Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8E9TGH2MXC0TY2RW5F6DE

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.000493
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of overripe fruit and something metallic, like warm pennies. Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade a cold comfort against her hip. Around her, the trees of Richmond Park thinned, their familiar bark giving way to something smoother, almost polished, the color of aged bone. Nyx drifted ahead, a shifting silhouette against the deepening amber light. They weren’t walking *through* anything tangible, but rather past a point where the park simply… ceased to be. “Are you sure about this?” Rory asked, her voice tight. It felt disrespectful to call it ‘this’ – a hidden grove in Richmond Park was one thing, but this felt like trespassing on a forgotten god’s estate. Nyx’s voice, a whisper on a non-existent breeze, replied, “Isolde assures me this is the closest point. The Veil thins here, especially now.” Rory glanced at the Heartstone Pendant resting against her sternum beneath her jacket. It pulsed with a barely perceptible warmth, a red heartbeat against her skin. The closer they got, the faster it beat. It had led them here, after all, reacting violently—almost painfully—to a location Eva had mentioned during a late-night rant about a strange smell near the Isabella Plantation. They moved between the bone-white trees, stepping onto a carpet of wildflowers unlike any Rory had ever seen. They weren’t delicate blossoms, but defiant explosions of color – electric blues, crimson reds, and golds that seemed to vibrate in her vision. The air hummed with the drone of unseen insects, and a cloying sweetness coated her tongue. “Time doesn’t… behave itself here,” Nyx said, their form flickering as if caught in a current. “Be mindful.” Rory checked her watch. Pointless, she knew. Isolde had warned them about the Grove’s temporal distortions. An hour inside could be a day outside, or just a fleeting moment. Ahead, the trees opened into a clearing, and Rory stopped, breath hitching in her throat. It wasn’t a clearing, not exactly. It was a valley, impossibly contained within the boundaries of Richmond Park. The ground sloped downwards into a vista of vineyards that stretched as far as the eye could see, their leaves a deep, almost bruised purple. Beyond the vines, elaborate gardens unfolded, bursting with fruits Rory only knew from historical texts – pomegranates the size of her head, golden peaches radiating heat, and berries that glowed with an internal luminescence. The sky wasn’t blue, or grey, but a swirling panorama of warm amber, like looking through honey. “Dymas,” Nyx breathed, the sound barely audible. “A pocket of Gluttony, leached into this side of the Veil.” The scent was overwhelming now – a potent blend of ripe fruit, spices, and something else, something rich and savory that made Rory’s stomach clench. It was intoxicating, unsettling. She felt a strange pull, a desire to simply lie down among the vines and lose herself in the abundance. “Prince Belphegor is… accommodating,” Nyx continued, their voice taking on a cautious tone. “He enjoys visitors. Especially those who appreciate the finer things.” Rory ignored that, focusing on the details. In the distance, perched on a terraced hillside, was a banquet hall, vast and opulent, constructed from what looked like polished obsidian. Figures moved within, shadowy and indistinct, but she caught glimpses of laughter and the clinking of glasses. The entire scene felt… staged, artificial. Too perfect. They descended into the valley, the wildflowers soft beneath their feet. Rory kept a hand on the hilt of the Fae Blade. "What are we looking for?" she asked. "A rift," Nyx replied, gliding forward. “A weakening in the Veil. Isolde sensed a disturbance, a… *taste* of Hel bleeding through. Something is attempting to solidify a connection." As they walked among the vines, Rory noticed the workers. They weren’t human, not entirely. Their features were blurred, softened, and their movements were sluggish, almost dreamlike. They harvested the fruit with a mechanical precision, their baskets overflowing with the glowing bounty. They didn’t acknowledge Rory and Nyx, didn’t even seem to *see* them. It was as if they were ghosts, trapped in an endless cycle of labor. She reached out and touched a pomegranate. It was warm to the touch, almost feverish. She hesitated, then plucked it from the branch. The skin yielded easily beneath her fingertips. “Don’t,” Nyx warned, their voice sharper now. “Everything here has a cost.” Rory ignored them, splitting the pomegranate open. The seeds inside weren’t red, but a deep, shimmering gold. The scent was intoxicating, and the first bite exploded on her tongue, a rush of sweetness that bordered on decadent. She felt a wave of euphoria wash over her, a sense of contentment she hadn’t known she was missing. Then, the unease returned, a cold knot forming in her stomach. The sweetness was cloying, almost suffocating. She felt sluggish, her limbs heavy. “Nyx…” she mumbled, her voice slurred. Nyx was already moving, their shadow-body stretching and distorting as they scanned the vineyards. "It's not the fruit itself, but what it represents. Excess. A surrendering of will." They continued towards the obsidian hall, the Heartstone Pendant now thrumming against her chest, radiating a heat that was almost painful. The closer they got, the more distorted the scene became. The laughter from the hall sounded hollow, the vibrant colors seemed to bleed at the edges, and the workers moved with an increasingly frantic, mechanical rhythm. Then, she saw it. Tucked away behind the hall, concealed by a tangle of flowering vines, was a tear in reality. It wasn’t a grand, dramatic rift, but a subtle shimmering distortion, like heat rising from asphalt. The air around it crackled with energy, and a faint smell of sulfur clung to the breeze. The Heartstone Pendant was practically burning against her skin. “There,” Nyx said, their voice a brittle whisper. “A small tear, but growing. Someone is actively weaving a pathway." As she focused on the rift, she saw a shape coalescing within, a darkness that wasn’t simply the absence of light, but an active, predatory entity. It writhed and pulsed, slowly solidifying into a vaguely humanoid form, draped in shadows. A figure emerged from the hall, a being of impossible elegance, their skin pale as moonlight and their eyes burning with a cold, violet fire. They wore robes of woven shadow and a crown of twisted thorns. "Welcome," the figure purred, their voice like silk over steel. “Prince Belphegor extends his greetings. And offers a taste of paradise.” Rory gripped the Fae Blade, the icy metal a stark contrast to the feverish warmth of the Heartstone. The taste of paradise, she suddenly realized, was not a gift, but a trap.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.632
