Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8HYEJ2QHAHW96ZE34NCQQ

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47.8s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Her fingers fumbled the last deadbolt. Ptolemy yowled from the kitchen counter, tail lashing like a metronome. The door creaked open. Lucien Moreau stood there, cane hooked over his arm, charcoal suit crisp as fresh banknotes. His amber eye gleamed under the hallway bulb; the black one swallowed light whole. Platinum hair slicked back, not a strand astray. Rory gripped the doorframe. Her pulse hammered in her ears. "You look well, Rory." She swallowed. Tasted curry spices from Eva's fridge raid earlier. Two months since he'd vanished mid-sentence in that Shoreditch alley. After his hands had mapped her skin like contraband routes. "Deadbolts don't open themselves." Ptolemy leaped down, circled her ankles, then froze mid-prowl, hackles up at the intruder. Lucien glanced at the cat. Smiled, thin and sharp. Stepped forward without invitation. His cologne trailed him, sandalwood laced with brimstone. She blocked the threshold. Shoulder-length black hair curtained one bright blue eye. The crescent scar on her wrist itched under her sleeve. "Eva's not here." "Laila, then." His voice dipped low, French vowels curling like smoke. He tapped the cane once. Ivory handle caught the light. "Or whichever name keeps the ghosts at bay tonight." Her jaw tightened. Laila was the alias she'd ditched after Evan. Lucien knew that. Knew too much. "Brick Lane's got three curry houses within spitting distance. Pick one." He didn't budge. Heterochromatic gaze pinned her. Heat prickled her skin, unbidden. "I require your particular skills." The cane twirled once, lazy. "The kind that deliver more than dim sum." Ptolemy hissed. Rory's hand shot out, snagged the cat before claws met Italian leather. She stepped aside. Door slammed shut behind him. Three deadbolts snicked home. The flat swallowed him whole. Books teetered on every surface: dog-eared occult tomes, yellowed scrolls pinned under mugs, Eva's research notes spiderwebbing the coffee table like a madman's blueprint. Curry house fumes clung to the air, mingled with ink and cat litter. A single bulb swung overhead, casting shadows that danced across his suit. Lucien surveyed it all. Nose wrinkled, faint. Removed his coat, draped it over the armchair's arm. Silk lining whispered. "Nice lair. Your friend's?" "Eva's. I'm crashing." She set Ptolemy down. The tabby bolted under the sofa, yellow eyes slits of accusation. "What do you want, Luc? Last time, you left me chasing shadows." He turned. Amber eye softened a fraction. Black one bored into her. "Shadows pay dividends." He eased onto the sagging sofa, cane across his knees. Legs stretched, polished shoes gleaming. "Evan's surfaced." Her stomach dropped. Fingers dug into her palms. "Bollocks." She crossed to the kitchenette, yanked open the fridge. Grabbed a beer. Twisted the cap with her teeth. Spat it into the sink. Lucien watched. Unblinking. "Not bollocks. He's in London. Asking questions. About a certain delivery girl with a scar." His gaze flicked to her wrist. She yanked her sleeve lower. Beer foamed over her knuckles. Cold. Bitter. "He can't track me here." Voice steady. Cool-headed Rory. Quick thinker. "I buried that life." Lucien leaned forward. Elbows on knees. Fingers steepled. "Buried? Or merely paused." He rose, fluid as a blade unsheathing. Crossed the cramped space in three strides. Stopped inches away. Heat radiated off him. "Avaros whispers reached me. Your ex? Not so human anymore." She slammed the beer down. Froth bubbled across the counter. "What?" His hand brushed her arm. Light. Electric. She jerked back. Hit the fridge handle. "Demonic pact. Cheap one, but potent." Lucien murmured it close. Breath ghosted her ear. "Tracks scars now. Like yours." The crescent burned. Childhood fall from the Cardiff swings. Mum's screams. Dad's stitches. "Why tell me?" She shoved past him. Grabbed a tea towel. Wiped the spill. Hard strokes. "We ended. You walked." He followed. Shadowed her. Filled the tiny kitchenette. "Ended?" Laughter, low. Dark. "You pushed, chérie. Called me monster after the alley." Heat