Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8SPF610XA75P2D2WKRKGE

Run Details

Duration:
38.0s
Cost:
$0.000262
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the windows of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the neon green sign into a hazy smear. Rory wiped condensation from a glass, the familiar clink echoing in the near-empty bar. Tuesday nights were slow. Silas nursed a whiskey at the far end of the counter, his gaze fixed on a chess board he'd set up between himself and an empty chair. The slight limp in his left leg was more pronounced tonight. A gust of wind rattled the door as someone entered, shaking off the rain like a wet dog. Rory glanced up, expecting a late-night drifter. Instead, she froze. Standing there, dripping onto the worn floorboards, was a woman she hadn’t seen in over a decade. Elara. Years hadn't been kind. The bright, rebellious spark that had defined Elara back at Cardiff University had been extinguished, replaced by a hard, almost brittle edge. Her fiery red hair, once worn in a cascade of defiant curls, was now sleeked back in a severe bun. The ripped jeans and band tees were gone, traded for a tailored charcoal suit that screamed money and power. Even her eyes, those warm hazel eyes that had always held a hint of mischief, seemed colder, sharper. Rory felt a sudden, inexplicable pull of memory, the scent of cheap beer and late-night study sessions flooding her senses. Elara’s gaze swept over the bar, finally settling on Rory. Recognition flickered across her face, a brief crack in the carefully constructed facade. A slow smile stretched her lips, but it didn't quite reach her eyes. “Rory? Rory Carter, is that really you?” Rory cleared her throat, setting down the glass. "Elara. Wow. I… I didn't expect to see you here." She gestured to the empty stool beside her. "Come on, get out of the rain. Silas makes a mean hot toddy." Elara moved with a controlled grace, shedding her coat and draping it over the back of a chair. She sat, her posture ramrod straight. "Silas is still running this place?" She studied Rory, her expression unreadable. “Still delivering Chinese food, I presume?" "Keeps me busy," Rory replied, offering a small smile. “Pays the rent.” She snagged a towel, offering it to Elara. “You’re soaked.” Elara took the towel, dabbing at her hair with unnecessary precision. "It's been a long day." She paused, then added, “A long time.” Silas glanced up from his chess game, his hazel eyes assessing Elara with an almost clinical detachment. He nodded curtly in her direction. "Hot toddy?" Rory asked, forcing a lightness she didn't feel. "Please," Elara said. "And something to eat. I'm famished." Rory relayed the order to Silas, who moved with surprising agility behind the bar, gathering ingredients. The silence that followed was thick with unspoken history. Elara broke it. "You haven't changed much," she observed, her gaze fixed on Rory’s hands as she polished another glass. "Neither have you," Rory countered, though the statement felt like a lie. Elara’s lips curved into a humorless smile. “Oh, I think I have. Quite a bit, actually." Silas placed a steaming mug of toddy and a plate of scotch eggs in front of Elara. He leaned against the counter, watching them with an unnerving stillness. Elara took a slow sip of the hot toddy, her eyes closing briefly in what might have been pleasure. “I’m with Sterling Cooper & Ross now,” she announced, as if reciting a business card. “Corporate law. Mergers and acquisitions. Exciting stuff.” Rory raised an eyebrow. “Sterling Cooper? That’s… quite a leap from protesting tuition fees outside the university library.” A shadow flickered across Elara’s face. “People change, Rory. Circumstances change. You of all people should understand that.” She looked pointedly at Rory’s delivery uniform, folded neatly on the counter. Rory bristled at the unspoken judgment. “I’m fine. It’s honest work.” Elara waved a dismissive hand. “I didn’t say it wasn’t. It’s just… different. You always had such potential, Rory. Such fire. I thought you’d be changing the world, not dropping off Sweet and Sour Chicken.” The words hung in the air, heavy with regret and accusation. Rory felt a familiar sting behind her eyes. She thought of Evan, of the way he’d chipped away at her confidence, of the choices she'd made to survive. “And you’re conquering the corporate world?” Rory asked, her voice carefully neutral. Elara took another sip of her toddy. “Let’s just say I’m making a difference. In my own way.” "What kind of difference?" Rory pressed, unable to resist. Elara hesitated, her eyes darting around the bar as if checking to see who might be listening. “I represent Global Dynamics,” she said, her voice low. “They’re… expanding their interests in renewable energy.” Rory knew Global Dynamics. A ruthless conglomerate with a history of exploiting developing countries. "Renewable energy with a heavy environmental cost, I imagine." Elara’s expression hardened. “You always were cynical.” “Realistic,” Rory corrected. “There’s a difference.” They stared at each other, the years of shared history and fractured friendship weighing down the space between them. Rory noticed a faint tremor in Elara’s hand as she set down her mug. “Remember that protest we organized against the new campus development?” Elara asked softly, her voice losing some of its steel. “The one that got us both arrested?” Rory smiled, a genuine smile this time. “How could I forget? You climbed on top of the bulldozer." “And you chained yourself to the fence," Elara finished. "We were going to change the world, weren't we?" “We were young and idealistic,” Rory said. “And now?” Rory shrugged. “Now I’m delivering takeout. You’re saving the planet, one corporate takeover at a time.” Elara laughed, a short, brittle sound. “It’s a living.” She looked down at her hands, her manicured nails catching the dim light. “It pays for a very nice apartment. And a very nice car. And a very nice life, all things considered." “At what cost?” Rory asked quietly. Elara didn’t respond. She swirled the remaining liquid in her mug, her gaze distant. Silas cleared his throat. “Checkmate,” he