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1113
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1113
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"tangible"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"fleeting"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count2
9
word"desire"
count1
10
word"constructed"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"mechanical"
count2
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"scanned"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"tangible"
3"whisper"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"electric"
7"fleeting"
8"stomach"
9"desire"
10"constructed"
11"perfect"
12"mechanical"
13"sense of"
14"scanned"
15"silk"
16"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
69.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1110
ratio0.003
matches
0"through"
1"taste"
2"see"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount963
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae-Forged1
Blade3
Richmond2
Park2
Nyx10
Rory14
Heartstone4
Pendant3
Eva1
Isabella1
Plantation1
Grove1
Fae3
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Grove"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
3"Isabella"
4"Plantation"
globalScore0.773
windowScore0.833
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"golds that seemed to vibrate in her vision"
1"looked like polished obsidian"
2"It was as if they were ghosts, trapped in an endless cycle of labor"
19.82% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.802
wordCount1110
matches
0"not the fruit itself, but what it represents"
1"not a gift, but a trap"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean35.81
std21.94
cv0.613
sampleLengths
083
137
223
361
457
518
629
715
894
918
1049
1123
1254
1322
147
1528
1668
1730
1812
1956
2023
216
2228
2357
2454
259
2619
2740
2837
2921
3032
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"were blurred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs158
matches
0"weren’t walking"
1"was cloying"
9.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences86
ratio0.047
matches
0"It had led them here, after all, reacting violently—almost painfully—to a location Eva had mentioned during a late-night rant about a strange smell near the Isabella Plantation."
1"They weren’t delicate blossoms, but defiant explosions of color – electric blues, crimson reds, and golds that seemed to vibrate in her vision."
2"Beyond the vines, elaborate gardens unfolded, bursting with fruits Rory only knew from historical texts – pomegranates the size of her head, golden peaches radiating heat, and berries that glowed with an internal luminescence."
3"The scent was overwhelming now – a potent blend of ripe fruit, spices, and something else, something rich and savory that made Rory’s stomach clench."
98.65% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount185
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.032432432432432434
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.021621621621621623
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.91
std6.98
cv0.541
sampleLengths
012
119
223
311
415
53
610
727
823
913
1013
118
1227
1318
1423
1516
1616
172
184
193
209
2113
2215
236
2412
2525
2634
2717
287
2911
3025
314
3220
3313
3410
357
3622
3717
384
392
402
4111
4211
437
446
4522
4610
475
4812
4915
54.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38372093023255816
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners33
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then, the unease returned, a"
1"Then, she saw it."
ratio0.027
81.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences75
matches
0"They weren’t walking *through* anything"
1"It felt disrespectful to call"
2"It pulsed with a barely"
3"It had led them here,"
4"They moved between the bone-white"
5"They weren’t delicate blossoms, but"
6"It wasn’t a clearing, not"
7"It was a valley, impossibly"
8"It was intoxicating, unsettling."
9"She felt a strange pull,"
10"They descended into the valley,"
11"They weren’t human, not entirely."
12"Their features were blurred, softened,"
13"They harvested the fruit with"
14"They didn’t acknowledge Rory and"
15"It was as if they"
16"She reached out and touched"
17"It was warm to the"
18"She hesitated, then plucked it"
19"She felt a wave of"
ratio0.347
33.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences75
matches
0"The air tasted of overripe"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"Nyx drifted ahead, a shifting"
3"They weren’t walking *through* anything"
4"Rory asked, her voice tight"
5"It felt disrespectful to call"
6"Nyx’s voice, a whisper on"
7"Rory glanced at the Heartstone"
8"It pulsed with a barely"
9"The closer they got, the"
10"It had led them here,"
11"They moved between the bone-white"
12"They weren’t delicate blossoms, but"
13"The air hummed with the"
14"Nyx said, their form flickering"
15"Rory checked her watch."
16"Isolde had warned them about"
17"An hour inside could be"
18"It wasn’t a clearing, not"
19"It was a valley, impossibly"
ratio0.853
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"They weren’t delicate blossoms, but defiant explosions of color – electric blues, crimson reds, and golds that seemed to vibrate in her vision."
1"The ground sloped downwards into a vista of vineyards that stretched as far as the eye could see, their leaves a deep, almost bruised purple."
2"Beyond the vines, elaborate gardens unfolded, bursting with fruits Rory only knew from historical texts – pomegranates the size of her head, golden peaches radi…"
3"The scent was overwhelming now – a potent blend of ripe fruit, spices, and something else, something rich and savory that made Rory’s stomach clench."
4"The scent was intoxicating, and the first bite exploded on her tongue, a rush of sweetness that bordered on decadent."
5"They continued towards the obsidian hall, the Heartstone Pendant now thrumming against her chest, radiating a heat that was almost painful."
6"As she focused on the rift, she saw a shape coalescing within, a darkness that wasn’t simply the absence of light, but an active, predatory entity."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory asked, her voice tight"
1"Nyx said, their form flickering as if caught in a current"
2"Nyx breathed, the sound barely audible"
3"Nyx continued, their voice taking on a cautious tone"
4"Nyx warned, their voice sharper now"
5"she mumbled, her voice slurred"
6"Nyx said, their voice a brittle whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx continued (continue)"
2"Nyx warned (warn)"
3"she mumbled (mumble)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.526
leniency1
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.4
69.7365%