Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8SABZ8BZT96S2NVZ6E1ZA

Run Details

Duration:
15.3s
Cost:
$0.000137
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against Detective Harlow Quinn’s trench coat, a relentless percussion matching the thudding of her pulse. Each drop seemed to carry the grime of the city, clinging to the slick pavement as she followed Silas Moreau. He’d vanished into The Raven’s Nest, a greasy spoon in Soho with a history thicker than the clotted gravy on their breakfasts. And Silas, like DS Morris before him, was connected to something Quinn didn’t want to understand. The neon green sign above the doorway of the bar pulsed with an unnerving vitality, illuminating the rain-streaked windows. Inside, the air hung heavy with the smell of stale beer, cigarettes, and something vaguely metallic – blood, perhaps, though it could be the damp. Quinn pushed open the door, the bell above it jangling a discordant welcome. The bar was mostly empty. A scattering of figures huddled in booths, shielded by the gloom, faces obscured by the shadows. Most seemed to be regulars, the kind who’d seen too much and said too little. A grizzled man with a silver-wired hand nursing a whiskey caught her eye for a moment, then quickly averted his gaze. Quinn ignored him, her focus locked on the back of Silas’s dark coat as he moved towards a darkened corner. “Anything?” she asked, her voice low and clipped, addressing Officer Davies, who trailed a few steps behind her, notepad in hand. “Nothing concrete, Detective,” Davies replied, the rain drumming against his own uniform cap. “Security footage is… frustrating. He disappears behind a bookshelf. Doesn’t even seem to notice us.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. The military precision ingrained in her over eighteen years on the force demanded a solution, a tangible lead. She moved deeper into the bar, her eyes scanning the room, absorbing the details – the chipped Formica tables, the faded maps plastered on the walls, the photographs depicting scenes of a bygone era. The Raven’s Nest felt like a mausoleum of forgotten secrets. “Let’s check the back,” she ordered, pulling out her worn leather watch and checking the time. 1:17 am. Too late for a quiet night out, even in this part of London. The bookshelf was unremarkable, crammed with aging volumes bound in cracked leather. Quinn ran her fingers along the spines, a practiced skill honed by years of searching for clues. She felt a subtle shift in the air, a faint pressure against her skin – a trick of the damp, she told herself, but the prickle of unease remained. Pushing against the shelf, it groaned inward, revealing a narrow passage leading into darkness. “Davies, keep watch,” she instructed, stepping into the hidden room. The space was small, claustrophobic, lit only by a single, flickering bulb hanging from the ceiling. A scarred wooden table dominated the center, littered with playing cards, a half-empty bottle of Scotch, and a scattering of strange, intricately carved tokens. The air here was colder, carrying a scent of ozone and something indefinably ancient. Silas was sitting at the table, calmly pouring himself a drink. His back was to her, but Quinn recognized the posture – the slight tilt of the shoulders, the way he held himself. She moved closer, her hand instinctively reaching for the Glock holstered beneath her coat. “Silas Moreau,” she said, her voice deliberately flat. “You’re under arrest for questioning in connection with the disappearance of Daniel Finch.” He turned slowly, a sardonic smile playing on his lips. “Detective Quinn. Always a pleasure. Though I confess, I was expecting you to be… less interested in my little evenings.” “Your ‘little evenings’ involve disappearing into hidden rooms and potentially engaging in criminal activity,” Quinn replied, her eyes assessing him. The scar on his forearm was prominent in the dim light, a grim reminder of a past she’d only begun to unravel. “I prefer the term ‘facilitation,’ Detective,” he said, taking a sip of his drink. “I provide a service. A discreet one, of course.” “A service that seems to involve a rather large number of stolen artifacts,” she countered, gesturing to the tokens on the table. “And a clientele that appears to operate outside the law.” “Let’s just say I have… connections,” Silas said, his smile widening slightly. “Connections that are difficult to trace, difficult to follow.” Suddenly, a figure emerged from the shadows – Tomás Herrera. He was kneeling beside the table, examining a small, polished stone with a practiced eye. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck glinted in the weak light. “Detective,” Tomás said, his voice calm and measured. “Silas is involved with The Veil Market. It’s moving tonight, under the full moon. Camden Tube station. Bone tokens required for entry.” “The Veil Market?” Quinn’s mind raced. She’d heard whispers, rumors of a hidden underworld of supernatural dealings, but she’d dismissed them as folklore. “And you’re offering to help me find it?” “I’m offering information,” Tomás corrected, holding up the stone. “This is a fragment from a Key of Shadows. It indicates a specific route to the Market. Silas has been diverting funds into paying me. I was hoping to bring Finch to justice, but…” He trailed off, his eyes fixed on Silas. “But Silas isn’t interested in justice,” Quinn finished, her hand tightening around her Glock. “He’s interested in profit.” She glanced at the rain-streaked windows of The Raven’s Nest, then at the narrow passage leading deeper into the darkness, and finally at Tomás, the pragmatic medic with a shadowed past. This wasn't a simple arrest. This was a descent into something far more dangerous than she’d anticipated. The cool, precise logic of her military training suddenly felt inadequate against the unsettling pull of the supernatural. “Let’s go to the Market,” she said, her voice barely a whisper. "But we're going in together."
