Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8S0G59Y24YVT3CAKE89ZB

Run Details

Duration:
20.2s
Cost:
$0.000181
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the windows of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the neon green sign into a smeared halo. Silas polished a glass behind the bar, the rhythmic swish of the cloth a counterpoint to the rising tide of conversation and the mournful pulse of a blues track. He hadn’t seen a face he recognized in weeks, and the regulars were a comfortable, predictable blur. Then she walked in. The door opened with a reluctant groan, admitting a gust of rain and a woman who looked utterly, impossibly, like a ghost. Rory. It wasn’t a question, not really. The sharp angles of her face, the way her black hair fell straight and dark, the unmistakable brightness of those blue eyes – they hadn’t aged a day. Just… sharpened. Hardened. She scanned the room, a flicker of something unreadable passing over her features, then stopped dead when her gaze locked with his. A pause, thick with unspoken history, stretched between them. The music seemed to fade. The chatter died down. Even the rain outside seemed to hold its breath. “Silas,” she said, her voice low, carrying just enough to cut through the quiet. He turned, setting down the glass with a precise clink. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted in the dim light. “Aurora.” He didn’t smile. There hadn’t been a genuine smile on his face in a very long time. “Last I heard, you were off somewhere exotic, chasing something shiny.” She didn’t move, simply studied him, taking in the lines etched around his eyes, the slight limp that favored his left leg, the way the years had settled into his posture like a heavy coat. “I was running,” she replied, the words clipped and precise. "That’s usually what people do.” “Running from what?” He leaned against the bar, the wood cool beneath his palm. She took a slow, deliberate sip of the whiskey she’d ordered. “From a man who didn’t understand the value of silence.” Her eyes didn't waver. “From a life built on promises he couldn’t keep.” A memory, sharp and unwelcome, pricked at his mind – Evan. The ugliness of it. The way she’d looked then, vulnerable and adrift. He’d wanted to reach out, to offer a hand, but something – pride, perhaps, or a fatalistic understanding of human nature – had kept him silent. "You look… different," he observed, more a statement than a question. “I’ve been busy,” she stated flatly. "London isn’t conducive to pleasant afternoons." “You deliver food,” he pointed out, gesturing towards the kitchen door. “Yu-Fei’s place is… practical,” she said, the word tasting like ash in her mouth. “It pays the rent.” She avoided his gaze, focusing on the swirling ice in her glass. The air shifted, thick with the residue of years. He remembered her ambitions at university, the burning desire to be a barrister like her father, the way she'd argued passionately about justice and the rule of law. Now, there was a pragmatism in her eyes, a cold calculation that hadn’t been there before. “What happened, Aurora? Really happened?” She finally looked at him then, and for a moment, he saw a flicker of the girl he’d known – the girl with the quick wit and the boundless optimism. It vanished quickly, replaced by a steely resolve. “I learned a few things,” she said, her voice barely audible above the music. “About loyalty. About betrayal. About the lengths people will go to protect what they want.” “Protection?” Silas inquired, tilting his head slightly. “From whom?” “Everyone,” she said, the word laced with cynicism. “Everyone. It started with a client. A simple missing person case. Turned into something… much bigger.” She paused, considering her words. “Someone wanted to bury a secret. A very dangerous secret. And I found it.” He took a slow breath. "And now?" “Now, I’m… invested,” she admitted, the word tentative. "I don’t exactly know *how* I'm invested, but it’s… persistent.” Silas studied her, his hazel eyes assessing, searching. He’d built his life on secrets, on navigating the murky currents of intelligence. He recognized the telltale signs of someone who’d been through the grinder – the guardedness, the reluctance to offer details, the faint scent of danger clinging to her like rain. "You’ve traded legal briefs for… something less tidy.” “The law isn’t always clean,” she countered, her chin lifting. “Sometimes, you have to get your hands dirty to find the truth.” A small, wry smile touched his lips. “A noble sentiment. And a remarkably expensive one.” He gestured to the bar. “Let me get you another drink. Something stronger.” As he moved to refill her glass, he noticed a small, almost invisible scar on her left wrist – a crescent shaped reminder of a childhood accident, a detail he’d almost forgotten. It seemed to shimmer beneath the dim light. “That’s a nasty one,” he observed, the words unintentional. She touched the scar briefly, her fingers lingering for a moment. “A long time ago,” she said, her voice distant. “Before everything changed.” He returned with the whiskey, placing the glass before her. “I remember you always had a knack for seeing through people.” “It was a survival mechanism,” she replied, swirling the liquid in her glass. “You learn to trust no one.” “You still have that instinct, I suspect,” Silas said, his gaze unwavering. “It’s a useful tool.” He paused, then added, almost as an afterthought, "I always thought you'd be a formidable barrister." She laughed, a short, brittle sound. It didn’t reach her eyes. "Jurisprudence felt… limiting. Predictable.” He poured himself a drink, studying her profile. The rain continued to fall, a steady, insistent drumbeat against the windows. “Tell me about this… secret.” She hesitated, her fingers tightening around the glass. “It involves a politician. A missing shipment of arms. And a very powerful organization that operates in the shadows.” “Shadows are my specialty,” Silas said quietly. He reached under the bar, retrieving a small, tarnished silver lighter. He flicked it open, the small flame briefly illuminating her face – stark, resolute, and utterly alone. “It's not a game anymore, Silas,” she said, her voice tight. "This isn't some petty dispute. This is… dangerous.” “Everything’s dangerous, Aurora,” he replied, capping his drink. “The question is, are you willing to dance with the danger, or will you run from it again?” She met his gaze, and for the first time, he saw a glimmer of the old Rory – the girl who’d once dreamed of changing the world. It was a fragile spark, threatened by the darkness that clung to her. “I’m not running,” she declared, her voice gaining a newfound strength. “I'm hunting.” Silas nodded slowly, a flicker of something akin to admiration in his eyes. “Then let’s talk about the prey.” He gestured towards the hidden door behind the bookshelf, barely visible in the gloom. “The back room is a bit… sterile. We need somewhere less conspicuous to discuss this.” As she followed him through the narrow doorway, leaving the relative warmth and noise of The Raven’s Nest behind, Silas couldn't shake the feeling that he wasn’t just offering her a safe haven. He was offering her a chance—a slim, perilous chance—to reclaim the woman she’d lost. And he suspected, with a chilling certainty, that whatever she was hunting, it was hunting her right back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she stated flatly [flatly]"
