Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8GMF9DBEMHT0WT9DRXN1X

Run Details

Duration:
22.4s
Cost:
$0.000167
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against Detective Harlow Quinn’s trench coat, a relentless, grey curtain blurring the already slick streets of Soho. Each drop felt like a tiny, insistent accusation. She hadn’t slept properly in three days, not since Morris’s file landed on her desk, not since the lingering scent of ozone and something older, something darker, clung to the memories of his last case. She adjusted the worn leather strap of her watch, the rhythmic tick a small, grounding counterpoint to the chaos of the pursuit. Herrera was fast. Unnaturally so, Quinn thought, cataloging the effortless way he slid through the crowded pavements, dodging taxis and weaving past hurried pedestrians. The olive skin of his face was slick with rain, reflecting the neon glow of the passing signs. He’d been meticulous, leaving almost no trace, but Quinn's team had picked up his scent - a faint, almost floral musk overlaid with the sharp tang of iron. “He’s going for the Veil Market,” Sergeant Davies’ voice crackled in her ear, tight with frustration. “Been tracking him for an hour. The entrance shifts with the moon, that’s the problem. And the token requirement…” “Bone token,” Quinn finished, a grim tightening in her jaw. She’d read the reports. A shard of a long-dead animal, a gruesome little passphrase to gain entry. This wasn't a simple robbery; it was something steeped in the unsettling undercurrents of London's hidden world. She cut through a narrow alleyway, the smell of stale beer and overflowing bins clinging to the damp brick walls. The rain seemed to intensify here, a claustrophobic deluge. Herrera was ahead, disappearing around the corner of a dilapidated building. Quinn followed, her boots splashing in puddles that mirrored the distorted streetlights. The buildings grew taller, the architecture less refined, the air noticeably colder. She passed a street musician playing a mournful tune on a battered violin, the melody swallowed by the rain. It felt wrong, like stepping through a boundary. Then, the ground began to slope downwards, the insistent concrete replaced by rough-hewn stone. She descended a narrow, spiral staircase, the air thickening with the smell of damp earth and something else – something acrid and faintly sweet, like overripe fruit. The staircase opened into a vast, echoing space. The Veil Market. It was a subterranean labyrinth of stalls and shadowy figures, illuminated by flickering candlelight and the sickly green glow of enchanted artifacts. Vendors hawked bizarre wares: vials of iridescent liquid, intricately carved bone charms, and scrolls covered in indecipherable symbols. People – a strange, unsettling mix of humans, creatures that shouldn't exist, and those who clearly occupied a space between – bartered and haggled, their voices a low, murmuring drone. Quinn recognized a few faces from the intelligence reports: a hulking figure with silver eyes, a woman in a scarlet cloak offering potent sleeping draughts, and a wiry man with unnervingly pale skin selling what looked suspiciously like bottled nightmares. She moved through the crowd, a steel presence in a sea of shadows, her hand instinctively resting on the butt of her Glock. Davies’ voice was frantic in her ear. “Quinn, we’ve lost you. Radio check!” “I’m inside,” she replied, her voice clipped. “This is… unsettling.” She spotted Herrera near a stall piled high with tarnished silver lockets. He was engaged in a tense exchange with a gaunt man wearing a feathered mask, their voices low and urgent. He looked… calm. Almost detached. Quinn moved closer, her senses on high alert. The masked man held up a small, intricately carved skull, its eyes gleaming with an unnatural luminescence. “The price, Herreras?” he rasped. “The data,” Herrera replied, his voice equally low. “You know what I need.” Quinn recognized the data. It was a corrupted file – a fragment of Morris’s last case, something that had triggered the strange phenomena that had led to his death. It detailed a ritual, a summoning, and a name: Silas. Suddenly, a hand clamped down on her shoulder. She whirled around, drawing her Glock. A young man, barely out of his teens, with eyes that seemed to absorb the light, stood before her. He wore a simple tunic and carried a small pouch filled with herbs. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice soft but firm. “You shouldn’t be here.” “Who are you?” Quinn demanded, her finger tightening on the trigger. “A simple healer,” he said, unperturbed by her threat. “I tend to the wounds of those who pass through. Silas doesn’t appreciate unwanted visitors.” Before Quinn could react, Herrera grabbed her arm, pulling her deeper into the labyrinth. “We need to go,” he said, his voice urgent. “Now.” He practically dragged her past the young healer, towards a darkened corner of the market. As they moved, Quinn risked a glance back. The masked man was watching them, a subtle, unsettling smile playing on his lips. They reached a secluded doorway, concealed behind a stack of crates. Behind it was a small, dimly lit back room – Silas’ bar. The air here was heavy with the scent of aged whiskey and something else, something metallic and faintly…burnt. The room was sparsely furnished – a scarred wooden table, a few mismatched chairs, and a shelf lined with bottles of questionable contents. Silas himself sat behind the bar, a tall, imposing figure with silver hair and eyes that held an unnerving intelligence. He was polishing a glass with meticulous care, seemingly oblivious to their presence. “You shouldn’t have followed,” Silas said, his voice smooth as velvet. “This place is not for the faint of heart.” “I’m not interested in your hospitality,” Quinn retorted, keeping her Glock trained on him. “Where’s Herrera? And what do you know about Morris?” Silas chuckled, a dry, brittle sound. "Detective Quinn. A persistent shadow. Morris... he stumbled upon something he shouldn't have. A truth best left buried." Herrera stepped forward, holding out a data drive. “I have the file. Give me what I want, and I’ll let you go.” “The file is a poison,” Silas said, taking the drive and examining it with a silver chain. “It will corrupt the weave, unravel the protections. You offer me chaos, Herreras. I offer stability.” Suddenly, the young healer from the market appeared in the doorway, holding a small, ornate dagger. “Silas,” he said, his voice suddenly icy. “You know the price of defiance.” A brief, brutal struggle ensued. The healer moved with a terrifying grace, a whirlwind of motion and lethal precision. Herrera, surprisingly agile, managed to deflect a blow, but he was clearly outmatched. Quinn, caught between the two adversaries, instinctively drew her Glock and fired a warning shot, shattering a bottle on the shelf. The room erupted in chaos. The flickering candlelight cast grotesque shadows on the walls, amplifying the sense of dread. Quinn knew she had to make a choice. Follow Herrera and risk being swallowed by this twisted underworld, or press her advantage against Silas, potentially exposing herself to even greater dangers. She glanced at Herrera, his face pale with exertion, and then at Silas, meticulously examining the data drive. The rain continued to beat against the walls, a relentless reminder of the storm raging both outside and within. The scent of iron and ozone filled the air, a chilling echo of her partner's last moments. “Herreras,” she said, her voice low and dangerous, “let’s go.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count3
