Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8MQBZM2YAXDN1P3XZ3JT7

Run Details

Duration:
24.9s
Cost:
$0.001399
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the Soho pavements like a thousand tiny fists, turning the gutters into raging torrents that snatched at Harlow Quinn's boots. She sprinted through the neon haze, her breath sharp bursts in the chill night air, the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticking relentlessly against the downpour. Forty-one years old, with eighteen on the job, and still her body moved with that old military precision—knees high, arms pumping, sharp jaw set like flint. Brown eyes narrowed against the sting of water, she locked onto the figure ahead: Tomás Herrera, five-ten of lean muscle vanishing around the corner of Greek Street. He'd slipped out of The Raven's Nest twenty minutes ago, that dimly lit den with its green neon sign flickering like a dying eye. She'd been watching the place for weeks, ever since whispers linked it to her clique of suspects—the ones peddling shadows she couldn't quite pin down. Herrera wasn't the kingpin; he was the fixer, the off-books medic with a Seville accent and a scar snaking his left forearm from some knife-happy night. But tonight, he'd bolted like a man with hell on his heels, clutching something under his jacket. A bone token? Intel said that's what you needed for the Veil Market. Supernatural bollocks, but DS Morris had died chasing similar ghosts three years back. Harlow wouldn't let it slide. "Stop! Police!" Her voice cut through the roar of traffic and rain, but Herrera didn't falter. He darted left into a narrow alley off Wardour Street, splashing through puddles that mirrored the sodium lamps in fractured gold. She followed, coat flapping like wet wings, pistol heavy in its holster under her arm. The city blurred: black-and-white photos peeling from walls in the Nest's glow, old maps of London ghosting by in shop windows. Soho's pulse throbbed—drunken laughter spilling from pubs, the sizzle of late-night kebabs—but up ahead, Herrera was a shadow weaving toward the fringes, toward Camden's underbelly. Her lungs burned as they hit Oxford Street, the rain sheeting sideways now, driven by a gust that clawed at her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair. Cars hissed past, tires hydroplaning, horns blaring as she plunged across. He glanced back once—warm brown eyes flashing under short curly dark hair, olive skin slick with rain—and veered north, into the labyrinth of backstreets that snaked toward Regent's Park. She gained ground; he was fast, but she was relentless, boots pounding cobbles worn smooth by centuries of flight. Two miles in twenty minutes, her thighs screaming, watch hands blurring at 11:47. Camden's vibe shifted the air even before the lights changed—punk graffiti clawing brick walls, the faint thump of bass from hidden clubs. Herrera ducked under a scaffold, past a shuttered tattoo parlor, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting as it swung free from his collar. She saw it catch the light, a silver plea to a saint who wasn't saving him tonight. He dropped suddenly into an access grate half-hidden by overflowing bins, the kind marking forgotten Tube maintenance shafts. Harlow skidded to a halt, rain lashing her face, heart hammering like a war drum. The grate hung open, a black maw exhaling dank, metallic breath. Echoes drifted up: muffled voices, the clink of glass, a low chant that raised the hackles on her neck. The Veil Market. Her sources had nailed it—an abandoned station beneath Camden, shifting every full moon like some cursed flea market for the unnatural. Bone token entry only. No badges, no guns; cross that threshold, and Met Pol vanished. She crouched, peering into the void. A rusted ladder descended into gloom, lit by sporadic blue witch-lights that bobbed like will-o'-the-wisps. Herrera's footsteps faded down there, urgent but not panicked now. Safe territory for him. For her? Unknown. Morris had vanished in a place like this—supernatural origins, the report said, unexplained circumstances. Bite marks on bones, whispers of fangs and spells. Harlow's fingers tightened on the grate's edge, water dripping from her sharp jaw. Call for backup? Radio crackled in her pocket: "Quinn, report." She thumbed it silent. No time; they'd quarantine the site, flood it with suits who