Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8W6JHAQYGP18EXBN0KMTD

Run Details

Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.000182
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the concrete ceiling of the abandoned Euston station. Water dripped, a persistent, unsettling rhythm against the dampness that clung to everything. Detective Harlow Quinn shivered, pulling her worn leather jacket tighter. The air tasted of iron and something else—something vaguely floral, sickly sweet. “Doesn’t scream ‘underground market’,” she muttered, her breath misting in the chill. Constable Davies, a fresh-faced recruit who looked thoroughly miserable, shifted his weight. “It’s…atmospheric, Detective.” Quinn ignored him, her gaze sweeping the scene. The victim, a man named Silas Blackwood, lay sprawled on a makeshift altar constructed of stacked crates. Blackwood was a collector of obscure artifacts, a dealer in the fringes of the supernatural trade – a hobby that had, apparently, landed him permanently on the wrong side of something very dangerous. His throat had been sliced clean through. Not with a knife, not exactly. The wound was too precise, too…ordered. It resembled a vertical incision, cauterized almost immediately. Around him, scattered on the concrete floor, were remnants of a ritual – a circle of chalk, now smeared with rain, strange symbols etched into the ground, and a single, tarnished Veil Compass. “Clean,” Quinn observed, kneeling beside the body. She ran a gloved finger across the slick surface of Blackwood’s jacket. “Too clean.” Davies swallowed hard. “The forensics team are heading down now.” “Let them,” Quinn said, her brown eyes narrowed. “They’ll find blood. They'll find traces of whatever substance cauterized the wound. They won’t find the truth.” She picked up the Veil Compass, turning it over in her hand. The brass casing was cool to the touch, etched with intricate, protective sigils. The needle, a slender sliver of polished silver, spun erratically before settling on a point deep within the station’s labyrinthine tunnels. “This isn’t a simple robbery gone wrong,” she stated, her voice low. “Someone wanted Blackwood dead. And they went to a great deal of trouble to make it look like something else.” “Maybe a rival collector?” Davies offered tentatively. “Blackwood had a reputation for being…difficult.” Quinn didn’t respond, continuing her examination. She noticed a small, almost imperceptible discoloration on the altar – a faint, iridescent sheen. She carefully scraped a sample into an evidence bag. “This,” she said, holding it up to the weak light filtering through a grimy vent, “isn’t paint. It’s…stabilized essence. Used in strengthening wards. Powerful stuff.” “So he was expecting trouble?” “Or he was attempting to ward it off,” Quinn corrected. “And failing spectacularly.” A tall, slender figure emerged from the shadows at the edge of the scene. Eva Kowalski, her red hair pulled back in a messy bun, her round glasses reflecting the gloom. She carried a battered leather satchel overflowing with books. “Detective Quinn,” Eva said, her voice calm, measured. “I was tracking a surge in supernatural activity in this area. The Compass pointed me here.” Quinn didn’t bother to acknowledge her immediately. She was studying the chalk circle, tracing the symbols with her finger. “You know anything about these?” “They’re a variant of the ‘Veil Binding’ ritual,” Eva explained, stepping closer. “Designed to create a temporary barrier, to contain…something. The symbols are archaic, pre-dating even the oldest recognized cultures. They’re exceptionally difficult to execute properly.” “Difficult and apparently, unsuccessful,” Quinn said dryly. “The needle on the Compass is almost frantic. It's not pointing at a rift, it’s pointing *through* something.” Eva frowned, pulling a small notebook from her satchel. “That’s…curious. The Veil Compass doesn’t typically react like that. It’s calibrated to detect active portals, not…residual energy.” She scribbled furiously. “The energy signature is faint, but it’s distinctly…wrong. It’s not a natural phenomenon. It’s deliberately fabricated.” “Fabricated?” Quinn raised an eyebrow. “You think someone created this disruption?” “It’s the only logical explanation,” Eva replied, her eyes scanning the symbols again. “The ritual isn’t just a barrier. It’s a focusing lens. Amplifying something.” Davies cleared his throat nervously. "Detective, the forensics team are saying they found traces of aconite in the altar. A potent poison..." Quinn ignored him. She was examining a patch of the concrete surrounding the altar. A faint, almost invisible pattern was etched into the stone beneath the chalk. “There’s something buried here,” she announced. She knelt, using her gloved hand to carefully brush away the dirt. Underneath, a small, octagonal tile emerged – a fragment of what looked like a larger mosaic. Painted on the tile was a single, stylized eye. It wasn’t a traditional symbol of protection, it was a symbol of observation—of *knowing*. “This isn’t connected to the Veil Market,” Quinn said, her voice barely a whisper. “This is something older. Something…structured.” Eva approached, peering at the tile. “The craftsmanship…it’s not from any known civilization. It predates the Roman Empire. It’s…Shade work.