Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8PME2YZ6KPNS3PTG4T53C

Run Details

Duration:
12.6s
Cost:
$0.000476
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before the second knock even finished echoing through the narrow hallway. Rory stood there, her bright blue eyes widening as she took in the man framed in the doorway—Lucien Moreau, looking every inch the polished devil he was in his charcoal suit, the amber and black of his heterochromatic gaze locking onto hers like a challenge. “You,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her pulse jumped. “You,” he countered, stepping inside without invitation, his cane tapping once against the warped floorboards. The scent of his cologne—something dark and citrusy—lingered in the air, familiar and infuriating. “Still locking your doors like the world’s out to get you.” Rory didn’t move. She didn’t slam the door in his face, though every instinct screamed at her to. Instead, she crossed her arms, the small crescent scar on her left wrist peeking out from beneath the rolled sleeve of her oversized sweater. “What do you want, Lucien?” He didn’t answer right away. His gaze flicked past her, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—the stacks of books, the half-empty teacups, the tabby cat Ptolemy curled on the couch like he owned the place. “I need your help.” A laugh escaped her before she could stop it, sharp and disbelieving. “My help? After everything?” His jaw tightened. “After everything,” he echoed, voice low. “But that’s not why I’m here.” Rory stepped back, not because she wanted to let him in, but because the hallway was too damn narrow. The flat smelled like old paper and Earl Grey, the same as it always had, but now it was mixed with the sharp edge of his presence. “Then why?” Lucien exhaled through his nose, the first sign of impatience. “Because I need you to trust me again.” The words hit like a physical blow. Trust. The one thing he’d shattered months ago when he’d walked away without explanation, leaving her to pick up the pieces of her life in London—pieces that had included running from Evan, from her own mistakes, from the way Lucien had made her feel like she could be more than just Rory Carter, the girl from Cardiff with a chip on her shoulder. She swallowed hard. “You lost that right.” His cane tapped again, a slow, deliberate rhythm. “I know.” Silence stretched between them, thick and heavy. Rory’s fingers twitched at her sides. She wanted to scream. She wanted to throw something. She wanted to forget the way his hands had felt against her skin, the way his voice had dropped when he’d whispered her name like it was a secret. Instead, she said, “Get out.” Lucien didn’t move. “Not until you hear me out.” “There’s nothing you could say that would make this okay.” “Maybe not.” His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist, just for a second, before snapping back to her face. “But I can’t do this alone.” Rory’s breath hitched. She hated that he saw it—that he *knew*. Hated that he still had the power to unravel her like this. “What is it?” she asked, voice barely above a whisper. His expression darkened. “A job. Dangerous. And it needs someone with your skills.” She scoffed. “My skills? Last I checked, I was a delivery driver with a degree in Pre-Law I’ll never use.” “You’re smarter than that.” His tone was quiet, almost gentle. “And you’re brave. Even when you don’t want to be.” Rory’s chest ached. She remembered the way he’d looked at her in that dimly lit bar in Soho, the way he’d made her feel like she could take on the world. She remembered the way he’d kissed her like she was the only thing that mattered. And then she remembered the way he’d left. “No,” she said firmly. “I’m not doing this.” Lucien’s cane tapped once, twice. “You don’t have a choice.” Her head snapped up. “Excuse me?” “You’re already involved.” His voice was steel. “And if you don’t help, people are going to get hurt.” Rory’s stomach twisted. She knew that tone. Knew the look in his eyes. He wasn’t bluffing. Ptolemy chose that moment to stretch, his tail flicking lazily before he yawned, revealing his pink tongue. Rory’s fingers dug into her arms. “What people?” Lucien hesitated. “Eva.” The name hit her like a punch to the gut. Eva, her best friend, the one who’d dragged her to London in the first place, the one who’d kept her sane when Rory had been too broken to do it herself. “What did you do?” “I didn’t do anything.” His voice was rough. “But someone else did. And they’re coming for her.” Rory’s mind raced. “Why me?” “Because you’re the only one who can get to them first.” She wanted to refuse. Wanted to slam the door in his face and never look back. But the fear in his eyes—real, raw—stopped her. “Fine,” she said, the word tasting like ash. “But we’re doing this my way.” Lucien’s lips quirked, just for a second. “Always so stubborn.” Rory crossed her arms tighter. “And you always were a pain in my ass.” He chuckled, low and warm, and for a second, it was like no time had passed at all. Like they weren’t standing in Eva’s cramped flat with the weight of the world pressing down on them. Then his expression sobered. “Thank you.” Rory looked away, her throat tight. “Don’t thank me yet. We’re not out of this yet.” Lucien’s cane tapped once against the floor. “I know.” She exhaled, long and slow. “So. What’s the plan?” His gaze locked onto hers, intense and unyielding. “We start by trusting each other again.” Rory’s heart pounded. She wanted to believe him. Wanted to believe that this wasn’t just another game, another way for him to manipulate her. But she couldn’t. Not yet. “Fine,” she said again, voice steadier this time. “But if you hurt me again, Lucien, I swear to God—” He held up a hand. “I know.” She studied him for a long moment, searching for the lie, the trick. But all she saw was the truth—raw and painful and undeniable. “Alright,” she said finally. “Let’s get this over with.” Lucien’s lips curled into a slow, dangerous smile. “That’s my girl.” Rory’s breath caught. She hated that he still had that effect on her. Hated that, despite everything, she still wanted to reach out and touch him. Instead, she turned away, grabbing her jacket from the back of the chair. “Don’t call me that.” “Why not?” His voice was soft, almost teasing. “It’s true.” She didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The way her pulse jumped, the way her skin prickled with awareness—it said enough. Lucien followed her out into the hallway, his cane tapping in rhythm with her racing heart. The door clicked shut behind them, sealing them in again, just like old times. Only this time, the stakes were higher. And this time, Rory wasn’t sure she’d survive.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:33:51.186Z" 2/20/2026, 7:33:51 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
