Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8RNXQM0CXJP83KT2NS76R

Run Details

Duration:
35.1s
Cost:
$0.001868
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, the green neon sign outside buzzing faintly against the Soho drizzle. Rain slicked her black hair, plastering it to her neck in straight, dark strands. She shook off her jacket, the delivery bag from Golden Empress slung over one shoulder, empty now after a long shift dodging tourists and cabs. The bar's dim light wrapped around her like smoke, walls lined with faded maps of forgotten cities and photographs of stern faces from another era. A few patrons hunched over their pints at the scarred wooden tables, but the place felt quieter than usual, the jukebox silent for once. She scanned the room out of habit, her bright blue eyes sharp despite the fatigue pulling at her lids. That's when she spotted him at the far end of the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better days. Silas Blackwood. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low glow from the pendant lamps, and that neatly trimmed beard framed a face etched deeper than she remembered. He moved with the same deliberate grace, but the slight hitch in his left leg as he shifted weight betrayed the old injury. The silver signet ring glinted on his right hand, catching her eye like a signal flare. Her stomach twisted. Last time they'd crossed paths, she was nineteen, fresh out of Cardiff, wide-eyed and trailing her father's shadow in legal texts she hated. Silas had been the family friend, the one her dad called in for "advice" during late-night drinks—back when Brendan Carter still believed in straight paths and clean deals. That was six years ago, before Evan, before the flat above this very bar became her reluctant anchor. She'd avoided coming down here most nights, slipping in through the back stairs like a ghost. But tonight, the fridge hummed empty, and her wallet begged for mercy. Silas looked up, hazel eyes locking onto hers across the haze. His rag paused mid-swipe. For a beat, the bar's murmur faded—the clink of glasses, the low rumble of conversation from the corner booth. "Rory Carter," he said, voice gravelly, carrying over the distance without raising it. He set the glass down with a soft thud, leaning forward on the polished oak counter. "Didn't think ghosts favored the Nest these days." She froze mid-step, then forced her legs to move, crossing the worn floorboards that creaked under her boots. Up close, the lines around his eyes cut deeper, like rivers carving stone. The limp might hide in the dimness, but she saw the way he favored his right side, the knee that ended his field days. "Silas. Been a while." He nodded, once, sharp. Grabbed a lowball glass from under the bar and poured a measure of whiskey—her father's brand, neat, without asking. The amber liquid swirled as he slid it toward her. "Sit. You look like you could use it." Rory dropped her bag by the stool and slid onto it, the leather creaking. She wrapped her fingers around the glass, the coolness grounding her. The scar on her left wrist itched under the cuff of her sleeve, that old crescent from tumbling off her bike as a kid. Silas had been there that day, too, patching her up with a story about spies and secret codes to distract her from the sting. "Shift ran long. Yu-Fei's got half of London craving dim sum tonight." "Yu-Fei." He chuckled, low and dry, wiping his hands on his apron. The sound didn't reach his eyes. "Still slinging chow mein? Good man. Keeps the streets honest." She took a sip, the burn cutting through the chill in her bones. "Pays the rent. Speaking of, how's the upstairs holding? Pipes didn't burst again?" "Fair enough." He turned away, busying himself with restocking bottles on the shelf behind him. His back straightened a fraction, the authority in his frame undimmed by age. "Pipes are solid. Eva checked last month. Said you were burying yourself in books again, dodging the world." Eva. The name landed like a stone in still water. Her childhood friend, the one who'd dragged her to London after Evan’s fists left bruises she couldn’t hide. Rory’s grip tightened on the glass. "Eva talks too much. I'm fine. Just... busy." Silas faced her again, arms crossing over his broad chest. The signet ring tapped against the wood as he leaned in. "Busy. That's what Brendan used to say when he meant drowning. You call him lately?" The question hung, sharp as a blade. Rory’s gaze dropped to the whiskey, swirling it. Brendan, buried in his Cardiff office, chasing cases that never ended. Their last call had been clipped, her dodging questions about London, about the ex she’d left in pieces. "Not since Christmas. He's got his plate full. Mum's baking enough scones to feed the courts." He watched her, unblinking, hazel eyes probing like they used to when she'd sneak into his old flat as a teen, begging for