Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8VNNW0JWNBX7TARDJ16C0

Run Details

Duration:
24.7s
Cost:
$0.001356
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the rusted metal stairs into the guts of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Her worn leather watch ticked against her wrist, the only sound piercing the damp silence. Flashlights from the forensics team bobbed like fireflies in the murk, casting jagged shadows across cracked tiles and forgotten posters peeling from the walls. The air hung thick with the scent of mold and something sharper—ozone, like a storm trapped underground. She ducked under a low beam, her salt-and-pepper hair brushing the edge of her collar. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to read scenes like maps, but this place twisted the compass. The Veil Market, they called it. Whispers in the precinct painted it as a myth, a black market for the weird and forbidden, tucked away in places the living forgot. Tonight, it bled into reality with yellow crime scene tape fluttering in a draft that shouldn't exist. Uniforms parted as she approached the cordoned area. A body sprawled in the center of what looked like a makeshift stall—empty crates stacked as shelves, remnants of glowing vials shattered on the concrete. The victim, a wiry man in his thirties, face frozen in a rictus of surprise, lay amid the glass shards. His throat gaped open, not sliced but as if something had unraveled it from the inside. "Quinn," a voice cut through the low murmur of techs snapping photos. Eva Kowalski emerged from behind a pillar, her curly red hair tied back, round glasses perched on her freckled nose. She clutched her worn leather satchel, stuffed with books that poked at the seams. "You made good time. Traffic up top was a nightmare." Harlow nodded, eyes already scanning. Eva had consulted on a few odd cases before—her gig at the British Museum's restricted archives made her the go-to for anything that smelled like history gone sour. Tonight, the brass had pulled her in as a civilian expert. "What've we got? And why the hell is this place lit up like a Christmas tree gone wrong?" Eva tucked a stray curl behind her left ear, a tell Harlow had clocked years ago as nerves kicking in. "Power's jury-rigged from the old lines. Market folk tapped into the grid without tripping breakers. Victim's name is Silas Trent. Vendor, apparently. Dealt in curios—enchanted trinkets, banned herbs. No priors, but his stall was hot tonight. Full moon's got the place hopping, or hopping less quietly." Harlow crouched beside the body, gloved hands hovering over the wound. Blood pooled in a perfect circle, no sprays, no arcs. The edges frayed like pulled thread, veins visible beneath pale skin as if the flesh had dissolved. "Stabbed? Poison?" Eva shook her head, pulling a small notebook from her satchel. "Not that simple. Forensics prelim says no blade marks. Toxicology's pending, but the cut—it's cauterized. Like acid, but slower. Burn patterns match nothing in standard databases." Harlow's sharp jaw tightened. She traced the air above the neckline, noting the absence of defensive wounds. Silas's hands lay open, palms up, fingers curled as if grasping at smoke. Around him, the stall's contents lay undisturbed: a brass amulet etched with spirals, jars of iridescent powder sealed tight. One item caught her eye—a small brass compass, its face marred by verdigris and protective sigils. The needle spun lazily, not pointing north, but twitching toward the body. "Curious," Harlow muttered. She picked it up, the metal cool against her glove. "Veil Compass. Points to rifts, portals. Market staple, from what your museum buddies say." Eva leaned in, green eyes narrowing behind her glasses. "Exactly. Crafted by Shade artisans—shadow folk, if the lore holds. Silas was peddling one last night. Buyer haggled hard, witnesses say. But get this: the compass was active. Needle locked on something here." Harlow set it down, the needle steady now on Silas's chest. Her military bearing kicked in—scan, assess, eliminate. The station's layout pressed in: arched ceilings dripped condensation, tracks long overgrown with moss. Footprints scuffed the dust—boots, varied sizes, leading from the main drag to the stall. But they circled back, no clear exit. "Witnesses placed the buyer here at closing. Struggle? No signs. Blood's contained, like he bled out in place without moving." Eva flipped her notebook. "Colleagues—stall neighbors—say Silas argued with the buyer over price. Guy in a hooded coat, face obscured. Offered bone tokens as payment. That's entry currency here. Then, poof—Silas drops. They thought seizure at first. Called it in anonymous through a surface drop." Harlow stood, pacing the perimeter. The