Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8DR62QX13BF3M8TM0KEDF

Run Details

Duration:
20.4s
Cost:
$0.000180
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the windows of The Raven’s Nest, a steady, insistent drumming that seemed to mirror the unease in my chest. The air hung thick with the scent of stale beer, wood polish, and something vaguely medicinal – Silas’s signature blend, I suspected. He stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a slow, deliberate motion, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the dim light. He didn't look up. Then he did. His hazel eyes, the same shade as fallen leaves, flickered over me, lingering a moment too long. Recognition, sharp and sudden, etched itself onto his face. “Rory?” The sound of my name ripped through the low murmur of the bar. I straightened, pulling my worn leather jacket tighter around me. "Silas." He pushed himself away from the bar, the limp in his left leg evident as he moved, a slight hitch in his stride. He crossed the small space between us, the wood floor slick under his shoes. He didn’t smile. “It’s… been a while.” “Twelve years,” I replied, the words flat. Twelve years since I’d bolted from London, twelve years since I’d last seen him. Twelve years of building a carefully constructed wall around the wreckage of my past. He stopped a few feet away, his gaze assessing. "You look… different.” Not in a bad way, exactly. More like water smoothed by a long current - the sharp edges had softened, the surface calmer. “Life does that to you,” I said, gesturing vaguely at the rain. “Adds layers.” “More layers than I anticipated,” he murmured, turning to examine the intricate patterns of a map adorning one of the walls. “You’re delivering tonight, aren’t you?” “Yu-Fei needs a hand. Golden Empress demanded double the usual rush.” The work was honest, if grueling, and it kept me moving. It kept me away from…everything. He finally looked at me directly, his eyes holding a depth that felt both familiar and unsettling. “Evan.” The name hung in the air, a low, poisonous note. I swallowed, the lump in my throat doing familiar work. “Don’t.” “Don’t what?” He tilted his head, the grey streaks in his auburn hair catching the light. “Don’t mention his name? Don’t acknowledge the shadow that clings to you still?” His tone wasn't accusatory, just…observant. Like he’d seen straight through the carefully constructed defenses I’d erected. “It was a long time ago.” “Twelve years isn’t long when you’re building a fortress of silence,” he said quietly. “I saw you, Rory. Before you left. The way you flinched when he raised his voice. The way you avoided his gaze.” I didn’t respond. The rain intensified, drumming a frantic rhythm against the windows. “He wasn’t always like that,” Silas continued, his voice low, almost hesitant. “There were good days. Moments of… tenderness. Before the drinking, before the rage.” “Tenderness doesn’t excuse abuse,” I said, the words sharp, brittle. “No,” he conceded. “It doesn't. But it reminds you that sometimes, things aren't as simple as they appear.” He paused, picking at a loose thread on his worn tweed jacket. “I should have done more. I told myself it wasn’t my place. That I was just an agent, there to gather intelligence, not to intervene in people’s lives. A coward’s justification.” He took a slow sip of whiskey from a glass on the bar. The amber liquid caught the light, reflecting in his eyes. “I see now it was both.” I turned away, focusing on the swirling patterns of condensation on the windowpane. "You were in Prague. That's why you retired.” “Prague was…complicated,” he said, his voice grim. “A mission gone wrong. A betrayal. Let’s just say I learned a harsh lesson about the cost of loyalty.” “And you built a bar,” I observed, the dryness in my voice a shield. “A repository,” he corrected. “A place where people can find a moment’s respite, a quiet corner to think. And a place where…connections can be made. Discreet ones.” He glanced around the dimly lit bar, his gaze lingering on the faces of the regulars – older men in well-worn suits, a couple huddled in a booth whispering into their phones, a solitary figure nursing a pint in the corner. “I collect information, Rory. Not through espionage anymore, but through observation. Listening to the rhythm of a room. Figuring out what people are hiding.” There was a brief silence, broken only by the persistent rain. “Why are you asking about this?” I asked, the question tentative. "After all this time." He placed his glass down with a quiet thud. "Because I’ve been watching you, Rory. For a while now. You've built a decent life, I see. A respectable one. But I also see the ghost of that girl you used to be. The one who didn’t tolerate shadows.” “That girl is gone,” I said, the statement a defensive rattle. “Not entirely,” he countered, his gaze unwavering. “She’s buried beneath layers of practicality, of self-preservation. But she’s still there. I can see it in the way you hold yourself, in the way you meet a challenge. Don't mistake resilience for contentment.” He pushed himself up and walked over to a bookshelf, running his hand along the spines of the old maps. “I’ve been…assembling a puzzle. A small one. Involving a name I know you’d rather forget.” “Don’t,” I repeated, the urgency in my voice sharper this time. He pulled a small, worn photograph from behind the books. It was a picture of me, younger, perhaps twenty, laughing with Evan. The sunlight seemed to illuminate a brief, vanished moment of genuine joy. He held it out to me. “Recognize the look on your face?” he asked, his voice soft. “That flicker of hope. Before it was extinguished.” I didn't take the photograph. I stared at it, a wave of nausea washing over me. The memory of that day – the false promises, the suffocating control – flooded back, sharp and visceral. “He’s gone,” I said, the words a desperate plea. “He’s dead.” Silas nodded slowly. “Officially. According to the records. But there are always records that aren’t entirely…accurate.” He paused, his eyes narrowing. “I’ve found evidence suggesting he wasn’t alone in his…activities. That he was involved in