| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.632 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1113 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1113 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "tangible" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "fleeting" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "desire" | | 10 | "constructed" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "mechanical" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "scanned" | | 15 | "silk" | | 16 | "stark" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1110 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 963 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 3 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Nyx | 10 | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 3 | | Eva | 1 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Isabella" | | 4 | "Plantation" |
| | globalScore | 0.773 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "golds that seemed to vibrate in her vision" | | 1 | "looked like polished obsidian" | | 2 | "It was as if they were ghosts, trapped in an endless cycle of labor" |
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| 19.82% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.802 | | wordCount | 1110 | | matches | | 0 | "not the fruit itself, but what it represents" | | 1 | "not a gift, but a trap" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 35.81 | | std | 21.94 | | cv | 0.613 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 94 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "weren’t walking" | | 1 | "was cloying" |
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| 9.97% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.047 | | matches | | 0 | "It had led them here, after all, reacting violently—almost painfully—to a location Eva had mentioned during a late-night rant about a strange smell near the Isabella Plantation." | | 1 | "They weren’t delicate blossoms, but defiant explosions of color – electric blues, crimson reds, and golds that seemed to vibrate in her vision." | | 2 | "Beyond the vines, elaborate gardens unfolded, bursting with fruits Rory only knew from historical texts – pomegranates the size of her head, golden peaches radiating heat, and berries that glowed with an internal luminescence." | | 3 | "The scent was overwhelming now – a potent blend of ripe fruit, spices, and something else, something rich and savory that made Rory’s stomach clench." |
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| 98.65% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 185 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.032432432432432434 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021621621621621623 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 12.91 | | std | 6.98 | | cv | 0.541 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 54.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.38372093023255816 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 88.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the unease returned, a" | | 1 | "Then, she saw it." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 81.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "They weren’t walking *through* anything" | | 1 | "It felt disrespectful to call" | | 2 | "It pulsed with a barely" | | 3 | "It had led them here," | | 4 | "They moved between the bone-white" | | 5 | "They weren’t delicate blossoms, but" | | 6 | "It wasn’t a clearing, not" | | 7 | "It was a valley, impossibly" | | 8 | "It was intoxicating, unsettling." | | 9 | "She felt a strange pull," | | 10 | "They descended into the valley," | | 11 | "They weren’t human, not entirely." | | 12 | "Their features were blurred, softened," | | 13 | "They harvested the fruit with" | | 14 | "They didn’t acknowledge Rory and" | | 15 | "It was as if they" | | 16 | "She reached out and touched" | | 17 | "It was warm to the" | | 18 | "She hesitated, then plucked it" | | 19 | "She felt a wave of" |
| | ratio | 0.347 | |
| 33.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of overripe" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted ahead, a shifting" | | 3 | "They weren’t walking *through* anything" | | 4 | "Rory asked, her voice tight" | | 5 | "It felt disrespectful to call" | | 6 | "Nyx’s voice, a whisper on" | | 7 | "Rory glanced at the Heartstone" | | 8 | "It pulsed with a barely" | | 9 | "The closer they got, the" | | 10 | "It had led them here," | | 11 | "They moved between the bone-white" | | 12 | "They weren’t delicate blossoms, but" | | 13 | "The air hummed with the" | | 14 | "Nyx said, their form flickering" | | 15 | "Rory checked her watch." | | 16 | "Isolde had warned them about" | | 17 | "An hour inside could be" | | 18 | "It wasn’t a clearing, not" | | 19 | "It was a valley, impossibly" |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "They weren’t delicate blossoms, but defiant explosions of color – electric blues, crimson reds, and golds that seemed to vibrate in her vision." | | 1 | "The ground sloped downwards into a vista of vineyards that stretched as far as the eye could see, their leaves a deep, almost bruised purple." | | 2 | "Beyond the vines, elaborate gardens unfolded, bursting with fruits Rory only knew from historical texts – pomegranates the size of her head, golden peaches radi…" | | 3 | "The scent was overwhelming now – a potent blend of ripe fruit, spices, and something else, something rich and savory that made Rory’s stomach clench." | | 4 | "The scent was intoxicating, and the first bite exploded on her tongue, a rush of sweetness that bordered on decadent." | | 5 | "They continued towards the obsidian hall, the Heartstone Pendant now thrumming against her chest, radiating a heat that was almost painful." | | 6 | "As she focused on the rift, she saw a shape coalescing within, a darkness that wasn’t simply the absence of light, but an active, predatory entity." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice tight" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their form flickering as if caught in a current" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed, the sound barely audible" | | 3 | "Nyx continued, their voice taking on a cautious tone" | | 4 | "Nyx warned, their voice sharper now" | | 5 | "she mumbled, her voice slurred" | | 6 | "Nyx said, their voice a brittle whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Nyx continued (continue)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 3 | "she mumbled (mumble)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.526 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |