she hadn’t. And now she was here. At the top of the stairs, Tomás paused, pressing his ear against the door. “Coast is clear,” he muttered. He pushed it open just enough for them to slip through, then sealed it shut behind them. Harlow exhaled, her breath ragged. The alley was empty, the rain still falling. But the air smelled different now. Thicker. Like the city itself had been holding its breath. Tomás turned to her, his dark eyes serious. “You need to forget about this.” Harlow’s jaw set. “I don’t forget.” He studied her for a long moment, then nodded. “Then you’re going to need more than just your badge down here.” She looked down at her hands, still trembling. “What is this place?” Tomás’s voice was barely a whisper. “The Veil Market. And you just walked into the lion’s den.” Harlow swallowed hard. She could walk away. She could pretend she’d never seen any of this. But the memory of that shadow—the way it had moved—burned in her mind. She wasn’t walking away. Not this time. Tomás must’ve seen the determination in her eyes because he sighed, running a hand through his dark curls. “Fine. But you listen to me, *Detective*. You don’t go charging in blind. You don’t trust anyone. And you *certainly* don’t go looking for answers on your own.” Harlow met his gaze. “I don’t take orders.” “No,” he said. “But you’re going to need help if you’re going to survive this.” She thought of Morris. Of the case that had taken him from her. Of the things she’d seen in the last few minutes that she couldn’t unsee. She nodded. “Then I guess we’re partners.” Tomás’s expression darkened. “I’m not a cop.” “Good,” she said. “Because I’m not asking you to be.” The rain fell harder, washing the neon signs into streaks of color. Harlow Quinn adjusted her collar, her sharp jawline set in resolve. She was done playing by the rules. And the game had just gotten a lot more interesting.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:28:43.852Z" 2/20/2026, 7:28:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1695
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1695
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pulse"
count4
1
word"glinting"
count2
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"loomed"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"jaw clenched"
count1
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"glinting"
2"tracing"
3"whisper"
4"stomach"
5"echoing"
6"could feel"
7"loomed"
8"raced"
9"footsteps"
10"flicked"
11"jaw clenched"
12"racing"
13"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences176
matches
0"t in resolve"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences176
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences203
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans12
markdownWords37
totalWords1678
ratio0.022
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"Too easy."
2"The Raven’s Nest."
3"The Complete Works of Shakespeare, A History of Alchemy, a dog-eared copy of *Dracula"
4"The Occult in Everyday Life"
5"The Veil Market."
6"hungry"
7"Tomás Herrera."
8"doctor"
9"older."
10"Detective"
11"certainly"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1453
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn2
Raven2
Complete1
Works1
Shakespeare1
History1
Alchemy1
Occult1
Everyday1
Veil1
Harlow23
Tomás13
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Shakespeare"
3"Veil"
4"Harlow"
5"Tomás"
6"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Everyday"
globalScore0.709
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like ozone and something sweet, li"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1678
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences203
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean23.97
std19.99
cv0.834
sampleLengths
085
164
221
360
48
526
636
755
84
946
108
1137
1272
1361
144
152
1646
177
1864
1930
202
2158
2235
2319
2425
2549
2635
274
2859
291
308
3113
327
3324
3413
3520
3616
376
3815
3922
4036
419
429
436
4434
4514
4636
475
4826
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences176
matches(empty)
47.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs262
matches
0"wasn’t running"
1"was going"
2"was standing"
3"was holding"
4"was standing"
5"wasn’t walking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences203
ratio0.059
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry man in a long coat, his face half-hidden beneath the brim of a hat—ducked into an alley between two brick buildings."
1"She’d been here before—officially, unofficially, in between."
2"She reached out, fingers brushing the spines of the books—*The Complete Works of Shakespeare, A History of Alchemy, a dog-eared copy of *Dracula***."
3"The books shifted slightly when she pressed the right one—*The Occult in Everyday Life*—and the shelf swung open with a whisper."
4"At the bottom, a single flickering bulb cast long shadows over a corridor lined with doors—each one marked with a symbol she didn’t recognize."
5"A man’s voice, speaking in a language she didn’t know, but the tone was unmistakable—commanding."
6"She ducked back into the shadows just as a figure emerged—a man in a long coat, his face obscured by a hood."
7"But something in his tone—something almost *hungry*—made her hesitate."
8"Harlow’s eyes flicked to the end of the corridor just as a figure stepped into view—a man in a white coat, a saint’s medallion glinting around his neck."
9"She could see it now—the way the air seemed to hum, the way the shadows moved like living things."
10"But not before she saw it—the way his shadow stretched unnaturally long, like it wasn’t his at all."
11"But the memory of that shadow—the way it had moved—burned in her mind."
96.61% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount433
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.04387990762124711
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.018475750577367205
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences203
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences203
mean8.27
std5.82
cv0.704
sampleLengths
017
125
226
317
424
53
618
711
86
92
103
112
1212
134
1412
157
169
1718
1814
198
206
214
222
2314
245
255
267
2710
282
293
304
3110
3223
3313
341
355
363
374
3818
397
4021
418
423
434
447
4513
4610
4710
4813
4913
41.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.22660098522167488
totalSentences203
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences158
matches
0"Just a leisurely stroll, like"
1"Then, with a flick of"
2"Just smooth brick."
3"Then she saw it."
4"Then she heard it."
5"Instead, he spun her around,"
6"Then she heard footsteps."
7"Then, with a sharp exhale,"
ratio0.051
98.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences158
matches
0"She kept her head down,"
1"She pushed off the wall,"
2"Her pulse thrummed in her"
3"He wasn’t running."
4"She slowed, pressing her back"
5"She didn’t draw it."
6"She exhaled through her nose."
7"She’d been here before—officially, unofficially,"
8"She reached out, fingers brushing"
9"She pressed her palm to"
10"She crouched, tracing it with"
11"She didn’t like stairs."
12"She took a deep breath,"
13"Her free hand found the"
14"She moved forward, her steps"
15"Her instincts screamed at her"
16"She reached for her radio,"
17"She ducked back into the"
18"He moved with purpose, his"
19"She didn’t have time to"
ratio0.304
80.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount120
totalSentences158
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through"
2"She kept her head down,"
3"The suspect—a wiry man in"
4"Harlow didn’t hesitate."
5"She pushed off the wall,"
6"The alley reeked of damp"
7"Her pulse thrummed in her"
8"He wasn’t running."
9"The alley opened into a"
10"Harlow’s breath fogged in front"
11"She slowed, pressing her back"
12"The suspect paused at the"
13"A bookshelf groaned, swinging inward"
14"Harlow’s fingers twitched toward her"
15"She didn’t draw it."
16"The suspect vanished into the"
17"She exhaled through her nose."
18"*The Raven’s Nest.*"
19"She’d been here before—officially, unofficially,"
ratio0.759
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.32% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that reflected the sickly green of *The Raven’s Nest* sign above her, its light flickering like a dying pulse."
1"The man paused, tilting his head as if he could smell her fear."
2"Her baton cracked against his wrist, sending whatever he was holding clattering to the ground."
3"The man loomed over her, his hood falling back to reveal a face that was all sharp angles and cold eyes."
4"His dark eyes locked onto hers, and for a second, she saw something in them that made her blood run cold."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the man sneered (sneer)"
1"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.111
84.1072%