Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8F8M1BVCZE0P86TY1Q1BC

Run Details

Duration:
46.4s
Cost:
$0.000229
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted like damp concrete and something else—something acrid, faintly metallic, that clung to the back of Harlow Quinn’s throat. She pulled her worn leather watch a little further up her wrist, ignoring the faint ache in her shoulder. Eighteen years on the force hadn't erased the ingrained habit of checking the time, even when the concept of time felt warped in a place like this. The abandoned Tube station was cavernous, the ceiling lost in shadow miles above. Tracks disappeared into inky tunnels in either direction. Fluorescent lights, flickering intermittently, cast a sickly green pallor over the scene. A tableau of unsettling stillness. A man lay sprawled near a disused platform edge. Middle-aged, dressed in a sharp suit—the kind that cost more than Quinn’s yearly salary. No visible wounds. Just… stillness. “Looks like a heart attack,” Sergeant Davies said, his voice echoing slightly. He was young, eager, and visibly unsettled by the location. “Clean. No sign of a struggle.” Quinn crouched beside the body, ignoring Davies’ observation. Clean wasn’t a word she typically associated with death. Not a word that sat right with her instincts. She scanned the area. No forced entry. No footprints besides those of the emergency responders. No scent of other people besides the paramedics. Except… She smelled it again, that acrid tang. Fainter now, but definitely there. Not blood. Something else. Something…old. “What about photography?” she asked, her voice low, deliberately calm. “Already done, Detective,” Davies replied, adjusting his cap. “Forensics are on their way.” She noticed a small, brass object lying near the man’s outstretched hand. Small enough to be overlooked. A compass. Old, tarnished, the brass casing dusted with verdigris. The face was intricately etched with symbols—protective sigils, she recognized vaguely from a briefing she’d skimmed years ago. A Veil Compass. “Where did you find this?” she asked, carefully picking it up with gloved fingers. “Right there, Detective,” Davies said, gesturing towards the ground. “Alongside the deceased.” The compass needle spun erratically, then settled, pointing directly into one of the dark tunnels. Not north. Not south. Toward something else entirely. “Doesn’t feel quite right,” Quinn murmured, more to herself than to Davies. “No signs of a struggle, but the compass… this isn’t a standard heart attack.” Davies shifted uncomfortably. “Detective, with all due respect, it’s an abandoned Tube station. Could have collapsed on him. One of these old tunnels…” Quinn silenced him with a raised hand. “The air quality’s fine, Davies. Systems check came back clear. And look at his shoes.” She pointed to the man’s highly polished leather shoes. Impeccable. Untouched by dust. No grit, no grime. An unremarkable detail, perhaps, except for one thing. “He didn’t walk here,” she stated. “He was *placed* here.” Davies frowned. “Detective, are you suggesting—?” “I’m suggesting we look beneath the surface, Sergeant. Always look beneath the surface.” She pocketed the compass. It felt strangely cold against her palm. “I want a full sweep of the tunnels,” she instructed. “Every inch. Focus on any anomalies – unusually clean patches, differences in the air current, anything that feels out of place.” “Right away, Detective,” Davies said, his voice a touch less enthusiastic. The sirens wailed in the distance, growing louder. Forensics would be here soon, eager to label this a closed case. A tragic, if unusual, death. Quinn pulled out her phone, scrolling through her contacts. She needed someone who understood this kind of…unusual. Someone who understood things that ordinary police officers didn't. Eva Kowalski. It took a few rings before Eva answered. “Harlow? Everything alright?” Her voice was instantly alert. “I need you down at an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The Veil Market used to operate out of here, years back. There’s been…a death.” “The Veil Market?” Eva’s voice tightened slightly. “Are you sure?” “Positive. Found a Veil Compass at the scene. The deceased had one. And the feeling... it's wrong, Evie. This isn't natural.” “I’ll be there as soon as I can,” Eva said. “Tell forensics to be careful. And don’t touch anything.” “Always the wise advice,” Quinn said, a ghost of a smile playing on her lips. “I’ll see you soon.” She hung up, watching as the first of the forensic vans pulled up outside. Bright lights flooded the station, momentarily piercing the oppressive gloom. She returned to the body, studying it again. Still no obvious cause of death. His face was frozen in an expression of surprise, almost… terror. Her gaze drifted toward the tunnel the compass needle had indicated. A faint shimmer seemed to distort the air within, a subtle ripple in the darkness. Perhaps her eyes were playing tricks on her. Or perhaps, something was indeed lurking just beyond the veil. A glint of something caught her eye on the platform edge, just beyond where the man had fallen. Small, almost imperceptible. She knelt down, squinting in the dim light. A single, iridescent scale. Not fish. Not reptile. Something… else. She carefully plucked it up with tweezers, placing it in a sterile bag. A subtle detail, easily missed. But it was enough. Enough to confirm her suspicions. Davies was watching her, his expression a mixture of apprehension and frustration. “Detective? They’re asking for a preliminary assessment.” Quinn stood up, her sharp jawline set. “Tell them it’s a suspicious death, Sergeant. Pending further investigation.” She didn't elaborate. She didn’t need to. Davies, despite his eagerness, wasn't stupid. He understood that something was profoundly out of place here. She looked back at the tunnel, at the shimmering distortion. The acrid smell was stronger now, mixing with the metallic tang. It was the scent of a place between worlds, of shadows and secrets. A place she knew all too well. A place that reminded her, with a jolt of icy dread, of the circumstances surrounding her partner, DS Morris’s, death three years ago. The case she couldn't shake, the one that still haunted her dreams. The similarities were unsettling. This wasn’t just a heart attack. This wasn’t just a random death in an abandoned Tube station. This was a message. A warning. And she had a feeling it was just the beginning. The Veil Market might be dormant, but something else was stirring in the shadows beneath London. And it was reaching out.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva’s voice tightened slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.067