didn't understand the shadows. The decision coiled in her gut like barbed wire. Follow, and she risked everything—life, career, sanity. Stay, and Herrera slips the net, the clique laughs, another thread in their web unravels. Her watch ticked: 11:52. Full moon tomorrow; market moves tonight. Military precision demanded action. She holstered her doubts, drew her pistol, and dropped onto the ladder. Rungs slick with slime, she descended twenty feet into the earth's throat, boots hitting packed earth with a wet thud. The air thickened—smoke, incense, rot undercut by ozone magic. Tunnels branched left and right, walls tiled in cracked white from Edwardian days, now scrawled with glowing sigils that pulsed like veins. Voices swelled: haggling in tongues she half-knew, Spanish lisps mixing with guttural snarls. She crept forward, pistol low, military bearing keeping her silhouette knife-edge against the curve. The platform opened into chaos veiled in shadow. Stalls crammed the abandoned station: rickety tables groaning under jars of writhing eels, vials of mercury-bright potions, grimoires bound in what looked like human skin. Vendors hawked wares— a crone with eyes like boiled eggs peddling dream-thief dust; a horned thing in a trench coat whispering curses for hire. Patrons slunk between: pale vampires nursing blood-wine, shifters with eyes too golden, witches trailing sparks. Enchanted goods glowed; banned alchemies bubbled. Information brokers lurked in corners, trading secrets for souls. Harlow pressed against a pillar, breath shallow, brown eyes scanning. No uniforms here; her coat marked her, but the rain masked her scent. There—Herrera, at a stall piled with bone talismans. His scar gleamed under lantern light as he handed over a pouch, received a small, etched femur—the bone token. He pocketed it, glanced around, then slipped toward a far archway where a guard-ogre with tusks like scimitars checked entries. She moved, weaving through the throng, shoulder-checking a pixie that buzzed curses in her wake. The crowd parted uneasily; mortals were rare, cops rarer. A vendor hissed, "Five-oh? Fresh meat!" but she ignored it, pulse thundering. Herrera flashed his token, ducked through. The ogre's nostrils flared toward her. Harlow halted at the threshold, pistol hidden now in her coat. No token. Bluff? Fight? The ogre loomed, ten feet of muscle and malice, breath like a slaughterhouse. "Token, breather," it growled, hand the size of a manhole cover extending. Her mind raced: Morris's file flashed—disemboweled in a market raid, body dumped topside like trash. But Herrera was inside, linking her clique to this underworld. Drugs? Weapons? Worse? She met the ogre's milky eyes, jaw clenching. "Detective Quinn, Met Pol. Stand aside." Laughter rippled from the crowd, a wave of malice. The ogre grinned, tusks yellowed. "No badge in Veil. Token or teeth." Rain echoed faintly from above, a world away. Precision demanded retreat, but instinct screamed forward. She lunged left, pistol whipping out, cracking the ogre's knee. It bellowed, swinging wild; she rolled under, firing two suppressed rounds into its thigh—boom muffled by the din. Blood black as pitch sprayed. Chaos erupted: stalls toppling, patrons scattering like roaches. She bolted through the arch, into deeper tunnels where the market sprawled labyrinthine. Blue lights flickered, revealing alcoves of forbidden flesh-trade, arenas betting on demon fights. Herrera was ahead, sprinting now, medallion bouncing. "Quinn! Back off—you don't belong!" She gained, boots echoing. "Herrera! You're nicked—clique's done!" A stall exploded beside her—alchemical firebomb from a fleeing witch. She dove, heat singeing her coat, came up firing warning shots. He skidded around a corner, into a chamber throbbing with chants. There: the heart of the market, a cavernous vault under vaulted arches. Circles of power glowed on the floor, auctioning artifacts—a cursed dagger pulsing red, a mirror showing alternate deaths. Herrera vaulted a barrier, into the bidders' pit. Guards converged: fangs bared, claws extended. Harlow slid to a stop at the edge, pistol raised, rain-slick hair plastered, chest heaving. Surrounded. No exit but fight or flight. Decision crystallized: she'd come this far. Morris's ghost demanded it. "Police! Everyone down!" The auctioneer—a serpentine fae—hissed laughter. "Hero plays in hell." Bidders turned, eyes gleaming hunger. Herrera paused amid them, face twisted—fear? Pity? "Quinn, run. This ain't your world." Her watch hit midnight. Too late for running. She advanced, finger on trigger, into the maw. The thriller tightened its grip; London above forgot her, but the Veil remembered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.727
