| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.35 | | leniency | 0.7 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1088 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1088 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "intricate" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "anticipation" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 78.05% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a jolt" | | 1 | "d with anticipation" | | 2 | "y with warmth" | | 3 | "was afraid" |
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| 42.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1077 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.61% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 920 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.85 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Aurora | 17 | | Isolde | 6 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Belphegor | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Belphegor" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.576 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to swallow the light around them" | | 1 | "not quite still, not quite moving" | | 2 | "not quite moving" | | 3 | "smelled like spiced wine and roasted meats" | | 4 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 5 | "quite human, not quite demon, but something in between" | | 6 | "not quite demon, but something in between" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.929 | | wordCount | 1077 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite demon, but something in between" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 31.68 | | std | 23.44 | | cv | 0.74 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 69 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 71 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks like a whisper." | | 1 | "The world here wasn’t just different—it was *wrong* in a way that made her pulse quicken." | | 2 | "The trees grew taller, their leaves shimmering with colors Aurora hadn’t known existed—deep violets, electric blues, the kind of greens that made her eyes ache." | | 3 | "She could hear things she couldn’t explain—soft chimes, distant laughter, the rustle of unseen wings." | | 4 | "It reflected the sky above, but the sky here was different—streaked with gold and silver, like a painting come to life." | | 5 | "The moment her skin touched it, she felt a jolt—like electricity, but softer, warmer." | | 6 | "The world beneath the surface was different—darker, but not in a way that made her fear." | | 7 | "And in the distance, she saw a figure—tall, regal, watching her." | | 8 | "The water rippled, and for a moment, she saw glimpses of something else—something that wasn’t quite human, not quite demon, but something in between." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 930 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03333333333333333 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005376344086021506 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 12.82 | | std | 6.77 | | cv | 0.528 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 35.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.23809523809523808 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw it." | | 1 | "Then the reflection shifted, and" | | 2 | "Then the water pulled her" |
| | ratio | 0.046 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 1 | "She wore no clothes, her" | | 2 | "she said, her voice a" | | 3 | "She could hear things she" | | 4 | "It reflected the sky above," | | 5 | "It was warm, and the" | | 6 | "She could see the edges" | | 7 | "they said, their voice a" | | 8 | "She thought of Eva, of" | | 9 | "She thought of the blade" | | 10 | "She took a breath." | | 11 | "they said, their voice a" | | 12 | "She took a step forward," | | 13 | "She thought of the Heartstone" | | 14 | "She thought of the blade" | | 15 | "She took another step forward." | | 16 | "She thought of the promise" | | 17 | "She took one last breath." |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 13.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed around" | | 3 | "Nyx shifted between solid and" | | 4 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 5 | "Aurora didn’t need to hear" | | 6 | "The world here wasn’t just" | | 7 | "Isolde stood at the center" | | 8 | "She wore no clothes, her" | | 9 | "she said, her voice a" | | 10 | "Aurora exhaled, her breath fogging" | | 11 | "Isolde’s gaze flicked to Nyx," | | 12 | "Nyx cut in, their form" | | 13 | "Aurora clenched her fists." | | 14 | "Isolde’s fingers traced the bark" | | 15 | "Nyx reappeared, solid this time," | | 16 | "Aurora followed them, her fingers" | | 17 | "The moment she touched it," | | 18 | "The deeper they went, the" | | 19 | "The trees grew taller, their" |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks like a whisper." | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss, the silver chain of her Heartstone pendant catching the dim light filtering through the c…" | | 2 | "She wore no clothes, her skin pale as moonlight, her hands resting on the ground as if she were already part of the earth." | | 3 | "The moment she touched it, the air around her shimmered faintly, as if the world itself was holding its breath." | | 4 | "The trees grew taller, their leaves shimmering with colors Aurora hadn’t known existed—deep violets, electric blues, the kind of greens that made her eyes ache." | | 5 | "The air grew warmer, thick with the scent of blooming flowers that didn’t exist in the mortal world." | | 6 | "Then the reflection shifted, and she saw Nyx’s form flickering at the edge of the pool, their eyes glowing faintly violet." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice a melody of riddles" | | 1 | "they said, their voice a whisper in her ear" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.3 | |