Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8TNYPTBEB74MR5GRMT1RN

Run Details

Duration:
4.3s
Cost:
$0.000201
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The front door of Eva’s flat groaned open under the weight of a key that didn’t belong, the deadbolt clicking back with a sharp *click*. Aurora Carter stepped inside, her breath catching for a second before she forced herself to steady her pulse. The air smelled of old paper and something faintly metallic—Eva’s usual scent, but it was different here, heavier, like the flat had been holding its breath for too long. Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the scar on her wrist, the crescent-shaped mark from the childhood accident that had left her with a habit of touching it when nerves flared. She’d been here before, of course—Eva had always been the one who’d dragged her out of her own messes, but this time, the reason was different. The knock had been too insistent, the knock that made you wonder if the person on the other side wasn’t just here for the coffee. The door creaked shut behind Lucien Moreau, his cane tapping lightly against the floor as he adjusted his tailored charcoal suit. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and for a heartbeat, the world narrowed to the way his lips parted just enough to let in a breath of smoke. He wore a faint smirk, but it didn’t reach his gaze. *As if he knew.* “Aurora,” he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. “I didn’t expect you to answer.” She exhaled through her nose, the scent of his cologne—something sharp and woodsy—clashing with the dusty library smell of Eva’s flat. “I didn’t expect you either.” Lucien’s cane paused mid-step, the ivory handle catching the dim light from the street outside. “Eva mentioned you’d be here.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. “She did.” A beat of silence stretched between them, thick with the weight of things unsaid. The flat was small, but it felt too big now, the shelves of books and scrolls suddenly too many, too loud. Aurora moved past him without looking at the cat—Ptolemy, curled up on the windowsill, his tail flicking lazily—toward the kitchen where the kettle was already whistling. “You should’ve called,” she said, pouring water into two mugs. Lucien followed her, his presence a warm, familiar pressure against her back. “I didn’t want to.” “Why not?” He turned, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist before she could pull away. “Because I knew you’d say no.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” “You did.” His voice was low, dangerous. “You always do.” She turned away, pressing the mug to her lips. “I’m not here for that.” Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor again, the blade hidden beneath the ivory. “Then what are you here for?” The question hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the mug, the heat of the water seeping into her palms. She looked at him—really looked—and saw the ghost of a scar on his cheek, the faintest line where his demon blood had once been. He’d told her stories about it, about the way the world had tried to burn him alive before he’d learned to control it. She remembered the way his hands had trembled when he’d first shown her the cane, how he’d said, *This is how I keep you safe.* “Because you’re here,” she said finally, her voice quieter than she intended. Lucien’s gaze darkened. “And you’re here because you’re not.” Aurora set the mug down with a clatter. “I’m here because I’m tired of running.” The words hung in the air, raw and unfiltered. Lucien’s fingers flexed around the cane, the blade glinting in the light. “You’ve been running for years.” She turned to face him, her chest aching. “I don’t know what you want from me.” “You don’t have to.” His voice was rough, like gravel underfoot. “But you’re here.” The flat felt smaller now, the space between them tighter. Aurora’s pulse hammered in her ears, the scent of his cologne overwhelming. She reached for the scar on her wrist, her fingers brushing against the old wound, the memory of the knife that had cut her there still sharp in her mind. Lucien stepped closer, his presence a physical thing, a wall she couldn’t push through. “You’re not alone anymore.” Aurora exhaled, the breath shaky. “I don’t know if I can do this.” Lucien’s eyes darkened. “Then do it anyway.” The words hung between them, heavy and final. Aurora looked at him—really looked—and saw the man she’d known once, the one who’d been there when she’d needed him, who’d held her when she’d fallen. She remembered the way his hands had been warm, the way his voice had been a promise. She turned away, her fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist one last time before she walked toward the door. “I’ll be back.” Lucien didn’t move. “You don’t have to leave.” Aurora opened the door, the cool night air hitting her face. She turned back, her heart pounding. “I don’t know if I can stay.” Lucien’s voice was low, almost a whisper. “Then don’t.” The door closed behind her, the deadbolt clicking shut with a finality that made her stomach twist. She stood there for a moment, the weight of what had just happened pressing down on her. Then she turned and walked down the street, the night air cool against her skin, the scent of Lucien’s cologne lingering in her memory. Aurora Carter had always been a runner. But tonight, she realized, she was done.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.071
73.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount928
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"lightly"
1"suddenly"
2"lazily"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount928
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"familiar"
4"trembled"
5"glinting"
6"pounding"
7"whisper"
8"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
90.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords12
totalWords914
ratio0.013
matches
0"click"
1"As if he knew."
