Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8KN49ZRKHM66Z85293GK4

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Duration:
22.0s
Cost:
$0.000325
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knob shrieked a protest as Lucien Moreau pushed it open, the sound swallowed almost immediately by the chaotic symphony of Golden Empress. A cacophony of clattering plates, shouting orders, and the sizzle of searing garlic assaulted his ears, momentarily blurring the already hazy London air. He didn’t flinch, didn’t even pause to register the scene – a warren of red and white checked tablecloths, delivery boys wrestling with overflowing trays of noodles, and a kitchen staff sculpted from sweat, spice, and barely contained fury. He simply continued, his tailored charcoal suit a jarring anomaly amidst the culinary pandemonium, until he reached the narrow, slightly sticky staircase that led upward. The smell of frying onions and something vaguely floral – Rory’s hand-picked lavender sachets, he recalled with a faint, unwelcome flicker of memory – grew stronger with each step. He’d anticipated the scent; it was a perverse comfort, a thread connecting him to a past he’d spent years meticulously dismantling. The landing was cramped, cluttered with overflowing bookshelves and haphazard stacks of research materials – maps, journals bound in worn leather, and a disconcerting number of grimoires that looked remarkably well-loved. And then he saw her. Aurora Carter was meticulously dismantling a particularly stubborn jar of pickled ginger, her brow furrowed in concentration, a smear of red clinging to her lower lip. Her bright blue eyes, usually sharp and assessing, were currently narrowed in a familiar expression of frustrated intensity. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a ghost of a childhood accident, was partially obscured by the sleeve of a dark grey sweater. She hadn't turned, hadn't acknowledged his presence, hadn't even paused her culinary excavation. It was infuriating. And, undeniably, captivating. “You’re remarkably efficient at destroying packaging,” Lucien observed, his voice a low, carefully modulated rumble that cut through the restaurant’s din. He leaned against the doorframe, the ivory-handled cane a silent weight in his hand – a prop more than a necessity. “A skill I’ve always valued.” She finally turned, a slow, deliberate movement that sent a jolt through him – a ghost of the electric tension that had crackled between them five years ago. Her expression remained guarded, a carefully constructed wall of indifference. “It’s ginger, Lucien. Not a priceless artifact.” The words were clipped, precise, devoid of any warmth. “Ginger can be a surprisingly complex ingredient,” he countered smoothly, taking a step further into the flat. “Requiring dedication, patience…and a certain disregard for the sanctity of the jar.” He gestured with his cane, a subtle, almost theatrical movement. “Qualities I’ve come to associate with you.” A muscle ticked in her jaw. “Don’t start.” The volume escalated slightly, a hint of defensiveness creeping into her tone. "I agreed to this visit. It’s not a séance.” “Agreements are fragile things, Aurora,” Lucien said, his heterochromatic eyes – amber and black swirling beneath his platinum blond hair – fixed on her. “Especially when forged in the heat of a rather passionate argument, followed by a hasty departure.” He paused, letting the implication hang in the air. “And, admittedly, a considerable amount of tequila.” She slammed the jar down on the counter with a resounding thud. "It was a one-time thing. A regrettable lapse in judgement.” “Regrettable, perhaps,” Lucien echoed, stepping closer. “But certainly not inconsequential. You left a considerable mess, Aurora. A mess I spent a long time cleaning up.” He could smell the faintest trace of sandalwood, her signature scent, mingled with the sharp tang of ginger. The scent was both a lure and a weapon. “You made it a mess,” she corrected, her voice low and tight. She turned back to the counter, deliberately avoiding his gaze, her hands moving with a preoccupied urgency. “I needed space. You weren’t providing any.” “Space is a commodity, Aurora. You can’t simply conjure it into existence. It requires…active participation.” He reached out, his fingers hovering just above her hand, then retracting as if burned. “And frankly, I’ve been rather busy cultivating my own.” “Busy what?” she challenged, her voice edged with steel. She finally looked at him, her blue eyes narrowed, assessing. “Fixing things? Helping people? Considering you haven’t darkened my doorstep in five years, that seems like a rather generous assessment.” Lucien suppressed a sigh. Some things, it seemed, hadn’t changed. "I've been…managing. Ensuring that certain individuals don't exploit the vulnerable. And occasionally, providing discreet assistance to those who require a particularly… skilled fixer.” A small, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips. "It's a lucrative trade." “So, you’re telling me you’ve been busy being a glorified bodyguard?” The sarcasm dripped from her words. “Let’s just say I have a particular aptitude for neutralizing threats,” he replied, his tone carefully neutral. He studied her, noting the delicate curve of her jaw, the way her black hair fell across her cheek, the stubborn set of her shoulders. “And I sensed…a disturbance. A ripple in the fabric of the supernatural. Something connected to your past.” She let out a short, brittle laugh. “You’re indulging in melodrama, Lucien. My past is none of your concern.” “It’s become rather difficult to ignore, wouldn’t you agree?” He moved past her, circling the small space like a predator. “This flat…it’s