Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8T60WGRZ7FFTYN2MQG97Z

Run Details

Duration:
14.7s
Cost:
$0.000503
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before the second knock even landed, as if Rory had been standing just behind it, fingers hovering over the deadbolts like a cat poised to pounce. But there was no one there—just the dim glow of the hallway lamp spilling over the threshold, and the sharp, unexpected scent of bergamot and something darker, like ozone after a storm. Then she saw him. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, his broad shoulders blocking most of the light, his platinum hair slicked back so severely it looked almost painted on. The amber eye caught the lamplight first, then the black one, unreadable as a still pond. He held a single black rose in one hand, its petals slightly singed at the edges, as if he’d plucked it from a place where fire still lingered. Rory’s breath hitched. *What the hell is he doing here?* “You’re late,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “I told you midnight.” Lucien didn’t move. Just tilted his head, that damned cane tucked under his arm like an afterthought. “I know what time it is, *Laila*.” The nickname—soft, almost intimate—sent a jolt through her. No one called her that anymore. Not since he left. She stepped back, letting the door swing wider, but didn’t invite him in. “You shouldn’t have come.” “Oh, but I did.” His gaze flicked past her, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—the stacks of books, the half-empty teacups, the tabby cat Ptolemy curled on the armchair like a furry sentinel. “Still living in squalor, I see.” Rory bristled. “It’s not squalor. It’s *organized*.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Of course it is.” He stepped inside before she could stop him, the cane tapping against the hardwood floor. “You always did have a thing for controlled chaos.” She crossed her arms. “What do you want, Lucien?” He turned, leaning against the doorframe like he had every right to be there. “I need your help.” That was the last thing she expected. Rory blinked. “My help?” “With something.” His fingers twitched toward the rose, then away. “It’s complicated.” “Aren’t they all?” She exhaled sharply, rubbing her thumb over the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit when she was annoyed. “You show up after two years with a dead flower and expect me to drop everything?” “It’s not dead.” His voice was low, almost a growl. “Just… *resting*.” Ptolemy chose that moment to stretch, arching his back with a loud *pop*, and Lucien’s gaze snapped to the cat. “You still have that thing?” “He’s not a *thing*,” Rory snapped. “He’s Eva’s cat. And yes, I still have him. Unlike some people, I don’t abandon my responsibilities.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “I didn’t abandon you.” “No?” She laughed, sharp and humorless. “Then explain why you vanished without a word. Why you let me think—” “I know what you thought.” His voice cut through hers, quiet but razor-edged. “But it wasn’t true.” Rory’s chest ached. She turned away, staring at the bookshelf instead of him. “Then why didn’t you tell me?” Silence. Then, softly: “Because I was afraid.” That stopped her. She turned back, eyes wide. “Afraid?” Lucien pushed off the doorframe, stepping closer. Too close. She could smell the bergamot now, sharp and citrusy, mixed with something darker—like smoke and old leather. “You have no idea what it’s like,” he murmured, “to be half of two worlds and neither of them wanting you.” Rory’s breath caught. She knew that feeling. Knew it better than most. But she also knew the look in his eyes—the way his black pupil swallowed the amber one when he was lying. Or hiding. “You could’ve said something,” she whispered. “I tried.” His hand lifted, fingers brushing the scar on her wrist. “Remember the night of the storm? You were bleeding, and I—” “I remember.” The memory flashed—rain lashing against the window, her wrist split open on broken glass, Lucien’s hands steadying hers, his voice low and urgent. *You’re going to be fine.* And then he was gone. “And then you left,” she finished. Lucien’s thumb traced the scar’s edge. “I had to.” “Because of *them*?” She jerked her hand away. “Because your demon father would’ve skinned you alive if you stayed?” His expression darkened. “You think I don’t know that?” “Then why come back?” she demanded. “Why now?” He didn’t answer right away. Just studied her, like he was memorizing the shape of her face, the way her hair fell just past her shoulders, the way her pulse jumped in her throat. “Because I need you.” The words hung between them, heavy with meaning. Rory’s heart pounded. She wanted to believe him. Wanted to throw herself into his arms and let him hold her like he used to, before everything went wrong. But she couldn’t. “You don’t get to walk back in here,” she said, voice trembling, “and expect me to just—” “Forget?” His laugh was bitter. “I don’t expect that. But I need you, Rory. For this. For *me*.” She swallowed hard. “What is it?” Lucien reached into his coat and pulled out a small, leather-bound journal. The cover was worn, the edges singed. He pressed it into her hands. When she opened it, her breath left her. The pages were filled with symbols—twisting, ink-black runes that seemed to writhe when she looked too long. And at the center of it all, a name she recognized: *Avaros.* Rory’s stomach twisted. “What is this?” “A ledger,” Lucien said. “From my father’s realm. It’s a map. A way to find something—or someone—before they find me.” She flipped through the pages, her fingers numb. “You’re in trouble.” “More than you know.” His voice was rough. “And I need your help to fix it.” Rory closed the journal, her mind racing. She should say no. Should slam the door in his face and never look back. But then she looked up at him—really looked—and saw the fear in his heterochromatic eyes, the way his fingers clenched around the cane like it was the only thing keeping him upright. And she remembered the way he’d held her hand that night, steady and sure, even when the world was falling apart. “Fine,” she said at last. “But we’re doing this *my* way.” Lucien’s shoulders relaxed, just slightly. “I’d expect nothing less.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the couch, tail flicking, and Lucien’s gaze followed him. “You’re still letting that thing sleep on your furniture?” Rory smirked. “Jealous?” “Never.” But the corner of his mouth twitched. Almost a smile. Almost. And just like that, the past and the present collided—two people who knew each other’s secrets, who had loved and hurt and lost, now standing in the middle of a storm they couldn’t outrun. Rory took a deep breath. “Alright. Start talking.” Lucien reached for her hand, his fingers warm against hers. “I will. But first—” He pulled her close, his mouth crashing against hers before she could protest. It was desperate. Hungry. Two years of unsaid words, of longing and anger and something deeper, something that hadn’t gone away. Rory melted into him, her hands gripping his coat, her fingers tangling in his hair. The rose fell to the floor, forgotten. And for the first time in a long time, she let herself believe that maybe—just maybe—this wasn’t over.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She exhaled sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.633
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.033
79.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"sentinel"
count1
3
word"the last thing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"flicked"
2"sentinel"
3"the last thing"
4"silence"
5"traced"
6"pulse"
7"stomach"
8"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences98
matches
0"was bitter"
1"was desperate"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords21
totalWords1221
ratio0.017
matches
0"What the hell is he doing here?"
