| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.529 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1056 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1056 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "lurch" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "glinting" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "unraveling" | | 15 | "maw" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "familiar" | | 18 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 158 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 18 | | markdownWords | 39 | | totalWords | 1042 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "pulled" | | 1 | "Come alone." | | 2 | "ground" | | 3 | "“You shouldn’t have come.”" | | 4 | "wrong." | | 5 | "mouth" | | 6 | "“You don’t belong here,”" | | 7 | "crack." | | 8 | "“The stone,”" | | 9 | "“Give it to me.”" | | 10 | "screamed." | | 11 | "“You don’t understand,”" | | 12 | "“This place is *hungry." | | 13 | "alive." | | 14 | "“Isolde,”" | | 15 | "broken." | | 16 | "“You don’t know what you’re doing,”" | | 17 | "shattered." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.40% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 992 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.51 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 7 | | Carter | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Didn | 3 | | Rory | 15 | | Isolde | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.744 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like she was in control" | | 1 | "quite a shape, shifting between the trees like smoke given form" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1042 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 68 | | mean | 15.32 | | std | 15.62 | | cv | 1.02 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 75 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.54% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "was trying" | | 2 | "was coming" | | 3 | "was calling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 158 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been here before—briefly, years ago, when Eva dragged her through the Grove for some half-remembered dare." | | 1 | "The pendant had led her here—had *pulled* her, really, ever since she’d found it tucked inside the pocket of her old coat, the one she’d left behind in Cardiff." | | 2 | "The sound came from the left—no, wait, no, it was behind her." | | 3 | "Then—footsteps." | | 4 | "Then—a voice, barely more than a breath." | | 5 | "The warmth exploded against her palm, searing her skin—but she didn’t let go." | | 6 | "Its face—if it had one—was a void, a dark hole where features should have been." | | 7 | "And then—" | | 8 | "Its fingers—long, too many of them—clawed at the ancient oak, nails scraping against bark." | | 9 | "When her vision cleared, the thing—Isolde—was closer." | | 10 | "And then—" |
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| 91.51% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1006 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.04970178926441352 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004970178926441352 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 158 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 158 | | mean | 6.59 | | std | 5.52 | | cv | 0.837 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 37.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.25949367088607594 | | totalSentences | 158 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the weight of it," | | 1 | "Then—a voice, barely more than" | | 2 | "Just the pulse of the" | | 3 | "Instead, she reached for the" | | 4 | "Too *broken.* But it was" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled slowly, watching her" | | 1 | "She’d been here before—briefly, years" | | 2 | "It was warm against her" | | 3 | "She’d followed the pull, of" | | 4 | "She turned, half-expecting to see" | | 5 | "Her voice cracked" | | 6 | "She should have brought the" | | 7 | "She didn’t wait for an" | | 8 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 9 | "She backed up, slow, deliberate," | | 10 | "she said, voice steady" | | 11 | "She sounded like she was" | | 12 | "She didn’t move." | | 13 | "It slithered, too many syllables" | | 14 | "She pressed her back harder" | | 15 | "Its limbs didn’t bend right," | | 16 | "She didn’t scream." | | 17 | "Its face—if it had one—was" | | 18 | "She didn’t look away." | | 19 | "Its fingers—long, too many of" |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 83.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove smelled wrong." | | 1 | "Rory Carter stepped through the" | | 2 | "The air was thick, humid," | | 3 | "She exhaled slowly, watching her" | | 4 | "She’d been here before—briefly, years" | | 5 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 6 | "Rory adjusted the silver chain" | | 7 | "It was warm against her" | | 8 | "The pendant had led her" | | 9 | "She’d followed the pull, of" | | 10 | "The standing stones loomed behind" | | 11 | "She turned, half-expecting to see" | | 12 | "The Grove was real." | | 13 | "Her voice cracked" | | 14 | "Rory swallowed, her throat dry." | | 15 | "She should have brought the" | | 16 | "A twig snapped." | | 17 | "The sound came from the" | | 18 | "Rory spun, heart hammering, but" | | 19 | "The Grove held its breath." |
| | ratio | 0.752 | |
| 47.62% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the trees loomed like" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory Carter stepped through the oak standing stones, her boots sinking into damp earth that clung to her soles like it didn’t want to let go." | | 1 | "It slithered, too many syllables twisting together, like words spoken through teeth that weren’t quite right." | | 2 | "Its limbs didn’t bend right, joints angling in ways that made Rory’s stomach lurch." | | 3 | "The thing turned, its body twisting in ways that made her stomach heave." | | 4 | "Its mouth opened wider, wider, until it was a black maw, a void that shouldn’t exist." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 3 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "it snarled (snarl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.588 | |