2"This is how I keep you safe."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount788
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Carter2
Lucien11
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Aurora12
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.739
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount914
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean26.88
std24.15
cv0.898
sampleLengths
072
180
266
314
426
520
65
761
810
916
102
1121
1210
1310
1414
1519
1698
1712
189
1915
2026
2116
2214
2352
2418
2513
267
2751
2824
298
3024
319
3258
3314
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences78
ratio0.09
matches
0"The air smelled of old paper and something faintly metallic—Eva’s usual scent, but it was different here, heavier, like the flat had been holding its breath for too long."
1"She’d been here before, of course—Eva had always been the one who’d dragged her out of her own messes, but this time, the reason was different."
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and for a heartbeat, the world narrowed to the way his lips parted just enough to let in a breath of smoke."
3"She exhaled through her nose, the scent of his cologne—something sharp and woodsy—clashing with the dusty library smell of Eva’s flat."
4"Aurora moved past him without looking at the cat—Ptolemy, curled up on the windowsill, his tail flicking lazily—toward the kitchen where the kettle was already whistling."
5"She looked at him—really looked—and saw the ghost of a scar on his cheek, the faintest line where his demon blood had once been."
6"Aurora looked at him—really looked—and saw the man she’d known once, the one who’d been there when she’d needed him, who’d held her when she’d fallen."
99.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount802
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.04114713216957606
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008728179551122194
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean11.72
std8.14
cv0.695
sampleLengths
025
118
229
329
426
525
621
730
811
94
108
116
1221
135
1415
155
163
172
1814
1921
2026
2110
2212
234
242
2515
266
273
287
297
303
319
325
3313
346
3511
3615
3724
3823
3925
4012
413
426
438
447
459
4612
475
488
498
46.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.20512820512820512
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners16
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Then she turned and walked"
ratio0.018
74.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences55
matches
0"She’d been here before, of"
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
2"He wore a faint smirk,"
3"he said, voice smooth as"
4"She exhaled through her nose,"
5"she said, pouring water into"
6"He turned, his fingers brushing"
7"His voice was low, dangerous"
8"She turned away, pressing the"
9"She looked at him—really looked—and"
10"He’d told her stories about"
11"She remembered the way his"
12"she said finally, her voice"
13"She turned to face him,"
14"His voice was rough, like"
15"She reached for the scar"
16"She remembered the way his"
17"She turned away, her fingers"
18"She turned back, her heart"
19"She stood there for a"
ratio0.364
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences55
matches
0"The front door of Eva’s"
1"Aurora Carter stepped inside, her"
2"The air smelled of old"
3"Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the"
4"She’d been here before, of"
5"The knock had been too"
6"The door creaked shut behind"
7"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
8"He wore a faint smirk,"
9"he said, voice smooth as"
10"She exhaled through her nose,"
11"Lucien’s cane paused mid-step, the"
12"Aurora’s jaw tightened."
13"A beat of silence stretched"
14"The flat was small, but"
15"Aurora moved past him without"
16"she said, pouring water into"
17"Lucien followed her, his presence"
18"He turned, his fingers brushing"
19"Aurora’s breath hitched."
ratio0.945
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"*As if he knew.*"
ratio0.018
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The front door of Eva’s flat groaned open under the weight of a key that didn’t belong, the deadbolt clicking back with a sharp *click*."
1"Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the scar on her wrist, the crescent-shaped mark from the childhood accident that had left her with a habit of touching it when …"
2"Aurora moved past him without looking at the cat—Ptolemy, curled up on the windowsill, his tail flicking lazily—toward the kitchen where the kettle was already …"
3"She reached for the scar on her wrist, her fingers brushing against the old wound, the memory of the knife that had cut her there still sharp in her mind."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey"
1"she said finally, her voice quieter than she intended"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.9273%