| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glint" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "standard" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "racing" | | 7 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 17 | | markdownWords | 29 | | totalWords | 1109 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "Not blood" | | 1 | "Just paint. Just spray paint." | | 2 | "Tick-tock, tick-tock." | | 3 | "Focus." | | 4 | "Too cold." | | 5 | "matter" | | 6 | "matter" | | 7 | "Don’t." | | 8 | "real." | | 9 | "body." | | 10 | "wrong." | | 11 | "alive." | | 12 | "hummed." | | 13 | "I’m suggesting nothing." | | 14 | "special" | | 15 | "what" | | 16 | "You shouldn’t be here." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "*Not blood*, she told herself." |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 957 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.99 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Vane" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 19 | | London | 2 | | Morris | 1 | | Alistair | 1 | | Vane | 12 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Alistair" | | 4 | "Vane" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.507 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like dried blood" | | 1 | "looked like a man who’d just stepped out" | | 2 | "as if searching for something just out of reach" | | 3 | "as if searching for something just beyond their reach" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.902 | | wordCount | 1109 | | matches | | 0 | "Not with the usual London white noise of traffic and chatter, but with a low, resonant vibration, like the pluck of a string t" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 23.1 | | std | 20.86 | | cv | 0.903 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 50 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 40 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 11 |
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| 92.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "been called" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "was supposed" | | 3 | "was frozen" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | |
| 35.45% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "The beam of her torch cut through the dark, illuminating graffiti—twisted sigils and names scrawled in what looked like dried blood." | | 1 | "The beam of her torch caught the glint of something metallic on the ground—a bone token, its surface etched with spiraling patterns." | | 2 | "Her gaze swept the area—no bodies, no obvious signs of struggle." | | 3 | "She’d seen things like this before—just never in a place that was supposed to be ordinary." | | 4 | "More sigils, carved into the concrete—some fresh, some faded, as if they’d been there for years." |
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| 97.82% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 965 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04248704663212435 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011398963730569948 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 8.34 | | std | 6.77 | | cv | 0.812 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 42.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3082706766917293 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Just spray paint.*" | | 1 | "*Too cold.* She pocketed it" | | 2 | "Just the tunnel, the graffiti," | | 3 | "Instead, she turned her attention" | | 4 | "More sigils, carved into the" | | 5 | "Just the single, precise puncture." | | 6 | "Then, from the shadows behind" | | 7 | "Just the tunnel." | | 8 | "Just the humming air." |
| | ratio | 0.095 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked like a man" | | 1 | "Her gaze swept the area—no" | | 2 | "She stepped forward, her torchlight" | | 3 | "She crouched again, this time" | | 4 | "She’d seen things like this" | | 5 | "He followed her gaze and" | | 6 | "His suit was immaculate, his" | | 7 | "His eyes were wide, his" | | 8 | "She didn’t need to." | | 9 | "His limbs were too relaxed," | | 10 | "She knelt beside him, her" | | 11 | "His skin was cold, but" | | 12 | "She pressed two fingers against" | | 13 | "She stood, her gaze sweeping" | | 14 | "She cut him off, her" | | 15 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 16 | "She was already pulling on" | | 17 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 18 | "She turned slowly, her torchlight" | | 19 | "She didn’t answer." |
| | ratio | 0.221 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairwell reeked of damp" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended the" | | 2 | "The beam of her torch" | | 3 | "Quinn’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 4 | "The one she’d refused to" | | 5 | "*Tick-tock, tick-tock.* She exhaled through" | | 6 | "The beam of her torch" | | 7 | "Quinn crouched, her gloved fingers" | | 8 | "The voice came from the" | | 9 | "Quinn straightened, her torch flickering" | | 10 | "He looked like a man" | | 11 | "Quinn said, her voice flat" | | 12 | "Vane smirked, but it didn’t" | | 13 | "Quinn ignored the jab." | | 14 | "Her gaze swept the area—no" | | 15 | "Quinn’s jaw tightened" | | 16 | "She stepped forward, her torchlight" | | 17 | "A brass compass, its casing" | | 18 | "The needle spun wildly, as" | | 19 | "Vane followed her gaze." |
| | ratio | 0.716 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 20.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "*Too cold.* She pocketed it without touching the surface, her instincts screaming that this wasn’t just some discarded trinket." | | 1 | "He looked like a man who’d just stepped out of a gentleman’s club, not a detective who’d been called to an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden." | | 2 | "A brass compass, its casing etched with sigils that made her skin prickle." | | 3 | "She was already pulling on a pair of fresh gloves, her mind racing." | | 4 | "And now, a man who shouldn’t be alive was lying in a tunnel that shouldn’t exist, surrounded by sigils that made her skin crawl." | | 5 | "Quinn crouched beside the compass again, her torchlight catching the way the needle spun, as if searching for something just beyond their reach." | | 6 | "She reached out, her fingers hovering over the brass casing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice flat" | | 1 | "Vane asked, his voice low" | | 2 | "Vane said, his voice low" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Vane muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.233 | | leniency | 0.467 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |