| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "grave" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "pristine" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "silk" | | 15 | "scanning" | | 16 | "gloom" | | 17 | "throbbed" | | 18 | "lilt" | | 19 | "footsteps" | | 20 | "echoed" | | 21 | "silence" | | 22 | "racing" | | 23 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1173 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Wind through leaves, she told herself, but the air hung still, heavy with the scent of damp soil and something sweeter, …" |
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| 89.13% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1150 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 14 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Welsh | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Thames" |
| | globalScore | 0.891 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 81.51% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed closer now, their trunks warped, branches reaching inward as if the grove breathed" | | 1 | "as if tasting the air" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1173 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 65.17 | | std | 24.14 | | cv | 0.37 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 82 | | 2 | 87 | | 3 | 107 | | 4 | 82 | | 5 | 84 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 67 | | 10 | 80 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.163 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the Fae Grove on a tip from Silas, whispered over a pint the night before—something about a shimmer in Richmond Park that matched the pendant's strange warmth." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiant bursts—crimson poppies nodding beside snow-white lilies, blooms that had no business thriving in the dead of night." | | 2 | "Aurora stepped deeper into the clearing, her delivery bag slung over one shoulder—habit from the restaurant shift, though she'd ditched the uniform for jeans and boots tonight." | | 3 | "Aurora rose slowly, her small crescent scar on her wrist itching under the sleeve—a ghost from a childhood tumble off her father's garden wall." | | 4 | "No echo, no birdsong—just that persistent hum, growing in her ears." | | 5 | "She spun, eyes locking on a shape darting between two oaks—too quick for a fox, too deliberate for wind." | | 6 | "Richmond Park teemed with deer at night; could be one of them, startled." | | 7 | "Not water—thicker, stickier, carrying that fermented sweetness on the breeze." | | 8 | "Silas had mentioned time bending here—an hour inside could stretch or snap outside." | | 9 | "The whispers multiplied, overlapping in nonsense syllables—Welsh lilt twisted wrong, like her mother's old lullabies sung by something with too many mouths." | | 10 | "Not human—too light, too many." | | 11 | "\"Who's there?\" Her voice cracked the silence, but no answer came—only the whispers intensifying, weaving closer." | | 12 | "The stones—they marked the boundary." | | 13 | "The shadows coalesced at the altar, forming a silhouette—tall, elongated, with limbs that bent wrong." | | 14 | "The silhouette detached from the altar, gliding after her—smooth, relentless." | | 15 | "But as she scrambled up, panting, a hand—cold, elongated—brushed her shoulder from the shadows behind." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1169 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.02737382378100941 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005988023952095809 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 11.97 | | std | 6.95 | | cv | 0.581 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 63.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3877551020408163 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Just shadows pooling where moonlight" | | 1 | "Too warm for dead wood." | | 2 | "Just the moon shifting, she" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the" | | 1 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 2 | "She straightened, heart steady despite" | | 3 | "She froze, ears straining." | | 4 | "She circled the centre of" | | 5 | "She whipped around, breath catching." | | 6 | "She shook it off, attributing" | | 7 | "She moved toward the boundary," | | 8 | "she murmured, voice swallowed by" | | 9 | "She spun, eyes locking on" | | 10 | "Her pulse quickened, but she" | | 11 | "Her boot print filled instantly" | | 12 | "She wiped her sole on" | | 13 | "It slithered from the right," | | 14 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 15 | "She'd left the flat above" | | 16 | "She edged toward the boundary" | | 17 | "She jumped back, breath sharp." | | 18 | "She bolted forward, aiming for" | | 19 | "Her voice cracked the silence," |
| | ratio | 0.267 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora ducked beneath the gnarled" | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 2 | "She had come to the" | | 3 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 4 | "She straightened, heart steady despite" | | 5 | "The grove unfolded before her," | | 6 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 7 | "Aurora scanned the clearing, her" | | 8 | "A faint rustle stirred from" | | 9 | "She froze, ears straining." | | 10 | "Aurora stepped deeper into the" | | 11 | "The pendant warmed further, a" | | 12 | "She circled the centre of" | | 13 | "Moss clung to its surface" | | 14 | "Silas had called this place" | | 15 | "Aurora hadn't argued" | | 16 | "The rustle returned, sharper this" | | 17 | "She whipped around, breath catching." | | 18 | "Aurora rose slowly, her small" | | 19 | "She shook it off, attributing" |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.31% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their bark-twisted forms etched with faint, swirling patterns that caught the moonlight in unnatural glints." | | 1 | "She had come to the Fae Grove on a tip from Silas, whispered over a pint the night before—something about a shimmer in Richmond Park that matched the pendant's …" | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiant bursts—crimson poppies nodding beside snow-white lilies, blooms that had no business thriving in the dead of night." | | 3 | "No sign of the shimmer Silas described, just the dense ring of oaks encircling the space, their branches interlocking overhead like skeletal fingers." | | 4 | "The pendant warmed further, a insistent throb that made her pause and tug at the collar of her shirt." | | 5 | "contained, as if the standing stones funneled all sound inward, amplifying the quiet drip of dew from leaves." | | 6 | "Aurora yanked it free from her shirt, watching the crimson gem flicker with an inner glow, faint veins of light spidering across its surface." | | 7 | "Yet the flowers beneath her feet remained untouched, petals pristine as if no creature had brushed past." | | 8 | "Not water—thicker, stickier, carrying that fermented sweetness on the breeze." | | 9 | "Just the moon shifting, she reasoned, but her eyes caught it: the shadow lingered, quivering, as if tasting the air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, voice swallowed by the stillness" | | 1 | "It tilted, and the whispers resolved into words:" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Silas had (have)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |