Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8MCKFBW4CWR6TVC2Y5QQ1

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Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.000911
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Parasail

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of wet concrete and something else, something metallic and old. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her coat, the damp chill settling deep into her bones. Camden Town, even above ground, had a way of doing that. Down here, in the gutted husk of an abandoned tube station, it felt purposeful. The Veil Market. She’d heard whispers, of course. Every copper heard whispers. But seeing it—smelling it—was something else entirely. DS Davies, bless his eagerness, was already dusting for prints on a wrought-iron stall, flipped on its side like a discarded toy. Fairy lights, usually strung with gaudy trinkets, lay broken on the grimy platform. The victim, a man Quinn didn’t recognize, sprawled amidst the wreckage. Expensive shoes, custom tailored suit… someone who moved in circles far removed from petty theft. “Clean, isn’t it?” Davies said, not looking up. “No forced entry. Victim strolled in, probably looking to buy something dodgy, and got himself relieved of his wallet and… well, everything else.” Quinn crouched beside the body, ignoring the slickness of the platform beneath her knees. The man’s face was pale, contorted in a silent scream. There were wounds, yes, but they weren’t…right. Not for a simple mugging gone wrong. The cuts were too precise, too clean. No ragged edges, no panicked defense wounds. As if made with something other than a blade. She touched the man's wrist, checking for a pulse she already knew wouldn't be there. Cold. Rigor mortis was setting in, placing time of death within the last few hours. Her gaze swept the surrounding wreckage, settling on a scattering of iridescent dust near the victim’s head. It shimmered even in the dim light, unlike anything she’d seen before. “What do you make of that?” Quinn asked, gesturing with a gloved hand. Davies straightened and squinted. “Looks like glitter. Some of these stalls sell… theatrical supplies, right? Maybe a performer?” “Glitter doesn’t shimmer like oil on water, Davies.” Quinn's voice was clipped, honed by years of polite dismissal from superiors who preferred tidy paperwork to actual detective work. She pulled a small evidence bag from her kit and carefully collected a sample. “Right. Well, can’t hurt to check.” He returned to his dusting. Quinn stood, her gaze moving over the entire scene. The Market, as she now understood it, moved with the full moon. Tonight was the new moon. The location was different each time, accessed only by those who possessed a bone token. A ridiculous system, frankly. But the fact that it existed, that people traded in the shadows like this, was unsettling. “Victim’s pockets were emptied,” Davies called. "Wallet, phone, watch. Standard robbery.” Quinn glanced at her own wrist. The worn leather of her watch felt reassuringly solid. A gift from Morris, years ago. She hadn't replaced the battery. She couldn't. “Anything else?” “A small, empty pouch. Leather. Smelled faintly of… cloves and something else I can’t place.” “Describe the stalls,” Quinn directed. “A real mix. Potions, charms, antique books, weird taxidermy. The usual black market fare. Lots of occult stuff. Bit of a free-for-all, really.” Quinn’s eyes narrowed. “And no witnesses?” “Not one willing to talk. They disappear as quickly as they appear. It’s like they knew we were coming.” “Or they know better than to get involved when the Met comes calling.” Quinn began a slow, methodical sweep of the platform, ignoring Davies’ frantic dusting. Something about this felt wrong, fundamentally wrong. A robbery didn't account for the precision of the wounds, the strange dust, the unnerving silence of the witnesses. She noticed a subtle discoloration on the concrete floor, a faint tracing of circular pattern near a broken stall displaying what looked like—even in this mangled state—ancient texts. It was almost invisible, but her eye caught it. “Davies,” she said, her voice sharper now. “Have you checked for any… unusual items? Anything relating to the occult?” “I skimmed over some books, yeah. Old grimoires, mostly. Didn't see anything that jumped out. Just a lot of mumbo jumbo.” Quinn sighed. “Of course. Get forensics to analyze the floor. That discoloration.” Davies grumbled something under his breath, but obeyed. As Davies relayed the instruction to the forensics team, a woman appeared at the edge of the platform. Short, curly red hair escaping from round glasses, a worn leather satchel slung across her body. Freckles dusted her face like scattered cinnamon. Eva Kowalski. Quinn knew the name. A research assistant at the British Museum, specializing in—of all things—ancient history and the occult. She’d brushed against Kowalski during a previous investigation involving stolen artifacts. “Detective Quinn,” Kowalski said, her voice hesitant. She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, a nervous habit Quinn remembered from their previous encounter. "I… I heard about this. Thought you might want a second opinion." “A second opinion on a mugging?” Quinn asked, raising an eyebrow. “It’s not a mugging, Detective. Not entirely.” Kowalski’s gaze swept over the scene, lingering on the iridescent dust. “That shimmer… it’s residue from a channeling. A weak one, but definitely present.” Davies scoffed. “Channeling? Come on, love. We're dealing with criminals, not ghosts.” "I understand your skepticism, DS," Kowalski said calmly, without looking at him. "But the Veil Market attracts… specific clientele. People who deal in forces outside our normal understanding." Quinn felt a flicker of annoyance. She preferred concrete evidence, tangible clues. But she also knew that ignoring possibilities, however outlandish, was a shortcut to failure. Especially in a case like this. “Explain,” she said to Kowalski. “That dust is likely the byproduct of a Shadow Weave. A temporary opening between realms. It’s used to draw energy, to enhance rituals… or, in more nefarious applications, to inflict harm. The wounds on the victim… they weren't caused by a knife. They were burned, almost cauterized, from the inside out. A Shadow Weaver can do that.” Quinn looked at the victim again, seeing the injuries with new eyes. No outward slashing, no tearing of the flesh. Just… a sickening, precise disintegration. “And the discoloration on the floor?” Kowalski approached, carefully stepping around the debris. “That's a summoning circle. Incomplete, but definitely there. Someone was attempting to open a more substantial rift.” Davies sputtered. “Summoning circles? Now you're just spinning a yarn.” “I’m