Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8JW1K3RMV9MBHW4KYFDAA

Run Details

Duration:
32.5s
Cost:
$0.000623
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The wrought iron gate creaked open like a rusty jaw, and Rory slipped into Richmond Park after dusk. Streetlights hadn't reached this far in. She walked along the paved path, its smooth surface a stark contrast to the crunch of gravel she expected, until she hit the overgrown track leading toward the copse of ancient oaks everyone called the Fae Grove. Her boots sank into the damp earth. She hadn’t wanted to come back. Not after… well, not ever, if she had a choice. But Eva insisted. A new spike in readings. The Heartstone pendant warmed beneath her sweater, a low thrum against her skin. It hadn't pulsed like this in weeks. The air changed, dropping several degrees as she neared the standing stones. A scent like overripe fruit, almost cloying, hung heavy. It wasn't unpleasant, just…wrong. Wrong for a London park in November. Each oak, gnarled and thick, felt like a silent, watchful figure. “Lovely, isn’t it?” she murmured to herself, hoping the sound of her own voice would settle the prickle on her neck. She stepped between two of the stones. The world tilted. Not physically, but… perceptually. The shadows lengthened, twisting into shapes that resolved themselves into nothing when she blinked. Deeper within the grove, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors – a violet deeper than amethyst, a scarlet that vibrated. It was beautiful, unsettlingly so. She pulled out the small device Eva built, a jumble of wires and salvaged tech Eva claimed could detect “flux.” The screen flickered, displaying a chaotic mess of static. “Come on, you overgrown paperweight.” The static lessened, coalescing into a pulsing waveform. The closer she went toward the center of the grove, the stronger the signal became. It wasn’t a stable pulse, though. Erratic. Panicked, almost. “Something's definitely here.” A twig snapped behind her. She whirled, heart hammering, prepared to tell off some late-night dog walker. Nothing. Just the trees. Just the too-bright wildflowers. “Hello?” Silence. Then, a rustling in the undergrowth to her left. A small animal, she figured. A rabbit, maybe. Still, she scanned the darkness, her hand instinctively reaching for the small, utilitarian knife she kept in her pocket. The Heartstone warmed again, the pulse now insistent. She glanced down at it. The faint crimson glow seemed brighter tonight. “Right. Let’s get this over with.” She pushed further into the grove, following the erratic signal on Eva’s device. The air grew heavier, thicker. Breathing felt like wading through water. The scent of fruit intensified. A high-pitched whine, just at the edge of hearing, began to burrow into her skull. She stopped. No rational explanation for it, but the hair on her arms stood on end. She couldn’t shake the feeling of being watched. Not by an animal. Not by a person. Something *else*. “Eva, you sure about this?” she spoke into the comms clipped to her jacket. Static. “Eva? Can you hear me?” Only static answered. She fiddled with the device, checking the connection. Full bars. It should be working. “Bloody technology.” She continued forward, each step deliberate. The ground felt…soft. Too soft. Like walking on a layer of moss thicker than it should be. She bent down, pushing aside some of the foliage. Beneath the moss was dark, loamy earth. And something else. Something pale and glistening. She didn't touch it. The whine in her ears increased in volume, becoming a piercing shriek. She clamped her hands over her ears, but it didn’t help. It felt like the sound was *inside* her head. A flicker of movement caught her eye. At the periphery of her vision, between two trees. She spun around, knife drawn. Nothing. “Okay, this is getting ridiculous.” She told herself it was fatigue, the late hour, the creepiness of the place playing tricks on her. But the feeling of being observed intensified. She could almost feel the weight of unseen eyes boring into her back. “Show yourself.” Her voice sounded small, weak, even to her own ears. The forest held its breath. The Heartstone practically burned against her skin, radiating heat. The device in her hand buzzed furiously. The waveform had gone wild, spiking and plummeting like a seismograph during an earthquake. And then she heard it. A sound that wasn’t the wind. Wasn’t an animal. A soft, rhythmic…humming. It seemed to emanate from the very ground beneath her feet. The humming swelled, resolving into a melody. Distorted. Unearthly. A lullaby sung in a language she didn’t recognize, yet somehow understood. A song of loss. Of longing. Of something ancient and profoundly sad. She lowered her knife, her grip loosening. The humming wrapped around her, pulling at something deep inside. A forgotten memory. A buried grief. “Stop it,” she whispered, but it came out as a breath. The wildflowers began to glow with an internal luminescence, bathing the Grove in an eerie, pulsating light. And in that light, she saw them. Shapes. Shifting. Fluid. Not quite human, but vaguely humanoid. Tall and spindly, with limbs too long and faces obscured by shadows. They weren’t moving toward her, not yet. They were simply…watching. One of them raised a hand. And in that hand…something shone. A pale, ethereal light. The device in Rory’s hand died. The screen went black. The Heartstone pulsed violently, almost painfully. “Eva?” she tried again into the comms. Still nothing. The shapes began to drift closer. Not walking. Floating. Silent. A voice, not spoken but *thought*, echoed in her mind. *Welcome.*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she tried again [again]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.154