1"He paused then [then]"
2"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.54
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
54.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count3
3
adverb"passionately"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
6
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"really"
2"very"
3"passionately"
4"quickly"
5"slightly"
6"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"comfortable"
count1
3
word"predictable"
count2
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count3
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"desire"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
12
word"navigating"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"unwavering"
count1
15
word"flicked"
count1
16
word"stark"
count1
17
word"dance"
count1
18
word"newfound"
count1
19
word"gloom"
count1
20
word"warmth"
count1
21
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"comfortable"
3"predictable"
4"scanned"
5"flicker"
6"unreadable"
7"unspoken"
8"etched"
9"silence"
10"desire"
11"resolve"
12"navigating"
13"reminder"
14"unwavering"
15"flicked"
16"stark"
17"dance"
18"newfound"
19"gloom"
20"warmth"
21"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1223
ratio0.001
matches
0"how"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount897
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Evan1
Silas7
Rory2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something akin to admiration in his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1223
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean34.94
std18.81
cv0.538
sampleLengths
069
160
249
314
452
550
614
734
860
912
1011
1130
1258
1367
149
1543
167
1718
1859
1922
2028
2149
2223
2321
2419
2532
2615
2725
2827
2935
3019
3126
3253
3348
3465
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
67.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was offering"
1"was hunting, was hunting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences102
ratio0.088
matches
0"The sharp angles of her face, the way her black hair fell straight and dark, the unmistakable brightness of those blue eyes – they hadn’t aged a day."
1"A memory, sharp and unwelcome, pricked at his mind – Evan."
2"He’d wanted to reach out, to offer a hand, but something – pride, perhaps, or a fatalistic understanding of human nature – had kept him silent."
3"She finally looked at him then, and for a moment, he saw a flicker of the girl he’d known – the girl with the quick wit and the boundless optimism."
4"He recognized the telltale signs of someone who’d been through the grinder – the guardedness, the reluctance to offer details, the faint scent of danger clinging to her like rain."
5"As he moved to refill her glass, he noticed a small, almost invisible scar on her left wrist – a crescent shaped reminder of a childhood accident, a detail he’d almost forgotten."
6"He flicked it open, the small flame briefly illuminating her face – stark, resolute, and utterly alone."
7"She met his gaze, and for the first time, he saw a glimmer of the old Rory – the girl who’d once dreamed of changing the world."
8"He was offering her a chance—a slim, perilous chance—to reclaim the woman she’d lost."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount890
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, tarnished silver lighter."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03932584269662921
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.019101123595505618
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean11.99
std7.65
cv0.638
sampleLengths
019
129
217
34
422
51
66
728
81
91
101
1122
129
135
144
159
1614
1710
1813
194
2014
2111
2235
2310
245
2514
2611
2714
289
2911
304
318
3226
3311
346
356
3611
3714
3816
399
4028
4116
425
4330
448
4514
4615
477
482
498
53.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37254901960784315
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners38
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then she walked in."
1"Even the rain outside seemed"
ratio0.027
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences75
matches
0"He hadn’t seen a face"
1"It wasn’t a question, not"
2"She scanned the room, a"
3"she said, her voice low,"
4"He turned, setting down the"
5"He didn’t smile"
6"She didn’t move, simply studied"
7"she replied, the words clipped"
8"He leaned against the bar,"
9"She took a slow, deliberate"
10"Her eyes didn't waver"
11"He’d wanted to reach out,"
12"he observed, more a statement"
13"she stated flatly"
14"he pointed out, gesturing towards"
15"she said, the word tasting"
16"She avoided his gaze, focusing"
17"He remembered her ambitions at"
18"She finally looked at him"
19"It vanished quickly, replaced by"
ratio0.653
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences75
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Silas polished a glass behind"
2"He hadn’t seen a face"
3"The door opened with a"
4"It wasn’t a question, not"
5"The sharp angles of her"
6"She scanned the room, a"
7"A pause, thick with unspoken"
8"The music seemed to fade."
9"The chatter died down."
10"she said, her voice low,"
11"He turned, setting down the"
12"The silver signet ring on"
13"He didn’t smile"
14"There hadn’t been a genuine"
15"She didn’t move, simply studied"
16"she replied, the words clipped"
17"He leaned against the bar,"
18"She took a slow, deliberate"
19"Her eyes didn't waver"
ratio0.92
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Now, there was a pragmatism"
ratio0.013
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The door opened with a reluctant groan, admitting a gust of rain and a woman who looked utterly, impossibly, like a ghost."
1"He recognized the telltale signs of someone who’d been through the grinder – the guardedness, the reluctance to offer details, the faint scent of danger clingin…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she replied, the words clipped and precise"
1"she said, her voice barely audible above the music"
2"she said, the word laced with cynicism"
3"she said, her voice distant"
4"Silas said, his gaze unwavering"
5"she said, her voice tight"
6"she declared, her voice gaining a newfound strength"
30.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"she stated flatly (state)"
2"Silas inquired (inquire)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"he observed (observe)"
5"she declared (declare)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.68
rawRatio0.353
effectiveRatio0.24
74.2626%