Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8DSQQJFS9P50SQG9YXX84

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Duration:
17.1s
Cost:
$0.001770
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora ducked beneath the gnarled branch of an ancient oak, her boots sinking into the soft earth as she pushed forward. The standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their bark-twisted forms etched with faint, swirling patterns that caught the moonlight in unnatural glints. She had come to the Fae Grove on a tip from Silas, whispered over a pint the night before—something about a shimmer in Richmond Park that matched the pendant's strange warmth. Her fingers brushed the silver chain at her throat, the deep crimson gem pulsing against her skin like a second heartbeat. She straightened, heart steady despite the chill that seeped through her jacket. The grove unfolded before her, a pocket of wild defiance amid the park's orderly sprawl. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiant bursts—crimson poppies nodding beside snow-white lilies, blooms that had no business thriving in the dead of night. Aurora scanned the clearing, her bright blue eyes narrowing. No sign of the shimmer Silas described, just the dense ring of oaks encircling the space, their branches interlocking overhead like skeletal fingers. A faint rustle stirred from the underbrush to her left. She froze, ears straining. Wind through leaves, she told herself, but the air hung still, heavy with the scent of damp soil and something sweeter, like overripe fruit left to ferment. Aurora stepped deeper into the clearing, her delivery bag slung over one shoulder—habit from the restaurant shift, though she'd ditched the uniform for jeans and boots tonight. The pendant warmed further, a insistent throb that made her pause and tug at the collar of her shirt. She circled the centre of the grove, where a low stone altar squatted like a forgotten grave marker. Moss clung to its surface in thick, velvety patches, and she knelt to trace her fingers over it. Cool stone met her touch, but beneath it, a subtle vibration hummed, syncing with the pendant's pulse. Silas had called this place "Isolde's grove" in his gravelly voice, eyes darting as if the walls of his bar might eavesdrop. "Old Fae bollocks," he'd muttered. "But if your trinket's acting up, that's where you'd start." Aurora hadn't argued. After Evan, after fleeing Cardiff, she'd learned to chase leads, no matter how mad. The rustle returned, sharper this time, from the oaks behind the altar. She whipped around, breath catching. Nothing. Just shadows pooling where moonlight failed to pierce the canopy. Aurora rose slowly, her small crescent scar on her wrist itching under the sleeve—a ghost from a childhood tumble off her father's garden wall. She shook it off, attributing the prickle to nerves. The grove felt... contained, as if the standing stones funneled all sound inward, amplifying the quiet drip of dew from leaves. She moved toward the boundary, testing the edge. As her boot crossed an invisible line marked by the nearest stone, the air thickened, pressing against her cheeks like a damp cloth. The pendant burned now, hot enough to sting. Aurora yanked it free from her shirt, watching the crimson gem flicker with an inner glow, faint veins of light spidering across its surface. "What the hell," she murmured, voice swallowed by the stillness. No echo, no birdsong—just that persistent hum, growing in her ears. A flicker at the periphery. She spun, eyes locking on a shape darting between two oaks—too quick for a fox, too deliberate for wind. Her pulse quickened, but she held still, cool-headed as ever. Imagination, playing tricks in the dark. Richmond Park teemed with deer at night; could be one of them, startled. Yet the flowers beneath her feet remained untouched, petals pristine as if no creature had brushed past. Aurora backed away, bag bumping against her hip. The ground felt softer here, yielding like fresh clay, and she glanced down to steady herself. Her boot print filled instantly with a trickle of dark sap, oozing from the earth. Not water—thicker, stickier, carrying that fermented sweetness on the breeze. She wiped her sole on a patch of grass, but the scent clung to her laces. Another sound: a low whisper, like silk tearing far off. It slithered from the right, curling around the standing stones. Aurora turned her head slowly, scanning the gloom. The oaks seemed closer now, their trunks warped, branches reaching inward as if the grove breathed. She pressed a hand to the nearest stone, bark rough and alive under her palm, pulsing faintly. Warm. Too warm for dead wood. The pendant throbbed in rhythm, and she clutched it tight. Silas had mentioned time bending here—an hour inside could stretch or snap outside. Aurora checked her watch: 11:47 PM. She'd left the flat above his bar twenty minutes ago, the cycle ride straightforward despite the fog rolling off the Thames. But doubt gnawed. Had the hands moved? No, steady. Still, the