94.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount910
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount910
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"resolved"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"glistening"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"resolving"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"pulsed"
2"resolved"
3"vibrated"
4"flickered"
5"chaotic"
6"pulse"
7"silence"
8"scanned"
9"glistening"
10"flicker"
11"weight"
12"rhythmic"
13"resolving"
14"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords908
ratio0.004
matches
0"else"
1"inside"
2"thought"
3"Welcome."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount867
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory2
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Grove2
Eva4
Heartstone4
London1
November1
Static1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Heartstone"
3"Static"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"London"
5"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a silent, watchful figure"
1"seemed brighter tonight"
2"felt like wading through water"
3"felt like the sound was *inside* her he"
4"Not quite human, but vaguely humanoid"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.304
wordCount908
matches
0"Not physically, but…"
1"Not quite human, but vaguely humanoid"
2"not spoken but *thought*, echoed in her mind"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean21.12
std16.19
cv0.767
sampleLengths
068
144
243
321
452
529
65
732
83
925
101
1137
1220
136
1444
1534
1614
171
185
1917
202
2146
224
2332
2421
251
265
2738
2812
295
3030
3128
3233
3323
3411
3524
3631
3715
3816
399
4010
4110
421
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs155
matches
0"were simply…watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences131
ratio0.008
matches
0"Deeper within the grove, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors – a violet deeper than amethyst, a scarlet that vibrated."
91.70% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount869
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04948216340621404
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014959723820483314
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean6.93
std5.59
cv0.807
sampleLengths
018
16
237
37
46
52
68
73
85
913
107
1112
129
134
147
1511
1621
177
183
193
201
2114
2219
235
2429
255
268
2715
286
291
302
313
325
3312
341
353
364
371
381
399
405
413
4219
438
445
457
466
4713
485
496
57.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.40458015267175573
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences101
matches
0"Just the trees."
1"Just the too-bright wildflowers."
2"Then, a rustling in the"
3"Only static answered."
ratio0.04
93.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences101
matches
0"She walked along the paved"
1"Her boots sank into the"
2"She hadn’t wanted to come"
3"It hadn't pulsed like this"
4"It wasn't unpleasant, just…wrong."
5"she murmured to herself, hoping"
6"She stepped between two of"
7"It was beautiful, unsettlingly so."
8"She pulled out the small"
9"It wasn’t a stable pulse,"
10"She whirled, heart hammering, prepared"
11"She glanced down at it."
12"She pushed further into the"
13"She couldn’t shake the feeling"
14"she spoke into the comms"
15"She fiddled with the device,"
16"It should be working."
17"She continued forward, each step"
18"She bent down, pushing aside"
19"She didn't touch it."
ratio0.317
88.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences101
matches
0"The wrought iron gate creaked"
1"Streetlights hadn't reached this far"
2"She walked along the paved"
3"Her boots sank into the"
4"She hadn’t wanted to come"
5"A new spike in readings."
6"The Heartstone pendant warmed beneath"
7"It hadn't pulsed like this"
8"The air changed, dropping several"
9"A scent like overripe fruit,"
10"It wasn't unpleasant, just…wrong."
11"Each oak, gnarled and thick,"
12"she murmured to herself, hoping"
13"She stepped between two of"
14"The world tilted."
15"The shadows lengthened, twisting into"
16"It was beautiful, unsettlingly so."
17"She pulled out the small"
18"The static lessened, coalescing into"
19"The closer she went toward"
ratio0.743
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Deeper within the grove, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors – a violet deeper than amethyst, a scarlet that vibrated."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she spoke (speak)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.462
79.1739%