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1445
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1445
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pumping"
count1
2
word"fractured"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"maw"
count2
8
word"echoes"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"loomed"
count1
15
word"raced"
count1
16
word"clenching"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"flickered"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count1
20
word"crystallized"
count1
21
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pumping"
2"fractured"
3"pulse"
4"throbbed"
5"pounding"
6"glinting"
7"maw"
8"echoes"
9"gloom"
10"footsteps"
11"pulsed"
12"scanning"
13"etched"
14"loomed"
15"raced"
16"clenching"
17"echoed"
18"flickered"
19"echoing"
20"crystallized"
21"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
94.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1399
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1353
uniqueNames27
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow7
Quinn1
Tomás1
Herrera13
Greek1
Street3
Raven1
Nest2
Seville1
Veil3
Market2
Morris4
Wardour1
London2
Camden3
Oxford1
Regent1
Park1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Met1
Pol1
Edwardian1
Spanish1
Guards1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Veil"
6"Market"
7"Morris"
8"Camden"
9"Saint"
10"Christopher"
11"Pol"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Nest"
4"Seville"
5"Wardour"
6"London"
7"Oxford"
8"Regent"
9"Edwardian"
globalScore1
windowScore1
95.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite pin down"
1"looked like human skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.715
wordCount1399
matches
0"No exit but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"cross that threshold"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean60.83
std31.1
cv0.511
sampleLengths
0103
1123
298
384
474
5102
6103
757
878
987
1070
1148
1240
1342
1421
1556
1638
1740
1844
1935
2014
2113
2229
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs268
matches
0"wasn't saving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount11
flaggedSentences27
totalSentences122
ratio0.221
matches
0"Forty-one years old, with eighteen on the job, and still her body moved with that old military precision—knees high, arms pumping, sharp jaw set like flint."
1"She'd been watching the place for weeks, ever since whispers linked it to her clique of suspects—the ones peddling shadows she couldn't quite pin down."
2"Herrera wasn't the kingpin; he was the fixer, the off-books medic with a Seville accent and a scar snaking his left forearm from some knife-happy night."
3"Soho's pulse throbbed—drunken laughter spilling from pubs, the sizzle of late-night kebabs—but up ahead, Herrera was a shadow weaving toward the fringes, toward Camden's underbelly."
4"He glanced back once—warm brown eyes flashing under short curly dark hair, olive skin slick with rain—and veered north, into the labyrinth of backstreets that snaked toward Regent's Park."
5"She gained ground; he was fast, but she was relentless, boots pounding cobbles worn smooth by centuries of flight."
6"Camden's vibe shifted the air even before the lights changed—punk graffiti clawing brick walls, the faint thump of bass from hidden clubs."
7"Her sources had nailed it—an abandoned station beneath Camden, shifting every full moon like some cursed flea market for the unnatural."
8"No badges, no guns; cross that threshold, and Met Pol vanished."
9"Morris had vanished in a place like this—supernatural origins, the report said, unexplained circumstances."
10"No time; they'd quarantine the site, flood it with suits who didn't understand the shadows."
11"Follow, and she risked everything—life, career, sanity."
12"Full moon tomorrow; market moves tonight."
13"The air thickened—smoke, incense, rot undercut by ozone magic."
14"Vendors hawked wares— a crone with eyes like boiled eggs peddling dream-thief dust; a horned thing in a trench coat whispering curses for hire."