a testament to a life spent researching, studying, delving into things best left undisturbed. And yet, it's remarkably…abandoned." He stopped by one of the bookshelves, running a finger along the spines of the ancient texts. "You've thrown yourself into your work, Aurora. As if burying yourself in forgotten languages and esoteric rituals is somehow a way to avoid confronting the echoes of your own history." She grabbed a book from the shelf - *Grimoire Veridian*, its leather cover scuffed and worn - and slammed it shut. "I'm protecting myself. There are things you don't understand, Lucien. Dangerous things." “Dangerous things are my business,” he said, his voice low and intimate. He stepped closer still, close enough that she could feel the subtle scent of his cologne – a blend of spice and something indefinably dark. “And I’ve noticed a particular surge of activity near your research – a growing darkness, feeding off the residual energies of the Blackwood Incident.” Her hand instinctively went to the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a subtle tremor running through her fingers. The mention of the incident, a conflict from her former life, triggered a flicker of raw, visceral pain in her eyes. “Don't,” she hissed, her voice barely a whisper. “Don't what?” Lucien pressed, his gaze unwavering. "Don't remind you of the ghosts you’ve tried so desperately to suppress? Don’t point out the fact that you’re standing on the precipice of something truly catastrophic?” He reached out again, this time gently taking her hand. Her fingers were cold, tense. He examined the scar, tracing its delicate curve with a fingertip. "This isn’t a childhood accident, Aurora. This was…a contract. A pact made in desperation.” A single tear traced a path down her cheek. She didn’t try to wipe it away. The silence stretched between them, thick and heavy with unspoken words, with the weight of shared trauma and the lingering ghost of something profoundly intense. Suddenly, a piercing shriek cut through the ambient noise of the restaurant. A young delivery boy sprinted into the flat, his face pale with terror. “Mr. Moreau! There’s…There’s something in the kitchen! A… a shadow! It’s…it’s *feeding*!” Before either of them could react, the lights flickered and died, plunging the flat into darkness. The scent of frying onions was replaced by a sharper, more metallic odor - the unmistakable smell of old blood. And then, a low, guttural growl echoed from the shadows, followed by the unmistakable sound of shattering glass. Lucien didn't hesitate. He gripped his cane, the ivory handle gleaming in the darkness, and moved towards the sound, a cold, predatory grace in his every movement. "Show me," he commanded, his voice a low, controlled growl that mirrored the entity lurking in the shadows. "Show me what you’ve summoned."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he countered smoothly [smoothly]"
1"The volume escalated slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.487
leniency0.974
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.103
65.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1321
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count3
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"deliberately"
3"truly"
4"gently"
5"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1321
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"symphony"
count1
2
word"cacophony"
count1
3
word"searing"
count1
4
word"amidst"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count2
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"efficient"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"constructed"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"complex"
count1
16
word"implication"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count2
18
word"ensuring"
count1
19
word"predator"
count1
20
word"testament"
count1
21
word"delving"
count1
22
word"echoes"
count1
23
word"could feel"
count1
24
word"whisper"
count1
25
word"unwavering"
count1
26
word"tracing"
count1
27
word"single tear"
count1
28
word"traced"
count1
29
word"silence"
count1
30
word"unspoken"
count1
31
word"flickered"
count1
32
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"symphony"
2"cacophony"
3"searing"
4"amidst"
5"flicker"
6"furrowed"
7"familiar"
8"intensity"
9"efficient"
10"weight"
11"electric"
12"tension"
13"constructed"
14"warmth"
15"complex"
16"implication"
17"echoed"
18"ensuring"
19"predator"
20"testament"
21"delving"
22"echoes"
23"could feel"
24"whisper"
25"unwavering"
26"tracing"
27"single tear"
28"traced"
29"silence"
30"unspoken"
31"flickered"
32"gleaming"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences64
matches
0"e with terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1328
ratio0.002
matches
0"Grimoire Veridian"
1"feeding"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount915
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien7
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Rory1
Carter1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1328
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
88.22% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean45.79
std21.01
cv0.459
sampleLengths
0111
186
287
347
454
546
629
756
822
952
1036
1139
1239
1345
1417
1559
1619
1740
1847
1933
2061
2139
228
2334
2440
2541
2637
2754
2850
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"were clipped"
1"was replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences83
ratio0.12
matches
0"He didn’t flinch, didn’t even pause to register the scene – a warren of red and white checked tablecloths, delivery boys wrestling with overflowing trays of noodles, and a kitchen staff sculpted from sweat, spice, and barely contained fury."
