Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8SX46WKANNPPFRDTN40BW

Run Details

Duration:
2.4s
Cost:
$0.000170
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest flickered like a dying ember against the storm’s relentless assault. Quinn’s breath came in shallow gasps, her fingers digging into the slick pavement as she sprinted, her boots kicking up splashes of black water. The scent of damp earth and ozone clung to the air, thick and suffocating. Behind her, the suspect—someone Quinn couldn’t quite place—dove under a flickering streetlamp, vanishing into the labyrinth of alleys. She didn’t hesitate. The chase had been a game of shadows for too long. Now, she’d follow the trail into the dark. The suspect emerged from the gloom, his dark curls plastered to his forehead, his olive skin glistening under the bar’s sickly green neon. Tomás Herrera adjusted his Saint Christopher medallion, his voice low as he turned to her. *"You’re not supposed to be here."* Quinn didn’t stop. She lunged forward, her boots skidding on the wet pavement before she caught herself, her hands gripping the railing of a crumbling staircase. Below, the air grew thicker, the scent of damp stone and something older—something *wrong*—washing over her. *"Move,"* she growled, her voice rough with exhaustion. Tomás didn’t flinch. *"You’re bleeding."* She didn’t look down. *"I’m not stopping."* The staircase descended into darkness, the steps slick with rain. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat as she pressed forward, her breath ragged. The suspect—now just a shadow—vanished into the shadows of the underground market, the Veil Market. *"You’re going to get yourself killed,"* Tomás called after her. Quinn didn’t answer. She didn’t need to. The weight of the past pressed down on her, the memory of DS Morris’s last words still fresh in her mind. She’d follow this lead, no matter the cost. The steps ended at a crumbling archway, the air inside thick with the scent of old paper and something metallic. The suspect had already vanished into the maze of stalls, their voices muffled but unmistakable. *"You’re not supposed to be here,"* Tomás repeated, his voice strained. Quinn didn’t wait. She pushed through the archway, her boots sinking into the damp earth as she stepped into the Veil Market. The stalls were a labyrinth of flickering lanterns and towering stacks of goods, each one more bizarre than the last. Enchanted trinkets glinted under the dim light, their allure impossible to ignore. *"This is madness,"* Tomás muttered, his voice barely audible over the hum of the market. Quinn didn’t look back. She moved forward, her eyes scanning the shadows for any sign of the suspect. The market was alive with activity, the air thick with the scent of spices and something darker, something that made her skin prickle. *"You’re not supposed to be here,"* a voice echoed from the darkness. She didn’t stop. She didn’t need to. The chase was over. Now, she’d find out what the Veil Market held—and what it wanted in return.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount484
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount484
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"glistening"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"gloom"
2"glistening"
3"pulse"
4"weight"
5"scanning"
6"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences39
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences42
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
57.74% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords34
totalWords478
ratio0.071
matches
0"\"You’re not supposed to be here.\""
1"wrong"
2"\"Move,\""
3"\"You’re bleeding.\""
4"\"I’m not stopping.\""
5"\"You’re going to get yourself killed,\""
6"\"You’re not supposed to be here,\""
7"\"This is madness,\""
8"\"You’re not supposed to be here,\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.35% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount445
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Quinn7
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás5
Veil3
Market3
Morris1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Quinn"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
7"Market"
8"Morris"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.713
windowScore1
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences26
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place—dove under a flickering streetlamp, vanishing into the labyrinth of alleys"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount478
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean26.56
std16.82
cv0.633
sampleLengths
055
140
238
36
442
58
65
77
838
910
1036
1135
1211
1354
1415
1541
1612
1725
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs65
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences42
ratio0.095
matches
0"Behind her, the suspect—someone Quinn couldn’t quite place—dove under a flickering streetlamp, vanishing into the labyrinth of alleys."
1"Below, the air grew thicker, the scent of damp stone and something older—something *wrong*—washing over her."
2"The suspect—now just a shadow—vanished into the shadows of the underground market, the Veil Market."
3"Now, she’d find out what the Veil Market held—and what it wanted in return."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount451
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.017738359201773836
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004434589800443459
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences42
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences42
mean11.38
std6.82
cv0.6
sampleLengths
017
124
214
318
43
511
68
723
815
96
103
1123
1216
138
143
152
164
173
1810
1913
2015
2110
223
234
2421
258
2620
2715
2811
293
3019
3120
3212
3315
344
3514
3623
3712
383
394
404
4114
45.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences42
uniqueOpeners12
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences39
matches
0"She didn’t hesitate."
1"She lunged forward, her boots"
2"she growled, her voice rough"
3"She didn’t look down."
4"She didn’t need to."
5"She’d follow this lead, no"
6"She pushed through the archway,"
7"She moved forward, her eyes"
8"She didn’t stop."
9"She didn’t need to."
ratio0.256
24.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences39
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Quinn’s breath came in shallow"
2"The scent of damp earth"
3"She didn’t hesitate."
4"The chase had been a"
5"The suspect emerged from the"
6"Tomás Herrera adjusted his Saint"
7"Quinn didn’t stop."
8"She lunged forward, her boots"
9"she growled, her voice rough"
10"Tomás didn’t flinch."
11"She didn’t look down."
12"The staircase descended into darkness,"
13"Quinn’s pulse hammered in her"
14"The suspect—now just a shadow—vanished"
15"Tomás called after her"
16"Quinn didn’t answer."
17"She didn’t need to."
18"The weight of the past"
19"She’d follow this lead, no"
ratio0.872
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences39
matches
0"Now, she’d follow the trail"
1"Now, she’d find out what"
ratio0.051
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Quinn’s breath came in shallow gasps, her fingers digging into the slick pavement as she sprinted, her boots kicking up splashes of black water."
1"She lunged forward, her boots skidding on the wet pavement before she caught herself, her hands gripping the railing of a crumbling staircase."
2"The market was alive with activity, the air thick with the scent of spices and something darker, something that made her skin prickle."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she growled, her voice rough with exhaustion"
1"Tomás repeated, his voice strained"
2"Tomás muttered, his voice barely audible over the hum of the market"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she growled (growl)"
1"Tomás repeated (repeat)"
2"Tomás muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.75
74.0259%