76.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1044
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"deliberately"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1044
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"unsettled"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"standard"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"apprehension"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"unsettled"
2"scanned"
3"etched"
4"standard"
5"oppressive"
6"gloom"
7"glint"
8"apprehension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1041
ratio0.001
matches
0"placed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount799
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Davies"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Davies"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn8
Tube2
Davies9
Clean1
Veil2
Compass1
Kowalski1
Eva4
Morris1
Market1
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
6"Market"
places
0"Veil"
1"London"
globalScore0.937
windowScore0.667
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like damp concrete and something e"
1"ng, eager, and visibly unsettled by the lo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1041
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"understood that something"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean22.15
std13.1
cv0.591
sampleLengths
067
138
228
328
449
51
617
710
813
948
1014
1112
1223
1326
1423
1522
1625
1710
186
1924
2031
2111
2225
2326
242
2516
2625
2710
2821
2919
3019
3124
3225
3344
3429
354
366
3727
3819
3917
4023
4141
4235
434
4423
4510
4621
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"was frozen"
46.15% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs130
matches
0"were playing"
1"was watching"
2"was reaching"
74.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences125
ratio0.024
matches
0"The air tasted like damp concrete and something else—something acrid, faintly metallic, that clung to the back of Harlow Quinn’s throat."
1"Middle-aged, dressed in a sharp suit—the kind that cost more than Quinn’s yearly salary."
2"The face was intricately etched with symbols—protective sigils, she recognized vaguely from a briefing she’d skimmed years ago."
97.03% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount331
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.04229607250755287
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.021148036253776436
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean8.33
std5.55
cv0.666
sampleLengths
021
119
227
313
48
512
65
79
814
93
101
111
1212
1310
146
158
169
179
184
193
208
218
221
237
245
252
262
271
2810
298
305
3112
325
332
348
3518
363
3714
389
393
4015
412
422
434
4412
4514
463
4720
487
4915
63.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners55
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Perhaps her eyes were playing"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences88
matches
0"She pulled her worn leather"
1"He was young, eager, and"
2"She scanned the area."
3"She smelled it again, that"
4"she asked, her voice low,"
5"She noticed a small, brass"
6"she asked, carefully picking it"
7"She pointed to the man’s"
8"She pocketed the compass"
9"It felt strangely cold against"
10"She needed someone who understood"
11"It took a few rings"
12"Her voice was instantly alert"
13"She hung up, watching as"
14"She returned to the body,"
15"His face was frozen in"
16"Her gaze drifted toward the"
17"She knelt down, squinting in"
18"She carefully plucked it up"
19"She didn't elaborate."
ratio0.273
96.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences88
matches
0"The air tasted like damp"
1"She pulled her worn leather"
2"The abandoned Tube station was"
3"Tracks disappeared into inky tunnels"
4"A tableau of unsettling stillness."
5"A man lay sprawled near"
6"Sergeant Davies said, his voice"
7"He was young, eager, and"
8"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
9"She scanned the area."
10"She smelled it again, that"
11"she asked, her voice low,"
12"Davies replied, adjusting his cap"
13"She noticed a small, brass"
14"The face was intricately etched"
15"A Veil Compass."
16"she asked, carefully picking it"
17"Davies said, gesturing towards the"
18"The compass needle spun erratically,"
19"Quinn murmured, more to herself"
ratio0.727
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Middle-aged, dressed in a sharp suit—the kind that cost more than Quinn’s yearly salary."
1"A place that reminded her, with a jolt of icy dread, of the circumstances surrounding her partner, DS Morris’s, death three years ago."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Sergeant Davies said, his voice echoing slightly"
1"she asked, her voice low, deliberately calm"
2"Quinn murmured, more to herself than to Davies"
3"Davies said, his voice a touch less enthusiastic"
4"Quinn said, a ghost of a smile playing on her lips"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
1"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.133
82.0998%