| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The voice coiled around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 95.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1040 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1040 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "grave" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "unraveling" | | 15 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 35 | | markdownWords | 44 | | totalWords | 1035 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "meet me at the grove, midnight, bring the stone" | | 1 | "I" | | 2 | "urgent" | | 3 | "wet" | | 4 | "shifting" | | 5 | "Rory. Think." | | 6 | "inside" | | 7 | "wrongness" | | 8 | "everywhere" | | 9 | "it" | | 10 | "twitched" | | 11 | "doors" | | 12 | "breathe" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "she" | | 15 | "She." | | 16 | "there" | | 17 | "smiled" | | 18 | "wrongness" | | 19 | "shift" | | 20 | "door" | | 21 | "run" | | 22 | "inside" | | 23 | "wrongness" | | 24 | "lean" | | 25 | "screamed" | | 26 | "unraveling" | | 27 | "thing" | | 28 | "wrong" | | 29 | "smiling" | | 30 | "thing" | | 31 | "really" | | 32 | "run" | | 33 | "thing" | | 34 | "split" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.73% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 925 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.41 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Aurora | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Jennifer" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.797 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.966 | | wordCount | 1035 | | matches | | 0 | "not real,” Aurora said, but her voice lacked conviction" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 27.97 | | std | 22.88 | | cv | 0.818 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 93 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 80 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 5 |
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| 92.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "been slipped" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "been dipped" | | 3 | "was stretched" |
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| 40.32% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "was beginning" | | 1 | "wasn’t looking" | | 2 | "was pulsing" | | 3 | "was opening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "Should have ignored the note tucked into her delivery bag—*meet me at the grove, midnight, bring the stone*—signed only with a single, jagged *I*." | | 1 | "The air smelled wrong—earth and something older, something *wet*, like moss on a grave." | | 2 | "Then—movement." | | 3 | "The trees seemed to lean in, their shadows stretching longer, longer—" | | 4 | "The pendant’s glow flared, casting eerie light on the standing stones at the grove’s edge—ancient oaks carved into shapes that made her stomach clench." | | 5 | "Aurora flinched, whipping her head around—but there was nothing there." | | 6 | "She had to *run*—" | | 7 | "The standing stones groaned, their carvings glowing brighter, brighter—" | | 8 | "She had to *run*—" |
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| 95.53% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 931 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.045112781954887216 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0053705692803437165 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 8.91 | | std | 5.93 | | cv | 0.665 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 38.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.25862068965517243 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the stone, humming like" | | 1 | "Too fast to be the" | | 2 | "Too deliberate to be an" | | 3 | "Just the grove, just the" | | 4 | "Just the grove, just the" | | 5 | "Just the grove, just the" |
| | ratio | 0.061 | |
| 81.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She should have left it" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 3 | "It clung, thick and unnatural," | | 4 | "She swallowed hard, fingers tightening" | | 5 | "She flexed her fingers, half-expecting" | | 6 | "It was *inside* her head." | | 7 | "She whirled, but the path" | | 8 | "Her voice cracked" | | 9 | "She clutched it, nails digging" | | 10 | "It wasn’t in front of" | | 11 | "It was *everywhere*." | | 12 | "She barely kept from falling," | | 13 | "They weren’t just stones." | | 14 | "They were *doors*." | | 15 | "she whispered, voice raw" | | 16 | "*She.* The woman in the" | | 17 | "She turned back to the" | | 18 | "She took a step back," | | 19 | "She had to get out." |
| | ratio | 0.347 | |
| 36.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pulsed, its crimson" | | 3 | "She should have left it" | | 4 | "The grove was supposed to" | | 5 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "The path ahead twisted between" | | 7 | "The air smelled wrong—earth and" | | 8 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 9 | "It clung, thick and unnatural," | | 10 | "A sound cut through the" | | 11 | "Aurora froze, her pulse hammering" | | 12 | "The pendant’s glow flickered, casting" | | 13 | "She swallowed hard, fingers tightening" | | 14 | "The pendant pulsed again, brighter" | | 15 | "A warmth spread up her" | | 16 | "She flexed her fingers, half-expecting" | | 17 | "A flicker at the edge" | | 18 | "Aurora’s breath hitched as she" | | 19 | "The trees seemed to lean" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand back, fingers curling as if the silver chain had scalded her." | | 1 | "She barely kept from falling, her fingers scrambling for purchase." | | 2 | "The pendant’s glow flared, casting eerie light on the standing stones at the grove’s edge—ancient oaks carved into shapes that made her stomach clench." | | 3 | "The one in the center was pulsing, its carvings glowing faintly, like veins beneath skin." | | 4 | "Just the grove, just the *wrongness*, just the way the trees seemed to *lean* in, their branches twisting like fingers reaching for her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, voice raw" | | 1 | "Aurora said, but her voice lacked conviction" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the voice murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |