Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8PS3H8R1RN5BYMYY7TMYT

Run Details

Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.000409
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Grove smelled wrong. Rory Carter stepped through the standing stones, her boots sinking into damp earth that clung to her soles like it didn’t want to let go. The air was thick, heavy with the scent of damp moss and something else—something metallic, like old blood left to rust. The pendant at her throat pulsed once, twice, a faint warmth against her skin. She ignored it. The path ahead should have been clear. She’d memorised the route from the old maps, the ones Eva had smuggled out of the library before they’d burned them all. But now, the trees leaned in too close, their gnarled branches twisting like fingers. The wildflowers that usually carpeted the ground were sparse here, their petals curled inward as if recoiling. Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, her fingers brushing the cold edge of the knife tucked inside. She hadn’t brought it for this. She’d come for answers, not to fight. A twig snapped. She froze. The sound came from the left—too sharp, too deliberate. Not the wind. Not an animal. Her breath hitched. The Grove was supposed to be empty. Isolated. But the wrongness coiled in her gut, tight and suffocating. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud in the sudden silence. Nothing. She exhaled, slow, and turned left, stepping onto the path. The trees here were older, their bark blackened in patches, like something had clawed at them. The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces slick with moisture. She reached out, her palm pressing against the cold stone. The pendant flared, a pulse of heat that made her flinch. “You shouldn’t be here.” The voice wasn’t a voice. It was a whisper, slithering into her ear from nowhere and everywhere at once. Rory spun, her heart hammering. The path behind her was empty. The trees were still. Too still. “Who said that?” She kept her tone steady, but her pulse roared in her ears. Silence. Then—footsteps. Not hers. She whirled, her knife half-drawn before she remembered she wasn’t supposed to be armed. The blade stayed sheathed. The footsteps stopped. The air thickened, pressing in around her like a physical weight. Her skin prickled. “Show yourself,” she demanded, though she already knew it was useless. A rustle. A shift in the shadows. Something moved at the edge of her vision—a flicker of motion, too fast to be human. Rory’s breath came shallow. She backed up, her heel catching on a root. The ground tilted beneath her, and for a second, she was fallingnot down, but *sideways*, as if the world had tilted on its axis. She hit the earth hard, her palms scraping against damp leaves. The pendant burned now, searing her skin. She fumbled at the chain, yanking it over her head. The moment the crimson stone left her throat, the world snapped back into place. She gasped, rolling onto her back, staring up at the canopy. The trees were wrong. Their branches weren’t branches anymore. They were limbs, twisted and elongated, fingers stretching towards the sky. The flowers at their feet weren’t flowers. They were eyes—dozens of them, black and glossy, blinking slowly in the dim light. Rory scrambled to her feet, her legs unsteady. The Grove wasn’t just a place. It was *alive*. And it had been watching her. A sound cut through the silence—a wet, clicking noise, like bones snapping together. She turned, her breath ragged, and saw them. Figures. Not people. Not quite. Their forms were blurred at the edges, shifting like smoke given shape. Their skin was too pale, stretched too tight over jagged bones. Their mouths were sewn shut with dark thread, but their eyes—oh, their eyes were wide and black, reflecting nothing. One of them tilted its head. Rory’s blood turned to ice. She didn’t wait. She ran. The path twisted ahead, the standing stones looming like sentinels. She didn’t dare look back. Her lungs burned, her legs ached, but she didn’t stop. The clicking grew louder, closer. The air thickened, pressing against her skin like sticky fingers. She skidded around a bend—and froze. The standing stones weren’t stones anymore. They were *doors*. Three of them, standing open, their surfaces pulsing with the same crimson light as the pendant. The wrongness radiated from them, a living thing, hungry and waiting. The figures were there too, their sewn mouths stretching into grins as they advanced. Rory’s mind raced. She’d come for answers. She’d come for *him*. But the Grove had other plans. The pendant lay in the dirt at her feet, its glow casting long, writhing shadows. She snatched it up, her fingers closing around the cold stone. The moment she did, the world *shifted*. The figures lunged. She didn’t scream. She didn’t have time. Rory Carter turned and ran straight through the nearest standing stone—and didn’t come out the other side.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:33:55.962Z" 2/20/2026, 7:33:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
