Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8TS1SVMAYYW95GBYH6Y9N

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.047082
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pelted the cobblestones of Soho like shotgun blasts, turning the narrow alleys into slick rivers under the sodium glow of streetlamps. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted hard, her boots slamming through puddles that sprayed up in filthy arcs. Water soaked her trench coat, wormed its way under her collar, but she ignored it. Ahead, the suspect darted left down Dean Street, his silhouette a blurred shadow against the neon haze from shuttered shopfronts. Tomás Herrera. She knew his face from the files—olive skin, that scar on his left forearm glinting as he pumped his arms. Former paramedic, unlicensed now, tied to that clique she’d been circling for months. “Stop! Police!” Quinn barked, her voice cutting through the downpour. No chance he’d listen. He vaulted a low barrier, skidded around a corner toward Shaftesbury Avenue. She followed, lungs burning, her sharp jaw set in a grimace. Eighteen years on the force, and chases like this still lit a fire in her veins. But this one felt different. Morris’s ghost hovered at the edges—her old partner, gone three years in a blur of unexplained shadows. Supernatural, they whispered in the precinct corners. She shoved the thought down. Herrera glanced back, his warm brown eyes wide for a split second, curls plastered flat by the rain. He clutched something tight in his fist—a package? Evidence? Quinn’s hand brushed the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a habit from her military days. Precision. Focus. She closed the gap, dodging a cluster of overflowing bins that spilled trash into the gutter. He bolted across the avenue, horns blaring as a black cab swerved to miss him. Quinn leaped after, her military bearing keeping her strides efficient, unyielding. The rain hammered harder, blurring the world into streaks of light and dark. Herrera veered into a side street, past the glowing green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest. The bar’s door swung open for a moment, spilling warm light and laughter onto the wet pavement—old maps on walls, black-and-white photos staring out like accusatory eyes. Someone inside shouted, but Herrera didn’t stop. He shoved past a group of smokers huddled under an awning, knocking one into the wall. Quinn powered through, her salt-and-pepper hair cropped close and dripping. “Herrera! You’re making this worse!” She didn’t expect a reply, but yelling kept the pressure on. Her mind raced: he’d been spotted leaving a meet at the Nest, that dim hole in Soho where whispers of enchanted deals floated like smoke. She’d staked it out for weeks, piecing together the clique’s web—off-the-books meds, supernatural patients. Morris had died chasing something similar, his body found twisted in ways no human could manage. Herrera cut right, into a narrower alley where the buildings leaned in like conspirators. Puddles reflected fractured moonlight, shattered by his splashing footsteps. Quinn’s boots echoed hers, closer now. He risked a look over his shoulder, Saint Christopher medallion swinging wild from his neck. “You don’t know what you’re chasing, Detective!” His accent clipped the words, Seville roots threading through the panic. “Enlighten me, then!” she shot back, voice steady despite the burn in her thighs. No fluff, no pause. Action rolled forward. He didn’t. Instead, he slammed into a metal gate at the alley’s end, rattling it open with a shoulder check. Beyond lay a descent—stairs leading down to what looked like an old service entrance, graffiti-scrawled and forgotten. Quinn recognized the area: fringes of Camden, where the city buried its secrets. Herrera vanished into the gloom, footsteps echoing hollow on concrete steps. She skidded to a halt at the top, rain cascading over her like a curtain. Breath came in sharp bursts. The gate hung ajar, inviting. Underground. Her gut twisted—memories of Morris’s case, the unexplained depths where he’d vanished. She’d found his badge in a sewer grate, etched with symbols that made no sense. Supernatural origins she couldn’t wrap her head around yet. Herrera’s voice floated up from below, muffled. “Stay out, Quinn! This isn’t your world!” Her brown eyes narrowed. She drew her service weapon, a standard-issue Glock, grip slick but firm. Military precision guided her descent, one step at a time, the rain fading to a distant roar. The stairs spiraled down, walls damp and lined with cracked tiles that whispered of abandoned Tube lines. Camden’s underbelly—forgotten stations, ghost platforms where the city’s pulse thrummed unseen. Light flickered at the bottom, not electric but something warmer, erratic. Torches? She paused, ears straining. Voices murmured, a low hum like a market bazaar. Herrera’s footsteps faded into that noise. Quinn holstered her weapon for now—going in hot could escalate whatever waited below. But her hand hovered near it, ready. The stairs ended at a heavy door, iron-bound and etched with faint runes that prickled her skin. It stood cracked open, just enough for a man to slip through. She pressed her ear to it. Laughter, haggling, the clink of glass or metal. Not a standard bolt-hole. This reeked of the fringes she’d skimmed in reports—the Veil Market. Whispers from informants painted it as a supernatural black market, peddling enchanted junk and banned potions. Moved every full moon, entry by bone token. Tonight, beneath Camden. Unfamiliar territory, potentially lethal for a cop who played by mortal rules. Quinn’s jaw tightened. Follow or not? Backup was a radio call away, but they’d laugh her out if she mentioned “supernatural.” And Herrera? He could vanish into that crowd, melt away with whatever he carried. The clique’s secrets, maybe the key to Morris’s death. “You’re out of your depth!” Herrera’s voice again, closer now, through the door. Taunting? Warning? She pushed the door wider, the hinges groaning like a warning. Dim light spilled out, revealing a cavernous space—an abandoned Tube platform, arched ceilings vaulted high, tracks long rusted over. Stalls crammed the space, makeshift booths draped in tattered fabrics, lit by floating orbs that bobbed like willful fireflies. Vendors hawked wares: vials of swirling liquids, amulets pulsing with inner light, scrolls unrolling to reveal glowing scripts. The air thickened with incense, sharp herbs, and something metallic—blood? People milled about, not all human. A figure with elongated ears bartered over a crystal, another with scaled skin slithered past. Quinn froze in the entryway, her 5'9" frame rigid. This wasn’t her world. No badges here, no laws she understood. Herrera weaved through the crowd ahead, glancing back. He flashed something—a small bone token, carved intricate— and slipped past a burly guard into a denser section of the market. The guard turned, eyes locking on Quinn. Hulking, with tusks curving from his lower jaw. “Token?” His voice rumbled like gravel. She hesitated, hand inching toward her badge. Bluff? Force her way? The market pulsed around her, alive with deals that could unravel her reality. Morris had chased something like this, and it swallowed him whole. “I’m looking for that man,” she said, nodding toward Herrera’s retreating form. No uncertainty in her tone—direct, pushing the action. The guard snorted. “No token, no entry. Rules of the Veil.” Herrera paused at a stall, haggling with a hooded vendor. He shot her a look—pleading? “Go back, Detective. Before you can’t.” The crowd shifted, eyes turning her way. Whispers rippled. A woman with feathers instead of hair cackled. “Mortal law? Here?” Quinn’s pulse hammered. Decision time. Step in, unarmed in every sense that mattered, or retreat and lose the trail. Her watch ticked, a steady reminder. Precision demanded pursuit. Morris demanded answers. She stepped forward, ignoring the guard’s growl. “Try stopping me.” The guard lunged, but she dodged, military training kicking in. She shoved past, into the throng. Bodies pressed close, smells overwhelming—spice, decay, magic. Herrera bolted deeper, knocking over a display of glowing herbs that scattered like embers. Quinn pursued, weaving through the chaos. A vendor thrust a necklace at her— “Protection from shadows!” —but she batted it away. The market twisted, stalls giving way to shadowed alcoves where deals turned darker. She caught glimpses: a cage holding shimmering sprites, a table of potions labeled in tongues she didn’t know. Herrera ducked into a tent, fabric flapping. Quinn followed, bursting in to find him cornered against crates stacked high with forbidden tomes. “End of the line,” she said, blocking the exit. He clutched his package—a wrapped bundle, seeping faint light. “You followed. Stupid move.” “Hand it over.” She advanced, eyes on his scar, the medallion. “What is it? Drugs? Enchantments?” His laugh came bitter. “You think it’s that simple? This market chews up outsiders. Your partner learned that.” Quinn’s blood ran cold. “What do you know about Morris?” “Enough to warn you off.” He edged sideways, testing. She matched him. “Talk.” Voices outside rose— the guard, rallying others? The tent flap rustled. Herrera bolted again, shoving crates that toppled in her path. Quinn leaped over, pursuing into a labyrinth of back passages. The market’s underbelly, where the real dangers lurked. Dimmer lights, heavier air. Figures skulked in corners, eyes gleaming unnatural. He slammed through a door into what looked like a storage vault, relics piled haphazardly. Quinn burst in after, slamming it shut behind her. “Nowhere left, Herrera.” He whirled, panting. “You don’t get it. The clique isn’t criminal—it’s survival. Supernaturals need care the NHS won’t touch. I lost my license for that.” “And Morris? What killed him?” Herrera’s face softened fractionally. “Something from here. A deal gone wrong. Follow me deeper, and it’ll claim you too.” The door rattled—pounding fists. “Intruder!” someone bellowed. Quinn glanced back, then at Herrera. Unfamiliar territory, yes. Dangerous, absolutely. But retreat now meant losing everything. She grabbed his arm, twisting it behind him. “You’re coming with me.” He resisted, elbow jabbing. They grappled, knocking over a shelf of artifacts that clattered like bones. An amulet rolled free, glowing fierce. The door buckled inward. Quinn released him, drawing her Glock. “Out the back. Move!” Herrera hesitated, then nodded. They fled through a rear exit, into twisting tunnels that burrowed deeper under Camden. The