| 72.34% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Davies offered tentatively [tentatively]" | | 1 | "Quinn said dryly [dryly]" | | 2 | "She scribbled furiously [furiously]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.468 | | leniency | 0.936 | | rawRatio | 0.136 | | effectiveRatio | 0.128 | |
| 78.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1162 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "nervously" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1162 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "constructed" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "intricate" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "calibrated" | | 9 | "eyebrow" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "mosaic" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "charged" | | 17 | "fascinating" | | 18 | "chilling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1164 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "through" | | 1 | "knowing" | | 2 | "guide" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 787 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.16 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Euston | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 17 | | Constable | 1 | | Davies | 5 | | Silas | 1 | | Blackwood | 3 | | Veil | 5 | | Compass | 3 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 8 | | Market | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Shades | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Constable" | | 3 | "Davies" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Blackwood" | | 6 | "Compass" | | 7 | "Kowalski" | | 8 | "Eva" | | 9 | "Market" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.42 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 27.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "obby that had, apparently, landed him permane" | | 1 | "looked like a larger mosaic" | | 2 | "whisper that seemed to seep directly into her mind" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 29.1 | | std | 14.75 | | cv | 0.507 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 50 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 33 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "been sliced" | | 1 | "was etched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "was studying" | | 1 | "was examining" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of iron and something else—something vaguely floral, sickly sweet." | | 1 | "Blackwood was a collector of obscure artifacts, a dealer in the fringes of the supernatural trade – a hobby that had, apparently, landed him permanently on the wrong side of something very dangerous." | | 2 | "Around him, scattered on the concrete floor, were remnants of a ritual – a circle of chalk, now smeared with rain, strange symbols etched into the ground, and a single, tarnished Veil Compass." | | 3 | "She noticed a small, almost imperceptible discoloration on the altar – a faint, iridescent sheen." | | 4 | "Underneath, a small, octagonal tile emerged – a fragment of what looked like a larger mosaic." | | 5 | "It wasn’t a traditional symbol of protection, it was a symbol of observation—of *knowing*." | | 6 | "It wasn't just a timepiece; it housed a miniature harmonizer, a device designed to counteract specific types of supernatural interference." | | 7 | "At the center of the vortex, a figure stood – tall, impossibly thin, wreathed in darkness." |
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| 87.18% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 785 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.044585987261146494 | | lyAdverbCount | 24 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.030573248407643312 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 11.52 | | std | 6.54 | | cv | 0.568 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 68.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.44554455445544555 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.97% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her breath misting" | | 1 | "His throat had been sliced" | | 2 | "It resembled a vertical incision," | | 3 | "She ran a gloved finger" | | 4 | "She picked up the Veil" | | 5 | "she stated, her voice low" | | 6 | "She noticed a small, almost" | | 7 | "She carefully scraped a sample" | | 8 | "she said, holding it up" | | 9 | "She carried a battered leather" | | 10 | "She was studying the chalk" | | 11 | "She scribbled furiously" | | 12 | "She was examining a patch" | | 13 | "She knelt, using her gloved" | | 14 | "It wasn’t a traditional symbol" | | 15 | "They operated in the darkest" | | 16 | "They weren’t known for their" | | 17 | "It wasn't just a timepiece;" | | 18 | "She moved past Davies, ignoring" | | 19 | "she replied, eyes searching the" |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 7.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Water dripped, a persistent, unsettling" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn shivered, pulling" | | 2 | "The air tasted of iron" | | 3 | "she muttered, her breath misting" | | 4 | "Constable Davies, a fresh-faced recruit" | | 5 | "Quinn ignored him, her gaze" | | 6 | "The victim, a man named" | | 7 | "Blackwood was a collector of" | | 8 | "His throat had been sliced" | | 9 | "The wound was too precise," | | 10 | "It resembled a vertical incision," | | 11 | "Quinn observed, kneeling beside the" | | 12 | "She ran a gloved finger" | | 13 | "Davies swallowed hard." | | 14 | "Quinn said, her brown eyes" | | 15 | "She picked up the Veil" | | 16 | "The brass casing was cool" | | 17 | "The needle, a slender sliver" | | 18 | "she stated, her voice low" | | 19 | "Davies offered tentatively" |
| | ratio | 0.904 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 56.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Water dripped, a persistent, unsettling rhythm against the dampness that clung to everything." | | 1 | "Constable Davies, a fresh-faced recruit who looked thoroughly miserable, shifted his weight." | | 2 | "Blackwood was a collector of obscure artifacts, a dealer in the fringes of the supernatural trade – a hobby that had, apparently, landed him permanently on the …" | | 3 | "The figure smiled, a slow, chilling movement that revealed a glimpse of teeth, sharp and impossibly long." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her breath misting in the chill" | | 1 | "she stated, her voice low" | | 2 | "Eva said, her voice calm, measured" | | 3 | "Eva replied, her eyes scanning the symbols again" | | 4 | "Quinn said, her voice barely a whisper" | | 5 | "Eva said, her hand instinctively reaching for her satchel" | | 6 | "Eva said, her voice tight with concentration," | | 7 | "she replied, eyes searching the darkness" |
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| 1.06% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Quinn observed (observe)" | | 2 | "she stated (state)" | | 3 | "Quinn corrected (correct)" | | 4 | "Eva explained (explain)" | | 5 | "she announced (announce)" | | 6 | "Quinn demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.404 | | leniency | 0.809 | | rawRatio | 0.368 | | effectiveRatio | 0.298 | |