| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 995 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 995 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "resonated" | | 13 | "oppressive" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "churn" | | 16 | "familiar" | | 17 | "warmth" | | 18 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" | | 3 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 20 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 992 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "something" | | 1 | "Reacted." | | 2 | "heated up" | | 3 | "clean" | | 4 | "from" |
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| 75.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind, I told myself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 949 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.53 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | October | 1 | | Stupid | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Old | 1 | | Man | 1 | | Hemlock | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 14.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like" | | 1 | "ishness I now, apparently, craved" | | 2 | "as if hitting an invisible wall" | | 3 | "symbols that seemed to writhe and shift in my vision" |
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| 99.19% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.008 | | wordCount | 992 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the earthy smell of decaying leaves, but something sickly sweet, like overripe fruit" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Dreams that felt…familiar." |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 27.56 | | std | 19.72 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 10 |
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| 96.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were carved" | | 2 | "was stretched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "was talking" | | 1 | "wasn't walking" |
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| 71.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a sudden chill; more like walking into water, an insidious cold that seeped into your bones." | | 1 | "The Grove itself was unremarkable at first glance - a small clearing choked with wildflowers, even in late October." | | 2 | "It wasn't walking; it was…flowing." |
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| 90.40% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 952 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, moss-covered stone" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.04411764705882353 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018907563025210083 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 8.27 | | std | 5.34 | | cv | 0.646 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 64.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4166666666666667 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the usual rustle of" | | 1 | "Too vibrant, too perfect." | | 2 | "Just relentless, artificial bloom." | | 3 | "Just the wind, I told" | | 4 | "Just beyond the reach of" |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 70.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "I adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "I hadn’t been back in" | | 2 | "It wasn't a sudden chill;" | | 3 | "I called out, the sound" | | 4 | "I pulled out my phone," | | 5 | "I switched on the flashlight," | | 6 | "It stopped a few feet" | | 7 | "I walked deeper into the" | | 8 | "I swung the flashlight, the" | | 9 | "It had to be." | | 10 | "I said, my voice a" | | 11 | "It sounded absurd even to" | | 12 | "I was talking to the" | | 13 | "I froze, my heart hammering" | | 14 | "I held my breath, straining" | | 15 | "It was gone before I" | | 16 | "I forced myself to take" | | 17 | "It only reacted to Hel" | | 18 | "I walked towards the centre" | | 19 | "It was new." |
| | ratio | 0.375 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone warmed against my" | | 1 | "Richmond Park after dark wasn't" | | 2 | "I adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "The oak standing stones loomed" | | 4 | "I hadn’t been back in" | | 5 | "A foolishness I now, apparently," | | 6 | "The air thickened as I" | | 7 | "It wasn't a sudden chill;" | | 8 | "The Grove itself was unremarkable" | | 9 | "I called out, the sound" | | 10 | "I pulled out my phone," | | 11 | "I switched on the flashlight," | | 12 | "The light didn’t seem to…travel." | | 13 | "It stopped a few feet" | | 14 | "An unsettling effect." | | 15 | "I walked deeper into the" | | 16 | "The scent here was…overpowering." | | 17 | "A twig snapped to my" | | 18 | "I swung the flashlight, the" | | 19 | "It had to be." |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "It stopped a few feet in front of me, as if hitting an invisible wall." | | 1 | "It only reacted to Hel portals, Old Man Hemlock had told me, the eccentric antiquarian who’d gifted it to me." | | 2 | "I’d come here looking for answers, for a way to understand the unsettling dreams that had plagued me for weeks." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "I said, my voice a little steadier this time" | | 1 | "the figure said, its voice a silken caress" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I called out (call out)" | | 1 | "the voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |