Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8VAQ4CPF4Y89MVFGVP9B6

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Duration:
33.6s
Cost:
$0.000364
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
“You have the wrong flat.” The words tasted like ash. It had been three years. Three years since the last time I’d heard his accent, felt the heat of his gaze. Three years since I'd convinced myself I was better off without him. He stood there, a charcoal suit a stark contrast against the faded brick of the hallway, rain slicking his platinum blond hair. Lucien Moreau. The Frenchman. He didn’t smile, didn’t even blink. Just fixed me with those unsettlingly mismatched eyes – amber and black – that seemed to devour everything in their path. “Do I? Because last I checked, flat 3B, above Silas’ bar, was occupied by a Miss Aurora Carter. Or is she avoiding me?" My hand tightened on the doorknob. Silas had warned me about a stream of strange clients using his bar as a meeting point, but nothing prepared me for *this*. “She is. And she’s busy.” A pathetic lie. I was in my pajamas, attempting to assemble a flat-pack bookshelf that was rapidly winning the battle. He pushed past me, smoothly sidestepping the discarded instruction manual on the floor. My flat wasn't exactly a showcase. Boxes still littered a corner, remnants from the move six months ago. A half-finished mug of tea sat on the coffee table next to a scattering of delivery flyers from Golden Empress. “Busy doing what? Battling inanimate objects? I find that remarkably mundane for a woman who once scaled a cathedral wall for a lost cat." The memory hit me with the force of a physical blow. Ptolemy. Eva's tabby. And a dare. A stupid, impulsive dare that had landed me face-to-face with a furious priest and Lucien, inexplicably, rescuing me from the rooftop. "That's none of your concern." I jammed the door shut, fumbling with the chain. “Everything about you is my concern, Aurora.” He didn't bother with the chain. He simply turned the heavy bolt. It clicked open with a disheartening ease. "Silas tells me you're working as a delivery driver now." That was low. “And you’re trespassing.” He ignored me, his gaze sweeping across the room, taking in the chaos with a disturbingly clinical appraisal. “A far cry from your days as a law student. Though, I suppose legal loopholes and lukewarm curries require a different skillset.” "Get out, Lucien." My voice was higher pitched than I intended. I hadn’t yelled at anyone in months. The noise felt foreign, raw. He paused, leaning against the doorframe. "I need your help," he said softly, and the ease in his voice was unsettling. "I don't help people I don't know," I retorted. "And I certainly don't help exes I'm actively trying to forget." His lips curved, a fleeting smirk that didn’t quite reach his eyes. "A regrettable oversight on my part. Let me refresh your memory. You owe me, Aurora. A debt incurred long before you fled London and pretended I didn't exist.” My stomach plummeted. The debt. It was a tangled mess of favors, secrets, and misplaced trust from a time when I was younger, foolish, and desperately trying to prove myself in London’s murky underbelly. "That debt is paid." He stepped closer, the scent of expensive cologne and something indefinably…dark…filling the small space. “Is it? Because I believe a certain item is still missing. An item you unwittingly acquired. An item that some very powerful people would like to have back.” I recoiled, bumping into the flimsy bookshelf. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” He chuckled, a low, dangerous sound. "Don't play coy with me, Aurora. The pendant. The Serpent's Eye. It's been located. And it's in your possession." The pendant. It had surfaced during a job for Eva, a relic uncovered from a dusty antique shop. It felt…wrong. Cold against my skin. I’d handed it over to Eva for appraisal, and she’d sworn she’d put it in storage. Then, she vanished. Along with the pendant. “Eva has it,” I insisted, though the lie felt thin even to my own ears. “She’s been missing for months. Don't you care?” His expression hardened, his unsettling eyes locking onto mine. “Eva made her choices. And those choices have consequences.” He straightened, his hand disappearing inside his coat, emerging with a slim, ivory-handled cane. The familiar gleam of polished bone. "I don't trust you," I stated, maintaining eye contact even as my heart hammered against my ribs. "Trust is a luxury we can't afford," he replied, his voice barely a whisper. "The people who want the pendant aren't known for their patience. Or their mercy." He tapped the cane against the floor. “I’m giving you a choice, Aurora. Help me retrieve it, or watch as the fallout consumes you.” "And if I refuse?" His smile returned, and this time it didn’t soften his features. It sharpened them, revealing a predatory edge I’d almost forgotten. "Then you'll learn precisely why I’ve always been so very interested in you." I stared at the cane, at the casual threat lurking within its elegant form. There was no reasoning with him. No negotiating. Only choices, each more perilous than the last. I was caught in a web of his