86.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said firmly [firmly]"
1"she said again [again]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.189
leniency0.377
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.113
91.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"unravel"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"pulse"
2"familiar"
3"flicked"
4"echoed"
5"shattered"
6"silence"
7"unravel"
8"whisper"
9"firmly"
10"stomach"
11"raced"
12"weight"
13"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1160
ratio0.001
matches
0"knew"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount905
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien10
Moreau1
Eva3
Ptolemy2
Rory16
Earl1
Grey1
London2
Evan1
Carter1
Cardiff1
Soho1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
5"Earl"
6"Grey"
7"Evan"
8"Carter"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.616
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like old paper and Earl Grey, the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1160
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount7
totalSentences130
matches
0"hated that he"
1"Hated that he"
2"knew that tone"
3"chose that moment"
4"believe that this"
5"hated that he had that effect"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean19.33
std14.95
cv0.773
sampleLengths
060
112
240
347
440
516
615
748
818
970
107
1110
1251
135
149
1510
1627
1723
1810
1913
2020
2120
2246
238
248
2510
266
2718
2816
2925
303
3145
3217
335
3411
3524
3614
3710
3814
3936
406
4116
429
439
4415
4524
463
472
4819
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"was mixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs177
matches
0"wasn’t bluffing"
1"weren’t standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences130
ratio0.062
matches
0"Rory stood there, her bright blue eyes widening as she took in the man framed in the doorway—Lucien Moreau, looking every inch the polished devil he was in his charcoal suit, the amber and black of his heterochromatic gaze locking onto hers like a challenge."
1"The scent of his cologne—something dark and citrusy—lingered in the air, familiar and infuriating."
2"His gaze flicked past her, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—the stacks of books, the half-empty teacups, the tabby cat Ptolemy curled on the couch like he owned the place."
3"The one thing he’d shattered months ago when he’d walked away without explanation, leaving her to pick up the pieces of her life in London—pieces that had included running from Evan, from her own mistakes, from the way Lucien had made her feel like she could be more than just Rory Carter, the girl from Cardiff with a chip on her shoulder."
4"She hated that he saw it—that he *knew*."
5"But the fear in his eyes—real, raw—stopped her."
6"But all she saw was the truth—raw and painful and undeniable."
7"The way her pulse jumped, the way her skin prickled with awareness—it said enough."
92.01% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount916
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04912663755458515
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007641921397379912
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean8.92
std8.47
cv0.949
sampleLengths
015
145
212
315
414
511
63
715
824
95
105
1131
124
1312
144
153
166
176
1819
1927
202
2110
228
237
241
2562
263
274
288
292
307
316
324
335
3429
355
363
376
3810
3921
406
413
428
4312
4410
453
4610
472
4818
4910
52.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3384615384615385
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences87
matches
0"Instead, she crossed her arms,"
1"Instead, she said,"
2"Then his expression sobered."
3"Instead, she turned away, grabbing"
4"Only this time, the stakes"
ratio0.057
40.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences87
matches
0"she said, her voice steady"
1"he countered, stepping inside without"
2"She didn’t slam the door"
3"He didn’t answer right away."
4"His gaze flicked past her,"
5"His jaw tightened."
6"he echoed, voice low"
7"She swallowed hard."
8"His cane tapped again, a"
9"She wanted to scream."
10"She wanted to throw something."
11"She wanted to forget the"
12"His gaze flicked to the"
13"She hated that he saw"
14"she asked, voice barely above"
15"His expression darkened."
16"His tone was quiet, almost"
17"She remembered the way he’d"
18"She remembered the way he’d"
19"she said firmly"
ratio0.448
51.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences87
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Rory stood there, her bright"
2"she said, her voice steady"
3"he countered, stepping inside without"
4"The scent of his cologne—something"
5"Rory didn’t move."
6"She didn’t slam the door"
7"He didn’t answer right away."
8"His gaze flicked past her,"
9"A laugh escaped her before"
10"His jaw tightened."
11"he echoed, voice low"
12"Rory stepped back, not because"
13"The flat smelled like old"
14"Lucien exhaled through his nose,"
15"The words hit like a"
16"The one thing he’d shattered"
17"She swallowed hard."
18"His cane tapped again, a"
19"Silence stretched between them, thick"
ratio0.816
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The one thing he’d shattered months ago when he’d walked away without explanation, leaving her to pick up the pieces of her life in London—pieces that had inclu…"
1"Ptolemy chose that moment to stretch, his tail flicking lazily before he yawned, revealing his pink tongue."
2"Lucien followed her out into the hallway, his cane tapping in rhythm with her racing heart."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the way her pulse jumped"
1"he echoed, voice low"
2"she asked, voice barely above a whisper"
3"she said again, voice steadier this time"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.264
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.6963%