market’s hum faded, replaced by dripping water and echoing steps. Quinn’s mind raced. This was it—crossing into the unknown. No turning back now. They emerged into a chamber lit by bioluminescent fungi, walls etched with ancient maps. Herrera stopped, pointing to a ladder leading up. “Surface that way. But if you drag me out, the clique falls. People die.” She eyed the ladder, then him. Decision crystallized. “Tell me about Morris, and maybe we negotiate.” Pounding footsteps approached from behind. Herrera climbed first, Quinn covering. As they ascended, rain’s roar returned, promising the street’s sanity. But the market’s pull lingered, a shadow she’d chosen to embrace. At the top, a manhole cover. Herrera shoved it open, night air rushing in. Quinn followed, emerging into another alley, rain still falling. But the chase had changed her. Unfamiliar territory? She’d dived in headfirst. Now, the real pursuit began.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:36:06.977Z" 2/20/2026, 7:36:06 PM
model"x-ai/grok-4-07-09" 4/7/2009, 12:00:00 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Herrera’s face softened fractionally. [fractionally]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.762
leniency1
rawRatio0.031
effectiveRatio0.031
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1830
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1830
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"efficient"
count1
2
word"raced"
count2
3
word"fractured"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count4
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count2
9
word"cascading"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"etched"
count3
12
word"standard"
count2
13
word"pulse"
count2
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"electric"
count1
16
word"crystal"
count1
17
word"intricate"
count1
18
word"hulking"
count1
19
word"pulsed"
count1
20
word"unravel"
count1
21
word"reminder"
count1
22
word"gleaming"
count1
23
word"pounding"
count2
24
word"absolutely"
count1
25
word"crystallized"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"efficient"
2"raced"
3"fractured"
4"shattered"
5"footsteps"
6"echoed"
7"gloom"
8"echoing"
9"cascading"
10"depths"
11"etched"
12"standard"
13"pulse"
14"flickered"
15"electric"
16"crystal"
17"intricate"
18"hulking"
19"pulsed"
20"unravel"
21"reminder"
22"gleaming"
23"pounding"
24"absolutely"
25"crystallized"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences147
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1800
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Supernatural, they whispered in the precinct corners."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions78
wordCount1665
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow1
Quinn22
Dean1
Street1
Herrera22
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Raven1
Nest2
Saint1
Christopher1
Seville1
Camden4
Morris6
Glock2
Tube2
Veil1
Market1
Taunting1
Drugs1
Unfamiliar3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Raven"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Camden"
7"Morris"
8"Glock"
9"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dean"
2"Street"
3"Shaftesbury"
4"Avenue"
5"Nest"
6"Seville"
globalScore0.839
windowScore0.667
77.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like an old service entrance, graf"
1"something like this, and it swallowed him wh"
2"looked like a storage vault, relics piled"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.556
wordCount1800
matches
0"not electric but something warmer, erratic"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean31.58
std26.58
cv0.842
sampleLengths
0108
187
262
3105
481
562
621
761
862
914
1061
1151
1297
1344
1415
1577
1641
1729
1821
1935
2020
2111
2221
2320
2431
2510
2637
2752
2822
299
3013
3116
3218
3310
349
354
3611
3739
3827
3925
405
4119
427
4317
4412
4522
464
4710
4829
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"been spotted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs349
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount26
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences22
totalSentences152
ratio0.145
matches
0"She knew his face from the files—olive skin, that scar on his left forearm glinting as he pumped his arms."
1"Morris’s ghost hovered at the edges—her old partner, gone three years in a blur of unexplained shadows."
2"He clutched something tight in his fist—a package?"
3"The bar’s door swung open for a moment, spilling warm light and laughter onto the wet pavement—old maps on walls, black-and-white photos staring out like accusatory eyes."
4"She’d staked it out for weeks, piecing together the clique’s web—off-the-books meds, supernatural patients."
5"Beyond lay a descent—stairs leading down to what looked like an old service entrance, graffiti-scrawled and forgotten."
6"Her gut twisted—memories of Morris’s case, the unexplained depths where he’d vanished."
7"Camden’s underbelly—forgotten stations, ghost platforms where the city’s pulse thrummed unseen."
8"Quinn holstered her weapon for now—going in hot could escalate whatever waited below."
9"This reeked of the fringes she’d skimmed in reports—the Veil Market."
10"Dim light spilled out, revealing a cavernous space—an abandoned Tube platform, arched ceilings vaulted high, tracks long rusted over."