93.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount817
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount817
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"looming"
count1
11
word"sentinels"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"loomed"
4"pulse"
5"whisper"
6"footsteps"
7"weight"
8"flicker"
9"searing"
10"looming"
11"sentinels"
12"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"world had stopped"
count1
highlights
0"as if the world had tilted"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords806
ratio0.006
matches
0"sideways"
1"alive"
2"doors"
3"him"
4"shifted"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount796
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove4
Carter2
Eva1
Silence1
Rory8
persons
0"Grove"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Silence"
globalScore0.997
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if recoiling"
75.93% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.241
wordCount806
matches
0"not down, but *sideways*, as if the world had tilted on its axis"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean19.66
std19.4
cv0.987
sampleLengths
04
163
260
331
43
52
636
710
81
957
104
1136
1215
131
141
152
1635
1711
187
1953
2053
214
2237
2323
2421
251
2646
276
285
295
3040
316
326
333
3441
3511
366
3733
383
397
4017
94.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"was supposed"
1"were blurred"
2"were sewn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs148
matches
0"was falling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences99
ratio0.101
matches
0"The air was thick, heavy with the scent of damp moss and something else—something metallic, like old blood left to rust."
1"The sound came from the left—too sharp, too deliberate."
2"Then—footsteps."
3"Something moved at the edge of her vision—a flicker of motion, too fast to be human."
4"The ground tilted beneath her, and for a second, she was falling—not down, but *sideways*, as if the world had tilted on its axis."
5"They were eyes—dozens of them, black and glossy, blinking slowly in the dim light."
6"A sound cut through the silence—a wet, clicking noise, like bones snapping together."
7"Their mouths were sewn shut with dark thread, but their eyes—oh, their eyes were wide and black, reflecting nothing."
8"She skidded around a bend—and froze."
9"Rory Carter turned and ran straight through the nearest standing stone—and didn’t come out the other side."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount807
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tight over jagged bones."
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03593556381660471
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0024783147459727386
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean8.14
std5.56
cv0.683
sampleLengths
04
125
221
314
43
57
622
714
817
918
106
117
123
132
149
153
163
173
187
191
2010
2110
221
2310
2416
2510
2610
2711
284
295
3014
315
326
334
342
3515
361
371
382
3914
404
413
4211
433
4411
452
465
4716
484
499
32.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.24242424242424243
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.21% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences86
matches
0"She ignored it."
1"She’d memorised the route from"
2"She hadn’t brought it for"
3"She’d come for answers, not"
4"Her breath hitched."
5"Her voice sounded too loud"
6"She exhaled, slow, and turned"
7"She reached out, her palm"
8"It was a whisper, slithering"
9"She kept her tone steady,"
10"She whirled, her knife half-drawn"
11"Her skin prickled."
12"she demanded, though she already"
13"She backed up, her heel"
14"She hit the earth hard,"
15"She fumbled at the chain,"
16"She gasped, rolling onto her"
17"Their branches weren’t branches anymore."
18"They were limbs, twisted and"
19"They were eyes—dozens of them,"
ratio0.407
6.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences86
matches
0"The Grove smelled wrong."
1"Rory Carter stepped through the"
2"The air was thick, heavy"
3"The pendant at her throat"
4"She ignored it."
5"The path ahead should have"
6"She’d memorised the route from"
7"The wildflowers that usually carpeted"
8"Rory adjusted the strap of"
9"She hadn’t brought it for"
10"She’d come for answers, not"
11"A twig snapped."
12"The sound came from the"
13"Her breath hitched."
14"The Grove was supposed to"
15"Her voice sounded too loud"
16"She exhaled, slow, and turned"
17"The trees here were older,"
18"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
19"She reached out, her palm"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The wildflowers that usually carpeted the ground were sparse here, their petals curled inward as if recoiling."
1"The pendant flared, a pulse of heat that made her flinch."
2"She gasped, rolling onto her back, staring up at the canopy."
3"Three of them, standing open, their surfaces pulsing with the same crimson light as the pendant."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She kept, but her pulse roared in her ears"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
67.4100%