something far more dangerous than you ever imagined.” I felt a cold dread settle in my stomach. “What are you saying?” “I’m saying you might be carrying a piece of that puzzle, Rory. And what you’re running from might be closer than you think.” He turned back to me, his expression serious. “I need your help. Not as a friend, not as a former operative. As someone who might hold the key to unlocking a very dangerous secret.” The rain seemed to press closer, a tangible weight against the windows. The flickering gaslights cast long, distorted shadows across the bar, turning the familiar space into something unsettling. “Why me?” I asked, the question a haunted whisper. Silas placed a hand on my arm, a brief, unexpected touch. "Because you never learned to let go, Rory. And some shadows...they have a way of clinging to those who carry them longest.” He released my arm, turning back to the bar. “I’ll need you to come down to the back room. Tonight."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"He glanced around [around]"
2"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.118
83.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"constructed"
count2
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count3
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"tenderness"
count2
7
word"repository"
count1
8
word"solitary"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"tangible"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"etched"
2"constructed"
3"intricate"
4"familiar"
5"silence"
6"tenderness"
7"repository"
8"solitary"
9"unwavering"
10"flicker"
11"stomach"
12"tangible"
13"weight"
14"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"wave of emotion"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"a wave of nausea"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
78.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1206
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount707
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.57
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas4
Twelve2
London1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"drumming that seemed to mirror the unease in my chest"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.829
wordCount1206
matches
0"Not through espionage anymore, but through observation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean28.71
std18.01
cv0.627
sampleLengths
074
13
227
324
444
535
635
714
826
927
1028
1111
1229
1322
1436
1513
1625
1710
1861
1929
2021
2126
2214
2392
2411
2515
2648
2711
2841
2935
3011
3140
3219
3334
3411
3543
3613
3757
3829
399
4033
4120
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
19.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences93
ratio0.043
matches
0"The air hung thick with the scent of stale beer, wood polish, and something vaguely medicinal – Silas’s signature blend, I suspected."
1"More like water smoothed by a long current - the sharp edges had softened, the surface calmer."
2"“A place where people can find a moment’s respite, a quiet corner to think. And a place where…connections can be made. Discreet ones.” He glanced around the dimly lit bar, his gaze lingering on the faces of the regulars – older men in well-worn suits, a couple huddled in a booth whispering into their phones, a solitary figure nursing a pint in the corner."
3"The memory of that day – the false promises, the suffocating control – flooded back, sharp and visceral."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount703
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03698435277382646
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.015647226173541962
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean12.97
std9.42
cv0.726
sampleLengths
023
122
225
34
43
517
69
71
813
910
101
1123
1214
133
144
157
1614
1714
189
199
2017
2112
222
2321
245
2522
265
2717
2811
2910
301
3116
3213
335
3411
356
3614
3722
383
3910
4012
4113
4210
433
4427
4531
4613
4710
486
4913
41.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3548387096774194
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then he did."
1"More like water smoothed by"
ratio0.031
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences65
matches
0"He stood behind the bar,"
1"He didn't look up."
2"His hazel eyes, the same"
3"I straightened, pulling my worn"
4"He pushed himself away from"
5"He crossed the small space"
6"He didn’t smile."
7"I replied, the words flat"
8"He stopped a few feet"
9"I said, gesturing vaguely at"
10"he murmured, turning to examine"
11"It kept me away from…everything."
12"He finally looked at me"
13"I swallowed, the lump in"
14"He tilted his head, the"
15"His tone wasn't accusatory, just…observant."
16"he said quietly"
17"I didn’t respond."
18"I said, the words sharp,"
19"He paused, picking at a"
ratio0.662
13.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences65
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"He stood behind the bar,"
3"He didn't look up."
4"His hazel eyes, the same"
5"Recognition, sharp and sudden, etched"
6"The sound of my name"
7"I straightened, pulling my worn"
8"He pushed himself away from"
9"He crossed the small space"
10"He didn’t smile."
11"I replied, the words flat"
12"He stopped a few feet"
13"I said, gesturing vaguely at"
14"he murmured, turning to examine"
15"The work was honest, if"
16"It kept me away from…everything."
17"He finally looked at me"
18"The name hung in the"
19"I swallowed, the lump in"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The rain hammered against the windows of The Raven’s Nest, a steady, insistent drumming that seemed to mirror the unease in my chest."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Silas continued, his voice low, almost hesitant"
1"he said, his voice grim"
2"he countered, his gaze unwavering"
3"he asked, his voice soft"
4"He paused, his eyes narrowing"
5"He turned back, his expression serious"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Silas continued (continue)"
2"he conceded (concede)"
3"I observed (observe)"
4"he corrected (correct)"
5"I repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.627
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.235
74.5421%