11"The air thickened with incense, sharp herbs, and something metallic—blood?"
12"Herrera weaved through the crowd ahead, glancing back. He flashed something—a small bone token, carved intricate— and slipped past a burly guard into a denser section of the market."
13"“I’m looking for that man,” she said, nodding toward Herrera’s retreating form. No uncertainty in her tone—direct, pushing the action."
14"Herrera paused at a stall, haggling with a hooded vendor. He shot her a look—pleading? “Go back, Detective."
15"The guard lunged, but she dodged, military training kicking in. She shoved past, into the throng. Bodies pressed close, smells overwhelming—spice, decay, magic. Herrera bolted deeper, knocking over a display of glowing herbs that scattered like embers."
16"Quinn pursued, weaving through the chaos. A vendor thrust a necklace at her— “Protection from shadows!” —but she batted it away. The market twisted, stalls giving way to shadowed alcoves where deals turned darker. She caught glimpses: a cage holding shimmering sprites, a table of potions labeled in tongues she didn’t know."
17"He clutched his package—a wrapped bundle, seeping faint light. “You followed."
18"Voices outside rose— the guard, rallying others? The tent flap rustled."
19"The clique isn’t criminal—it’s survival."
20"The door rattled—pounding fists. “Intruder!” someone bellowed."
21"Quinn’s mind raced. This was it—crossing into the unknown. No turning back now."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1130
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.01592920353982301
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002654867256637168
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean11.84
std8.44
cv0.713
sampleLengths
022
116
215
320
42
520
613
710
84
912
1011
1116
125
1317
147
155
1618
178
181
1917
201
211
2216
2315
2411
2513
2616
2727
287
2916
3010
3116
3225
3314
3416
3514
369
376
3815
3918
4014
414
423
432
4418
4517
4613
4711
4815
495
79.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.48026315789473684
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners73
24.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"Instead, he slammed into a"
ratio0.007
97.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences134
matches
0"She knew his face from"
1"He vaulted a low barrier,"
2"She followed, lungs burning, her"
3"She shoved the thought down."
4"He clutched something tight in"
5"She closed the gap, dodging"
6"He bolted across the avenue,"
7"He shoved past a group"
8"She didn’t expect a reply,"
9"Her mind raced: he’d been"
10"She’d staked it out for"
11"He risked a look over"
12"His accent clipped the words,"
13"she shot back, voice steady"
14"She skidded to a halt"
15"Her gut twisted—memories of Morris’s"
16"She’d found his badge in"
17"Her brown eyes narrowed."
18"She drew her service weapon,"
19"She paused, ears straining."
ratio0.306
42.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences134
matches
0"Rain pelted the cobblestones of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted hard,"
2"Water soaked her trench coat,"
3"She knew his face from"
4"Quinn barked, her voice cutting"
5"He vaulted a low barrier,"
6"She followed, lungs burning, her"
7"Morris’s ghost hovered at the"
8"She shoved the thought down."
9"Herrera glanced back, his warm"
10"He clutched something tight in"
11"Quinn’s hand brushed the worn"
12"She closed the gap, dodging"
13"He bolted across the avenue,"
14"Quinn leaped after, her military"
15"The rain hammered harder, blurring"
16"Herrera veered into a side"
17"The bar’s door swung open"
18"Someone inside shouted, but Herrera"
19"He shoved past a group"
ratio0.836
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"Before you can’t"
1"Now, the real pursuit began."
ratio0.015
42.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted hard, her boots slamming through puddles that sprayed up in filthy arcs."
1"She’d found his badge in a sewer grate, etched with symbols that made no sense."
2"The stairs spiraled down, walls damp and lined with cracked tiles that whispered of abandoned Tube lines."
3"Unfamiliar territory, potentially lethal for a cop who played by mortal rules."
4"Stalls crammed the space, makeshift booths draped in tattered fabrics, lit by floating orbs that bobbed like willful fireflies."
5"She hesitated, hand inching toward her badge. Bluff? Force her way? The market pulsed around her, alive with deals that could unravel her reality. Morris had ch…"
6"Quinn’s pulse hammered. Decision time. Step in, unarmed in every sense that mattered, or retreat and lose the trail. Her watch ticked, a steady reminder. Precis…"
7"He resisted, elbow jabbing. They grappled, knocking over a shelf of artifacts that clattered like bones. An amulet rolled free, glowing fierce."
8"Herrera hesitated, then nodded. They fled through a rear exit, into twisting tunnels that burrowed deeper under Camden. The market’s hum faded, replaced by drip…"
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn barked, her voice cutting through the downpour"
1"she shot back, voice steady despite the burn in her thighs"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn barked (bark)"
1"a radio call away (call away)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.095
81.3111%