Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8DW5Z3BR2V34KYS93N07Q

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Duration:
12.7s
Cost:
$0.000507
Provider:
Mistral

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before the second knock even landed, as if the flat itself had been waiting for this moment. Rory stood there, her fingers still curled around the brass handle, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the dim light from the hallway. For a heartbeat, she just stared—because there, framed in the doorway like some kind of cruel joke, was Lucien Moreau. He leaned against the jamb, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, the other tucked into the pocket of his tailored charcoal suit. The amber eye tracked her, unreadable, while the black one flickered over the threshold, as if assessing whether to step inside or bolt. His platinum hair was slicked back, just slightly rumpled, like he’d run a hand through it more times than he’d admit. The scent of rain and something darker—something like ozone and old leather—drifted toward her. “You,” Rory said, because *hello* wasn’t cutting it. Lucien’s mouth quirked, just barely. “Me.” The silence stretched, thick and charged, like the air before a storm. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, chose that exact moment to weave between Rory’s ankles, his tail puffed up like a dandelion gone to seed. She stepped back instinctively, breaking the eye-lock, and the cat slunk past her, circling Lucien’s polished shoes with the wariness of a man who’d just been served an ultimatum. Lucien followed, gliding inside like he owned the place. Which, Rory reminded herself, he *almost* did. Not anymore. Not since she’d walked away from the last job they’d done together—from *him*. The flat was exactly as she’d left it: books stacked precariously on every surface, scrolls pinned to the walls with bent paper clips, the air thick with the scent of old parchment and Earl Grey gone cold. The only difference was the tension, coiled tight enough to snap. Lucien paused in the middle of the room, turning slowly, as if committing the chaos to memory. “You’ve been busy,” he observed. “Not as busy as you, apparently.” Rory crossed her arms, the movement drawing his gaze to the scar on her wrist. His expression didn’t change, but the way his fingers twitched against his cane told her he remembered. Remembered the night she’d cut herself open trying to bind a demon’s mark, remembered the way he’d held her hand and hissed in French about *imbécile* women who thought they could outrun their own blood. “Busy enough,” he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. “Though I didn’t expect to find you holed up in *this* particular den of madness.” Rory bristled. “Eva’s flat is *not* a den of madness. It’s a *library*.” “A library with three deadbolts and a cat that looks like it’s plotting your murder.” He tapped his cane against the floorboards. “You always did have a flair for the dramatic.” She wanted to snap back, to throw something—preferably him—out the door. But the words died in her throat because, damn it, he was *right*. She *had* always been dramatic. And he’d always been the one to call her on it. Lucien exhaled, slow and deliberate, like he was counting to ten in his head. “I need your help.” The words hit like a physical force. Rory’s back hit the wall behind her, her pulse jumping. “No.” “Rory—” “No.” She said it again, firmer this time. “You show up here after *months*, after I’ve spent the last six weeks scrubbing your name out of my life, and you think I’m just going to—what? Drop everything and pick up where we left off?” His jaw tightened. “I didn’t come here to pick up anything.” “Then what?” She pushed off the wall, stepping closer, close enough that she could see the faintest darkening of his skin where his demon blood ran near the surface. Close enough to remember the way his hands had felt on her waist, the way his mouth— She cut the thought off before it could take root. Lucien’s gaze dropped to her lips, just for a second, before snapping back up. “There’s a job. A big one. The kind that pays enough to make both our lives a hell of a lot easier.” Rory laughed, sharp and humorless. “You’re offering me money like I’m some kind of mercenary.” “Aren’t you?” She opened her mouth to deny it, but the words faltered. Because yes. Yes, she was. She’d been scraping by on restaurant deliveries and the occasional black-market favor, living in a flat above a bar that smelled perpetually of spilled beer and regret. She was *exactly* the kind of person who’d take a job from a half-demon fixer if it meant she wouldn’t have to watch her savings account dwindle another month. Lucien must have seen the hesitation in her eyes because his voice softened, just a little. “I need you, Rory. And not just for the job.” The words hung between them, heavy and dangerous. She remembered the way he’d looked at her in that safe house in Marseille, the way his hands had trembled when he’d kissed her—like he was afraid she’d disappear if he let go. She remembered the way he’d *left* her, without a word, without an explanation, just a note on the nightstand that read *This isn’t forever. But neither is this.* She swallowed. “You don’t get to walk back in here and act like none of that happened.” “I’m not.” His voice was low, rough. “I’m here because I made a mistake. And I’m asking you to let me fix it.” Rory wanted to believe him. God, she *wanted* to. But trust was a luxury she couldn’t afford, not with him. Not with anyone. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the couch, tail lashing, and Rory used the distraction to step around Lucien, putting the coffee table between them. “You want my help? Fine. But we do this *my* way.” Lucien’s smile was slow, dangerous. “Oh, *chérie*,” he murmured, “you have no idea what you’re offering.” She ignored the way her skin prickled at the nickname. “Tell me about the job.” He did. And by the time he finished, Rory was leaning against the wall again, her fingers digging into the grooves of the plaster. It was exactly the kind of job she’d been waiting for—high stakes, high risk, the kind that could finally get her name off the radar of the people who’d been hunting her since Evan. But it was also the kind of job that required *trust*. And Lucien Moreau was the last person on Earth she trusted. “So?” he prompted, watching her too closely. Rory exhaled, slow and steady. “So what’s in it for *you*?” His smile was all teeth. “Revenge.” She should have known. Lucien had always been a man who collected debts. And she was the one who owed him the biggest one of all. “Fine,” she said, pushing off the wall. “But we do this *together*. No secrets. No disappearing in the middle of the night.” His eyes darkened. “No disappearing.” “And no touching.” The corner of his mouth twitched. “No touching.” She held out her hand. “Deal.” Lucien looked at her hand like it was a live wire. Then, slowly, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a key—old, tarnished, the kind that looked like it had been dug up from a grave. He pressed it into her palm. “Meet me at the docks tomorrow at midnight,” he said. “And Rory?” She looked up. “Don’t be late.” She didn’t answer. She couldn’t, because her throat had gone tight, and the key in her hand was burning like a brand. Lucien turned to leave, but at the door, he paused. “Oh, and *Laila*?” She stiffened. He glanced over his shoulder, his black eye gleaming. “Bring the cat.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.55
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"grave"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"flickered"
2"silence"
3"charged"
4"tension"
5"pulse"
6"trembled"
7"grave"
8"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences85
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans20
markdownWords26
totalWords1291
ratio0.02
matches
0"hello"
1"almost"
2"him"
3"imbécile"
4"this"
5"not"
6"library"
7"right"
8"had"
9"months"
10"exactly"
11"left"
12"This isn’t forever. But neither is this."