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"effortless"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"hulking"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"imposing"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"unravel"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"effortless"
2"echoing"
3"hulking"
4"gleaming"
5"imposing"
6"velvet"
7"unravel"
8"sense of"
9"reminder"
10"chilling"
11"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences79
matches
0"the sense of dread"
52.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1222
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1033
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Soho1
Morris2
London1
Veil1
Market1
Glock4
Herrera9
Silas7
Suddenly2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Glock"
4"Herrera"
5"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.822
windowScore0.833
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a tiny, insistent accusation"
1"eyes that seemed to absorb the light, stood before her"
2"ticulous care, seemingly oblivious to their"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1222
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean37.03
std21.02
cv0.568
sampleLengths
085
170
235
344
452
580
611
770
863
913
1010
1145
1222
1313
1439
1546
1613
1711
1824
1924
2037
2141
2256
2320
2423
2524
2622
2733
2829
2953
3050
3154
3210
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"was engaged"
1"being swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was watching"
1"was polishing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences93
ratio0.075
matches
0"He’d been meticulous, leaving almost no trace, but Quinn's team had picked up his scent - a faint, almost floral musk overlaid with the sharp tang of iron."
1"This wasn't a simple robbery; it was something steeped in the unsettling undercurrents of London's hidden world."
2"She descended a narrow, spiral staircase, the air thickening with the smell of damp earth and something else – something acrid and faintly sweet, like overripe fruit."
3"People – a strange, unsettling mix of humans, creatures that shouldn't exist, and those who clearly occupied a space between – bartered and haggled, their voices a low, murmuring drone."
4"It was a corrupted file – a fragment of Morris’s last case, something that had triggered the strange phenomena that had led to his death."
5"Behind it was a small, dimly lit back room – Silas’ bar."
6"The room was sparsely furnished – a scarred wooden table, a few mismatched chairs, and a shelf lined with bottles of questionable contents."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount269
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.026022304832713755
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.007434944237918215
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.14
std7.5
cv0.571
sampleLengths
020
18
235
322
43
521
618
728
816
919
1010
114
1213
1317
1420
159
1611
1712
1812
1919
208
2114
2227
238
243
2522
2618
2730
2840
2923
307
316
327
333
3412
3520
362
371
382
398
4017
415
428
435
444
4525
4610
478
486
4919
48.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3548387096774194
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences74
matches
0"Unnaturally so, Quinn thought, cataloging"
1"Then, the ground began to"
2"Suddenly, a hand clamped down"
3"Suddenly, the young healer from"
ratio0.054
79.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences74
matches
0"She hadn’t slept properly in"
1"She adjusted the worn leather"
2"He’d been meticulous, leaving almost"
3"She’d read the reports."
4"She cut through a narrow"
5"She passed a street musician"
6"It felt wrong, like stepping"
7"She descended a narrow, spiral"
8"It was a subterranean labyrinth"
9"She moved through the crowd,"
10"she replied, her voice clipped"
11"She spotted Herrera near a"
12"He was engaged in a"
13"It was a corrupted file"
14"It detailed a ritual, a"
15"She whirled around, drawing her"
16"He wore a simple tunic"
17"he said, his voice soft"
18"he said, unperturbed by her"
19"he said, his voice urgent"
ratio0.351
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences74
matches
0"The rain hammered against Detective"
1"Each drop felt like a"
2"She hadn’t slept properly in"
3"She adjusted the worn leather"
4"Herrera was fast."
5"The olive skin of his"
6"He’d been meticulous, leaving almost"
7"Quinn finished, a grim tightening"
8"She’d read the reports."
9"A shard of a long-dead"
10"This wasn't a simple robbery;"
11"She cut through a narrow"
12"The rain seemed to intensify"
13"Herrera was ahead, disappearing around"
14"Quinn followed, her boots splashing"
15"The buildings grew taller, the"
16"She passed a street musician"
17"It felt wrong, like stepping"
18"She descended a narrow, spiral"
19"The staircase opened into a"
ratio0.892
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Before Quinn could react, Herrera"
ratio0.014
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Quinn followed, her boots splashing in puddles that mirrored the distorted streetlights."
1"People – a strange, unsettling mix of humans, creatures that shouldn't exist, and those who clearly occupied a space between – bartered and haggled, their voice…"
2"It was a corrupted file – a fragment of Morris’s last case, something that had triggered the strange phenomena that had led to his death."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she replied, her voice clipped"
1"Herrera replied, his voice equally low"
2"he said, his voice soft but firm"
3"Quinn demanded, her finger tightening on the trigger"
4"he said, his voice urgent"
5"Silas said, his voice smooth as velvet"
6"he said, his voice suddenly icy"
7"she said, her voice low and dangerous,"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn demanded (demand)"
1"Quinn retorted (retort)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.148
79.5115%