| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she tried again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 94.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 910 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 910 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stark" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "resolved" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "chaotic" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "resolving" | | 14 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.77% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 124 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 908 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "else" | | 1 | "inside" | | 2 | "thought" | | 3 | "Welcome." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 867 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Eva | 4 | | Heartstone | 4 | | London | 1 | | November | 1 | | Static | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Static" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a silent, watchful figure" | | 1 | "seemed brighter tonight" | | 2 | "felt like wading through water" | | 3 | "felt like the sound was *inside* her he" | | 4 | "Not quite human, but vaguely humanoid" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.304 | | wordCount | 908 | | matches | | 0 | "Not physically, but…" | | 1 | "Not quite human, but vaguely humanoid" | | 2 | "not spoken but *thought*, echoed in her mind" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 21.12 | | std | 16.19 | | cv | 0.767 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Deeper within the grove, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors – a violet deeper than amethyst, a scarlet that vibrated." |
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| 91.70% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 869 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.04948216340621404 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014959723820483314 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 6.93 | | std | 5.59 | | cv | 0.807 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 57.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.40458015267175573 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the trees." | | 1 | "Just the too-bright wildflowers." | | 2 | "Then, a rustling in the" | | 3 | "Only static answered." |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 93.27% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked along the paved" | | 1 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 2 | "She hadn’t wanted to come" | | 3 | "It hadn't pulsed like this" | | 4 | "It wasn't unpleasant, just…wrong." | | 5 | "she murmured to herself, hoping" | | 6 | "She stepped between two of" | | 7 | "It was beautiful, unsettlingly so." | | 8 | "She pulled out the small" | | 9 | "It wasn’t a stable pulse," | | 10 | "She whirled, heart hammering, prepared" | | 11 | "She glanced down at it." | | 12 | "She pushed further into the" | | 13 | "She couldn’t shake the feeling" | | 14 | "she spoke into the comms" | | 15 | "She fiddled with the device," | | 16 | "It should be working." | | 17 | "She continued forward, each step" | | 18 | "She bent down, pushing aside" | | 19 | "She didn't touch it." |
| | ratio | 0.317 | |
| 88.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The wrought iron gate creaked" | | 1 | "Streetlights hadn't reached this far" | | 2 | "She walked along the paved" | | 3 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 4 | "She hadn’t wanted to come" | | 5 | "A new spike in readings." | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant warmed beneath" | | 7 | "It hadn't pulsed like this" | | 8 | "The air changed, dropping several" | | 9 | "A scent like overripe fruit," | | 10 | "It wasn't unpleasant, just…wrong." | | 11 | "Each oak, gnarled and thick," | | 12 | "she murmured to herself, hoping" | | 13 | "She stepped between two of" | | 14 | "The world tilted." | | 15 | "The shadows lengthened, twisting into" | | 16 | "It was beautiful, unsettlingly so." | | 17 | "She pulled out the small" | | 18 | "The static lessened, coalescing into" | | 19 | "The closer she went toward" |
| | ratio | 0.743 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Deeper within the grove, wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors – a violet deeper than amethyst, a scarlet that vibrated." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she spoke (speak)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.462 | |