13"wanted"
14"my"
15"chérie"
16"trust"
17"you"
18"together"
19"Laila"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.51% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1022
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien14
Moreau2
Eva1
Rory12
Earl1
Grey1
French1
Close1
Marseille1
Evan1
Earth1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Earl"
5"Grey"
6"Evan"
places
0"French"
1"Marseille"
globalScore0.815
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if assessing whether to step inside or bolt"
1"something like ozone and old leather—drifted"
2"as if committing the chaos to memory"
3"looked like it had been dug up from a gra"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1291
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean24.36
std22.04
cv0.905
sampleLengths
065
184
28
36
463
531
665
75
873
924
1013
1131
1240
1318
1418
151
1644
1711
1846
1910
2036
2115
222
2372
2426
2569
2617
2723
2823
2937
3016
3115
3258
3311
3411
357
3611
376
384
3922
4022
415
423
438
446
4543
4612
473
483
4922
92.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been served"
2"been dug"
98.48% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs197
matches
0"wasn’t cutting"
1"was counting"
2"was burning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences113
ratio0.071
matches
0"For a heartbeat, she just stared—because there, framed in the doorway like some kind of cruel joke, was Lucien Moreau."
1"The scent of rain and something darker—something like ozone and old leather—drifted toward her."
2"Not since she’d walked away from the last job they’d done together—from *him*."
3"She wanted to snap back, to throw something—preferably him—out the door."
4"Close enough to remember the way his hands had felt on her waist, the way his mouth—"
5"She remembered the way he’d looked at her in that safe house in Marseille, the way his hands had trembled when he’d kissed her—like he was afraid she’d disappear if he let go."
6"It was exactly the kind of job she’d been waiting for—high stakes, high risk, the kind that could finally get her name off the radar of the people who’d been hunting her since Evan."
7"Then, slowly, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a key—old, tarnished, the kind that looked like it had been dug up from a grave."
94.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1033
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.046466602129719266
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013552758954501452
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean11.42
std9
cv0.788
sampleLengths
021
124
220
326
423
521
614
78
85
91
1012
1122
1229
139
147
152
1613
1737
1811
1917
205
2121
2217
2335
249
2515
262
2711
2822
299
3011
3113
325
3311
3414
354
367
3710
381
391
408
4136
423
438
4429
4517
4610
4714
4822
495
50.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.336283185840708
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners38
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Then, slowly, he reached into"
ratio0.013
56.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences76
matches
0"He leaned against the jamb,"
1"His platinum hair was slicked"
2"She stepped back instinctively, breaking"
3"His expression didn’t change, but"
4"he said, voice smooth as"
5"He tapped his cane against"
6"She wanted to snap back,"
7"She *had* always been dramatic."
8"She said it again, firmer"
9"His jaw tightened."
10"She pushed off the wall,"
11"She cut the thought off"
12"She opened her mouth to"
13"She’d been scraping by on"
14"She was *exactly* the kind"
15"She remembered the way he’d"
16"She remembered the way he’d"
17"His voice was low, rough"
18"She ignored the way her"
19"It was exactly the kind"
ratio0.408
65.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences76
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Rory stood there, her fingers"
2"He leaned against the jamb,"
3"The amber eye tracked her,"
4"His platinum hair was slicked"
5"The scent of rain and"
6"Rory said, because *hello* wasn’t"
7"Lucien’s mouth quirked, just barely."
8"The silence stretched, thick and"
9"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, chose that"
10"She stepped back instinctively, breaking"
11"Lucien followed, gliding inside like"
12"The flat was exactly as"
13"The only difference was the"
14"Lucien paused in the middle"
15"Rory crossed her arms, the"
16"His expression didn’t change, but"
17"he said, voice smooth as"
18"He tapped his cane against"
19"She wanted to snap back,"
ratio0.789
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The amber eye tracked her, unreadable, while the black one flickered over the threshold, as if assessing whether to step inside or bolt."
1"She stepped back instinctively, breaking the eye-lock, and the cat slunk past her, circling Lucien’s polished shoes with the wariness of a man who’d just been s…"
2"Remembered the night she’d cut herself open trying to bind a demon’s mark, remembered the way he’d held her hand and hissed in French about *imbécile* women who…"
3"She’d been scraping by on restaurant deliveries and the occasional black-market favor, living in a flat above a bar that smelled perpetually of spilled beer and…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.35
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.1
79.7412%