1"Laila"
2"organized"
3"resting"
4"pop"
5"thing"
6"You’re going to be fine."
7"them"
8"me"
9"Avaros."
10"my"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount903
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Moreau1
Lucien12
Eva1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.78
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1221
matches(empty)
67.90% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences135
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"knew that feeling"
2"chose that moment"
3"like that, the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean18.5
std13.32
cv0.72
sampleLengths
062
14
269
310
414
524
618
717
840
97
1036
119
1218
1311
1412
1537
1612
1725
1823
197
2019
2117
2219
237
249
2547
2612
2723
286
2923
3035
316
329
3319
349
358
3638
3736
383
3917
4018
416
4225
438
4428
451
466
4720
4811
4916
94.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"was annoyed"
1"was gone"
2"were filled"
90.11% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was lying"
1"was memorizing"
2"was falling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences135
ratio0.081
matches
0"But there was no one there—just the dim glow of the hallway lamp spilling over the threshold, and the sharp, unexpected scent of bergamot and something darker, like ozone after a storm."
1"The nickname—soft, almost intimate—sent a jolt through her."
2"“Oh, but I did.” His gaze flicked past her, taking in the chaos of Eva’s flat—the stacks of books, the half-empty teacups, the tabby cat Ptolemy curled on the armchair like a furry sentinel."
3"“Aren’t they all?” She exhaled sharply, rubbing her thumb over the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit when she was annoyed."
4"She could smell the bergamot now, sharp and citrusy, mixed with something darker—like smoke and old leather."
5"But she also knew the look in his eyes—the way his black pupil swallowed the amber one when he was lying."
6"“I remember.” The memory flashed—rain lashing against the window, her wrist split open on broken glass, Lucien’s hands steadying hers, his voice low and urgent."
7"The pages were filled with symbols—twisting, ink-black runes that seemed to writhe when she looked too long."
8"But then she looked up at him—really looked—and saw the fear in his heterochromatic eyes, the way his fingers clenched around the cane like it was the only thing keeping him upright."
9"And just like that, the past and the present collided—two people who knew each other’s secrets, who had loved and hurt and lost, now standing in the middle of a storm they couldn’t outrun."
10"And for the first time in a long time, she let herself believe that maybe—just maybe—this wasn’t over."
84.30% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount920
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound journal."
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.051086956521739134
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007608695652173913
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean9.04
std7.65
cv0.846
sampleLengths
030
132
24
325
416
528
63
77
810
94
103
1114
127
138
146
154
1613
174
1834
196
202
215
228
2319
249
254
265
2714
284
297
302
312
3210
332
3421
3516
3610
372
3820
395
406
4117
423
434
446
4513
4613
474
483
4910
55.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.34814814814814815
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Just tilted his head, that"
2"Just studied her, like he"
3"Almost a smile."
ratio0.049
63.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences82
matches
0"He held a single black"
1"she said, her voice steadier"
2"She stepped back, letting the"
3"His gaze flicked past her,"
4"He stepped inside before she"
5"She crossed her arms."
6"He turned, leaning against the"
7"His fingers twitched toward the"
8"She exhaled sharply, rubbing her"
9"His voice was low, almost"
10"She laughed, sharp and humorless"
11"His voice cut through hers,"
12"She turned away, staring at"
13"She turned back, eyes wide."
14"She could smell the bergamot"
15"She knew that feeling."
16"His hand lifted, fingers brushing"
17"*You’re going to be fine.*"
18"She jerked her hand away"
19"His expression darkened."
ratio0.39
88.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences82
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway,"
2"The amber eye caught the"
3"He held a single black"
4"Rory’s breath hitched."
5"she said, her voice steadier"
6"Lucien didn’t move."
7"The nickname—soft, almost intimate—sent a"
8"She stepped back, letting the"
9"His gaze flicked past her,"
10"A ghost of a smile"
11"He stepped inside before she"
12"She crossed her arms."
13"He turned, leaning against the"
14"That was the last thing"
15"His fingers twitched toward the"
16"She exhaled sharply, rubbing her"
17"His voice was low, almost"
18"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
19"Lucien’s jaw tightened."
ratio0.744
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The door swung open before the second knock even landed, as if Rory had been standing just behind it, fingers hovering over the deadbolts like a cat poised to p…"
1"Two years of unsaid words, of longing and anger and something deeper, something that hadn’t gone away."
2"Rory melted into him, her hands gripping his coat, her fingers tangling in his hair."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"He stepped, the cane tapping against the hardwood floor"
2"His hand lifted, fingers brushing the scar on her wrist"
3"she said, voice trembling,"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory snapped (snap)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio0.556
effectiveRatio0.167
80.7174%