certainty settled: she lingered too long. She edged toward the boundary again, aiming for the gap she'd entered. The whispers multiplied, overlapping in nonsense syllables—Welsh lilt twisted wrong, like her mother's old lullabies sung by something with too many mouths. Aurora's skin crawled, hairs rising on her arms. A shadow elongated across the flowers, stretching from the altar toward her legs. She jumped back, breath sharp. Just the moon shifting, she reasoned, but her eyes caught it: the shadow lingered, quivering, as if tasting the air. Footsteps. Soft, padding ones, circling behind the stones. Not human—too light, too many. Aurora whirled, heart slamming. Empty clearing. The wildflowers swayed without wind, petals brushing her calves like fingers. She bolted forward, aiming for escape, but the ground sucked at her boots, each step a labour. The pendant scalded her palm now, glow bleeding red light onto the blooms. A giggle echoed, childlike and brittle, from the canopy. Aurora halted, breath ragged. "Who's there?" Her voice cracked the silence, but no answer came—only the whispers intensifying, weaving closer. She glimpsed them: eyes, pale and luminous, peering from knotholes in the oaks. Blinking in unison. Watching. Panic clawed up her throat, but she shoved it down, mind racing for an out. The stones—they marked the boundary. Touch one, ground herself. She lunged for the nearest, fingers grazing bark that yielded like flesh. A chorus of sighs rippled through the grove, and the flowers surged, vines twisting up from the soil to snag her ankle. Aurora kicked free, stumbling back. The shadows coalesced at the altar, forming a silhouette—tall, elongated, with limbs that bent wrong. It tilted its head, and the whispers resolved into words: "Stay, Rory. Play." She ran. The standing stones blurred as she darted between them, but the gap she'd entered narrowed, branches knitting shut. The pendant blazed, illuminating thorns that hadn't been there before, scraping her arms. Blood welled, hot and slick, and the giggles multiplied, pursuing. The silhouette detached from the altar, gliding after her—smooth, relentless. Aurora burst through the final barrier, tumbling onto the park grass beyond. The oaks stood ordinary now, silent. But as she scrambled up, panting, a hand—cold, elongated—brushed her shoulder from the shadows behind. She didn't look back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"grave"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count2
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"quickened"
count1
12
word"pristine"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"silk"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
16
word"gloom"
count1
17
word"throbbed"
count1
18
word"lilt"
count1
19
word"footsteps"
count1
20
word"echoed"
count1
21
word"silence"
count1
22
word"racing"
count1
23
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"etched"
3"warmth"
4"chill"
5"scanned"
6"throb"
7"grave"
8"pulse"
9"flicker"
10"echo"
11"quickened"
12"pristine"
13"whisper"
14"silk"
15"scanning"
16"gloom"
17"throbbed"
18"lilt"
19"footsteps"
20"echoed"
21"silence"
22"racing"
23"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1173
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.29% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Wind through leaves, she told herself, but the air hung still, heavy with the scent of damp soil and something sweeter, …"
89.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1150
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Silas4
Richmond2
Park2
Aurora14
Evan1
Cardiff1
Thames1
Welsh1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Aurora"
2"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Cardiff"
5"Thames"
globalScore0.891
windowScore1
81.51% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed closer now, their trunks warped, branches reaching inward as if the grove breathed"
1"as if tasting the air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1173
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
63.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean65.17
std24.14
cv0.37
sampleLengths
095
182
287
3107
482
584
670
765
867
967
1080
1160
1246
1358
1433
1543
1643
174
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs214
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences98
ratio0.163
matches
0"She had come to the Fae Grove on a tip from Silas, whispered over a pint the night before—something about a shimmer in Richmond Park that matched the pendant's strange warmth."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiant bursts—crimson poppies nodding beside snow-white lilies, blooms that had no business thriving in the dead of night."
2"Aurora stepped deeper into the clearing, her delivery bag slung over one shoulder—habit from the restaurant shift, though she'd ditched the uniform for jeans and boots tonight."
3"Aurora rose slowly, her small crescent scar on her wrist itching under the sleeve—a ghost from a childhood tumble off her father's garden wall."
