Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8RG55QWWVEJGFCKM4NS1M

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Duration:
1m 34s
Cost:
$0.007753
Provider:
Seed

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Door snaps open before Rory can twist the third deadbolt closed. She drops the armful of Eva’s research scrolls, and they unfurl across the cramped hallway floor like tattered banners. Ptolemy, the tabby cat napping on a stack of history tomes, skitters behind a bookshelf, his claws scrabbling at paper. Lucien stands in the doorway, his slicked-back platinum hair catching the faint neon glow from the curry house below. His tailored charcoal suit fits like a second skin, and his ivory-handled cane taps once against the doorframe—a quiet warning. Curry fumes and cardamom wrap around him, clashing with his sandalwood and smoke cologne. Rory’s blue eyes lock on his heterochromatic pair, one amber, one black, and her left wrist tenses; the small crescent scar there catches the light as she curls her fingers around a crumpled scroll. “What are you doing here?” “Protecting the one person Evan can’t find.” “You protected yourself last time.” “I had a debt to settle. One that ties Evan to Avaros.” She steps over the scrolls to block the doorway, her shoulder pressing against the chipped wooden frame. Behind her, the flat’s main room bursts with books stacked to the ceiling—mythic lore, legal textbooks, Eva’s handwritten notes scrawled on parchment. A half-empty mug of chai sits on a rickety side table, its spiced steam long faded. She’d fled to Eva’s place that morning after spotting a man in a black hood loitering outside Silas’ bar, the same man who’d followed her on her delivery route for Golden Empress the day prior. The three deadbolts on Eva’s door had felt like a lifeline until Lucien’s arrival snapped it. Lucien pushes past her, his cane gliding over the scrolls without damaging them—his fixer’s precision. He pauses to glance at a scroll covered in twisted runes, his amber eye narrowing. “Eva’s digging into demon pacts. Foolish.” “She’s the only one who believes me about Evan’s new friends.” “Friends is a kind term for the Avarosian thugs he’s hired.” Rory’s jaw tightens. Six months prior, Evan had tracked her to London, breaking into her flat above Silas’ bar while she was out delivering dumplings. Lucien had promised to set up a ward against supernatural intruders, then vanished without a trace. She’d spent three days hiding in Eva’s linen closet, listening to Evan’s shouts echo through the street, before he’d finally left. She’d scraped the broken ward remnants off her windowsill later, her scar throbbing as she pried splinters from her fingers. “You left me to clean up your unfinished wards.” “The wards weren’t unfinished. They were sabotaged.” “By who?” “Evan’s new patron. A demon I owe a blood debt to.” She grabs a heavy leather-bound book from the nearest stack, her left wrist twisting as she lifts it—the crescent scar stings. She sets the book down roughly on the side table, making the chai mug rattle. “Why tell me now?” “Because the blood debt’s paid. And Evan’s planning to kidnap you to seal his pact.” Lucien taps his cane twice against the floor, and the top of the ivory handle twists slightly—a faint glint of the hidden blade catches Rory’s eye. She’s seen him use it once before, to cut through a demon’s tentacle outside a Camden occult shop, but he’d never admitted to its existence until now. His black eye flickers to her scar, and for a split second, his measured demeanor cracks—his lip twitches, like he’s fighting the urge to reach for her wrist. “Evan’s not just a human abuser anymore. He’s trading souls for power.” “You expect me to trust the man who bailed when I needed him most?” “I didn’t bail. I was taken. The demon dragged me to Avaros to settle the debt. I only escaped last night.” Rory’s cool-headed facade wavers. She’d spent weeks wondering if Lucien had died, or if he’d simply grown bored of her problem. She’d checked Silas’ bar every night for a month, her delivery bag heavy with dumplings she’d forgotten to drop off, until Silas had told her to stop wasting her time. Now, standing in Eva’s cramped flat, she can smell the faint iron of Avaros on him—sharp, metallic, nothing like the London air she’s grown used to. She kneels to gather the scrolls, her fingers brushing Ptolemy’s soft tabby fur as he peeks out from behind the bookshelf. The scrolls are rough under her hands, their ink smudged from Eva’s constant handling. One scroll falls open to a page of demon summoning rituals, and she stares at the twisted symbols, her quick mind piecing together the connection between Evan’s new aggression and the lore Eva has been researching. “Eva’s been writing about soul pacts. She says they require a blood relative or a former partner to seal.” “Evan’s your former partner. That’s why he’s hunting you.” Lucien’s cane taps the floor again, a sharp, urgent sound. He glances at the window, his amber eye narrowing at the neon curry house sign flickering below. Rory follows his gaze, her heart skipping a beat when she spots a shadow moving across the sign—tall, broad, the same silhouette she’d seen loitering outside Silas’ bar. “Your delivery route was tracked. The man who followed you is one of the Avarosian thugs.” “I noticed. That’s why I came to Eva’s.” “Three deadbolts won’t stop a demon’s minion. They can phase through wood.” Rory’s fingers curl into a fist, her scar throbbing. She’d known the deadbolts were a temporary fix, but they’d given her a shred of control. Now, Lucien’s words strip that away, leaving her feeling as vulnerable as she’d felt when Evan had slammed her against a wall in Cardiff, his hand wrapped around her throat. A crash from the curry house below cuts through their conversation. Plates shatter, a man yells in Bengali, and the floorboards shake under Rory’s knees. She stands, her hand reaching for the leather-bound book again, and freezes when she hears Evan’s voice booming up through the floorboards—clear, menacing, impossible to mistake. “Rory! I know you’re up there!” Ptolemy hisses and scurries back behind the bookshelf. Lucien’s cane twists fully, the hidden blade sliding out with a soft snick. Rory’s blue eyes lock on his heterochromatic pair, and for a split second, she sees the fear in his black eye—the same fear she’d felt when she’d fled Cardiff, when she’d hidden in Eva’s linen closet, when she’d wondered if she’d ever be safe again. Then, the front door of the curry house slams open, and Evan’s footsteps thud up the stairs, his boots hitting each step with a deafening crash.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"facade"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"glint"
2"measured"
3"facade"
4"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1095
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount817
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Eva9
Lucien9
Evan6
London2
Camden1
Avaros1
Ptolemy3
Cardiff2
Bengali1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Bengali"
globalScore0.949
windowScore1
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a lifeline until Lucien’s arr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1095
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
58.74% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean68.44
std24.34
cv0.356
sampleLengths
050
187
229
3106
458
5111
655
781
847
977
1099
1155
1236
1355
1457
1592
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs130
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences66
ratio0.167
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit fits like a second skin, and his ivory-handled cane taps once against the doorframe—a quiet warning."
