Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
148
gibberishSentences
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adjustedGibberishSentences
1
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runOnParagraphCount
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giantParagraphCount
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wordSaladCount
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0
"It was the winter solstice, and the air hummed with a low, almost physical energy—the Veil thinning, the old tales said, a裂缝 in the world where even the stubbornest secrets slipped…"
"Evan’s handprint, the last thing she remembered before the desert, before the benefactor who’d left the necklace on her doorstep, whispering, *“Find the Grove. Find me.”"
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"Who are you?"
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"“A guardian. A relic. A ghost.”"
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"ripple"
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"age"
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"3:17 PM"
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"exist"
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"hunger"
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"a crack"
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"nothing"
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"went"
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"tingled"
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"Evan’s handprint, her mother’s voice on the phone: *“Run, Rory. Run before he finds you.”"
"It was the winter solstice, and the air hummed with a low, almost physical energy—the Veil thinning, the old tales said, a裂缝 in the world where even the stubbornest secrets slipped through."
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"Aurora had never believed in ghosts or faeries or *realms folding in on themselves*—not before the pendant had arrived, not before Evan had broken her wrist and fled, not before Nyx had materialized in her flat that night, voice like a leaf rustling in a midnight gale, saying, *“He’s not the only one who can’t stay buried.”* Now, she followed Isolde as the other woman paused before a ring of ancient oaks, their trunks gnarled and black, their branches weaving a cage around the sky."
2
"The standing stones were not just wood—Aurora squinted, and saw it: a faint *shimmer* at their bases, like heat rising from asphalt on a summer day, the Veil’s edge made visible by the solstice’s magic."
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"Aurora pressed a hand to her pendant, the crescent scar on her wrist stinging—*Evan’s handprint, the last thing she remembered before the desert, before the benefactor who’d left the necklace on her doorstep, whispering, *“Find the Grove. Find me.”* *Who are you?* she’d asked."
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"The sky above the oaks shifted from smog-gray to amber—warm, golden amber, not the cold white of London’s winter sun."
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"And the trees—their leaves were silver, each vein a thread of liquid starlight, swaying not in the wind, but in some current only they could feel."
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"The screen flickered—*3:17 PM*."
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"Not a pulse—*a crack*."
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"She fumbled for it, pulling it from her coat; the crimson gem was glowing so brightly she had to shield her eyes."
9
"She led them deeper, past a stream that sang—not with water, but with voices, human and otherwise, speaking in languages Aurora didn’t know."
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"Not with light, but with something *else*—a vision, Aurora realized, as the air thickened again."
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"The pool’s Veil rippled again, wider now, and Aurora saw it—Belladonna, a towering figure of shadow and flame, her face a mask of teeth and hunger, stepping through the tear."
12
"Aurora charged, the blade glowing, and Belladonna turned, her eyes—*eyes like the pendant, like embers*—fixing on her."
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"She lunged, the blade slicing through Belladonna’s arm, and she howled, the wound sealing as quickly as it opened—*demon magic*."
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"The scar on her wrist throbbed, and for a moment, she saw the benefactor again—the woman with eyes like the pendant, standing in the dark, saying, *“You’re stronger than you know.”*"
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"They walked back through the standing stones, the Veil sealing behind them, and the world shifted again—from amber to gray, from magic to cold."
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"The scene weaves world-building through sensory detail—Aurora’s practicality clashing with the Grove’s wonder, Nyx’s shadowy observations, and Isolde’s cryptic wisdom—while grounding the story in the codex: Heartstone’s Hel origin, the Fae Grove’s time-bending properties, the Veil’s winter solstice weakening, and the Fae Blade’s demon-slaying power."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
54
technicalSentenceCount
7
matches
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"In her pocket, the Heartstone Pendant pressed warm against her thigh, a faint, insistent pulse that matched the thrum in her own veins."
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"Nyx had wandered ten paces, their shadow stretching across the moonstone grass, rippling as if the ground beneath them weren’t solid."
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"She led them deeper, past a stream that sang—not with water, but with voices, human and otherwise, speaking in languages Aurora didn’t know."
3
"Nyx closed their eyes, their form dissolving into shadow, no doubt scrying the edges of the Grove."
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"She saw a woman, her face hidden, standing in a garden of excess: vineyards heavy with fruit that glowed like embers, a feast laid out that included creatures s…"
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"She was staring at the pendant, which had fallen from Isolde’s pocket, glowing softly in the moonlight."
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"The scene weaves world-building through sensory detail—Aurora’s practicality clashing with the Grove’s wonder, Nyx’s shadowy observations, and Isolde’s cryptic …"