Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8T5TMM8KP5FYND5QW4KFF

Run Details

Duration:
39.9s
Cost:
$0.000243
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain tasted like grit. Harlow Quinn wiped a bead of water from her brow, the salt-and-pepper cropped hair clinging damply to her forehead. Her worn leather watch, familiar and reassuring against her skin, ticked relentlessly. Seventeen seconds. That's how long she’d been following him, fifteen if you discounted the stumble over the overflowing bin on Greek Street. He moved with a frantic energy that belied his age, a wiry man in a charcoal suit, constantly looking over his shoulder. Not a professional, she decided. More like a panicked rabbit. But a rabbit leading her somewhere interesting. The scent of wet asphalt and exhaust fumes filled the air, a typical London night amplified by the downpour. She kept a steady pace, close enough to maintain visual contact, far enough to avoid immediate confrontation. The man, she’d learned from a quick database search, was Elias Vance, a low-level courier with a history of petty theft and a concerning number of late-night bank transfers into an untraceable account. Vance ducked into a narrow alleyway, disappearing into the churning darkness. Harlow didn’t hesitate. Years on the force had taught her the value of instinct, and hers screamed that this was more than a simple robbery. The alley ended abruptly at a wrought-iron gate, normally secured, but now swinging open with a groan. Beyond the gate was a descending staircase, slick with rainwater, disappearing into the bowels of the earth. A single bare bulb flickered overhead, casting long, distorted shadows. Harlow hesitated at the top of the stairs. The stench grew stronger here – damp earth, something vaguely metallic, and an underlying aroma that reminded her unpleasantly of formaldehyde. She pulled a small flashlight from her pocket, the beam cutting through the oppressive gloom. "Elias Vance!" she called out, her voice echoing strangely in the confined space. No response. She descended, each step echoing with a hollow thud. The air grew colder, the humidity almost palpable. The staircase opened into a concrete tunnel, the walls lined with rusting pipes and thick cables. The tunnel stretched on, seemingly endless, before abruptly terminating at a larger chamber. And then she saw it. The Veil Market. It was a sprawling labyrinth of makeshift stalls and tents, crammed into what looked like an abandoned Tube station platform. The ceiling was a vaulted expanse of concrete, dripping with condensation. The air shimmered with an unnatural luminescence, emanating from hundreds of flickering lanterns, each casting an eerie, colored light. The market throbbed with a strange, chaotic energy. Creatures Harlow had only read about in obscure case files moved amongst the stalls – gaunt figures with elongated limbs, shimmering beings that seemed to distort the light around them, and humans, but… changed. Their eyes glowed with an unsettling intensity, their movements too fluid, too precise. Vendors hawked their wares in a dozen different languages, their voices a discordant chorus. Tables overflowed with bizarre objects: glittering powders in ornate glass jars, intricately carved wooden dolls with unsettlingly realistic eyes, bundles of dried herbs that pulsed with a faint internal light. A thick, acrid smoke hung in the air, smelling of sulfur and something else, something ancient and indefinable. And there, in the center of it all, stood Elias Vance. He was speaking urgently to a tall, slender woman with skin the color of polished obsidian. She wore a long, flowing robe embroidered with silver runes, and a silver circlet adorned her forehead. He was handing her a small, intricately carved wooden box. Harlow killed the flashlight, melting into the shadows. She needed to observe, to assess. This was far beyond anything she'd encountered in her eighteen years with the Metropolitan Police. And significantly beyond her comfort zone. Her gut clenched. This wasn't petty theft. This was something… else. Something dangerous. The woman – whatever she was – examined the box with a practiced eye. She nodded curtly, then produced a small, bone token, intricately carved with a spiral design. Vance accepted it, slipping it into his pocket. He didn’t see her. Not yet. Harlow’s gaze swept the crowd, searching for an exit, a sign of authority, anything familiar. There was nothing. Just this swirling mass of… otherness. The raw, potent energy of the place pressed against her, a tangible weight. She thought of DS Morris. Three years. Three years since he'd vanished, leaving behind only a cryptic note and a lingering sense of dread. Three years she’d spent chasing shadows, trying to piece together the fragments of a case she barely understood. Could this… this place… have had something to do with it? The thought sent a shiver down her spine. A hand rested gently on her arm. Harlow whirled around, her hand instinctively reaching for her service weapon. A man stood behind her, his face obscured by the shadows. He was of medium height, olive-skinned, with short, dark brown curls and warm brown eyes. A Saint Christopher medallion hung around his neck. A faint, jagged scar traced a path along his left forearm. “Detective Quinn, I presume?” he said softly, his voice laced with a faint accent – Seville, she thought. Harlow didn’t lower her hand. “Who are you?” “Tomás Herrera. I’m a… facilitator,” he said, a wry smile playing on his lips. “And you, Detective, are trespassing.” “I’m investigating a suspect,” she said, her voice tight. “Elias Vance is a fool. He deals in trinkets, nothing more. You’re wasting your time.” “He was transferring large sums of money. Money that doesn’t exist.” Herrera shrugged. “The Market operates outside your usual accounting structures. Some transactions are… unorthodox.” Harlow’s eyes narrowed. “Outside the law, you mean.” “The law has no jurisdiction here, Detective.” He gestured with his hand, encompassing the bustling market. “This is a place beyond your understanding. A place best left alone.” “And what is this place?” Harlow pressed. Herrera’s expression grew serious. “A refuge. A marketplace. A place where those who don’t fit in, can find… acceptance.” He paused, his eyes fixed on her. “But it can also be a dangerous place. Especially for those who don’t understand its rules.” Harlow considered him. He seemed… genuine. But could she trust him? In a place like this, trust was a luxury she couldn't afford. She glanced back at Vance, who was now disappearing into the throng, the obsidian-skinned woman swallowed by the crowd. He was getting away. Her professional instincts screamed at her to pursue him. But something else – a deeper, more primal fear – warned her to retreat. This place was different. This place felt… wrong. The rain continued to fall, a relentless drumming on the concrete ceiling above. She felt the weight of her decision, heavy and suffocating. Follow Vance and risk stepping into a world she didn’t understand, a world that could consume her? Or abandon the chase and return to the familiar, albeit frustrating, reality of the Metropolitan Police? The thought of Morris haunted her. A world she *didn't* understand had already taken something from her. She stared at Herrera. "Tell me," she said, her voice low. "What’s the worst that could happen if I stay?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.118