flooded her cheeks. Alley. His fangs grazing her throat mid-thrust. Half-demon truth spilling with his seed. "You are one." His cane clattered to the floor. Ivory handle rolled. He gripped her shoulders. Spun her. Pinned her against the counter. "Monstrous enough to save you?" Amber eye flared. Black one deepened to void. "Evan's marked you. I can unmark." Lips inches from hers. Sandalwood choked her. Pulse thundered in her throat. She twisted free. Grabbed his lapels. Shoved. "Then do it." Voice cracked. Hurt surged, hot. "Not for old times. For whatever game you're playing." His hands caught her wrists. Thumbs stroked the scar. Gentle. Possessive. "No game." He pulled her closer. Bodies aligned. Heat pooled low. "Information's my currency. You're my debt." She searched his face. Platinum strands loosened, fell across his brow. Heterochromia pulled her in, twin abysses. "Debt?" Ptolemy scratched at the sofa, ignored. "You ghosted. Left me bleeding questions." "Bled you?" His grip tightened. Bruising. "I shielded you. Underworld eyes on us post-alley. Safer apart." Lies? Truth? Her quick mind spun routes. Escape hatches. But his touch anchored her. "Bullshit." She yanked a wrist free. Traced his jaw. Stubble rasped. "You wanted out." He captured her hand. Kissed the palm. Fangs nicked skin. Copper bloomed. "Out?" Growl rumbled. "I replay that night. Your gasps. My name on your tongue." Her breath hitched. Knees weakened. Counter dug into her back. "Lucien." He closed the gap. Mouth claimed hers. Hard. Hungry. Tongue invaded, tasting beer and fury. She bit back. Nails raked his neck. Drew blood. He groaned. Pinned her hips. Books toppled somewhere. Thud. Dust motes swirled. His free hand slid under her shirt. Skin ignited. Calluses from cane work roughened palms. She arched. Clung. Hurt twisted into need. "Prove it." Gasped against his lips. "Unmark me." Fangs grazed her throat. Not breaking skin. Promise. "Done." He hiked her leg. Hook around his thigh. Suit trousers strained. Ptolemy yowled again. Louder. Claws scrabbled. Door rattled. Three deadbolts? No. Eva's flat had one window cracked. Lucien froze. Head snapped up. Footsteps. Heavy. Outside. "Downstairs," he hissed. Grabbed cane. Blade snicked free. Rory's heart seized. Evan? Ptolemy bolted across the floor. Fur brushed her ankle. The window shattered. Glass rained. A figure vaulted in. Hooded. Eyes glowing red. Claws extended. Lucien's blade flashed. Met claws mid-air. Sparks flew. Rory snatched a heavy tome from the table. Occult symbols embossed. Swung hard. The intruder roared. Spun. Backhanded her. She flew. Crashed into bookshelves. Scrolls cascaded. Pain exploded in her ribs. Blood trickled from lip. Lucien lunged. Cane-blade sliced deep. Black ichor sprayed. "Run!" he barked. She scrambled up. Grabbed her jacket. Door. More glass. Second figure through the window. Bigger. Horns curling. Eva's notes ignited. Flames licked scrolls. Lucien parried. Fangs bared. Amber eye blazed. "Rory!" The first intruder charged her. Claws raked air. She dodged. Swung the tome again. Connected with skull. Crunch. It staggered. Lucien's blade impaled the second. Ichor pooled. But the door buckled. Wood splintered. Three deadbolts held. Barely. A voice boomed through. Familiar. Twisted. "Rory! Come out, love!" Evan. Her scar throbbed. Visions flashed: bruises. His fists. London escape. Lucien yanked the blade free. Grabbed her arm. "Stairs. Now." They bolted for the bedroom door. Ptolemy streaked ahead. Door crashed open behind. Hell broke loose. Flames roared higher. Smoke choked. Evan's laugh echoed. Demonic. Close. Lucien barricaded the bedroom door with the dresser. Wood scraped lino. Too late. Claws punched through. Splinters flew. Rory's eyes locked on Lucien's. Fear? Lust? Resolve. He kissed her fierce. Once. "Trust me." The door exploded inward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The cane twirled once [once]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.039
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"thundered"
count1
7
word"aligned"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"charged"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silk"
2"gleaming"
3"stomach"
4"flicked"