1"Rory’s blue eyes lock on his heterochromatic pair, one amber, one black, and her left wrist tenses; the small crescent scar there catches the light as she curls her fingers around a crumpled scroll."
2"Behind her, the flat’s main room bursts with books stacked to the ceiling—mythic lore, legal textbooks, Eva’s handwritten notes scrawled on parchment."
3"Lucien pushes past her, his cane gliding over the scrolls without damaging them—his fixer’s precision."
4"She grabs a heavy leather-bound book from the nearest stack, her left wrist twisting as she lifts it—the crescent scar stings."
5"Lucien taps his cane twice against the floor, and the top of the ivory handle twists slightly—a faint glint of the hidden blade catches Rory’s eye."
6"His black eye flickers to her scar, and for a split second, his measured demeanor cracks—his lip twitches, like he’s fighting the urge to reach for her wrist."
7"Now, standing in Eva’s cramped flat, she can smell the faint iron of Avaros on him—sharp, metallic, nothing like the London air she’s grown used to."
8"Rory follows his gaze, her heart skipping a beat when she spots a shadow moving across the sign—tall, broad, the same silhouette she’d seen loitering outside Silas’ bar."
9"She stands, her hand reaching for the leather-bound book again, and freezes when she hears Evan’s voice booming up through the floorboards—clear, menacing, impossible to mistake."
10"Rory’s blue eyes lock on his heterochromatic pair, and for a split second, she sees the fear in his black eye—the same fear she’d felt when she’d fled Cardiff, when she’d hidden in Eva’s linen closet, when she’d wondered if she’d ever be safe again."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount371
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.018867924528301886
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.005390835579514825
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean16.59
std8.81
cv0.531
sampleLengths
011
119
220
319
420
514
634
75
87
95
1012
1117
1222
1316
1435
1516
1615
1715
186
1911
2011
213
2222
2316
2421
2520
269
277
282
2911
3021
3115
324
3315
3426
3527
3628
3712
3814
3921
404
4117
4230
4326
4421
4514
4636
4719
489
4910
66.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.42424242424242425
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners28
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"Then, the front door of"
ratio0.023
71.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences43
matches
0"She drops the armful of"
1"His tailored charcoal suit fits"
2"She steps over the scrolls"
3"She’d fled to Eva’s place"
4"He pauses to glance at"
5"She’d spent three days hiding"
6"She’d scraped the broken ward"
7"She grabs a heavy leather-bound"
8"She sets the book down"
9"She’s seen him use it"
10"His black eye flickers to"
11"She’d spent weeks wondering if"
12"She kneels to gather the"
13"He glances at the window,"
14"She’d known the deadbolts were"
15"She stands, her hand reaching"
ratio0.372
29.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences43
matches
0"Door snaps open before Rory"
1"She drops the armful of"
2"Ptolemy, the tabby cat napping"
3"Lucien stands in the doorway,"
4"His tailored charcoal suit fits"
5"Curry fumes and cardamom wrap"
6"Rory’s blue eyes lock on"
7"She steps over the scrolls"
8"A half-empty mug of chai"
9"She’d fled to Eva’s place"
10"The three deadbolts on Eva’s"
11"Lucien pushes past her, his"
12"He pauses to glance at"
13"Rory’s jaw tightens."
14"Lucien had promised to set"
15"She’d spent three days hiding"
16"She’d scraped the broken ward"
17"She grabs a heavy leather-bound"
18"She sets the book down"
19"Lucien taps his cane twice"
ratio0.86
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences43
matches
0"Now, standing in Eva’s cramped"
1"Now, Lucien’s words strip that"
ratio0.047
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Ptolemy, the tabby cat napping on a stack of history tomes, skitters behind a bookshelf, his claws scrabbling at paper."
1"She stands, her hand reaching for the leather-bound book again, and freezes when she hears Evan’s voice booming up through the floorboards—clear, menacing, impo…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.6765%