"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she sprinted down Frith Street, her breath ragged but controlled—18 years of police training had turned panicky inhales into steady, rhythmical ones."
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"Ortega was a runner, a middleman for the clique—the shadowy group of supernaturals she’d been chasing for six months, ever since the body of a bank manager washed up in the Thames, drained of blood but with no visible wounds, no marks."
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"*Supernatural origins she doesn’t yet understand*—the report from the coroner, scrawled in shaky handwriting."
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"The alley was narrow, lit only by a flickering neon sign from the bar at the far end—*The Raven’s Nest*."
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"She scanned the walls—graffiti in scrawled Spanish, a handprint of black paint that smelled of iron—and spotted a loose brick near the dumpster."
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"The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—brine, like the sea, or maybe salt."
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"She ran a finger over the latch; it was warm, as if someone had just touched it."
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"A whisper carried up the stairs—the sound of Ortega’s voice, too low to make out, but angry."
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"He wasn’t just running from the police—he was running from something else."
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"The whispers of the force had called it that—an underground market for supernaturals, banned goods, and secrets."
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"The door swung open, and a wave of heat hit her—warm air, thick with incense and the smell of charred meat."
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"Firelight flickered from braziers, casting shadows that danced across the walls—some human, some not: a gargoyle with a tail of smoke, a woman with antlers sprouting from her skull, a man with scales covering his hands."
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"Quinn adjusted her coat—she’d left her badge in her car, hoping to blend in—and scanned the stalls."
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"For a moment, she looked afraid—not of Quinn, but of something behind her."
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"The Warden raised his staff, but a vendor—an old man with a beard made of snakes—threw a bucket of water at him."
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"Beyond the ladder, a figure stood in the dark—tall, cloaked, their face hidden by a hood."
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"The figure was nowhere to be seen, but she could still feel it—the weight of its gaze, the cold hand on her shoulder that wasn’t there."
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"Three years ago, DS Morris had vanished into a warehouse in Bermondsey, his radio static sputtering just before a flash of light that wasn’t a lightning strike."
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"She scanned the walls—graffiti in scrawled Spanish, a handprint of black paint that smelled of iron—and spotted a loose brick near the dumpster."
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"Firelight flickered from braziers, casting shadows that danced across the walls—some human, some not: a gargoyle with a tail of smoke, a woman with antlers spro…"
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"Their hand was raised, and Ortega let out a shriek, falling to his knees, his body convulsing."