created_at"2026-02-20T19:35:19.187Z" 2/20/2026, 7:35:19 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
68.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount956
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"quickly"
1"deliberately"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount956
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"tangible"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"unravel"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"pulsed"
2"gloom"
3"tangible"
4"scanning"
5"reminder"
6"unravel"
7"measured"
8"raced"
9"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
61.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords957
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"She felt a subtle shift in the air, a faint pressure against her skin – a trick of the damp, she told herself, but the p…"
1"Pushing against the shelf, it groaned inward, revealing a narrow passage leading into darkness."
82.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount738
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Silas6
Moreau1
Raven3
Nest3
Soho1
Morris1
Officer1
Davies2
Formica1
London1
Scotch1
Glock2
Suddenly1
Tomás4
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Silas"
3"Moreau"
4"Raven"
5"Nest"
6"Morris"
7"Officer"
8"Davies"
9"Glock"
10"Suddenly"
11"Tomás"
12"Herrera"
13"Saint"
14"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.822
windowScore1
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a mausoleum of forgotten secr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount957
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
99.79% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean39.88
std19.91
cv0.499
sampleLengths
076
157
277
321
428
565
631
772
810
954
1047
1121
1230
1342
1423
1532
1621
1737
1830
1931
2051
2118
2266
2317
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"was connected"
87.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs119
matches
0"was sitting"
1"was kneeling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences63
ratio0.079
matches
0"Inside, the air hung heavy with the smell of stale beer, cigarettes, and something vaguely metallic – blood, perhaps, though it could be the damp."
1"She moved deeper into the bar, her eyes scanning the room, absorbing the details – the chipped Formica tables, the faded maps plastered on the walls, the photographs depicting scenes of a bygone era."
2"She felt a subtle shift in the air, a faint pressure against her skin – a trick of the damp, she told herself, but the prickle of unease remained."
3"His back was to her, but Quinn recognized the posture – the slight tilt of the shoulders, the way he held himself."
4"Suddenly, a figure emerged from the shadows – Tomás Herrera."
98.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount737
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.033921302578018994
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.021709633649932156
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean15.19
std7.42
cv0.489
sampleLengths
018
120
222
316
419
525
613
75
816
915
1021
1120
1221
1313
1415
153
1618
1734
1810
1916
202
2113
2212
2317
2429
2514
2610
2716
2824
2914
3011
3122
3214
338
3413
3510
3620
3720
3822
3914
409
4122
4210
4312
449
4510
4615
4712
488
4922
68.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"Too late for a quiet"
1"Suddenly, a figure emerged from"
ratio0.038
89.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences52
matches
0"He’d vanished into The Raven’s"
1"she asked, her voice low"
2"She moved deeper into the"
3"she ordered, pulling out her"
4"She felt a subtle shift"
5"she instructed, stepping into the"
6"His back was to her,"
7"She moved closer, her hand"
8"she said, her voice deliberately"
9"He turned slowly, a sardonic"
10"he said, taking a sip"
11"she countered, gesturing to the"
12"He was kneeling beside the"
13"She’d heard whispers, rumors of"
14"He trailed off, his eyes"
15"She glanced at the rain-streaked"
16"she said, her voice barely"
ratio0.327
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences52
matches
0"The rain hammered against Detective"
1"Each drop seemed to carry"
2"He’d vanished into The Raven’s"
3"The neon green sign above"
4"Quinn pushed open the door,"
5"The bar was mostly empty."
6"A scattering of figures huddled"
7"A grizzled man with a"
8"Quinn ignored him, her focus"
9"she asked, her voice low"
10"Davies replied, the rain drumming"
11"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
12"The military precision ingrained in"
13"She moved deeper into the"
14"The Raven’s Nest felt like"
15"she ordered, pulling out her"
16"The bookshelf was unremarkable, crammed"
17"Quinn ran her fingers along"
18"She felt a subtle shift"
19"she instructed, stepping into the"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She moved deeper into the bar, her eyes scanning the room, absorbing the details – the chipped Formica tables, the faded maps plastered on the walls, the photog…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Davies replied, the rain drumming against his own uniform cap"
1"she said, her voice deliberately flat"
2"Quinn replied, her eyes assessing him"
3"Silas said, his smile widening slightly"
4"Tomás said, his voice calm and measured"
5"Quinn finished, her hand tightening around her Glock"
6"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
70.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she ordered (order)"
1"Tomás corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.16
79.0652%