15"Enchanted goods glowed; banned alchemies bubbled."
16"No uniforms here; her coat marked her, but the rain masked her scent."
17"There—Herrera, at a stall piled with bone talismans."
18"His scar gleamed under lantern light as he handed over a pouch, received a small, etched femur—the bone token."
19"The crowd parted uneasily; mortals were rare, cops rarer."
20"Her mind raced: Morris's file flashed—disemboweled in a market raid, body dumped topside like trash."
21"It bellowed, swinging wild; she rolled under, firing two suppressed rounds into its thigh—boom muffled by the din."
22"\"Herrera! You're nicked—clique's done!\" A stall exploded beside her—alchemical firebomb from a fleeing witch."
23"Circles of power glowed on the floor, auctioning artifacts—a cursed dagger pulsing red, a mirror showing alternate deaths."
24"The auctioneer—a serpentine fae—hissed laughter."
25"Herrera paused amid them, face twisted—fear?"
26"The thriller tightened its grip; London above forgot her, but the Veil remembered."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount647
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"under short curly dark hair,"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02472952086553323
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010819165378670788
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean11.47
std7.15
cv0.623
sampleLengths
022
128
226
327
424
525
626
717
83
910
1013
115
1216
1321
1415
1521
1625
1725
1811
1929
2019
2113
2222
2322
2417
2518
2615
2711
2819
293
3021
314
3211
336
3415
3510
364
372
381
3914
409
4113
423
4311
4415
459
467
4715
484
496
87.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5245901639344263
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners64
31.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"Too late for running."
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences107
matches
0"She sprinted through the neon"
1"He'd slipped out of The"
2"She'd been watching the place"
3"Her voice cut through the"
4"He darted left into a"
5"She followed, coat flapping like"
6"Her lungs burned as they"
7"He glanced back once—warm brown"
8"She gained ground; he was"
9"She saw it catch the"
10"He dropped suddenly into an"
11"Her sources had nailed it—an"
12"She crouched, peering into the"
13"Her watch ticked: 11:52."
14"She holstered her doubts, drew"
15"She crept forward, pistol low,"
16"His scar gleamed under lantern"
17"He pocketed it, glanced around,"
18"She moved, weaving through the"
19"it growled, hand the size"
ratio0.28
53.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences107
matches
0"She sprinted through the neon"
1"Brown eyes narrowed against the"
2"He'd slipped out of The"
3"She'd been watching the place"
4"Herrera wasn't the kingpin; he"
5"A bone token?"
6"Intel said that's what you"
7"Harlow wouldn't let it slide."
8"Her voice cut through the"
9"He darted left into a"
10"She followed, coat flapping like"
11"The city blurred: black-and-white photos"
12"Soho's pulse throbbed—drunken laughter spilling"
13"Her lungs burned as they"
14"Cars hissed past, tires hydroplaning,"
15"He glanced back once—warm brown"
16"She gained ground; he was"
17"Camden's vibe shifted the air"
18"Herrera ducked under a scaffold,"
19"She saw it catch the"
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rain hammered the Soho pavements like a thousand tiny fists, turning the gutters into raging torrents that snatched at Harlow Quinn's boots."
1"He darted left into a narrow alley off Wardour Street, splashing through puddles that mirrored the sodium lamps in fractured gold."
2"Her lungs burned as they hit Oxford Street, the rain sheeting sideways now, driven by a gust that clawed at her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair."
3"He glanced back once—warm brown eyes flashing under short curly dark hair, olive skin slick with rain—and veered north, into the labyrinth of backstreets that s…"
4"Echoes drifted up: muffled voices, the clink of glass, a low chant that raised the hackles on her neck."
5"No time; they'd quarantine the site, flood it with suits who didn't understand the shadows."
6"She moved, weaving through the throng, shoulder-checking a pixie that buzzed curses in her wake."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Bidders turned, eyes gleaming hunger"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"A vendor hissed (hiss)"
1"it growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.364
79.7333%