4"No echo, no birdsong—just that persistent hum, growing in her ears."
5"She spun, eyes locking on a shape darting between two oaks—too quick for a fox, too deliberate for wind."
6"Richmond Park teemed with deer at night; could be one of them, startled."
7"Not water—thicker, stickier, carrying that fermented sweetness on the breeze."
8"Silas had mentioned time bending here—an hour inside could stretch or snap outside."
9"The whispers multiplied, overlapping in nonsense syllables—Welsh lilt twisted wrong, like her mother's old lullabies sung by something with too many mouths."
10"Not human—too light, too many."
11"\"Who's there?\" Her voice cracked the silence, but no answer came—only the whispers intensifying, weaving closer."
12"The stones—they marked the boundary."
13"The shadows coalesced at the altar, forming a silhouette—tall, elongated, with limbs that bent wrong."
14"The silhouette detached from the altar, gliding after her—smooth, relentless."
15"But as she scrambled up, panting, a hand—cold, elongated—brushed her shoulder from the shadows behind."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1169
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.02737382378100941
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005988023952095809
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean11.97
std6.95
cv0.581
sampleLengths
021
122
231
321
412
515
623
79
823
910
104
1127
1227
1319
1418
1518
1617
1722
185
1913
2014
2112
225
231
2410
2524
269
273
2818
298
3023
318
3224
3310
3411
355
3619
3710
386
3913
4017
418
4216
4315
4410
4516
4610
4710
488
4916
63.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3877551020408163
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"Just shadows pooling where moonlight"
1"Too warm for dead wood."
2"Just the moon shifting, she"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences90
matches
0"She had come to the"
1"Her fingers brushed the silver"
2"She straightened, heart steady despite"
3"She froze, ears straining."
4"She circled the centre of"
5"She whipped around, breath catching."
6"She shook it off, attributing"
7"She moved toward the boundary,"
8"she murmured, voice swallowed by"
9"She spun, eyes locking on"
10"Her pulse quickened, but she"
11"Her boot print filled instantly"
12"She wiped her sole on"
13"It slithered from the right,"
14"She pressed a hand to"
15"She'd left the flat above"
16"She edged toward the boundary"
17"She jumped back, breath sharp."
18"She bolted forward, aiming for"
19"Her voice cracked the silence,"
ratio0.267
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences90
matches
0"Aurora ducked beneath the gnarled"
1"The standing stones loomed like"
2"She had come to the"
3"Her fingers brushed the silver"
4"She straightened, heart steady despite"
5"The grove unfolded before her,"
6"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
7"Aurora scanned the clearing, her"
8"A faint rustle stirred from"
9"She froze, ears straining."
10"Aurora stepped deeper into the"
11"The pendant warmed further, a"
12"She circled the centre of"
13"Moss clung to its surface"
14"Silas had called this place"
15"Aurora hadn't argued"
16"The rustle returned, sharper this"
17"She whipped around, breath catching."
18"Aurora rose slowly, her small"
19"She shook it off, attributing"
ratio0.778
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their bark-twisted forms etched with faint, swirling patterns that caught the moonlight in unnatural glints."
1"She had come to the Fae Grove on a tip from Silas, whispered over a pint the night before—something about a shimmer in Richmond Park that matched the pendant's …"
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiant bursts—crimson poppies nodding beside snow-white lilies, blooms that had no business thriving in the dead of night."
3"No sign of the shimmer Silas described, just the dense ring of oaks encircling the space, their branches interlocking overhead like skeletal fingers."
4"The pendant warmed further, a insistent throb that made her pause and tug at the collar of her shirt."
5"contained, as if the standing stones funneled all sound inward, amplifying the quiet drip of dew from leaves."
6"Aurora yanked it free from her shirt, watching the crimson gem flicker with an inner glow, faint veins of light spidering across its surface."
7"Yet the flowers beneath her feet remained untouched, petals pristine as if no creature had brushed past."
8"Not water—thicker, stickier, carrying that fermented sweetness on the breeze."
9"Just the moon shifting, she reasoned, but her eyes caught it: the shadow lingered, quivering, as if tasting the air."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she murmured, voice swallowed by the stillness"
1"It tilted, and the whispers resolved into words:"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas had (have)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
75.4851%