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. Shades. Creatures born of solidified shadows, skilled artisans of the supernatural. They operated in the darkest corners of the Veil Market, crafting enchanted objects and manipulating energies. They weren’t known for their altruism. “Blackwood wasn't dealing in artifacts," Quinn said, rising to her feet. "He was dealing with a Shade. And this wasn’t a simple transaction.” “The Compass is pulling me toward the deeper tunnels,” Eva said, her hand instinctively reaching for her satchel. “There’s a power source down there, a concentrated anomaly.” “Let’s go,” Quinn said, her hand instinctively moving to the worn leather watch on her wrist. It wasn't just a timepiece; it housed a miniature harmonizer, a device designed to counteract specific types of supernatural interference. “But we do it my way.” She moved past Davies, ignoring his protests, and headed towards the dark throat of the tunnel. The rain continued to fall, a steady drumming against the concrete, as they plunged into the echoing darkness, following the frantic pulse of the Veil Compass and the faint, unsettling scent of disturbed magic. “The placement of the symbols,” Eva said, her voice tight with concentration, “they aren't meant to contain. They’re meant to *guide*.” Quinn stopped, her hand resting on the butt of her service pistol. "Guide what?" “Someone is actively building something,” she replied, eyes searching the darkness. “Something vast, something…dimensional.” A low hum vibrated through the tunnel, growing steadily louder. The air thickened, charged with an unnatural energy. Ahead, the tunnel opened into a cavernous chamber, illuminated by a sickly green glow emanating from a swirling vortex of shadows. At the center of the vortex, a figure stood – tall, impossibly thin, wreathed in darkness. It wasn’t a Shade, not exactly. It was something…older. Something that predated the Veil Market, predated even the Shades themselves. Its eyes, two points of absolute blackness, fixed on Quinn. “Detective Quinn,” the figure said, its voice a rasping whisper that seemed to seep directly into her mind. “You’ve made a fascinating discovery. And a dangerous one.” “Who are you?” Quinn demanded, raising her pistol. The figure smiled, a slow, chilling movement that revealed a glimpse of teeth, sharp and impossibly long. “Let’s just say I’m a collector. And Silas Blackwood was simply providing an…upgrade to my collection.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.34% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Davies offered tentatively [tentatively]"
1"Quinn said dryly [dryly]"
2"She scribbled furiously [furiously]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.468
leniency0.936
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.128
78.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"deliberately"
3"nervously"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"constructed"
count1
3
word"etched"
count3
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"calibrated"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"mosaic"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"charged"
count1
17
word"fascinating"
count1
18
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"constructed"
3"etched"
4"intricate"
5"gloom"
6"measured"
7"tracing"
8"calibrated"
9"eyebrow"
10"scanning"
11"mosaic"
12"whisper"
13"echoing"
14"pulse"
15"vibrated"
16"charged"
17"fascinating"
18"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1164
ratio0.003
matches
0"through"
1"knowing"
2"guide"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount787
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Euston1
Harlow1
Quinn17
Constable1
Davies5
Silas1
Blackwood3
Veil5
Compass3
Kowalski1
Eva8
Market2
Shade1
Shades2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Constable"
3"Davies"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Compass"
7"Kowalski"
8"Eva"
9"Market"
places
0"Euston"
globalScore0.42
windowScore0.333
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"obby that had, apparently, landed him permane"
1"looked like a larger mosaic"
2"whisper that seemed to seep directly into her mind"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1164
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean29.1
std14.75
cv0.507
sampleLengths
045
112
214
358
460
521
610
725
846
932
1013
1155
125
1313
1440
1524
1624
1736
1825
1945
2011
2125
2222
2333
2451
2519
2620
2736
2823
2927
3042
3150
3221
3314
3414
3539
3646
3727
388
3933
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"been sliced"
1"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was studying"
1"was examining"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences101
ratio0.079
matches
0"The air tasted of iron and something else—something vaguely floral, sickly sweet."