5"electric"
6"thundered"
7"aligned"
8"traced"
9"footsteps"
10"shattered"
11"charged"
12"familiar"
13"throbbed"
14"echoed"
15"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences269
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences269
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences297
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1240
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions83
wordCount1016
uniqueNames28
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva4
Shoreditch1
Lucien15
French1
Evan4
Ptolemy8
Italian1
Legs1
Grabbed6
Cool-headed1
Rory6
Crossed1
Breath1
Cardiff1
Dark1
Black3
Hurt2
Bodies1
Bruising1
Traced1
Fangs3
Hook1
Heat4
Door4
Three3
Amber3
Claws4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Legs"
6"Rory"
7"Breath"
8"Hurt"
9"Bodies"
10"Fangs"
11"Heat"
12"Door"
13"Amber"
14"Claws"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Three"
globalScore0.762
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1240
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences297
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs110
mean11.27
std8.35
cv0.741
sampleLengths
06
111
24
337
410
54
630
718
821
922
103
1130
1217
1311
1412
1518
1614
1712
1854
1919
204
2130
2212
2320
248
2524
263
2726
287
2915
308
3135
3210
331
3414
3519
3613
3720
388
3913
4017
413
4220
4319
4412
457
4617
4711
4817
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences269
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs254
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences297
ratio0.003
matches
0"His amber eye gleamed under the hallway bulb; the black one swallowed light whole."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1025
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.021463414634146343
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000975609756097561
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences297
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences297
mean4.18
std3.23
cv0.774
sampleLengths
06
111
24
315
414
58
64
76
84
92
108
1110
1210
1318
145
154
164
178
184
198
2010
213
2211
235
245
259
263
278
283
293
3011
313
324
335
3410
358
362
3712
383
395
404
415
4224
4313
4412
454
463
479
483
494
98.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5892255892255892
totalSentences297
uniqueOpeners175
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences176
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences176
matches
0"Her fingers fumbled the last"
1"His amber eye gleamed under"
2"Her pulse hammered in her"
3"His cologne trailed him, sandalwood"
4"She blocked the threshold."
5"His voice dipped low, French"
6"He tapped the cane once."
7"Her jaw tightened."
8"He didn't budge."
9"She stepped aside."
10"She set Ptolemy down"
11"He eased onto the sagging"
12"Her stomach dropped."
13"She crossed to the kitchenette,"
14"His gaze flicked to her"
15"She yanked her sleeve lower."
16"He rose, fluid as a"
17"She slammed the beer down."
18"His hand brushed her arm."
19"She jerked back."
ratio0.233
87.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences176
matches
0"Her fingers fumbled the last"
1"Ptolemy yowled from the kitchen"
2"The door creaked open."
3"Lucien Moreau stood there, cane"
4"His amber eye gleamed under"
5"Platinum hair slicked back, not"
6"Rory gripped the doorframe."
7"Her pulse hammered in her"
8"Ptolemy leaped down, circled her"
9"Lucien glanced at the cat."
10"His cologne trailed him, sandalwood"
11"She blocked the threshold."
12"Shoulder-length black hair curtained one"
13"The crescent scar on her"
14"His voice dipped low, French"
15"He tapped the cane once."
16"Ivory handle caught the light."
17"Her jaw tightened."
18"Laila was the alias she'd"
19"Lucien knew that."
ratio0.744
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences176
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences11
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A single bulb swung overhead, casting shadows that danced across his suit."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The cane twirled once, lazy"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"he hissed (hiss)"
2"he barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.118
87.9048%