tape fluttered again, caught in that impossible draft. She followed it to a grate in the wall, half-hidden by crates. Peering through, she spotted a shimmer—air rippling like heat off pavement. "This grate. Sealed?" "Was," Eva replied. "Pried open earlier. Leads to service tunnels. But the shimmer? That's new. Residual energy, maybe." Harlow knelt, shining her light. The metal bars bore scratches, not from tools—claws, curved and deep. "Not human. And look—residue on the edges. Glistening, like oil but thicker." She scraped a sample into an evidence bag, the substance clinging to her glove like tar. "Forensics will love this. Doesn't match lubricant or grease." Eva's brow furrowed. She adjusted her glasses, peering closer. "Could be ectoplasm. Old texts describe it from rift breaches—supernatural leaks. Silas's wound... it matches dissolution from exposure. Not murder. Accident." Harlow shot her a look. "Accident? In a black market peddling ghost junk? Come on, Evie. Evidence screams cover-up. Footprints loop because someone dragged him, staged it. Buyer didn't pay in tokens; he paid with something that ate Silas alive." Eva crossed her arms, satchel bumping her hip. "Staged how? No drag marks on the body. Dust undisturbed except for the approach. And that compass—it's not spinning wild. It's fixed on him because he was the rift. Silas dabbled in alchemy, records show. Maybe he crossed a line, opened himself up. Market's full of warnings: handle with care or become the anomaly." Harlow ignored the chill creeping up her spine, the one that echoed her partner's unexplained end three years back. DS Morris, vanished in a warehouse haze that reeked of the same ozone. She circled the stall again, eyes on the shattered vials. Powders mixed in the blood pool—blue, green, swirling into fractals. Not random. Patterned, like a sigil half-formed. "Look here." She pointed, voice steady. "Vials didn't just break. Positions match the compass sigils. Someone forced the shatter, completed the etching with his blood." Her mind pieced it: buyer arrives, argues, slips the compass into Silas's hand during the scuffle. Needle activates, draws energy from the nearest rift—the grate. Silas clutches it, unknowingly seals the deal. Flesh unravels as the portal feeds. Eva stepped closer, tucking hair again. "Deduction fits the occult angle, but forensics'll call it coincidence. Blood patterns from fall impact. No tool marks on the vials." Harlow's brown eyes locked on the grate's shimmer. She reached in, fingers brushing the ripple. A jolt hummed through her glove—static, or more? "Coincidence doesn't leave claw scratches. Buyer wasn't human. Shade, maybe, or whatever lurks in those rifts. Used Silas as bait, pulled the essence through him." The team buzzed around them, a tech bagging the amulet. Eva hesitated, then nodded. "If that's the play, we need the Market's ledger. Silas kept one—hidden in his stall somewhere." Harlow scanned the crates, spotting a loose panel. She pried it open, revealing a battered journal. Entries scrawled in hurried ink: sales of herbs, tokens traded, a final note. "Buyer demanded the Compass attuned wrong. Said it pointed to 'the lost one.' Price: my silence." Eva's eyes widened. "Lost one. Old lore—refers to echoes, spirits unbound." Harlow closed the journal, the pieces slotting. The evidence piled wrong because it wasn't a killing; it was a transaction gone spectral. Silas hadn't died—he'd been traded. The wound wasn't entry; it was exit. Her watch ticked louder in the quiet, a reminder of Morris's file, stamped unsolved. This time, she wouldn't blink. A uniform approached, radio crackling. "Detective, surface team's got a lead on the hooded guy. Spotted near the full moon shift." Harlow pocketed the journal, gaze lingering on the compass. Its needle twitched, pulling toward the grate. "Hold the line here. Eva, you're with me. We're chasing shadows tonight." They moved toward the tunnels, the station's hum growing in her ears. The shimmer pulsed, waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"shattered"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"standard"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"fluttered"
count1
8
word"glistening"
count1
9
word"furrowed"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"etching"
count1
13
word"scanned"
count1
14
word"echoes"
count1
15
word"spectral"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"shattered"
2"scanning"
3"perfect"
4"standard"
5"traced"
6"etched"
7"fluttered"
8"glistening"
9"furrowed"
10"chill"
11"echoed"
12"etching"
13"scanned"
14"echoes"
15"spectral"
16"reminder"
17"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1393
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The Veil Market, they called it."