making, spun from secrets, lies, and a dangerous, undeniable attraction. “Where do we start?” Lucien’s lips curved, satisfaction gleaming in the depths of his eyes. “We start with a visit to a certain antique dealer in Spitalfields. One with a penchant for rare artifacts and a surprisingly bad memory.” He turned and strode towards the door, his tailored coat swirling around him. He paused, his hand on the knob. “And Aurora?” “Yes?” “Try not to break anything this time.” He left, the door clicking shut behind him, leaving a lingering scent of rain and danger. I sank onto the nearest chair, the unfinished bookshelf forgotten. The pendant. Eva. Lucien. It was a chaotic, terrifying puzzle, and I had the distinct feeling that the pieces didn't quite fit. The phone buzzed. A text from Eva’s tabby, Ptolemy. *Meow.* The meow was followed by a photo. A blurry image of a single, glittering, green eye staring back at me. The Serpent's Eye. Ptolemy had found it. And he was sending me a message.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.063
80.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1032
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1032
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"fleeting"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"depths"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"fleeting"
2"stomach"
3"familiar"
4"whisper"
5"gleaming"
6"depths"
7"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1029
ratio0.002
matches
0"this"
1"Meow."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount697
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien4
London1
Eva5
Ptolemy3
Serpent1
Eye1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Serpent"
5"Eye"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"quite fit"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1029
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean31.18
std18.18
cv0.583
sampleLengths
05
164
250
354
475
552
636
76
840
923
1021
1120
1240
1338
1442
1514
1625
1747
1823
1938
2017
2152
224
2334
2452
2535
2622
271
2823
2932
3010
3127
327
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"was caught"
1"was followed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs117
matches
0"was sending"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences99
ratio0.01
matches
0"Just fixed me with those unsettlingly mismatched eyes – amber and black – that seemed to devour everything in their path."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount700
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slim, ivory-handled cane."
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.032857142857142856
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.017142857142857144
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean10.39
std7.37
cv0.709
sampleLengths
05
15
25
316
412
522
62
72
86
921
1023
116
1223
138
1417
1513
166
1712
1820
1924
2011
211
222
233
2421
2514
2613
276
287
2910
303
313
3218
3322
3411
357
365
376
3815
399
4011
4112
4228
433
442
4529
464
4714
4828
497
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"Just fixed me with those"
1"Then, she vanished."
2"Only choices, each more perilous"
ratio0.045
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences66
matches
0"It had been three years."
1"He stood there, a charcoal"
2"He didn’t smile, didn’t even"
3"My hand tightened on the"
4"I was in my pajamas,"
5"He pushed past me, smoothly"
6"My flat wasn't exactly a"
7"I jammed the door shut,"
8"He didn't bother with the"
9"He simply turned the heavy"
10"It clicked open with a"
11"He ignored me, his gaze"
12"My voice was higher pitched"
13"I hadn’t yelled at anyone"
14"He paused, leaning against the"
15"he said softly, and the"
16"His lips curved, a fleeting"
17"My stomach plummeted."
18"It was a tangled mess"
19"He stepped closer, the scent"
ratio0.591
35.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences66
matches
0"The words tasted like ash."
1"It had been three years."
2"He stood there, a charcoal"
3"He didn’t smile, didn’t even"
4"My hand tightened on the"
5"Silas had warned me about"
6"A pathetic lie"
7"I was in my pajamas,"
8"He pushed past me, smoothly"
9"My flat wasn't exactly a"
10"Boxes still littered a corner,"
11"A half-finished mug of tea"
12"The memory hit me with"
13"A stupid, impulsive dare that"
14"I jammed the door shut,"
15"He didn't bother with the"
16"He simply turned the heavy"
17"It clicked open with a"
18"That was low."
19"He ignored me, his gaze"
ratio0.848
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"I was in my pajamas, attempting to assemble a flat-pack bookshelf that was rapidly winning the battle."
1"A stupid, impulsive dare that had landed me face-to-face with a furious priest and Lucien, inexplicably, rescuing me from the rooftop."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"I insisted, though the lie felt thin even to my own ears"
1"he replied, his voice barely a whisper"
56.25% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"I retorted (retort)"
1"I insisted (insist)"
2"I stated (state)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.313
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.188
81.9156%