said, without looking up from the chessboard. “Your move, Elara.” Elara blinked, as if waking from a dream. She looked at the chessboard, then back at Rory. "I should go," she said, rising to her feet. "I have an early flight tomorrow." Rory nodded. "Safe travels." Elara paused by the door, her hand on the handle. She turned back to Rory, a flicker of something unreadable in her eyes. "It was… good to see you, Rory." Rory watched her go, the rain continuing to lash against the windows. The neon green sign of The Raven's Nest blurred in her vision. She felt a profound sense of sadness, a quiet ache of what might have been. Silas placed a hand on her shoulder. “She’s lost,” he observed, his voice low. “Lost a long time ago.” Rory looked at him, her eyes filled with a weariness that went beyond the late hour and the endless cycle of deliveries. “We all get lost sometimes, Silas,” she said. “Some of us just lose our way more spectacularly than others.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
43.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She paused then [then]"
1"She looked pointedly [pointedly]"
2"Elara asked softly [softly]"
3"Rory asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.157
70.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"constructed"
count1
4
word"facade"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count2
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"potential"
count1
10
word"fractured"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"echoing"
2"flickered"
3"constructed"
4"facade"
5"unreadable"
6"silence"
7"unspoken"
8"eyebrow"
9"potential"
10"fractured"
11"flicker"
12"profound"
13"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences86
matches
0"y with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1181
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount837
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Elara24
Cardiff1
University1
Rory29
Silas6
Evan1
Global1
Dynamics1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Elara"
3"University"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"seemed colder sharper"
1"quite reach her eyes"
2"felt like a lie"
3"as if reciting a business card"
4"as if checking to see who might be listening"
5"as if waking from a dream"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1181
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean24.1
std15.99
cv0.663
sampleLengths
074
128
218
383
420
536
67
739
842
922
1023
1123
1210
139
1425
1520
1612
1716
1828
1941
2018
2130
2211
2335
2439
2512
2618
279
2833
2923
307
316
3233
3327
3418
3518
367
372
3816
3942
406
4114
4216
4332
444
4530
4639
4719
4841
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"been extinguished"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences113
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount840
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02976190476190476
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010714285714285714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean10.45
std6.01
cv0.575
sampleLengths
018
114
24
327
411
518
67
73
817
91
104
1122
1220
1319
1418
1520
1610
1713
1813
197
208
2118
2213
2318
246
2512
266
279
2811
292
3011
3112
3217
336
3410
353
366
3716
389
393
4017
4112
427
439
4417
4511
4619
4715
487
494
64.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.40707964601769914
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners46
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Instead, she froze."
1"Even her eyes, those warm"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences78
matches
0"Her fiery red hair, once"
1"She gestured to the empty"
2"She sat, her posture ramrod"
3"She studied Rory, her expression"
4"She snagged a towel, offering"
5"She paused, then added"
6"He nodded curtly in her"
7"she observed, her gaze fixed"
8"He leaned against the counter,"
9"she announced, as if reciting"
10"She looked pointedly at Rory’s"
11"She thought of Evan, of"
12"she said, her voice low"
13"They stared at each other,"
14"She looked down at her"
15"She swirled the remaining liquid"
16"he said, without looking up"
17"She looked at the chessboard,"
18"she said, rising to her"
19"She turned back to Rory,"
ratio0.282
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences78
matches
0"Rain lashed against the windows"
1"Rory wiped condensation from a"
2"Tuesday nights were slow."
3"Silas nursed a whiskey at"
4"The slight limp in his"
5"A gust of wind rattled"
6"Rory glanced up, expecting a"
7"Years hadn't been kind."
8"The bright, rebellious spark that"
9"Her fiery red hair, once"
10"The ripped jeans and band"
11"Rory felt a sudden, inexplicable"
12"Elara’s gaze swept over the"
13"Recognition flickered across her face,"
14"A slow smile stretched her"
15"Rory cleared her throat, setting"
16"She gestured to the empty"
17"Elara moved with a controlled"
18"She sat, her posture ramrod"
19"She studied Rory, her expression"
ratio0.962
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The bright, rebellious spark that had defined Elara back at Cardiff University had been extinguished, replaced by a hard, almost brittle edge."
1"Rory relayed the order to Silas, who moved with surprising agility behind the bar, gathering ingredients."
2"Elara hesitated, her eyes darting around the bar as if checking to see who might be listening."
3"Rory looked at him, her eyes filled with a weariness that went beyond the late hour and the endless cycle of deliveries."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"She studied, her expression unreadable"
1"Rory countered, though the statement felt like a lie"
2"she announced, as if reciting a business card"
3"Rory asked, her voice carefully neutral"
4"Rory pressed, unable to resist"
5"she said, her voice low"
6"Elara asked softly, her voice losing some of its steel"
7"he said, without looking up from the chessboard"
8"he observed, his voice low"
51.96% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she observed (observe)"
1"she announced (announce)"
2"Rory pressed (press)"
3"Rory corrected (correct)"
4"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.627
rawRatio0.313
effectiveRatio0.196
72.5076%