1"The smell of frying onions and something vaguely floral – Rory’s hand-picked lavender sachets, he recalled with a faint, unwelcome flicker of memory – grew stronger with each step."
2"He’d anticipated the scent; it was a perverse comfort, a thread connecting him to a past he’d spent years meticulously dismantling."
3"The landing was cramped, cluttered with overflowing bookshelves and haphazard stacks of research materials – maps, journals bound in worn leather, and a disconcerting number of grimoires that looked remarkably well-loved."
4"He leaned against the doorframe, the ivory-handled cane a silent weight in his hand – a prop more than a necessity."
5"She finally turned, a slow, deliberate movement that sent a jolt through him – a ghost of the electric tension that had crackled between them five years ago."
6"“Agreements are fragile things, Aurora,” Lucien said, his heterochromatic eyes – amber and black swirling beneath his platinum blond hair – fixed on her."
7"She grabbed a book from the shelf - *Grimoire Veridian*, its leather cover scuffed and worn - and slammed it shut."
8"He stepped closer still, close enough that she could feel the subtle scent of his cologne – a blend of spice and something indefinably dark."
9"The scent of frying onions was replaced by a sharper, more metallic odor - the unmistakable smell of old blood."
76.87% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount908
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.05506607929515418
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.031938325991189426
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean16
std8.54
cv0.534
sampleLengths
024
123
239
325
429
521
631
75
826
918
1024
1113
123
133
1421
1521
165
1728
1810
1916
2017
2122
227
236
2414
259
2624
2725
287
2912
3010
316
3237
339
3412
3517
367
3730
389
399
4010
4120
424
436
4431
454
4617
4717
4825
4917
57.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.37349397590361444
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners31
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Suddenly, a piercing shriek cut"
ratio0.016
1.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences64
matches
0"He didn’t flinch, didn’t even"
1"He simply continued, his tailored"
2"He’d anticipated the scent; it"
3"Her bright blue eyes, usually"
4"She hadn't turned, hadn't acknowledged"
5"It was infuriating."
6"He leaned against the doorframe,"
7"She finally turned, a slow,"
8"Her expression remained guarded, a"
9"he countered smoothly, taking a"
10"He gestured with his cane,"
11"He paused, letting the implication"
12"She slammed the jar down"
13"He could smell the faintest"
14"she corrected, her voice low"
15"She turned back to the"
16"He reached out, his fingers"
17"she challenged, her voice edged"
18"She finally looked at him,"
19"he replied, his tone carefully"
ratio0.547
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences64
matches
0"The brass knob shrieked a"
1"A cacophony of clattering plates,"
2"He didn’t flinch, didn’t even"
3"He simply continued, his tailored"
4"The smell of frying onions"
5"He’d anticipated the scent; it"
6"The landing was cramped, cluttered"
7"Aurora Carter was meticulously dismantling"
8"Her bright blue eyes, usually"
9"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
10"She hadn't turned, hadn't acknowledged"
11"It was infuriating."
12"Lucien observed, his voice a"
13"He leaned against the doorframe,"
14"She finally turned, a slow,"
15"Her expression remained guarded, a"
16"The words were clipped, precise,"
17"he countered smoothly, taking a"
18"He gestured with his cane,"
19"A muscle ticked in her"
ratio0.922
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"And, undeniably, captivating."
1"Before either of them could"
ratio0.031
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He simply continued, his tailored charcoal suit a jarring anomaly amidst the culinary pandemonium, until he reached the narrow, slightly sticky staircase that l…"
1"The landing was cramped, cluttered with overflowing bookshelves and haphazard stacks of research materials – maps, journals bound in worn leather, and a disconc…"
2"She finally turned, a slow, deliberate movement that sent a jolt through him – a ghost of the electric tension that had crackled between them five years ago."
3"She turned back to the counter, deliberately avoiding his gaze, her hands moving with a preoccupied urgency."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"The volume escalated slightly, a hint of defensiveness creeping into her tone"
1"she corrected, her voice low and tight"
2"he replied, his tone carefully neutral"
3"he said, his voice low and intimate"
4"she hissed, her voice barely a whisper"
5"Lucien pressed, his gaze unwavering"
21.79% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien observed (observe)"
1"she corrected (correct)"
2"she challenged (challenge)"
3"she hissed (hiss)"
4"Lucien pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.41
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.256
71.8517%