91.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"database"
count1
2
word"churning"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count2
7
word"palpable"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"tangible"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"sense of"
count1
16
word"down her spine"
count1
17
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"database"
2"churning"
3"flickered"
4"oppressive"
5"gloom"
6"echoing"
7"palpable"
8"shimmered"
9"throbbed"
10"chaotic"
11"intensity"
12"pulsed"
13"tangible"
14"weight"
15"sense of"
16"down her spine"
17"traced"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1181
ratio0.001
matches
0"didn't"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1049
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Greek1
Street1
London1
Elias2
Vance6
Veil1
Market1
Tube1
Harlow11
Metropolitan2
Police2
Morris2
Saint1
Christopher1
Seville1
Herrera3
Three3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Elias"
2"Vance"
3"Market"
4"Harlow"
5"Morris"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Herrera"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"London"
3"Seville"
globalScore0.976
windowScore0.833
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"stretched on, seemingly endless, before abr"
1"looked like an abandoned Tube station pla"
2"beings that seemed to distort the light around them, and humans, but…"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1181
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"screamed that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean28.12
std18.6
cv0.662
sampleLengths
058
139
269
336
444
544
613
72
846
95
103
1150
1255
1362
1411
1543
1635
1713
1837
196
2037
2153
228
2318
2445
2518
268
2719
289
2915
3011
3114
328
3328
347
3542
3623
3723
3831
3956
4017
4120
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"was – examined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was speaking"
1"was handing"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences115
ratio0.043
matches
0"The stench grew stronger here – damp earth, something vaguely metallic, and an underlying aroma that reminded her unpleasantly of formaldehyde."
1"Creatures Harlow had only read about in obscure case files moved amongst the stalls – gaunt figures with elongated limbs, shimmering beings that seemed to distort the light around them, and humans, but…"
2"The woman – whatever she was – examined the box with a practiced eye."
3"“Detective Quinn, I presume?” he said softly, his voice laced with a faint accent – Seville, she thought."
4"But something else – a deeper, more primal fear – warned her to retreat."
98.36% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1049
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04003813155386082
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.0219256434699714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean10.27
std6.91
cv0.673
sampleLengths
05
119
212
32
420
522
65
75
87
919
1017
1133
1211
133
1422
1517
1617
1710
188
1921
2015
2113
222
239
248
2516
2613
275
283
2920
3011
3119
328
3333
341
3513
3614
3730
3818
3911
4016
4117
4210
438
446
4515
466
473
484
493
57.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.391304347826087
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners45
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"More like a panicked rabbit."
1"Just this swirling mass of…"
ratio0.022
96.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences91
matches
0"Her worn leather watch, familiar"
1"He moved with a frantic"
2"She kept a steady pace,"
3"She pulled a small flashlight"
4"she called out, her voice"
5"She descended, each step echoing"
6"It was a sprawling labyrinth"
7"Their eyes glowed with an"
8"He was speaking urgently to"
9"She wore a long, flowing"
10"He was handing her a"
11"She needed to observe, to"
12"Her gut clenched."
13"She nodded curtly, then produced"
14"He didn’t see her."
15"She thought of DS Morris."
16"He was of medium height,"
17"he said softly, his voice"
18"he said, a wry smile"
19"she said, her voice tight"
ratio0.308
53.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences91
matches
0"The rain tasted like grit."
1"Harlow Quinn wiped a bead"
2"Her worn leather watch, familiar"
3"That's how long she’d been"
4"He moved with a frantic"
5"The scent of wet asphalt"
6"She kept a steady pace,"
7"The man, she’d learned from"
8"Vance ducked into a narrow"
9"Harlow didn’t hesitate."
10"Years on the force had"
11"The alley ended abruptly at"
12"A single bare bulb flickered"
13"Harlow hesitated at the top"
14"The stench grew stronger here"
15"She pulled a small flashlight"
16"she called out, her voice"
17"She descended, each step echoing"
18"The air grew colder, the"
19"The staircase opened into a"
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He moved with a frantic energy that belied his age, a wiry man in a charcoal suit, constantly looking over his shoulder."
1"The stench grew stronger here – damp earth, something vaguely metallic, and an underlying aroma that reminded her unpleasantly of formaldehyde."
2"Creatures Harlow had only read about in obscure case files moved amongst the stalls – gaunt figures with elongated limbs, shimmering beings that seemed to disto…"
3"She glanced back at Vance, who was now disappearing into the throng, the obsidian-skinned woman swallowed by the crowd."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she called out, her voice echoing strangely in the confined space"
1"he said, a wry smile playing on his lips"
2"she said, her voice tight"
3"she said, her voice low"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"Harlow pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.235
74.9289%