stories of Prague shadows and coded messages. Back then, Silas was the uncle who wasn't, the one who slipped her a fiver and warned her about boys with too many secrets. Now, those eyes held ghosts of their own—operations gone sour, a knee shattered on cobblestones. "Plate full or not, time slips, Rory. Saw it chew up better men than him." She met his stare, the blue in her eyes flickering with the bar's amber light. "And you? Nest treating you right? No more trips to the back room for... meetings?" She nodded toward the bookshelf in the corner, the one that swung open on hidden hinges. Whispers around Soho said Silas still played the spymaster, even retired. His mouth quirked, not quite a smile. Grabbed a bottle of his own—gin, from the looks—and poured a finger into a tumbler. "Back room's for storage now. Maps and dust. Knee's got opinions about running anymore." He raised the glass in a half-toast, the limp evident as he shifted to sip. "But the Nest? She's steady. Patrons come for the pour, stay for the quiet." Rory traced the rim of her glass, the silence stretching. The bar's door swung open behind her, letting in a gust of wet air and two men in trench coats, laughing about a deal gone wet. They claimed a booth, voices low, but Silas's attention stayed on her. "Steady. That's more than most get." "You haven't." He set his tumbler down, the clink punctuating. "Changed your hair. Shorter. And that look—Cardiff girl’s gone hard." She laughed, short and brittle, running a hand through the damp strands. "Life does that. Yours too. Beard suits you. Hides the scars, maybe?" His fingers drummed once on the bar, the ring flashing. "Scars don't hide. They mark the miles." He paused, eyes narrowing. "Heard about Evan. Eva mentioned. You never said." The name hit like rain on pavement. Rory's jaw tightened, her free hand balling in her lap. She’d buried that chapter—fists and fractured mirrors, the flight north with nothing but a duffel and Eva's spare key. Silas had offered the flat above the Nest without a word, back when she first arrived, shaking and silent. But she hadn't seen him since, holing up like a wounded animal. "Nothing to say. Past is past." "Is it?" He leaned closer, voice dropping to that operative's timbre, all edges. "You live over my roof, Rory, but vanish like smoke. Thought we were friends once. The kind that don't let rot fester." She pushed the glass away, half-empty. The whiskey sat heavy now. "Friends. Right. You were Dad's shadow, Silas. The man with secrets who fixed my bike and spun tales. Then you disappeared to your ops, and I chased law books I hated. We all change." He straightened, the limp pulling as he rounded the bar, grabbing a stool to sit across from her. Up close, the grey in his hair threaded thicker, the beard flecked with silver. "Disappeared? Prague took a chunk, yeah. Knee gave out on a bridge—chased a ghost who turned out real enough to shoot back. Retired to this." He gestured at the bar, the maps curling at edges. "But you? Fled Cardiff like it burned. Brendan calls sometimes, asks if you're eating. Says you sound hollow." Hollow. The word clawed at her chest. Rory glanced at the door, half-tempted to bolt, but the rain pounded harder outside, trapping her. "Hollow's better than broken. Evan... he twisted things. Made me doubt the straight paths Dad pushed. Law? Felt like chains. So I cut loose. Deliveries, the flat—it's mine now." Silas's gaze softened a fraction, but regret shadowed it, unspoken. He rubbed his knee absently, the old wound a constant reminder. "Chains or no, you were sharpest out of the box. Remember that summer? You cracked my cipher puzzle in ten minutes flat. Said you'd run the world, not chase it." She remembered. Fifteen, sprawled on his flat's rug, decoding symbols while he watched with that quiet pride. Before the agency pulled him deeper, before her world narrowed to lectures and Evan's grip. "World's messier than puzzles. You taught me that, with your stories. Then you limped home, and I broke apart." His hand hovered near hers, then dropped. "Broke? Or remade? Nest sees all sorts, Rory. Men like me, chasing regrets across borders. You walk in here tonight, eyes clear but carrying weight. Unspoken, yeah. Like the calls I didn't make after Prague—thought your dad needed space, not my failures." The tension coiled, thick as the bar's haze. Rory leaned forward, voices from the booth fading to buzz. "Regrets. You dripping with them, Silas? Pouring drinks instead of cracking codes?" He snorted, grabbing his gin again. "Dripping? Nah. Soaked. Left the game, but it follows—contacts slink in that back room, whispering about old ops. Makes a man wonder what he traded." His eyes bored into hers. "You wonder too? About Cardiff, Brendan, the girl who dreamed big?" Her scar itched fiercer, a pull to the past. "Every delivery route. Pedal past courts, think of Dad's office. Mum's voice on the line, soft Welsh lilt asking when home." She swallowed, the words tumbling now. "Evan made me small, Silas. Fists and lies. Eva hauled me here, you gave the flat, but I hid. From you, from it all. Afraid you'd see the mess." He nodded, slow, the beard shifting with his jaw. "Messes mend. Prague taught me that—botched it all, limped back, opened this hole. Regret's the limp that sticks." He tapped the ring, silver catching light. "Family heirloom. Reminder: Blackwoods endure, but don't always choose right." Rory's fingers brushed the glass again, warmth seeping back. The door creaked open once more, but she ignored it. "Endure. That's us. Dad endures cases, you the bar, me the streets. But the weight—time piles it on, doesn't it? Unsaid words, paths not taken." Silas poured her another finger of whiskey, the bottle glugging soft. "Piles heavy. Saw a mate in Berlin once, years after. Changed—hard edges where curiosity burned. We talked circles, regrets circling too. Never fixed it." He slid the glass over. "Don't let that be us, Rory. You're no ghost." She took it, clinking his tumbler. The sound echoed, small against the bar's hum. "No ghosts. Just catching up. Tell me about Prague. The real bits, not the kid stories." He settled back, the limp forgotten in the telling. "Prague. Rain like tonight, bridges slick. Chased a defector, thought him a myth..." The words flowed, pulling her in, the tension easing into rhythm. Patrons came and went, glasses filled, but the bar shrank to their corner, time's weight shared in glances and half-truths. Rory listened, her blue eyes steady, the scar on her wrist a faint line under the light. Silas spoke on, voice weaving shadows, the unspoken regrets hovering like the neon buzz outside—present, but not defining. Outside, the drizzle thickened, Soho's pulse thrumming unaware. Inside, the maps on the walls whispered of distances crossed and those left behind. Rory sipped slow, Silas's tale unfolding, layer by layer, the years between them bridging in the dim glow. He paused mid-sentence, hazel eyes flicking to the door as it swung wide again. A figure stepped in, coat dripping, eyes scanning the room with purpose. Silas's posture shifted, the old operative surfacing. "Hold that thought." Rory followed his gaze, the whiskey warming her veins. The man approached the bar, voice low as he leaned in toward Silas. "Spymaster. Word from the shadows—old contact's stirring." Silas's ring tapped once, sharp. He glanced at Rory, a flicker of the past in his nod. "Stories wait. Trouble doesn't." She watched, the conversation pulling taut again, the weight of time now laced with the bar's hidden currents.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:34:58.244Z" 2/20/2026, 7:34:58 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.041
97.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2156
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2156
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"weight"
count5
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"coded"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"fractured"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count3
11
word"reminder"
count2
12
word"tension"
count2
13
word"lilt"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"scanning"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"etched"
2"weight"
3"stomach"
4"chill"
5"coded"
6"shattered"
7"traced"
8"silence"
9"fractured"
10"unspoken"
11"reminder"
12"tension"
13"lilt"
14"warmth"
15"echoed"
16"pulse"
17"scanning"
18"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences113
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1452
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho3
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Cardiff2
Brendan2
Carter1
Evan3
London2
Prague1
Silas16
Whispers1
Rory13
Eva2
Hollow1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Brendan"
3"Carter"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Rory"
7"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Prague"
globalScore0.949
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2127
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"buried that chapter"
90.50% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean49.47
std23.09
cv0.467
sampleLengths
0110
1108
2100
334
437
559
641
785
828
926
1046
1142
1236
1360
1484
1557
1665
1754
1820
1924
2029
2173
2235
2345
2485
2552
2651
2751
2849
2930
3047
3165
3244
3344
3449
3530
3622
3766
3840
3936
4029
4121
4218
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"been clipped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs254
matches(empty)
7.72% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences148
ratio0.047
matches
0"Silas had been the family friend, the one her dad called in for \"advice\" during late-night drinks—back when Brendan Carter still believed in straight paths and clean deals."
