"Nyx walked at her shoulder, their shadow rippling as if alive—whether from excitement or the grove’s proximity, Rory couldn’t tell."
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"It was oak, gnarled, its bark split to reveal something paler beneath—bone?"
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"Nyx’s form solidified—taller now, 6’2”, a silhouette of shifting shadows that resolved into a woman with a face like crepuscular light. “The edge hums,” they said, and Rory realized she’d been holding her breath. In front of them, the trees thinned. Not away from the park, but… *in*. A clearing opened, and the world tilted."
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"The sky was not gray. It was amber, the color of honey left in the sun, and streaked with clouds that looked painted—swirls of violet and gold that didn’t quite match the stars. The air was warm, but not oppressive, as if the grove trapped a summer evening forever. The grass beneath their feet was not green but *alive*, a deep, iridescent teal that shifted when they stepped, releasing a scent like crushed pearls. Flowers bloomed everywhere: peonies the color of ripe pomegranates, lilies with petals that changed from pink to blue to green depending on where you stood, and a vine with tiny yellow flowers that, when Rory brushed one, tickled her palm with a sound like a wind chime."
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"“Time doesn’t *move* here,” Isolde said, and indeed, the light felt unchanging. The sun—or whatever it was—hung low in the amber sky, not rising or setting. “An hour might be a breath,” she added, and Rory glanced at her watch; it was 11:17. When she looked up again, Isolde was still standing there, her lavender eyes steady. “Not just a breath,” the seer said, smiling. “Perhaps a year.”"
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"At its center was a spring, its water so clear she could see stones at the bottom, smooth and oddly shaped—crystals? Or maybe bones. But the water didn’t reflect the sky or the trees. It reflected *memories*. Rory leaned in, and for a moment, she saw a man with her father’s face, standing in a hall of amber light, a girl with her mother’s eyes pressing a pendant into his hand. Then it was gone, replaced by a vision of Dymas: tables heaped with platters of meat, rivers of wine, a prince with horns of shadow sitting on a throne of ivory. And then—"
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"Fae magic, mortal hope, Hel’s hunger—they gnaw at it."
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"Hel’s stench—greed, rot—but under that…"
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"The seer plucked a flower from the grass—red, with petals that looked like silk—and sniffed it. “Because you would not have *listened*."
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"The wind picked up, and the trees rustled. In the distance, Rory thought she heard a sound like laughter—warm, rich, the clink of crystal. She knew it for what it was: the feasts of Dymas, starting early. The Veil was thin here, thinner than ever. And somewhere, beneath the grass, the rift waited."
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"She took a step toward the trees, Nyx and Isolde falling into step beside her. The Heartstone glowed, a beacon, and the Fae blade hummed, eager. The world was alien, wondrous, and alive—and she was finally, completely, *here*."
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"Nyx walked at her shoulder, their shadow rippling as if alive—whether from excitement or the grove’s proximity, Rory couldn’t tell."
1
"The sky was not gray. It was amber, the color of honey left in the sun, and streaked with clouds that looked painted—swirls of violet and gold that didn’t quite…"
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"At its center was a spring, its water so clear she could see stones at the bottom, smooth and oddly shaped—crystals? Or maybe bones. But the water didn’t reflec…"