offering a potential explanation, DS,” Kowalski retorted, her voice gaining a steel edge. “Based on my knowledge of occult practices. One that aligns with the evidence far better than a simple robbery.” Quinn ignored them both, focusing on the potential implications. Someone had attempted to open a rift, and someone had died in the process. But why? Was it a botched ritual? Or something more deliberate? She spotted a small object partially hidden under a splintered piece of wood. A compass. Small, brass, with a patina of verdigris. The face was etched with unfamiliar sigils. Quinn carefully picked it up. It wasn't a standard navigational tool. The needle spun wildly, then settled, not pointing north, but trembling towards the darkness at the far end of the tunnel. "What is this?” she asked, holding it up. Kowalski’s breath hitched. “That’s… a Veil Compass. They’re incredibly rare. Crafted by Shade artisans. It doesn’t point to magnetic north. It points to the nearest supernatural rift or portal.” Quinn felt a cold dread settle in her stomach. This wasn't a robbery. It wasn't even just a murder. It was a warning. And she had a feeling, a chilling certainty, that this was only the beginning. She looked at Davies, whose face was a mask of bewildered frustration. He was a good detective, a dedicated officer. But he wasn't equipped for this. This wasn’t about stolen wallets and broken glass. This was about shadows, rifts, and things that lurked just beyond the veil of reality. And she knew, with a grim certainty, that she was going to have to venture into that darkness alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Kowalski said calmly [calmly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.056
81.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1319
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count3
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1319
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"amidst"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"standard"
count2
5
word"methodical"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"encounter"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"tangible"
count1
12
word"potential"
count2
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"magnetic"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"amidst"
2"pulse"
3"shimmered"
4"standard"
5"methodical"
6"silence"
7"tracing"
8"encounter"
9"eyebrow"
10"flicker"
11"tangible"
12"potential"
13"etched"
14"magnetic"
15"stomach"
16"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1310
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount902
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Kowalski"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn19
Town1
Veil1
Market2
Davies9
Morris1
Kowalski9
British1
Museum1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Morris"
4"Kowalski"
5"Museum"
places
0"Town"
1"Veil"
2"British"
globalScore0.447
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like—even in this mangled state—an"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.763
wordCount1310
matches
0"not pointing north, but trembling towards the darkness at the far end of the tunnel"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"existed, that people"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean29.11
std19.91
cv0.684
sampleLengths
074
161
231
361
459
513
618
742
811
961
1011
1128
122
1315
145
1523
166
1719
1852
1937
2019
2121
2212
238
2473
2537
2611
2731
2812
2928
3032
315
3257
3325
346
3524
3610
3733
3834
3929
4032
418
4229
4337
4468
98.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"was clipped"
1"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was setting"
73.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences124
ratio0.024
matches
0"But seeing it—smelling it—was something else entirely."
1"She noticed a subtle discoloration on the concrete floor, a faint tracing of circular pattern near a broken stall displaying what looked like—even in this mangled state—ancient texts."
2"A research assistant at the British Museum, specializing in—of all things—ancient history and the occult."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount638
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03605015673981191
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.017241379310344827
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean10.56
std7.44
cv0.704
sampleLengths
013
117
211
314
43
55
64
77
822
913
1011
115
1210
138
1423
1514
1610
177
187
197
207
219
2215
231
2414
2517
2612
2713
284
2914
3028
3114
3211
339
3412
355
3615
374
3816
396
405
416
429
436
445
452
462
4715
485
4923
68.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4274193548387097
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners53
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Especially in a case like"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences92
matches
0"She’d heard whispers, of course."
1"She touched the man's wrist,"
2"Her gaze swept the surrounding"
3"It shimmered even in the"
4"She pulled a small evidence"
5"He returned to his dusting"
6"She hadn't replaced the battery."
7"She noticed a subtle discoloration"
8"It was almost invisible, but"
9"she said, her voice sharper"
10"She’d brushed against Kowalski during"
11"She tucked a strand of"
12"She preferred concrete evidence, tangible"
13"she said to Kowalski"
14"She spotted a small object"
15"It wasn't a standard navigational"
16"she asked, holding it up"
17"It wasn't even just a"
18"It was a warning."
19"She looked at Davies, whose"
ratio0.228
63.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences92
matches
0"The air tasted of wet"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"Camden Town, even above ground,"
3"The Veil Market."
4"She’d heard whispers, of course."
5"Every copper heard whispers."
6"DS Davies, bless his eagerness,"
7"Fairy lights, usually strung with"
8"The victim, a man Quinn"
9"someone who moved in circles"
10"Davies said, not looking up"
11"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
12"The man’s face was pale,"
13"The cuts were too precise,"
14"She touched the man's wrist,"
15"Rigor mortis was setting in,"
16"Her gaze swept the surrounding"
17"It shimmered even in the"
18"Quinn asked, gesturing with a"
19"Davies straightened and squinted."
ratio0.793
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"As if made with something"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Davies said, not looking up"
1"she said, her voice sharper now"
2"Kowalski said, her voice hesitant"
3"Kowalski said calmly, without looking at him"
4"Kowalski retorted, her voice gaining a steel edge"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Kowalski retorted (retort)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.056
84.5732%