66.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount896
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow15
Quinn1
Tube1
Camden1
Veil1
Market1
Eva12
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Silas5
Morris2
Needle1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Museum"
5"Silas"
6"Morris"
7"Needle"
places
0"British"
globalScore0.663
windowScore0.667
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a makeshift stall—empty crate"
1"smelled like history gone sour"
2"as if grasping at smoke"
56.42% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.436
wordCount1393
matches
0"not sliced but as if something had unraveled it from the inside"
1"not pointing north, but twitching toward the body"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
75.47% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean46.43
std19.23
cv0.414
sampleLengths
074
181
269
356
462
566
640
737
877
927
1042
1173
1245
1340
1418
1553
1630
1740
1862
1959
2063
2127
2248
2330
2445
2511
2653
2721
2828
2916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"been traded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences105
ratio0.143
matches
0"The air hung thick with the scent of mold and something sharper—ozone, like a storm trapped underground."
1"A body sprawled in the center of what looked like a makeshift stall—empty crates stacked as shelves, remnants of glowing vials shattered on the concrete."
2"Eva had consulted on a few odd cases before—her gig at the British Museum's restricted archives made her the go-to for anything that smelled like history gone sour."
3"One item caught her eye—a small brass compass, its face marred by verdigris and protective sigils."
4"Her military bearing kicked in—scan, assess, eliminate."
5"Footprints scuffed the dust—boots, varied sizes, leading from the main drag to the stall."
6"Peering through, she spotted a shimmer—air rippling like heat off pavement."
7"The metal bars bore scratches, not from tools—claws, curved and deep."
8"\"Accident? In a black market peddling ghost junk? Come on, Evie. Evidence screams cover-up. Footprints loop because someone dragged him, staged it. Buyer didn't pay in tokens; he paid with something that ate Silas alive.\""
9"Powders mixed in the blood pool—blue, green, swirling into fractals."
10"Needle activates, draws energy from the nearest rift—the grate."
11"A jolt hummed through her glove—static, or more?"
12"The evidence piled wrong because it wasn't a killing; it was a transaction gone spectral."
13"Silas hadn't died—he'd been traded."
14"The wound wasn't entry; it was exit."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount913
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"visible beneath pale skin"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.023001095290251915
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004381161007667032
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean13.27
std9.3
cv0.701
sampleLengths
018
115
224
317
415
519
66
724
817
98
1025
1120
1216
1312
1420
1514
1610
175
1828
1911
2018
2120
2246
2311
2410
2517
262
2711
2826
294
3013
3113
3219
3316
3412
353
3610
3714
389
3933
4011
417
4214
4314
447
4520
464
4741
485
499
85.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5142857142857142
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences80
matches
0"Her worn leather watch ticked"
1"She ducked under a low"
2"His throat gaped open, not"
3"She clutched her worn leather"
4"She traced the air above"
5"She picked it up, the"
6"Her military bearing kicked in—scan,"
7"She followed it to a"
8"She scraped a sample into"
9"She adjusted her glasses, peering"
10"She circled the stall again,"
11"She pointed, voice steady"
12"Her mind pieced it: buyer"
13"She reached in, fingers brushing"
14"She pried it open, revealing"
15"Her watch ticked louder in"
16"Its needle twitched, pulling toward"
17"They moved toward the tunnels,"
ratio0.225
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences80
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"Her worn leather watch ticked"
2"Flashlights from the forensics team"
3"The air hung thick with"
4"She ducked under a low"
5"The Veil Market, they called"
6"Whispers in the precinct painted"
7"Tonight, it bled into reality"
8"Uniforms parted as she approached"
9"A body sprawled in the"
10"The victim, a wiry man"
11"His throat gaped open, not"
12"a voice cut through the"
13"Eva Kowalski emerged from behind"
14"She clutched her worn leather"
15"Harlow nodded, eyes already scanning."
16"Eva had consulted on a"
17"Tonight, the brass had pulled"
18"Eva tucked a stray curl"
19"Harlow crouched beside the body,"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Tonight, it bled into reality with yellow crime scene tape fluttering in a draft that shouldn't exist."
1"She clutched her worn leather satchel, stuffed with books that poked at the seams."
2"Eva had consulted on a few odd cases before—her gig at the British Museum's restricted archives made her the go-to for anything that smelled like history gone s…"
3"The edges frayed like pulled thread, veins visible beneath pale skin as if the flesh had dissolved."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She scraped, the substance clinging to her glove like tar"
1"She pointed, voice steady"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"techs snapping (snap)"
1"Harlow muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.143
73.0710%