1"For a beat, the bar's murmur faded—the clink of glasses, the low rumble of conversation from the corner booth."
2"Grabbed a lowball glass from under the bar and poured a measure of whiskey—her father's brand, neat, without asking."
3"Now, those eyes held ghosts of their own—operations gone sour, a knee shattered on cobblestones."
4"Grabbed a bottle of his own—gin, from the looks—and poured a finger into a tumbler."
5"She’d buried that chapter—fists and fractured mirrors, the flight north with nothing but a duffel and Eva's spare key."
6"Silas spoke on, voice weaving shadows, the unspoken regrets hovering like the neon buzz outside—present, but not defining."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1470
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.02585034013605442
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.003401360544217687
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean14.37
std7.78
cv0.541
sampleLengths
022
114
225
325
424
519
623
72
825
923
1016
113
1223
1328
1418
1516
1612
1711
184
1919
2013
2116
228
2318
2413
2524
264
274
2819
2910
308
3114
3211
3324
3424
3512
3612
376
3810
3913
4013
4115
4213
4318
441
459
4618
476
488
4910
75.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4527027027027027
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners67
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences109
matches
0"She shook off her jacket,"
1"She scanned the room out"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
3"He moved with the same"
4"Her stomach twisted."
5"She'd avoided coming down here"
6"His rag paused mid-swipe."
7"he said, voice gravelly, carrying"
8"He set the glass down"
9"She froze mid-step, then forced"
10"He nodded, once, sharp."
11"She wrapped her fingers around"
12"He chuckled, low and dry,"
13"She took a sip, the"
14"He turned away, busying himself"
15"His back straightened a fraction,"
16"Her childhood friend, the one"
17"Their last call had been"
18"He watched her, unblinking, hazel"
19"She met his stare, the"
ratio0.431
28.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences109
matches
0"Rory pushed through the heavy"
1"Rain slicked her black hair,"
2"She shook off her jacket,"
3"The bar's dim light wrapped"
4"She scanned the room out"
5"That's when she spotted him"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
7"He moved with the same"
8"The silver signet ring glinted"
9"Her stomach twisted."
10"Silas had been the family"
11"That was six years ago,"
12"She'd avoided coming down here"
13"Silas looked up, hazel eyes"
14"His rag paused mid-swipe."
15"he said, voice gravelly, carrying"
16"He set the glass down"
17"She froze mid-step, then forced"
18"The limp might hide in"
19"He nodded, once, sharp."
ratio0.862
91.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"Now, those eyes held ghosts"
1"Before the agency pulled him"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"That's when she spotted him at the far end of the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better days."
1"She froze mid-step, then forced her legs to move, crossing the worn floorboards that creaked under her boots."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he said, voice gravelly, carrying over the distance without raising it"
1"He set, the clink punctuating"
2"He paused, eyes narrowing"
3"He leaned, voice dropping to that operative's timbre, all edges"
4"She swallowed, the words tumbling now"
5"He tapped, silver catching light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He chuckled (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.082
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.041
82.0050%