1"Blackwood was a collector of obscure artifacts, a dealer in the fringes of the supernatural trade – a hobby that had, apparently, landed him permanently on the wrong side of something very dangerous."
2"Around him, scattered on the concrete floor, were remnants of a ritual – a circle of chalk, now smeared with rain, strange symbols etched into the ground, and a single, tarnished Veil Compass."
3"She noticed a small, almost imperceptible discoloration on the altar – a faint, iridescent sheen."
4"Underneath, a small, octagonal tile emerged – a fragment of what looked like a larger mosaic."
5"It wasn’t a traditional symbol of protection, it was a symbol of observation—of *knowing*."
6"It wasn't just a timepiece; it housed a miniature harmonizer, a device designed to counteract specific types of supernatural interference."
7"At the center of the vortex, a figure stood – tall, impossibly thin, wreathed in darkness."
87.18% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount785
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.044585987261146494
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.030573248407643312
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean11.52
std6.54
cv0.568
sampleLengths
010
113
210
312
412
512
62
78
817
933
107
116
126
138
1433
157
1612
172
183
197
208
2117
2212
2313
2421
2512
2620
277
286
296
3015
319
3225
335
3410
353
3614
3717
389
398
4016
417
4212
435
4412
4524
467
4718
489
4920
68.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.44554455445544555
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences73
matches
0"she muttered, her breath misting"
1"His throat had been sliced"
2"It resembled a vertical incision,"
3"She ran a gloved finger"
4"She picked up the Veil"
5"she stated, her voice low"
6"She noticed a small, almost"
7"She carefully scraped a sample"
8"she said, holding it up"
9"She carried a battered leather"
10"She was studying the chalk"
11"She scribbled furiously"
12"She was examining a patch"
13"She knelt, using her gloved"
14"It wasn’t a traditional symbol"
15"They operated in the darkest"
16"They weren’t known for their"
17"It wasn't just a timepiece;"
18"She moved past Davies, ignoring"
19"she replied, eyes searching the"
ratio0.315
7.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences73
matches
0"Water dripped, a persistent, unsettling"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn shivered, pulling"
2"The air tasted of iron"
3"she muttered, her breath misting"
4"Constable Davies, a fresh-faced recruit"
5"Quinn ignored him, her gaze"
6"The victim, a man named"
7"Blackwood was a collector of"
8"His throat had been sliced"
9"The wound was too precise,"
10"It resembled a vertical incision,"
11"Quinn observed, kneeling beside the"
12"She ran a gloved finger"
13"Davies swallowed hard."
14"Quinn said, her brown eyes"
15"She picked up the Veil"
16"The brass casing was cool"
17"The needle, a slender sliver"
18"she stated, her voice low"
19"Davies offered tentatively"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Water dripped, a persistent, unsettling rhythm against the dampness that clung to everything."
1"Constable Davies, a fresh-faced recruit who looked thoroughly miserable, shifted his weight."
2"Blackwood was a collector of obscure artifacts, a dealer in the fringes of the supernatural trade – a hobby that had, apparently, landed him permanently on the …"
3"The figure smiled, a slow, chilling movement that revealed a glimpse of teeth, sharp and impossibly long."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she muttered, her breath misting in the chill"
1"she stated, her voice low"
2"Eva said, her voice calm, measured"
3"Eva replied, her eyes scanning the symbols again"
4"Quinn said, her voice barely a whisper"
5"Eva said, her hand instinctively reaching for her satchel"
6"Eva said, her voice tight with concentration,"
7"she replied, eyes searching the darkness"
1.06% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn observed (observe)"
2"she stated (state)"
3"Quinn corrected (correct)"
4"Eva explained (explain)"
5"she announced (announce)"
6"Quinn demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.404
leniency0.809
rawRatio0.368
effectiveRatio0.298
66.9108%